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[Luna]

I have been planning this for a while and realized it is kind of similar to Fire Force LOL (binged watch it yesterday) but this story is inspired more by Naruto and Black Clover (and now Fire Force). I wanted to share some information on it. I might start posting it on Wattpad or Royal Road next year when I have enough chapters.

 

Title: Tidal Nebula

 

Setting: The Great Flood is an event that occurred on a Solar Eclipse three hundred years before, with the land masses of the world being consumed by the ocean, destroying the great nations, and killing millions of humans. The survivors took refuge in technologically advanced ships created by Star Industries, the leading conglomerate, and they developed a series of 8 large floating cities called Tidal Nebula.

 

In Year 3104, a special naval infantry called the Marine Stars fights against increasing incidents where human beings or marine life are turned into beings called Limus Orcus (Water Death). The Limus Orcus are the first stage of water death, with more powerful second stage known as Archfiends. The Marine Stars was formed by gathering people called Oceanic Shifters who developed mutations that allowed them to traverse the ocean deep and is composed of ten marine troupes.

 

 

Plot: Cove Odous is a rowdy youth who joins Marine Troupe 8, which features others who dedication themselves to fighting the Limus Orcus and treasure hunting in the ocean deep, searching for remnants of the sunken nations. Cove begins to learn that the Archfiend that killed his father, a famous marine scientist, is caused by a mysterious cult that is behind the creation of Limus Orcus. Marine Troupe 8 must fight against the mysterious cult who seek to revive the Ancient Sea Monsters to destroy the rest of humanity.

 

 

 

Im still creating more characters, making sure the plot flows and visualizing Tidal Nebula and how it works. Lots of work to do before actually writing. 

Edited by Luna, 08 December 2020 - 01:53 PM.

[Chatte]

Oh wow, this sounds so amazing!!

For a reason this sounds like old X-Men/Mutant X to me truth be told lol.

Edited by Chatte, 07 December 2020 - 01:13 AM.

[Illnevergiveup3]

I'm sold.

[Luna]

Going to post more information today c: Made some changes to our characters and added some more as well as their background.

Edited by Luna, 08 December 2020 - 12:03 PM.

[Luna]

The first draft about some information about our main character. Also, any advice is welcomed!

 

This is NOT my drawing BUT this is how I imagine Cove to look.

 

 

Name: Cove Odous

Gender: Male

Age: 18

Hair Color: Black

Hair Style: Dread Locks w/ Ponytail

Eyes: Ocean Blue

Skin: Dark Skinned

Birth Date: November 22^nd

Height: 180cm

Species: 1^st Stage Oceanic Shifter

Unique Mutation: Big Tooth

Affiliation: Marine Troupe 8

 

Background: At 8 years old, Cove grew up with his father and grandmother in Tidal Nebula City #1. As a young child, Cove was earnest about the ocean, often role-playing as the marine animals his father told him about, wishing he can travel on the sea and sea all sorts of sea creatures.

 

One day, his father took him on one of his expeditions that required him to investigate a strange power source. However, the ship was attacked by an Archfiend just before they reached their goal.

 

Cove saw death for the first time that day when the Archfiend slaughtered and devoured everyone on the ship. To protect him, his father threw him overboard in a lifeboat and fought against the Archfiend to protect his son. Cove watched his father die right before his eyes before he was rendered unconscious when the ship erupted in a huge explosion.

 

When he woke again, he found himself in the Hospital with his grandmother by his side, and was soon interrogated by the Marine Troupe 1 Captain. His father is blamed for the incident and doing an unauthorized expedition. When the Captain of Troupe 1 continued to insult his father, Cove grew very angry and spontaneously mutates for the first time. He catches the captain by surprise, latching onto his arm and biting it clean off with his teeth.

 

Cove is punished and gets locked up in a Stars Industry facility because of his mutation and actions. He is separated from his grandmother, forced to live at the facility with other children. Cove grew rebellious and fouled mouth, often trying to escape the facility. When he reaches 13 he was finally released into the custody of his grandmother who lived in City #8 and is forced to attend run down Marine Stars Academy in City #8, the poorest city in Tidal Nebula.

 

He graduates the academy and is forced to join the Marine Troupe 8 which was one of the worst troupes in the Tidal Nebula.

 

Big Tooth: When Cove shifts into his 1^st Stage form, he has a physical mutation in the form of his sharp teeth and jaws which are abnormally larger than a regular humans. Cove can bite through rock and flesh easily with a bite force of 7000 PSI.

 

 

Our main female protagonist will be posted tomorrow or today!

Edited by Luna, 08 December 2020 - 02:00 PM.

