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#241 Bail o' Lies

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Posted 07 August 2015 - 04:43 PM

You know if it wasn't for the fact the few people that are going to go see Bolt's movie right now are clearly the japanese nH ans ss fans who don't care about the story and only want to see their pairing. This combination of both the one-shot and the Bolt movie would be a depressing ansamble for anyone who read and watch the movie. Think about it imagine if you were going to see this movie. You're given you complimentary one-shot. So before the movie begins you decide to read it quickly be fore the movie starts. And what you see is Naurto missing one of the biggest most important days of his life what he has spent most his life striving for and he misses it because his children are arguing and they care about their petty squabble that his big moment his wife doesn't wake him up in time because she had to get his coat which wasn't finished, and they had to have konohamaru be a stand in for him on his big day. Then you watch the movie he is constantly tired and exhausted from his job, his kids hate and don't respect him  his son cheats using  item he expressly forbidden anyone from using during an important and public event, and he get captured by villain and has to be rescued by his son. Wouldn't that depress you if you cared about Naruto and went to see this movie?



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Posted 07 August 2015 - 05:21 PM

I think the reason of why this one shot is like it is. Kishi was told to make a one shot like for the last. You know the one where Naruto had to look up sai book to figure out where you take girls on dates (despite every time before that whenever sai mention his books Naruto told him not to rely on them), but the restaurant was too expensive so hinata look into his wallet (creepy), and instead suggested that they should go to a...ramen stand instead (the way it was written sounded like she was unsure if Naruto liked ramen).

 

Here i think kishi wanted to do a one-shot where about Naruto coronation but his bosses told him to keep the coronation thing but also make it about Naruto's daughter because he hasn't characterized her yet and SP can't decided what personality to give to the perfect girl who spawned from hinata's womb (she will most likely have big breast in the future if their is a spin-off). So he did and was probably bitter about it so he made it like this.

I'm sure he was told to do it, but why is it so broken? That's the question that puzzles me. His inauguration was the Hokage supposed to be present in the last chapter, that was supposed to be the end. But instead we get a bonus chapter that only those who went to the movie, get it. And @tricksie said this best it's basically about Hinata's family than Naruto's big day.

 

The main character took a back seat while the side characters are driving the show now. And it's not even the good and development side characters.

You could say that Kishi's love for the Uchiha shifted to the Hyuuga's. Now they are the strongest and it's all about them.


Edited by Nostradamus, 07 August 2015 - 05:23 PM.

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Which I've told you - time and time again - is dangerous! There will never be consensus, son, among those you have helped to ascend. They will all differ in their views of what it means to be free. The peace you so desperately seek does not exist.
 
These men are united now by a common cause. But when this battle is finished they will fall to fighting amongst themselves about how best to ensure control. In time it will lead to war. You will see.


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Posted 07 August 2015 - 06:07 PM

corrected.  :love:

 

But yeah, DAT. have a like.  :thumb:

 

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Posted 07 August 2015 - 08:26 PM

How are Naruto's kids so out of control and spoiled? Judging by this one shot Naruto only became hokage 1-2 years at best, and  (and every hiden novels seem to be "don't included Naruto as much as possible") kurama said he was rusty so he could he couldn't have been on constant missions before then. So why are his children such brats?


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Posted 07 August 2015 - 08:32 PM

I'm sure he was told to do it, but why is it so broken? That's the question that puzzles me. His inauguration was the Hokage supposed to be present in the last chapter, that was supposed to be the end. But instead we get a bonus chapter that only those who went to the movie, get it. And @tricksie said this best it's basically about Hinata's family than Naruto's big day.

 

The main character took a back seat while the side characters are driving the show now. And it's not even the good and development side characters.

You could say that Kishi's love for the Uchiha shifted to the Hyuuga's. Now they are the strongest and it's all about them.

Sorry must have written it wrong or something. OK Kishi probably originally intended for the one shot to be about Naruto becoming hokage cause he didn't have time during the manga's run (he had to end at 700 for their stupid business plan). BUT then the higher up wanted him to make it about Naruto's daughter because he hadn't characterized her yet. They probably wanted it to take up most of the space or something so his bitterness lead it to becoming this.



