An old photograph,
brings memories from the past,
hope for tomorrow.
Naruto Poetry Corner
Started by roninmedia, Nov 13 2007 07:31 PM
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roninmedia
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Posted 13 November 2007 - 07:31 PM
Post your poetry. Let your imaginative essence flow. The following is just an example, using a haiku that won first prize in an Ai Yori Aoshi haiku contest.
An old photograph,
brings memories from the past,
hope for tomorrow.
An old photograph,
brings memories from the past,
hope for tomorrow.
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anubite
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Posted 20 December 2007 - 07:09 PM
One that shouts loudly,
Is like the wolf or whale;
Unheard and unseen.
Is like the wolf or whale;
Unheard and unseen.
Blood drunk by the earth;
A wound that is deep, and I
am closer to life.
A wound that is deep, and I
am closer to life.
Well, there's my shot at it.
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Kamina-Yoshi
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Posted 22 December 2007 - 04:42 AM
I'm profeciant in poetry, so here goes, tell me how you all like it!
Heaven and Earth
By: Trigen Yoshimoto
Through the pedals
I see you dance
I come from the sky
To meet you, Earth
Your bright emerald eyes
Bring warmth to my heart
Even if I fell from the Sky
I feel as if it didn't hurt
You were always there for me
My dearest Blossom
Dance in the trees
Dance in the wind
Dance with the Sakura blossoms.
Heaven and Earth
By: Trigen Yoshimoto
Through the pedals
I see you dance
I come from the sky
To meet you, Earth
Your bright emerald eyes
Bring warmth to my heart
Even if I fell from the Sky
I feel as if it didn't hurt
You were always there for me
My dearest Blossom
Dance in the trees
Dance in the wind
Dance with the Sakura blossoms.
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Kamina-Yoshi
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Posted 22 December 2007 - 07:07 PM
Sorry for double posting, but does anyone have any comments on my poetry?
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Simusar
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Posted 05 April 2008 - 05:28 AM
i got two
(Both written by me)
"Eyes"(NaruSaku)
"Troublesome"(ShikaTema)
(Both written by me)
"Eyes"(NaruSaku)
"Troublesome"(ShikaTema)
Edited by Simusar, 05 April 2008 - 05:29 AM.
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