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[Phantom_999]

A Miniature Naruto with Green eyes or a Miniature Sakura with Blue eyes is good enough for me. Their Kids don't have to be "exotic" by any means.

Edited by Phantom_999, 06 October 2013 - 09:43 PM.

[Question22]

R.I.P beatifull fanfic

[FoolishYoungling]

R.I.P beatifull fanfic

 

It was missing another good pairing.

[Phantom_999]

Huh? did I ever say I was done?  I'm just busy right now, I'll get back to it. Eventually, cause I'm trying to sort the idea of the AW in my head and some plot twists.
 

It was missing another good pairing.

UH, Okay before you say it again I need to tell you that this is a fanfic. I can't imagine that YuukiXShunamori not happening would cause you eternal emotional torment........... but I could be wrong.

Edited by Phantom_999, 02 December 2013 - 02:42 PM.

[Phantom_999]

Hey guys My exams are almost done so I will continue the Story soon. Please look forward to it!!! On a side note I've decided to put in some plot elements I've always had in my head regarding Naruto in general. What that means is that I've always had ideas in my head to add to Naruto if eve ever got the chance to convey them to Kishi but 1) I don't know japanese and 2) I doubt he'd listen to a fan's ideas. SO I will add them on to here. The plot devises and jutsu I've thought up for Naruto and Sakura will debut here. Just a heads up.

[Phantom_999]

Okay Here we Go "The Battle Against Meido's Dawn" Part 9. Sorry it took so long some stuff is going on at home anyways enjoy.    *note* I'm going to put AL for alternate self of a character in this world to avoid confusion okay?

 

*Yuuki's World. Two years ago*

 

Misato: Ojou-sama! Ojou-sama! It's time to wake up!

Yuuki (8 years old): Mmmmmm......mmmmmmm *yawn* Okay..... *gets up groggily* better get ready...... *washes up gets dressed and comes down stairs* Morning mama, morning Misato.

Misato: Good morning Ojou-sama.

AL Sakura: Good morning Yuuki. Here you go sweetie. *puts breakfast on the table* 

Yuuki: thanks for the food! So did papa leave already? 

AL Sakura: yes he had some important meetings to go to.

Yuuki: Oh I see. Is he going to be working late? We were supposed to be practicing kage bunshin today.

AL Sakura: Maybe There are some important people that he needs to talk to, like his good friend the Kazekage. 

Yuuki: The Kazekage?

AL Sakura: Yes. Anyways How about you ask Shunamori-kun  to help you?

Shunamori: You called oba-san?

Yuuki: oh, morning Shu-kun!

Shunamori: Yeah morning.

Al Sakura: Ah, good morning Shunamori-kun. How is your mom today.

Shunamori: A bit better, she's been working really hard around the house so Hinabi oba-san is looking after her.

Yuuki: has your dad written back yet?

Shunamori: No. He just sent us some money but that's it. Haven't seen him since last year.

AL Sakura: Oh, look at the time! You two should hurry off now! I've got to go. Misato, you 'll be the one preparing dinner tonight right?

Misato: Of course Sakura-sama.

Shunamori: Okay, let's go Yuu-chan, you don't want to miss "him" at the entrance right

Yuuki: Huh? What are you talking about!?

Shunamori: Let's go, let's go!

Yuuki: Hey, wait up Shu-kun!!

 

*Running to school* 

 

Yuuki: Shu-kun!! What are you talking about!?

Shunamori: Amatsu Akira. He usually goes to school around this time.

Yuuki: O-Oh, he does?

Shunamori: Hey if we catch him, you might finally get to say hello to him before class.

Yuuki: We-Well, it's not like it matters to me really. *blushes*

Shunamori: You're lying. Why would you lie to me?

Yuuki: No I'm NOT!!!

Shunamori: Okay. Then you don't mind trying to say hi when he's with his posse then.

Yuuki: *flustered* NO!!! THAT'D BE MORTIFYING!!!!!!!

Shunamori: So you will let it slide? AGAIN?

Yuuki: *grumbles*

Shunamori: Yuu-chan, nothing will progress if you keep hesitating. If you can't even say hi to him, what's the point of getting depressed.

Yuuki: *sigh*

Shunamori: Fine, whatever. I'm not giving you the salmon rice balls you like so much then.

Yuuki: Shu-kun is a MEANIE!!!!! 

Shunamori: Yeah, Yeah lets get to class already or we'll be late. *speeds up*

Yuuki: *thinking* I-I guess Shu-kun is right. Maybe I'll try say to "hi" if I see him alone.........

 

*At the Academy entrance Entrance*

 

Shunamori: Hey. There he is.

Yuuki: Huh? *heartbeat* Y-Yeah.

* there was a boy standing at the entrance, Bright red hair, and brown eyes, with a bright warm smile*

Shunamori: Well here's your chance, if you want to take it.

Yuuki: Okay. *takes a deep breath, and walks up to Akira* Um, um...... Akira-kun?

Akira: Huh? Oh, You're uh, ah, Haruno Yuuki right?

Yuuki: Eh? I-I mean Yes I am, Hello!! *He knows my name!?* 

Akira: Hi. *smiles* so what can I do for you?

Yuuki: Well, actually I- 

Boy: Hey Akira!!!

Akira: huh , oh hey!!! Sorry Yuuki. Another time okay?

Yuuki: O-Okay. *stares at him*

Shunamori: Hey you exchanged a couple of sentences. Congratulations Yuu-chan.

Yuuki: Thanks!

Shunamori: Alright lets go.

 

To be continued. Okay all things aside showing the aspects of Yuuki's life before the war occurs but things will continue to heat up though.

Edited by Phantom_999, 01 January 2014 - 04:34 PM.