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#1 Derock

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Posted 14 February 2008 - 06:31 AM

Now we all know about the crazy high school fics of Naruto in Fanfiction.net.

But besides the point people... I'm starting another fic (if I get my ideas together how this will plan out).

First off, if you haven't heard the news, the lastest Shippuuden DVD in Japan has a bonus audio-drama pic showing DVD of the second Shippuuden ending. That's where the idea comes from in the first place.

Second, some haven't heard of Capcom's Rival Schools series, even though it is a good game; the fic is gonna have plot elements from the series (as in missing students, rivaling schools

Konoha vs. Oto High
and then I putting a little twist, with the help of the Tekken series in story.

So right now, its a WIP.

This is the plot (if its sound right):


Many years ago, Kyuubi Namikaze Zaibatsu was the center and popular organiztion in the business world, not only in Japan but in the entire world. The company use a military-like system to build and develop modern communities, such as new schools and centers for less wealthy. However, an unexpected event happened... the CEO of the company and his wife was assassinated and the company was suddenely bought out from a rival company, the Uchiha Zaibatsu. Unlike the KNZ, UZ is more dominated and forceful and rumors has been around saying the company is becoming more darker and corrupted. As their power continued to grow as years go by, the communities were suddenly become affected with chaos. Crimes has skyrocketted, schools has been either abandoned or shut down because of the crimes, and recently, many students had been kidnapped or killed. The police did not help to investigate. One of those schools, Konoha High of the Konoha District, has recently experienced the kidnappings and the abuse of the rivalring students from other schools. However, that's about to change when a certain blonde-haired teenaged boy stepped up towards the school gates for registry...


Now who's in the fic: EVERY single Naruto known characters, excluding some characters. Along with a surprise addition to the cast. And who will be?



Now this is just a WIP. The prologue will come out once I get the ideas in motion and are able to stay in flow.

Beta readers need when I finished the prologue.

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Posted 14 February 2008 - 06:33 AM

Oh ho ho, am I looking forward to this. PWN UCHIHA ZAIBATSU! XDDDD
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Posted 14 February 2008 - 10:49 AM

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Second, nobody haven't heard of Capcom's Rival Schools series, even though it is a good game


Derock, you disappoint me. What do you think, what I have never played an arcade? Why don't you ask me too if I know who Ken Masters or Kyo Kusanagi are? biggrin.gif tongue.gif

(By the way, since we are talking about videogames, I'm currently playing Sonic Rush Adventure. And loving it wink.gif )

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the fic is gonna have plot elements from the series (as in missing students, rivaling schools)


Hey, it's a good idea! Those fics usually are a boring waste of time, but this sounds thrilling.

By the way, will Sakura will wear a white headband and her fighting style will be Karate? biggrin.gif (to who doesn't know it, one of the Rival Schools characters is named Sakura).

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and then I putting a little twist, with the help of the Tekken series in story.


Uh... I don't really like Tekken... or Dead or Alive for that matter unsure.gif (I preffer Street Fighter, King of Fighters, Mortal Kombat or SoulCalibur).

Your plot sounds good. I like it.

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Now who's in the fic: EVERY single Naruto known characters, excluding some characters. Along with a surprise addition to the cast. And who will be?


I can't argue that addition. :rolleyes:

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Now this is just a WIP. The prologue will come out once I get the ideas in motion and are able to stay in flow.


(Mr. Burns' voice) Excellent.

Edited by Jenskott, 14 February 2008 - 10:54 AM.

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Posted 14 February 2008 - 12:58 PM

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Posted 14 February 2008 - 05:02 PM

QUOTE (Jenskott @ Feb 14 2008, 06:56 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Derock, you disappoint me. What do you think, what I have never played an arcade? Why don't you ask me too if I know who Ken Masters or Kyo Kusanagi are? biggrin.gif tongue.gif

(By the way, since we are talking about videogames, I'm currently playing Sonic Rush Adventure. And loving it wink.gif )
Hey, it's a good idea! Those fics usually are a boring waste of time, but this sounds thrilling.

