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#1 tangerine_fever

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Posted 19 January 2005 - 07:30 AM

This is my first ever fic, so please give me advice, since this is probably only a rough, but I can't find anyone to beta read for me, so sad.gif

Anyways, enjoy! biggrin.gif

The Cursed Bottle

Chapter 1: The beginning

Lee, Hinata, Ino, Sakura and Shikamaru were all seated, waiting, when the doorbell rang.

?HAPPY BIRTHDAY SAKURA-CHAN!!? Naruto screamed when Sakura opened the door.
?AGHH!!!? She cried, covering her ears and staggering backwards. ?WHAT THE FISH WAS THAT FOR?!? she screamed back at him.
?Ehehe, nothing, sorry.? Naruto said sheepishly, scratching the back of his head.
?Hello.?
?AAAAAAAHHHHHH!!!? Naruto screamed and jumped into Sakura?s arms, Scooby-doo style. ?SAVE ME!?
Gaara raised an eyebrow, but since he didn?t have any, he looked like someone was pulling random flubs of skin from his face. ?Boo??
?Naruto, get..offa..me!? Sakura grunted, dropping him on the doorstep.
Bending back up and cracking her spine (ouch) she finally acknowledged the presence of Gaara.
She frowned at the redhead. ?Did I invite you?? she asked bluntly.
Up went another flub of skin.
?Ehehe, come on in!? She said, sweat dropping. ?Too scary?? Inner Sakura muttered, rocking back and forth head in hands.

And so began the birthday party of the year.

A/N: Short, I know, but next chapter is lots longer! This random idea for a fic just popped into my head, and now I?m typing it up as I think of it. Not a very organized way to do it, but I never was a organized person in the first place. And yes, I do realize that there was a lot of screaming in this chapter.

Next Time on The Cursed Bottle!:

The party games begin! But soon our young heroes notice something wrong?and it isn?t Lee?s eyebrows! Suddenly everything?s going wrong! Can they figure out what it is? Or will it be too late? Stay tuned for the next exciting chapter of?THE CURSED BOTTLE!

#2 LoveHinaGuy

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Posted 23 January 2005 - 04:38 AM

I WANT MORE!!! YOU MUST WRITE!please tongue.gif


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#3 Faucon

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Posted 23 January 2005 - 06:47 AM

Strange story but it's nice, Just dont forget to update!
There are 405!!! ( NaruSaku ) stories in the C2.
And 297 subscribers currently!!

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#4 tangerine_fever

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Posted 01 February 2005 - 06:22 AM

yea, sorry bout that, I've started school so I haven't had much time to write *sobs*
AH! Your comments are the highlight of my day! ARIGATOU!!!! biggrin.gif

I'll post the next chapter as soon as I can, cyas happy.gif




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