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Posted 21 March 2020 - 07:19 PM

So all in all it's on 6th chapter, did anybody who saw movie can say how far in movie it is?


We are about or close to half way through the movie it this point.

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Posted 22 March 2020 - 01:09 AM

So probably 15-20 pages more?


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Posted 22 March 2020 - 03:03 AM

So probably 15-20 pages more?


More I know still a lot of movie to go through

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Posted 22 March 2020 - 10:32 PM

We are about or close to half way through the movie it this point.

6 chapters is around 40% or 50%? I guess this will be a full volume or so, if author keeps on it.



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Posted 23 March 2020 - 01:59 AM

6 chapters is around 40% or 50%? I guess this will be a full volume or so, if author keeps on it.


Plus we don't know what he's adding to the story.

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Posted 29 March 2020 - 10:43 AM

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Guys, we have a new page... and all I can say is HOLY ****!!! O_O

 

I can imagine this is NOT what Hinata wanted when she went with Toneri... and I can imagine how pissed Naruto has to be at seeing Sakura being wounded like she is. She probably isn't gonna die that easily given her Yin Seal, but that's gonna hurt a LOT with what Toneri did to her.

 

Something you rarely see in a Naruto doujin that mimics the canon style. Only concern is that Tokai might be impatient and skim through the pages without a berserk Kyuubify/Sage of Six Paths berserk mode and that we would miss out of the Byakugou Release (Tsunade and Sakura's Super Saiyan mode) too  :sweat:


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Posted 11 April 2020 - 04:59 AM

I think Tokai is from Spain. Hopefully he/she makes through to this pandemic. That goes for all of us including Kishi.


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Posted 13 April 2020 - 04:57 PM

Tokai seems to be safe and sound, guys. Also... we got a double whammy today!!

 

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Even if we didn't see Naruto go berserk with Kurama's chakra, which I suspect is because of his knowing what Sakura's capable of, having known it even before she did, he did at least try to get Toneri back for hurting his girl, and even going Six Paths Kurama Cloak to go after Sakura as she's flung into the air.



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Posted 13 April 2020 - 05:07 PM

Even though Naruto was not as bloodlusted as I would have liked, Naruto was trying to take his head off with that Rasengan for doing that to his Sakura-Chan. I also like how he went into the Cloak to go rescue her. Also, he did a good job of displaying his confidence in her. Also, that Naruto was willing to kill Toneri with Hinata right in the proximity.

Edited by Illnevergiveup3, 13 April 2020 - 05:28 PM.

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Posted 13 April 2020 - 06:38 PM

I actually don't like Naruto being blood-lusted. Mostly because it makes him come off as a spoiled brat rather than someone who genuinely lost something. He got blood-lusted because Orochimaru teased him about Sasuke for Christ's sake. The Pein Arc one was meaningful, but I think overplayed. People act like he did it over Hinata, but forget that in this same time frame Konoha was leveled, Kakashi was killed, and Naruto was beaten to near exhaustion. He was exposed to a lot of pressure and Hinata being killed in front of him was just the final straw.

Kishimoto really should have known better than to make that scene because now they all the fans see Hinata as the sole purpose of what drives Naruto and not the overall message of Naruto cares too much and then he wonders why the fans hate every other character besides Hinata. The Pein Arc, while mostly good, just pushed Hinata to great heights while everyone else suffered. Not even Iruka getting stabbed made Naruto that angry. It is just a weird beat scene that cemented Hinata as the favorite even though she does nothing for the rest of the manga.

I think Naruto needs to grow up. Getting angry as a kid makes sense, but after dealing what he felt with, Naruto should not just lose it and get blood-lusted every time someone gets hurt.


Also, did you guys notice Hinata pushed Toneri out of the way of Naruto's attack?


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Posted 13 April 2020 - 07:24 PM

Man sees his woman get hurt or killed - gets furious and vengeful. I don't like that. Toneri is apparently stronger than Sakura and that's fine, but her losing a fight shouldn't be about provoking her bf. The best OTP moments come from the couple's own actions. I hope he catches her though, throwback to RTN. Scene's not finished yet, I'll wait to judge it. : )


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Posted 13 April 2020 - 07:29 PM

I actually don't like Naruto being blood-lusted. Mostly because it makes him come off as a spoiled brat rather than someone who genuinely lost something. He got blood-lusted because Orochimaru teased him about Sasuke for Christ's sake. The Pein Arc one was meaningful, but I think overplayed. People act like he did it over Hinata, but forget that in this same time frame Konoha was leveled, Kakashi was killed, and Naruto was beaten to near exhaustion. He was exposed to a lot of pressure and Hinata being killed in front of him was just the final straw.

