http://www.narusaku....ory.php?sid=366
Check it out ^_^
Started by ABrokenRomeo, Dec 04 2008 05:53 AM
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ABrokenRomeo
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- Genin
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Genin
Posted 04 December 2008 - 05:53 AM
Well, It's abit Longer then a drabble, but it popped into my head and I had to write it.
http://www.narusaku....ory.php?sid=366
http://www.narusaku....ory.php?sid=366
~Forever Living the Dream~
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peanutbutter126
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- Academy Teacher
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Posted 04 December 2008 - 06:07 AM
You should write more often! That was very well done :thumbs:
The angst and grief carried across very well, and her desire to make everything work out felt very realistic. Just a couple of grammatical errors, but otherwise flawlessly written.
The angst and grief carried across very well, and her desire to make everything work out felt very realistic. Just a couple of grammatical errors, but otherwise flawlessly written.
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ABrokenRomeo
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Genin
Posted 04 December 2008 - 06:13 AM
Thanks! Be sure to tell your friends! jk jk, ya, I should write more often, but I only get the urge too now and then.
~Forever Living the Dream~
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