[Illnevergiveup3]

definitely sold:D

[Luna]

definitely sold:D

 

Thank you!

 

I feel you will definitely like the F!MC

Edited by Luna, 08 December 2020 - 02:00 PM.

[Luna]

Our Female MC

 

Not my PIC but this is how I imagine Cordelia but with tanned skin.

 

https://pbs.twimg.co...=png&name=small

 

Name: Cordelia Lucerne

Gender: Female

Age: 19

Hair Color: Bright Pink

Hair Style: Long wavy

Eyes: Blue

Skin: Tanned

Birthdate: February 14^th

Height: 170cm

Species: 1^st Stage Oceanic Shifter

Unique Mutation: Marine Friend

Affiliation: Marine Troupe 8

 

Background: Cordelia grew up as an orphan living in the City #8 orphanage where she was bullied because of her overly cheerful personality which annoyed others and being the only one not to develop a mutation yet. She was shunned by the other kids and ignored by the caretakers in favour of others.

 

She would hide in her room or the bathroom to cry whenever the children would insult her or not play with her. It became worse when another boy joined he orphanage and became popular among the children. He would often beat her up and pull her hair.

 

Every night she would sneak out watch the aquarium fish in the play area, desperately wishing for a friend and telling the fish her problems. She did that every night – without getting caught – for a two months. On the third month, she sneaked out one day and was caught and beaten by a caretaker.

 

Her desperate cries for help was heard she mutated while being beaten. The fish in the aquarium heard her cries and jumped out of the tank, land inside the mouth of the caretaker. Cordelia watched the caretaker choked to death in front of her as the other children and caretakers came down from their rooms.

 

Cordelia was traumatized by the entire ordeal and was taken to the facility in City #1 to analyze her mutation. Her mutation was analyzed and named “Marine Friend.” The caretakers of the orphanage were replaced after investigations were done but Cordelia was still damaged by the abuse.

 

Later, Cordelia attended the Marine Stars Academy when she reached 13 and never made any friends and avoided all human contact. However, when no one was looking she could be found talking cheerfully and  animatedly to her aquarium fish. She has a hard time speaking to other people and would get incredibly flustered and angry when they talk to her.

 

Cordelia graduates the academy and is sent to the Marine Troupe 8 as a new recruit a year before Cove joins.

 

Marine Friend: Cordelia has the ability to instantly form a bond with marine animals. She can understand marine animals and ask them for their aid.

Edited by Luna, 08 December 2020 - 02:41 PM.

[Chatte]

The first draft about some information about our main character. Also, any advice is welcomed!

 

This is NOT my drawing BUT this is how I imagine Cove to look.

 

 

Name: Cove Odous

Gender: Male

Age: 18

Hair Color: Black

Hair Style: Dread Locks w/ Ponytail

Eyes: Ocean Blue

Skin: Dark Skinned

Birth Date: November 22^nd

Height: 180cm

Species: 1^st Stage Oceanic Shifter

Unique Mutation: Big Tooth

Affiliation: Marine Troupe 8

 

Background: At 8 years old, Cove grew up with his father and grandmother in Tidal Nebula City #1. As a young child, Cove was earnest about the ocean, often role-playing as the marine animals his father told him about, wishing he can travel on the sea and sea all sorts of sea creatures.

 

One day, his father took him on one of his expeditions that required him to investigate a strange power source. However, the ship was attacked by an Archfiend just before they reached their goal.

 

Cove saw death for the first time that day when the Archfiend slaughtered and devoured everyone on the ship. To protect him, his father threw him overboard in a lifeboat and fought against the Archfiend to protect his son. Cove watched his father die right before his eyes before he was rendered unconscious when the ship erupted in a huge explosion.

 

When he woke again, he found himself in the Hospital with his grandmother by his side, and was soon interrogated by the Marine Troupe 1 Captain. His father is blamed for the incident and doing an unauthorized expedition. When the Captain of Troupe 1 continued to insult his father, Cove grew very angry and spontaneously mutates for the first time. He catches the captain by surprise, latching onto his arm and biting it clean off with his teeth.

 

Cove is punished and gets locked up in a Stars Industry facility because of his mutation and actions. He is separated from his grandmother, forced to live at the facility with other children. Cove grew rebellious and fouled mouth, often trying to escape the facility. When he reaches 13 he was finally released into the custody of his grandmother who lived in City #8 and is forced to attend run down Marine Stars Academy in City #8, the poorest city in Tidal Nebula.

 

He graduates the academy and is forced to join the Marine Troupe 8 which was one of the worst troupes in the Tidal Nebula.

