help needed
#1
Posted 22 July 2006 - 07:01 PM
danzo (bad guy in my fic) wants jiraiya out of the picture. why? he wants to invade rock country. for legislation to be passed, majority of council needed. jiraiya holds the opinion of many of the council. if jiraiya dies, the council can be persuaded. so he arrests him and will try to kill him.
jiraiya is strong, but i'm not sure exactly how strong. i've written the whole death scene three times over and still can't get it right... i mean, would jiraiya really run away if ten ANBU were against him? would fight to the death? would he completely annihilate them? i have no idea. keep in mind it is early in the morning, around three. no one is there to help him.
any suggestions?\
p.s. i'd like jiraiya to die (helps the flow of my story... thanks for all the help.)
#2
Posted 22 July 2006 - 07:15 PM
#3
Posted 23 July 2006 - 08:33 PM
#4
Posted 23 July 2006 - 08:48 PM
#5
Posted 23 July 2006 - 10:29 PM
The other thing is the dualized nature of Orochi/Jiraiya and Naruto/Sasuke, their deaths should involve each other. That sort of karmic relationship transcends mere coincidence and stuff like that. 10 ANBU ... it's tough. I'd say Jiraiya could come out on top. enh. But it would be pathetic for Orochi to still be around while Jiraiya's gone. Especially if Orochi and Sasuke are still seperate. If the body's been sucked up, then it's different. At that point, I think it's safe to say the legacy can continue, with OrochiSasuke being the snake of the trio.
#6
Posted 24 July 2006 - 04:06 AM
#7
Posted 24 July 2006 - 10:25 PM
So, if I was writing this story, I would opt to come up with a problem that removes Jiraiya's influence on the council. There are multiple ways for you to accomplish this. A few ideas are:
You could use his love of women against him.
Place Naruto in danger.
Protecting Tsunade's Image ( She loves to drink and gamble )
Atsukai.
Orochimaru.
#8
Posted 24 July 2006 - 11:02 PM
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Posted 25 July 2006 - 04:26 AM
#10
Posted 25 July 2006 - 06:16 PM
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Posted 25 July 2006 - 06:18 PM
#12
Posted 25 July 2006 - 09:21 PM
#13
Posted 25 July 2006 - 10:48 PM
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Posted 27 July 2006 - 08:52 PM
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