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[Aizen-Sama]

First on the shipping side, I say it's completely alright to keep Sakura's part 1 self exactly as she is.  Part of her character development would have been getting over Sasuke and realizing that she is idolizing a man she does not even know.  Kinda expected her development after Sai's "I know your smile is false".
 
As for rewriting things the way they have been, give Sakura more moments then just Sasori and actually explain everything Kishi never answered, like why was Sai following Sasuke when Hashirama gave him a power he never ended up using, why was Tenten given a scroll and mask she never used, what the flap happened with Yamato, and don't destroy Karin's or Sasuke's character in chapter 627 (Sasuke forgave Danzo and Karin forgave Sasuke - none of that).  
 
Have Kakashi and Hinata die against Pain.  The village is not revived.  Have White Fang be one of the zombies.  Have Juugo meet up with Zombie Kimmimaru (honestly I thought it was stupid that he could sense Madara and never bothered seeking out Kimmimaru to have one last talk).
 
Also, I'd love to help and be a co-writer/assistant. Please text me.  I have so many ideas I want to share to make the ending a "good" ending but not "candy fairy tale happy" ending while showing how rich the characters actually are.

I agree with everything except Kakashi dying. Only Hinata should die.

[Ryriena]

Let's see not have Neji die or Hinata become pairing folder. How about killing Susake in the end by getting Naruto to understand not everyone can be saved that is the point about being a leader of a city? He can die by helping Naruto save the world that would be a better redemption that the crap we got.

Edited by Ryriena, 29 April 2015 - 12:11 AM.

[catsi563]

Meh I still think its perfectly ok for Sasuke to live and be redeemed. He has a solid foundation for a story element by switching places with Naruto.

 

By going full circle and taking Narutos place as the pariah the loser the one who no one trusts or relies on.

 

That way he begins to rebuild his bonds and the trust for those bonds in a way appropriate to the story.

 

Karin he rebuilds the trust start as enemies, become teammates, become friends, become romantic partners.

 

the rebuilding of trust and bonds to me is the core element of Sasukes story. The starting from scratch and having to rebuild everything is something that was not used and should be used.

[Illnevergiveup3]

I agree with everything except Kakashi dying. Only Hinata should die.

lol. I got something else planned for her.

[Aizen-Sama]

lol. I got something else planned for her.

 

Well I don't want to bash her, just don't let her gain more importance than Naruto or Sakura and the story should be fine. :)

Edited by Aizen-Sama, 29 April 2015 - 10:06 AM.

[Ryriena]

I would actually have her become the head of her clan like the story said would happen instead of her hooking up with Naruto because of pity. 😐

Edited by Ryriena, 29 April 2015 - 12:22 PM.

[NaruSaku fan in Kentucky]

Having him love her over pity is so stupid that even Twilight would laugh at it.

[Ryriena]

Well Kishimoto, did allow her to have him out of pity for Hinata. Also have Sakura either not end up with anyone or not have her crawling back to Susake if you are doing a different pairing. Make her a bad ass medic ninja like Kabuto or Lady Chiyo instead of a housewife that is being used as sexist folder.

[Illnevergiveup3]

Well Kishimoto, did allow her to have him out of pity for Hinata. Also have Sakura either not end up with anyone or not have her crawling back to Susake if you are doing a different pairing. Make her a bad ass medic ninja like Kabuto or Lady Chiyo instead of a housewife that is being used as sexist folder.

NaruSaku all the way, and she gone be a badass.

[Aizen-Sama]

Have Minato and Sakura talk some more, that'd be cool.  Then maybe have Sakura get sucked into the Kyuubi's cage chamber like Sasuke was and meet Kushina somehow with Naruto. xD

[XJohnnyApprovesNarskuX]

Been with out net for three months now, glad to see that every one still cherishes the naturo that we know an love, on topic, I agree with everyone else's opinion but don't kill giants make her grow out of her stalker phase an.lead her clan an let neji survive

[HuskyLover]

Like most people have been saying :

 

- More NaruSaku moments (no negative development)

 

- More Badass fights for Sakura because she's the Heroine of the series

 

- Make Hinata grow out of her crush for naruto and then use her admiration for him to realise that Kiba has been by her side/supportive all this time + realises that he appreciates her. (To me, this would be a more realistic approach for Hinata's character since her and Naruto barely even interacted in this series, so her obsession for Naruto just comes across as really superficial and Bland  )

 

- I know some people say Neji with Hinata.....I'm fine with it since it would also make more sense than NH, (However, I'm still not sure if it's Incest or Not...so I would prefer Hinata with Kiba.

 

- Speaking of Neji, Keep him alive....Also, I would prefer him to be Head of the Hyuga clan instead of Hinata. Though, Hinata will still develop Independance and some leadership among the Hyugas.

 

-More Involvement of the Konoha 11

 

- Less Focus on Uchiha Drama. Thank you

 

- Sasuke Closure/redemption....Sasuke's character didn't seem resolved.

 

- Team Taka, Orochimaru and Kabuto should've been resolved in the main manga.

[starlitestarbrite]

how is this project coming along? i'm still hoping for the first chapter! is it still a weekly thing?

[James S Cassidy]

my only idea is give Naruto a weapon. I am thinking Kallisicks kind of like Nightwing.

[Legend054]

it's going to be a lot of work, but have fun and good luck to you man!

[Phantom_999]

More jutsu too!!!!! I will provide I always have ideas  and a weapon like James said. Personally I'd go with some specially made knives that ae similar but different to kunai. something like Minatos's flying thunder god kunai

Edited by Phantom_999, 27 November 2015 - 11:03 AM.

[catsi563]

No weapons please, thats part of the problem. People start wanting to see heroes get upgraded with everything from weapons to jutsu to magic flying dragons.

 

I want to see Batman but with wolverines claws, and a green lantern ring flying around in the star ship enterprise.

 

Naruto at its core is about a young clueless ninja with no real natural ability aside from this massive monstrous power in his belly.

 

he has to work his arse off just to master his first jutsu and then fight tooth and nail to beat some of his first opponents, but he does so with cleverness and making use of his natural gift for mischief and trickery and cunning.

 

rule of cool aside the character should remain true to its core concept which is the hard working loser overcoming the odds through sheer determination and guts.

[James S Cassidy]

No weapons please, thats part of the problem. People start wanting to see heroes get upgraded with everything from weapons to jutsu to magic flying dragons.

 

I want to see Batman but with wolverines claws, and a green lantern ring flying around in the star ship enterprise.

 

Naruto at its core is about a young clueless ninja with no real natural ability aside from this massive monstrous power in his belly.

 

he has to work his arse off just to master his first jutsu and then fight tooth and nail to beat some of his first opponents, but he does so with cleverness and making use of his natural gift for mischief and trickery and cunning.

 

rule of cool aside the character should remain true to its core concept which is the hard working loser overcoming the odds through sheer determination and guts.

A ninja without tools is not a real ninja. People say ninja are pron to tools. Well, weapons are tools.

Should I remind that Naruto already had Kalisticks when he hit the Sage Path upgrade?

2nd. One of the other problems is is that he doesn't use enough arsenal to warrant being a ninja. After the Rasenshurikan, what weapons or jutsus has he used besides just spamming the Rasengan type or just boosting his powers?

I want to see Naruto with variety. Like, what about more wind jutsu and affinity. What about weapons that reflect his character? What about tools that showcase his intelligence other than "hey, let's just throw a massive ball of chakra at it and see what happens?" I get bored of Naruto and even Goku just spamming the same abilities over and over because "It is so powerful why use anything else?"

Edited by James S Cassidy, 28 November 2015 - 04:30 AM.