http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2802384/1/
(I meant to post this here a long time ago but i kinda forgot
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Bound With A Kiss
Started by Rachel, Jul 16 2006 11:18 AM
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Rachel
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Posted 16 July 2006 - 11:18 AM
Okkkay...so I wrote a short NaruSaku story. I hope it's okay, I think I wrote this after watching Sasuke leave. It's kinda emotional and angsty but I hope you like it
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2802384/1/
(I meant to post this here a long time ago but i kinda forgot )
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2802384/1/
(I meant to post this here a long time ago but i kinda forgot
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Posted 16 July 2006 - 06:13 PM
:shamefulcry0js: :shamefulcry0js: That a good story, But some how it felt rush I dont know whybut it does some how. I love the part where sakura told naruto that she never ask to call him naruto.
Great job w/ the story, Keep the great job up.
Great job w/ the story, Keep the great job up.
I be there in 2 months YAAY!
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Posted 16 July 2006 - 06:40 PM
awesome story i need to write one like that, run's off to write more of sitting under a cherry blossom tree.
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Posted 16 July 2006 - 08:11 PM
:thumbs: Awww! Super kawaii! -hugs Rachel-chan- NICE JOB! :thumbs: 
I only ask for you to notice me.
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Posted 20 July 2006 - 03:00 AM
awesome story. truly magnificent. added to my favorites. 
B)
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Posted 20 July 2006 - 05:47 AM
Awww.. It was amazing, Rachel!
It was amazing, Rachel!
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Posted 20 July 2006 - 04:05 PM
what does -hime mean? anyways, update your other stories!!!
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Posted 20 July 2006 - 05:29 PM
write more like that for sure yeah.
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Posted 28 March 2007 - 02:20 PM
AAAAAAAHHH :shamefulcry0js: :shamefulcry0js: :shamefulcry0js: it's soooo romantic!!I like that part where Naruto told her that he loves her
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Posted 28 March 2007 - 06:06 PM
i loved it. i don't know what else to say. it did seem to move a little fast but other than that...on a scale from 1 to 10- it's an 11. keep up the good work :thumbs:
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Posted 29 March 2007 - 11:19 PM
Personally, I think you should give yourself more credit. That was an awesome stroy. See if you can get it to other websites to share your tallent. They'd love it to. 
(can you teach me how to write like that? I'm trying to write one myself and it SUCKS compaired to yours)
(can you teach me how to write like that? I'm trying to write one myself and it SUCKS compaired to yours)
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