By the way, will Sakura will wear a white headband and her fighting style will be Karate? biggrin.gif (to who doesn't know it, one of the Rival Schools characters is named Sakura).
Uh... I don't really like Tekken... or Dead or Alive for that matter unsure.gif (I preffer Street Fighter, King of Fighters, Mortal Kombat or SoulCalibur).

Your plot sounds good. I like it.
I can't argue that addition. :rolleyes:
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Hey! We gonna have some street fighting in the fic but without the Shadowloo, Akuma or the crazy cloning of Kyo stuff tongue.gif

(Ooo you're playing Rush Adventure, my brother finished the game, he said it was WAY too easy.)

Well... Sakura acting like SF's Sakura... it may come out like that. Not sure though how it will come out at the end though, since I plotted out the beginning -

she don't begin fighting until around right before the attack of the Oto students


OOO you're a fighting gamer I see. wow.png Well, I'm might plan surprise #2 (though I'm not sure about her because her school outfit is different, while Surprise #1 prefectly matches the outfit the Naruto female casts wore in Ending 2)

But thank you. happy.gif

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Posted 14 February 2008 - 05:20 PM

LOL.

I only know Sakura and Karin from Rival Schools. XDD!

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Posted 14 February 2008 - 06:27 PM

Edit:


I have to change the company's name because I realize I want in the story Naruto not knowing about his heritage until like almost at the end of the Oto school attack. So its Kyuubi Namikaze, not Kyuubi Uzumaki.

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Posted 15 February 2008 - 08:48 PM

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Hey! We gonna have some street fighting in the fic but without the Shadowloo, Akuma or the crazy cloning of Kyo stuff


Ew. Thank for remind me of THAT. sweatdrop.gif

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(Ooo you're playing Rush Adventure, my brother finished the game, he said it was WAY too easy.)


I don't know. Regardless, I like the game and it's very funny.

Anyway, you know videogames are becoming progressively easier. Only compare Super Mario Bros. 3 and New Super Mario Bros.

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Well... Sakura acting like SF's Sakura... it may come out like that.


Heh. If she shows signs of idol worship, we won't know if she'll be acting like Naruto's Sakura or SF's Sakura. biggrin.gif

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OOO you're a fighting gamer I see. Well, I'm might plan surprise #2


If she wears a high school outfit, she can't be Mai Shiranui. :shamefulcry0js:


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I have to change the company's name because I realize I want in the story Naruto not knowing about his heritage until like almost at the end of the Oto school attack. So its Kyuubi Namikaze, not Kyuubi Uzumaki.


Good idea.

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Posted 16 February 2008 - 03:58 AM

QUOTE (Jenskott @ Feb 15 2008, 04:55 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
If she wears a high school outfit, she can't be Mai Shiranui. :shamefulcry0js:


Sorry, no Mai. tongue.gif Surprise #2 is related to Surprise #1, if you follow the canonical story of Surprise #1's homage game (and I have to say Surprise because I don't like to spoil you guys biggrin.gif )

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Prologue is out: http://www.fanfictio...uto_Konoha_High

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Posted 21 February 2008 - 11:59 PM

Double post:

Here is the roster of teachers:

Kakashi - Philosophy
Yamato - History II/Law
Guy - P.E.
Jiraiya - Literature II
Tsunade - Biology/Chemistry (Sciences)
Asuma - Math I
Kurenai - Literature I
Shizune - School Nurse
Anko - Sex ED
Ebisu - History I
Iruka - Earth Science
Genma - Math (Advance)
Izumo - Business
Kotetsu - Math II
Aoba - Computers
Suzume - Art
Raidou - Writing
Ibiki - Discipline Administration

(changes can be made, because I'm not sure at the moment)

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Chapter 1 is out : http://www.fanfictio...uto_Konoha_High

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Posted 22 February 2008 - 07:44 AM

...Sex ed? LOL!!! One hour devoted to that!! HAHAHAHAHA!!!!! XDDDDDDD
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