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#1741 pharix

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Posted 21 March 2012 - 02:03 PM

QUOTE (Gravenimage @ Mar 20 2012, 09:53 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
In due time by yvj has been updated with chapter 12 http://www.fanfictio...t/s/5825070/12/

we know already!

#1742 Nick Soapdish

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Posted 23 March 2012 - 12:02 AM

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I am new to H&E and just started my first Naruto story...and it is short for starters...but KonohaKitten gave me the good advice to list it here for your enjoyment (I hope happy.gif).


Sorry, but your fic has been moved to Jiraiya's Ero-Club. The main forum isn't suitable for mature works.

#1743 PlumBlossom

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Posted 23 March 2012 - 03:32 AM

QUOTE (Nick Soapdish @ Mar 22 2012, 08:02 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Sorry, but your fic has been moved to Jiraiya's Ero-Club. The main forum isn't suitable for mature works.


/facepalm. Sorry! Didn't realize I should post in a more specific place for the MAzz. Should have made it more obvious that mine was so very MA. mellow.gif

Edited by PlumBlossom, 23 March 2012 - 03:32 AM.

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#1744 catsi563

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Posted 24 March 2012 - 02:15 AM

In case anyones curious or interested. Eroslacker Micha has finished He Said She said, and started a new story She Said its listed as NaruSaku so check if you will.
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#1745 Gravenimage

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Posted 26 March 2012 - 09:14 AM

Finding inner strength by Shadow 2700 has been updated with chapter 30 http://www.fanfictio...t/s/6055113/30/


You said yes by Deva Hoshikage has been updated with chapter 12 http://www.fanfictio...t/s/6454735/13/

A voice in the wind by tricksie has been updated with chapter 30 http://www.fanfictio...t/s/5827210/30/

Edited by Gravenimage, 26 March 2012 - 02:39 PM.

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#1746 Konoha'sCrimsonFox

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Posted 26 March 2012 - 09:29 PM

QUOTE (Gravenimage @ Mar 25 2012, 11:14 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Finding inner strength by Shadow 2700 has been updated with chapter 30 http://www.fanfictio...t/s/6055113/30/


You said yes by Deva Hoshikage has been updated with chapter 12 http://www.fanfictio...t/s/6454735/13/

A voice in the wind by tricksie has been updated with chapter 30 http://www.fanfictio...t/s/5827210/30/

It's about time.

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#1747 Toasty Warrior

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Posted 27 March 2012 - 07:16 AM

Strength Of Two Hearts has been updated with chapter seven: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7833852/7/Strength_Of_Two_Hearts

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#1748 Dragunov

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Posted 29 March 2012 - 05:55 AM

KnS!! I need my Wilderness fix! The addiction is killing me! ARGH wasntme.png argh1.png wacko.gif

#1749 ramenanmitsu

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Posted 29 March 2012 - 10:22 AM

QUOTE (Dragunov @ Mar 29 2012, 02:55 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
KnS!! I need my Wilderness fix! The addiction is killing me! ARGH wasntme.png argh1.png wacko.gif

Same here wow.png hm.png argh1.png
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#1750 KnS

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Posted 30 March 2012 - 05:14 PM

QUOTE (Dragunov @ Mar 28 2012, 10:55 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
KnS!! I need my Wilderness fix! The addiction is killing me! ARGH wasntme.png argh1.png wacko.gif


QUOTE (narunarunaru @ Mar 29 2012, 03:22 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Same here wow.png hm.png argh1.png


QUOTE (Konan-chan @ Mar 29 2012, 06:59 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Same here.... argh1.png arg.gif unsure.gif shamefulcry0js.gif mellow.gif But don't forget that he said they he needed to update his Gaara fic first. a_thumbs.gif

Aww! You guys are too nice. I know it's seemed like forever, and I'm sorry I've been so crushed by real life. It's not my first choice either.

I should have some time to write now that things have settled down a bit, but as Konan-chan said, Gaara is next in line. The poor guy's been hanging from an emotional cliff for a reeeeeally long time. x__X Wilderness will get updated as soon as I can, I swear.

Thanks for being addicted, though. happy.gif

#1751 Gravenimage

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Posted 02 April 2012 - 12:21 AM

Wrath of fire by Xorcon has been updated with chapter 34 http://www.fanfictio...t/s/6003084/34/
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#1752 Toasty Warrior

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Posted 03 April 2012 - 08:48 AM

Strength Of Two Hearts has been updated with chapter eight: http://www.fanfictio...h_Of_Two_Hearts

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#1753 Gravenimage

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Posted 05 April 2012 - 12:40 AM

Finding inner strength by Shadow2700 has been updated with chapter 31 http://www.fanfictio...t/s/6055113/31/
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#1754 The Tax-Man

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Posted 05 April 2012 - 01:05 AM

QUOTE (Gravenimage @ Apr 4 2012, 06:40 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Finding inner strength by Shadow2700 has been updated with chapter 31 http://www.fanfictio...t/s/6055113/31/


^ Good one.

Edited by The Tax-Man, 05 April 2012 - 01:05 AM.

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#1755 Gravenimage

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Posted 05 April 2012 - 02:22 AM

QUOTE (The Tax-Man @ Apr 4 2012, 06:05 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
^ Good one.


