Ok my impression first then looks at everyone else comments.
First page...nice colors but Bolt and Kawaki look meh. The village is in the background does not look destroyed. So?
Cover splash page with inoshikacho the new team Naruto an Sasuke and kawaki and some girl (oh she is the sensi of inoshika cho...wait is she moogie or how ever you spell her name). The art looks meh did they change salad outfit again? She now has that belt.
Ok the future version looks like they came straight out of a fanfic with all those tattoos and scars and everything else. Blah blah the age of the ninja is over and Bolt fight to keep it going. Has a headband that has two scratch marks one it may be sasuke old one with Naruto ribbon part.
OHHHH GOD!!! THAT LOOKS LIKE kitten! GO BACK TO COLOR! GO BACK TO COLOR!
5 Page! Saying this is "my story" that read like it came of an angsty fan fic.
You know the no dialogue is a nice touch. This guy has a problem with drawing noses. Hinata on second image looks stoned.
Another page saying this is "my story." Six!
He meets up with his team to fight a panda? Ugh ugly panda. So he can do shadow clones. The first group shot have varying levels of quality from OK on Salad to meh on Cups (mitsuki) to what is wrong with bolt. Salad quickly gets into an argument yelling that Bolt not to underestimate the panda (so sakura?). Cups comes off like Sai more then Sasuke. So they fight the panda calling a bear-panda because of stupid argument. And Bolt block Salad from getting a hit in. I think she is suppose to be upset about this and proclaims that she will be hokage when Cups praises Bolts.
OH God! Is that Konohamaru!? He can use the shadow bind? Oh it's because he is using the stupid ninja apparatus from the movie. He shows it off and explains the mission was to test the device, and launches his rasengan that destroys a house (comedy?).
Oh God Naruto! He is doing an interview talking about "the glory of their era of peace" as well as the upcoming chunin exams. And during that we get to see the scenes from the ending of the Bolt movie. You know the one where Naruto is carrying and old lady while Sakura and ino watch from a cafe. And this is continued as we see more scene just ripped from the movie. Since I haven't seen the movie i'm just going to assume the rest of this is from said movie. Just going to go through the rest then just do final thought.
Oh Hinata call Sasuke "Sasuke-kun" Wonder how the fans react to that if at all.
Ok It quite obvious that other then the first part and "This is my story" bits that this was just copying the bolt movie scene to scene. This is possibly the worst thing they could have done. Why would anyone want to wait months to read in bits and piece of something that is already out? More importantly is an inferior version of said story? You can literally put the movie on your tv while reading this chapter and see how bad it is in comparison to the movie. That is not something people should be able to do for your first chapter. Honestly the should have started off in the genin exams, then go into the movie. The first few pages were just so they have something different and to try and interest people in their new manga. Then they just copy paste the movie because they have no idea what they should be writing this story about other then they want to build up to that scene. You know everyone Naruto shippuden did the same thing actually for it's first episode. So this isn't even an original idea in the franchise itself!
Edited by Bail o' Lies, 04 May 2016 - 12:34 AM.