 

Big Tooth: When Cove shifts into his 1^st Stage form, he has a physical mutation in the form of his sharp teeth and jaws which are abnormally larger than a regular humans. Cove can bite through rock and flesh easily with a bite force of 7000 PSI.

 

 

Our main female protagonist will be posted tomorrow or today!

 

Woow! The drawing tho, looks perfect! Aah, character x grandmother. YOU HAD ME AT IT!

 

I can instantly connect to a story that has a grandmother in it because I was personally very connected to mine. It's one of the main core themes of one of my OG stories as well.

 

Our Female MC

 

Not my PIC but this is how I imagine Cordelia but with tanned skin.

 

https://pbs.twimg.co...=png&name=small

 

Name: Cordelia Lucerne

Gender: Female

Age: 19

Hair Color: Bright Pink

Hair Style: Long wavy

Eyes: Blue

Skin: Tanned

Birthdate: February 14^th

Height: 170cm

Species: 1^st Stage Oceanic Shifter

Unique Mutation: Marine Friend

Affiliation: Marine Troupe 8

 

Background: Cordelia grew up as an orphan living in the City #8 orphanage where she was bullied because of her overly cheerful personality which annoyed others and being the only one not to develop a mutation yet. She was shunned by the other kids and ignored by the caretakers in favour of others.

 

She would hide in her room or the bathroom to cry whenever the children would insult her or not play with her. It became worse when another boy joined he orphanage and became popular among the children. He would often beat her up and pull her hair.

 

Every night she would sneak out watch the aquarium fish in the play area, desperately wishing for a friend and telling the fish her problems. She did that every night – without getting caught – for a two months. On the third month, she sneaked out one day and was caught and beaten by a caretaker.

 

Her desperate cries for help was heard she mutated while being beaten. The fish in the aquarium heard her cries and jumped out of the tank, land inside the mouth of the caretaker. Cordelia watched the caretaker choked to death in front of her as the other children and caretakers came down from their rooms.

 

Cordelia was traumatized by the entire ordeal and was taken to the facility in City #1 to analyze her mutation. Her mutation was analyzed and named “Marine Friend.” The caretakers of the orphanage were replaced after investigations were done but Cordelia was still damaged by the abuse.

 

Later, Cordelia attended the Marine Stars Academy when she reached 13 and never made any friends and avoided all human contact. However, when no one was looking she could be found talking cheerfully and  animatedly to her aquarium fish. She has a hard time speaking to other people and would get incredibly flustered and angry when they talk to her.

 

Cordelia graduates the academy and is sent to the Marine Troupe 8 as a new recruit a year before Cove joins.

 

Marine Friend: Cordelia has the ability to instantly form a bond with marine animals. She can understand marine animals and ask them for their aid.

 

Can I tell you that I already ADORE the MFC? T_T

 

Instant connection there as well, as this very much kind of represents my backstories. That's how I ended-up loving animals so much more, because I suffered from bullying myself, with kids being mean and judgemental.

 

But my saving grace was that I had my grandmother in the countryside who had a lot of animals in her yard which I could play with.

 

Probably that's why I didn't end up a bully myself. Because grandma and the animals taught me so much more than any human being could do.

 

I truly love your story! I am so sold!

 

What format do you plan to have it on?

[Luna]

 

Woow! The drawing tho, looks perfect! Aah, character x grandmother. YOU HAD ME AT IT!

 

I can instantly connect to a story that has a grandmother in it because I was personally very connected to mine. It's one of the main core themes of one of my OG stories as well.

 

 

Can I tell you that I already ADORE the MFC? T_T

 

Instant connection there as well, as this very much kind of represents my backstories. That's how I ended-up loving animals so much more, because I suffered from bullying myself, with kids being mean and judgemental.

 

But my saving grace was that I had my grandmother in the countryside who had a lot of animals in her yard which I could play with.

 

Probably that's why I didn't end up a bully myself. Because grandma and the animals taught me so much more than any human being could do.

 

I truly love your story! I am so sold!

 

What format do you plan to have it on?

 

Royal Road or Wattpad but I might post first drafts here (so i  can get some feed back)

[Chatte]

 

Royal Road or Wattpad but I might post first drafts here (so i  can get some feed back)

 

Can't wait for it! Truly. I think it's such a nice concept. It reminds me a bit of Aquaman as well?

 

But the way you execute things is totally what sells me in.

[Luna]

 

Can't wait for it! Truly. I think it's such a nice concept. It reminds me a bit of Aquaman as well?

 

But the way you execute things is totally what sells me in.

 

To be honest, I'm very  insecure about my  writing but II try my best and I Iove putting my big imagination on paper. 

 

I have another original story I can post here too. Ii already have like 3 chapters done so far but I dont have that time due to work. I will probably post it.