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#1 Uzumaki Naruto

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Posted 16 November 2004 - 01:57 AM

Reaching Naruto
By: Uzumaki Naruto
I don't own Naruto

You left and I knew
I saw your back and I knew
It was time to train and to become strong
When you come back I will surprise you
I will become strong, and I will do it not just for you
But I also will do it because of you
Thank you so much, you opened my eyes
I now know what held me back
You made me strong he made me weak
You made me smile while he made me weep
I cried and remained weak
But you always tried
You were never weak
You were always truly stronger then me
I tried to impress
You tried to become strong
I fell behind
You kept running

You always kept an eye though
You always noticed that I was strong
You were the one who cared
He wasn?t
I will show you my true strength
I can?t wait for you to come back
I will reach for the sky
That beautiful sky and your beautiful blue eyes,
Thank you for being there
Thank you for loving me
Thank you for saving me
Thank you for everything
I am sorry for keeping you waiting
But you will have to wait a little more
Because now like you,
I will become strong
And then I will take your heart with pride and joy
I love you Naruto
And I hope one day we may be
Happy forever
I will become strong thanks to you
You know me inside and out
You understand me with out any doubt
My heart finally told me who was the right one
That would be you
I will let the world know
That the one I truly love is you
I am Haruno Sakura
A name that will soon be known
Because of you, it will always be known
Because I will become stronger
I will no longer fall behind
I will no longer need you to keep a cast of your beautiful blue eyes
Uzumaki Naruto watch me no longer fall behind
I will make you happy
Because now that I finally realize
I love you
And you were always there for me
One day I will be there for you
I will reach for the sky
I will have your beautiful eyes
I love you
Please wait for me
Just a little more.

#2 Wrathchylde

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Posted 16 November 2004 - 02:03 PM

Awwwwww. *runs and gives her a hug* Good job UN.

#3 Smiter

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Posted 17 November 2004 - 11:51 AM

Awww...

I love this. happy.gif Fits very beautifully.

There's just a line I'm not sure about. happy.gif; "You always kept an I though" Was there meant to be another word in there? It feels incomplete...

#4 Uzumaki Naruto

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Posted 18 November 2004 - 02:28 AM

Thanks smitir for pointing that out. I meant
"You always kept an eye though" meaning Naruto always kept an eye on her.

#5 blessed_devil

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Posted 20 November 2004 - 11:32 AM

Wow, I love this. You seem to be very active in writing these kinds of fics.
Nothing is more reassuring than Kakashi saying "They'll be alright. Pakkun is with them."

#6 LoveHinaGuy

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Posted 20 November 2004 - 03:12 PM

yet another kick ass.............er fic? i dunno but it has motivated me to..........read more! biggrin.gif MAWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA:D


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