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Posted 07 August 2015 - 10:08 PM

Sorry must have written it wrong or something. OK Kishi probably originally intended for the one shot to be about Naruto becoming hokage cause he didn't have time during the manga's run (he had to end at 700 for their stupid business plan). BUT then the higher up wanted him to make it about Naruto's daughter because he hadn't characterized her yet. They probably wanted it to take up most of the space or something so his bitterness lead it to becoming this.

Probably. But it raises the question : Why does it feel so empty? I know I've used this word many times but that's exactly how it feels.

It's empty. Like Kishi passion is gone. Even that moment where we see Naruto smiling like the old Naruto, still feels empty. Not the smile but the moment. There's no one by his side.

Kakashi is there only because he was the previous Hokage; God knows why anyone would want that guy as a leader.

Shikamaru's face says it all, he doesn't even want to be there. Even though throughout the story Shikamaru supported Naruto, even back in the old days of part 1. He's only there because that's his job.

 

 

How are Naruto's kids so out of control and spoiled? Judging by this one shot Naruto only became hokage 1-2 years at best, and  (and every hiden novels seem to be "don't included Naruto as much as possible") kurama said he was rusty so he could he couldn't have been on constant missions before then. So why are his children such brats?

Because Hinata is a doormat and Naruto just doesn't care.


Edited by Nostradamus, 07 August 2015 - 10:09 PM.

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Which I've told you - time and time again - is dangerous! There will never be consensus, son, among those you have helped to ascend. They will all differ in their views of what it means to be free. The peace you so desperately seek does not exist.
 
These men are united now by a common cause. But when this battle is finished they will fall to fighting amongst themselves about how best to ensure control. In time it will lead to war. You will see.


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Posted 07 August 2015 - 10:49 PM

Oh wow ...... this is a farce.


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Posted 07 August 2015 - 10:51 PM

So now the Byakuyan needs to be unlocked? Way to recon that crap, and we find out that Himiwari is a Yandere, confirming that Hinata is also a Yandere, and Boruto is going to have to die to get her the boy she wants.


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Posted 07 August 2015 - 11:05 PM

So now the Byakuyan needs to be unlocked? Way to recon that crap, and we find out that Himiwari is a Yandere, confirming that Hinata is also a Yandere, and Boruto is going to have to die to get her the boy she wants.

Some people parallel her with kushina, are you agree with that?

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Posted 07 August 2015 - 11:14 PM

Some people parallel her with kushina, are you agree with that?

Some people can parallel her with Juraiya for all they want, doesn't change a single thing.



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Posted 07 August 2015 - 11:18 PM

You know what guys ? That one-shot is here only to justify the fact that Himawari will have the byakugan in the next gen series. It's not about Naruto becoming Hokage.
It's a pretext. Only to justify future settings.
SP must have asked (forced) Kishimoto to give it to her.

It's utterly obvious that Kishimoto is not happy with this.

Also, I can't help but notice that, once again, Naruto and Hinata are not really talking to each other.

Hinata send the children to wake him up.
She then only tell him some words, then she leave.

And after, she finds him unconscious.

 

They have nothing to say to each other. Nothing. Everything is very formal between them because Kishimoto don't know how they could interact. They have no chemistry, no magic. Nothing. She doesn't seem to care about Naruto's dream at all. It's like he must wake up for his usual day at work... Sakura would have woken him up right away... Hinata feels so out of place with Naruto. LOL...

Everything that happens with Naruto family makes NO kittening SENSE. Everything.
What is happening with Himawari is a pure epic farce.
It's hurting me so much so see all this...


 


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Posted 07 August 2015 - 11:20 PM

You know what guys ? That one-shot is here only to justify the fact that Himawari will have the byakugan in the next gen series. It's not about Naruto becoming Hokage.
It's a pretext. Only to justify future settings.
SP must have asked (forced) Kishimoto to give it to her.

It's utterly obvious that Kishimoto is not happy with this.

Also, I can't help but notice that, once again, Naruto and Hinata are not really talking to each other.

Hinata send the children to wake him up.
She then only tell him some words, then she leave.

And after, she finds him unconscious.

 

They have nothing to say to each other. Nothing. Everything is very formal between them because Kishimoto don't know how they could interact. They have no chemistry, no magic. Nothing. Hinata feels so out of place with Naruto. LOL...

Everything that happens with Naruto family made NO kittening SENSE. Everything.
What is happening with Himawari is a pure epic farce.
It's hurting me so much so see all this...