Kishimoto really should have known better than to make that scene because now they all the fans see Hinata as the sole purpose of what drives Naruto and not the overall message of Naruto cares too much and then he wonders why the fans hate every other character besides Hinata. The Pein Arc, while mostly good, just pushed Hinata to great heights while everyone else suffered. Not even Iruka getting stabbed made Naruto that angry. It is just a weird beat scene that cemented Hinata as the favorite even though she does nothing for the rest of the manga.

I think Naruto needs to grow up. Getting angry as a kid makes sense, but after dealing what he felt with, Naruto should not just lose it and get blood-lusted every time someone gets hurt.


Also, did you guys notice Hinata pushed Toneri out of the way of Naruto's attack?


I can agree with that.

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Posted 13 April 2020 - 07:31 PM

Man sees his woman get hurt or killed - gets furious and vengeful. I don't like that. Toneri is apparently stronger than Sakura and that's fine, but her losing a fight shouldn't be about provoking her bf. The best OTP moments come from the couple's own actions. I hope he catches her though, throwback to RTN. Scene's not finished yet, I'll wait to judge it. : )


I can agree with this as well.

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Posted 14 April 2020 - 03:17 AM

I know Sakura will be fine but damn that's gotta hurt.


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Posted 14 April 2020 - 07:52 AM

First time to see 2 pages at once! 


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Posted 14 April 2020 - 07:57 AM

First time to see 2 pages at once! 

 

I was too when I saw it on my Deviant Art notifications, Derock, but I'm pleasantly surprised by that.



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Posted 14 April 2020 - 08:46 AM

Tokai seems to be safe and sound, guys. Also... we got a double whammy today!!
 
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Even if we didn't see Naruto go berserk with Kurama's chakra, which I suspect is because of his knowing what Sakura's capable of, having known it even before she did, he did at least try to get Toneri back for hurting his girl, and even going Six Paths Kurama Cloak to go after Sakura as she's flung into the air.

 
Nice double.
 
Now I just remember that Naruto purged his dark side during his training before Killer Bee. So it would make sense that Naruto does not become blood lustful or go into berserk mode.
 
At the very least we get to see the Byakugou Release on her forehead activated.
 
I have a question. Does this event leads to the infamous cave scene that had Sakura healing Naruto that lead to the NaruSaku closure in the film version? Or are we still far from it?
 

I actually don't like Naruto being blood-lusted. Mostly because it makes him come off as a spoiled brat rather than someone who genuinely lost something. He got blood-lusted because Orochimaru teased him about Sasuke for Christ's sake. The Pein Arc one was meaningful, but I think overplayed. People act like he did it over Hinata, but forget that in this same time frame Konoha was leveled, Kakashi was killed, and Naruto was beaten to near exhaustion. He was exposed to a lot of pressure and Hinata being killed in front of him was just the final straw.
 
Kishimoto really should have known better than to make that scene because now they all the fans see Hinata as the sole purpose of what drives Naruto and not the overall message of Naruto cares too much and then he wonders why the fans hate every other character besides Hinata. The Pein Arc, while mostly good, just pushed Hinata to great heights while everyone else suffered. Not even Iruka getting stabbed made Naruto that angry. It is just a weird beat scene that cemented Hinata as the favorite even though she does nothing for the rest of the manga.
 
I think Naruto needs to grow up. Getting angry as a kid makes sense, but after dealing what he felt with, Naruto should not just lose it and get blood-lusted every time someone gets hurt.
 
 
Also, did you guys notice Hinata pushed Toneri out of the way of Naruto's attack?


Yup.I think Hinata could not afford Toneri to be killed or else she would not get her sister back. That's just the on the surface of all things. She almost got Rassengan in the process lol. I think if this scene was canon, 65% chance we see her get hit because its an over used trope in fiction.


Edited by Konoha'sCrimsonFox, 14 April 2020 - 09:12 AM.

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Posted 06 May 2020 - 02:25 AM

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Posted 06 May 2020 - 03:53 AM

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new page.

 

Wow. Byakugou Release Sakura is always awesome to se.e 

 

Do you guys think Team Taka will make a debut in the closing out of this chapter?


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Posted 06 May 2020 - 04:00 PM

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Already this story is alot better


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