I just realized I can't read the chapter because this message type 1 keeps appearing that I might have an outdated url what does that mean? and how do I fix it?
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#1756 Greed-Sama

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Posted 05 April 2012 - 02:23 AM

QUOTE (Gravenimage @ Apr 4 2012, 09:22 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
I just realized I can't read the chapter because this message type 1 keeps appearing that I might have an outdated url what does that mean? and how do I fix it?


Means that ff.net is messing up. So give it some time.
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#1757 tricksie

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Posted 06 April 2012 - 07:05 PM

Just posted a new Naru/Saku story: A Single Step

Summary: "You should come with me! It'll be great!" And with that, Naruto left with Sasuke, the one who never truly needed his help, and turned away from the teammate and village that did.

So it's an N/S AU about Naruto leaving with Sasuke instead of convincing him to stay, and focusing on how they develop and how Sakura would be changed by the absence of both teammates.

#1758 Madz

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Posted 07 April 2012 - 08:34 AM

And I still can't submit reviews (or send PMs or ANYTHING!!!) on FFnet and this is going on for weeks now th_cussing.gif

Anyway - just to say that I'm so excited to read a new story from you, Tricksie!! And it looks very promising. Very original plot!
Keep up!

#1759 ciardha

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Posted 07 April 2012 - 10:44 AM

QUOTE (tricksie @ Apr 6 2012, 03:05 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Just posted a new Naru/Saku story: A Single Step

Summary: "You should come with me! It'll be great!" And with that, Naruto left with Sasuke, the one who never truly needed his help, and turned away from the teammate and village that did.

So it's an N/S AU about Naruto leaving with Sasuke instead of convincing him to stay, and focusing on how they develop and how Sakura would be changed by the absence of both teammates.


I usually don't care for AU's- the writers almost always write the characters nothing like how Kishimoto does, but you do much better- characters are as reasonably close as they could be to canon under the circumstances. You've done so with this new one too.

The only point I see being a problem with this concept is if Sasuke goes to Orochimaru. I think Naruto would fight it much more if it was still Orochimaru. Orochimaru had just killed the Third Hokage, one of the few people outside of Team 7 Naruto had an emotional bond to. And now that I think about it, there's his growing bond to Jiraiya at this point too. And how during the Sanin battle Orochimaru's outright attempt to kill him because he knew Naruto had the Kyuubi in him. Curious to see how you deal with those issues, and what I'm picking up on as a somewhat different motivation for Sakura to go to Tsunade for training- if she still trains with Tsunade...

I'll read on to see how you deal with those questions. smile.gif
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#1760 tricksie

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Posted 09 April 2012 - 03:18 PM

QUOTE (ciardha @ Apr 7 2012, 06:44 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
I usually don't care for AU's- the writers almost always write the characters nothing like how Kishimoto does, but you do much better- characters are as reasonably close as they could be to canon under the circumstances. You've done so with this new one too.


Yeah, I know where you're coming from. AUs aren't my favorite either. But there's no good way to say that it's canon-world, canon rules, but expect some major tweaks to canon. AU is a blanket cover. Although to my mind, I equate AU with something radically different. Like Naruto in the modern world.

But thanks. It such a challenge to write the characters in different roles, then try to keep them true to their canon personalities underneath. I really enjoy it. I'm not retelling the same manga story — I've definitely made it my own — but I'm trying to keep the characters intact. And have whatever oddball actions they take as a direct result of the story be in keeping with their character.

My biggest challenge here will be to write the characters slightly different from the other stories (I have a few more in the works too.) I don't want people to read it and say 'oh just same Voice in the Wind characters, different stories.' So that's the hurdle I've set for myself in writing the different stories.

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The only point I see being a problem with this concept is if Sasuke goes to Orochimaru. I think Naruto would fight it much more if it was still Orochimaru. Orochimaru had just killed the Third Hokage, one of the few people outside of Team 7 Naruto had an emotional bond to. And now that I think about it, there's his growing bond to Jiraiya at this point too. And how during the Sanin battle Orochimaru's outright attempt to kill him because he knew Naruto had the Kyuubi in him. Curious to see how you deal with those issues, and what I'm picking up on as a somewhat different motivation for Sakura to go to Tsunade for training- if she still trains with Tsunade...

I'll read on to see how you deal with those questions. smile.gif

So this is where the major canon tweaks come in. I agree, in the manga, Naruto is convincingly written as having fully rooted bonds to Jiraiya, Sakura, Kakashi, the Third, Iruka, etc. It's hard to imagine him leaving. Ever.

And here's where I am challenged: I'm shuffling Naruto's bonds and motivations a bit. Like what if Sasuke turned the tables on Naruto and begged him to accompany him. And blinded by the apparent strength of that friendship, Naruto accepts. Naruto is still immature in part 1, and still fresh from the vast emotionally-empty landscape of his youth. So an offer from Sasuke would carry much greater weight then than it would at any other time.

Anyway, as with all things, what sounds fun and great and problem-free at first turns out to have lots of unforeseeable consequences for all parties involved.

Your right on the nose about Orochimaru too. This certainly won't be a story where Naruto is raised under the happy tutelage of Orochimaru. Naruto never loses sight of the main reason he's there: Sasuke. And Sasuke knows it as well.

And yes, Sakura comes to Tsunade through a different channel but is just as self-actualized as ususal. Naruto will take a little longer to undo his bad decisions, but he'll get there too!

@madz - no worries! I'm just glad to know you like it!! smile.gif




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