 

Same story as chapter 700, ending my ass.



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Posted 07 August 2015 - 11:25 PM

Looking this mess , makes say thank you to Toei what they doing with Saint Seiya is not cannon and still is enjoyable somehow. ( Yes, I post something, reason I have little activity here.)


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Posted 07 August 2015 - 11:26 PM

How are Naruto's kids so out of control and spoiled? Judging by this one shot Naruto only became hokage 1-2 years at best, and  (and every hiden novels seem to be "don't included Naruto as much as possible") kurama said he was rusty so he could he couldn't have been on constant missions before then. So why are his children such brats?

 

What kind of child did you expect the 'shinigami couple' (NaruHina to Japanese people) to breed?

The scumbag's children are also scumbags. :roll:


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Posted 07 August 2015 - 11:31 PM

Reading this one shot is like reading a fan fiction


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Posted 07 August 2015 - 11:33 PM

Reading this one shot is like reading a fan fiction

fanfiction is better.

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Posted 07 August 2015 - 11:33 PM

Reading this one shot is like reading a fan fiction

Fan fiction has more passion. More work its put in to it.


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Which I've told you - time and time again - is dangerous! There will never be consensus, son, among those you have helped to ascend. They will all differ in their views of what it means to be free. The peace you so desperately seek does not exist.
 
These men are united now by a common cause. But when this battle is finished they will fall to fighting amongst themselves about how best to ensure control. In time it will lead to war. You will see.


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Posted 07 August 2015 - 11:35 PM

So... it feels like reading a bad fanfiction.


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Posted 07 August 2015 - 11:36 PM

Fan fiction has more passion. More work its put in to it.

You right I even I can say that FF are complicated 


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Posted 08 August 2015 - 01:00 AM

What a nightmare.

 

This one-shot had one purpose and one purpose only. To introduce Himawari's character for the sake of the next-generation. That's it. Naruto's inauguration wasn't even the main show. Naruto's big day was used and tampered with just so Burrito's psychotic sister could get some background along with introducing the conflict between Burrito and Himawari. Even if the chapter was about his inauguration to Hokage (which shouldn't be a separate chapter in the first place, but actually apart of the original MANGA where he's surrounded by his LOVED ONES after EARNING IT) - it'd be empty and have no meaning. After everything's that happen in this ending with TL, NG, Hinata, Boruto etc.?...yeah no. Canon has been destroyed. The title of Hokage has no meaning now that the story ended like that too. None. I don't even care about him becoming Hokage, as if him becoming Hokage = change. How empty. 

 

Himawari shouldn't be able to use the byakugan if she wasn't born with it. That isn't how the hyuga clan or the byakugan works, half-breed or not. How much rectons are going to happen? First Boruto + chidori, Boruto + gentle fist, Sarada + sharigan, Sarada + super strength, now Himawari + byakugan and Himawari + perfect technique? What the hell, lol. The recton is too damn much, can't believe this is all happening just so the story could be milked through this pathetic next generation.

 

Even something as Naruto's inauguration was messed up just for next-gen purposes. I'm so done. :lmao:

 

By the way - is it still bothering anyone that Hinata basically replaced Sakura as the girl in Naruto's life? An irrelevant secondary character. :lmao: It should be Sakura beside Naruto. It's been like that through the entirety of the manga, but ever since the ending it's just been Naruto and Hinata and their mess of a family. I can't believe Sakura wasn't even beside Naruto on his big day. Just watching from the crowds. The girl who's been supporting his dream ever since part 1! And Ms. irrelevant secondary character over there was never even in his circle of friends to know him at all. Where's Tsunade too? I didn't even see her. 

 

/cries for life/

It bothers me but I've acknowledged what this isn't part of original story. It's just a new story where the old characters are gone and replaced with new ones; done because someone high up wanted more money and wanted to milk every single drop this series has.

And when it's dry and there's nothing left to give anymore. Start again.


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Which I've told you - time and time again - is dangerous! There will never be consensus, son, among those you have helped to ascend. They will all differ in their views of what it means to be free. The peace you so desperately seek does not exist.
 
These men are united now by a common cause. But when this battle is finished they will fall to fighting amongst themselves about how best to ensure control. In time it will lead to war. You will see.





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