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[Muffins?]

I like you because you like Chuck

[Greed-Sama]

I like you because you like Chuck

Did you watch the new episode tonight?

I'm really excited to find another Chuck fan on this forum.

[Muffins?]

Of course I watched the new episode, if I miss an episode it disrupts my bodies natural cycle and I get migraines and violent diarrhea. Your right Casey was good in the episode tonight. Theres plenty of other Chuck fans on this forum, Vyse I know for one and also Krisk.

[Torxe]

Hi read your fanfics and overall I found them good but here are still some hints:

- Sakura and Ino don't always call each other by forehead and ino-pig only when they have some kind of arguement

- Kakashi doesn't refer to to Tsunade as Tsunade-dono (?)

- And you could refrain from using in the middle of the text some japanese words, it really threw my reading off. (like teme or kami) I think I was lucky this time to understand them.

- Sakura refers to often to Naruto as the baka however she never really called him the baka.

But the story is well described (feels like I'm reading the latest HP in english so that's ok),
so look if you want to work on the hints I gave, and keep up the good work .

Edited by Torxe, 15 February 2011 - 08:49 AM.

[Greed-Sama]

Hi read your fanfics and overall I found them good but here are still some hints:

- Sakura and Ino don't always call each other by forehead and ino-pig only when they have some kind of arguement

- Kakashi doesn't refer to to Tsunade as Tsunade-dono (?)

- And you could refrain from using in the middle of the text some japanese words, it really threw my reading off. (like teme or kami) I think I was lucky this time to understand them.

- Sakura refers to often to Naruto as the baka however she never really called him the baka.

But the story is well described (feels like I'm reading the latest HP in english so that's ok),
so look if you want to work on the hints I gave, and keep up the good work .

I appreciate the time. I'll keep some of these thing in mind. Most fanfics use Japanese words in the text to try and join the two cultures. I don't use them a whole lot.

But thanks for the compliments.

[Torxe]

tbh, I think it is still better not to join those two cultures. Considering English is not my native language I'd have to concentrate on my english and have smthng like a mini crash course japanes to understand and make it a full course to be fully able to enjoy the story.

I like reading very much, particulary in english (Harry Potter and the Hunt for the Red October (Tom clancy) are my favourite books). But it somewhat spoiled the fun for me because I had to reread the sentence because there was a word from a different language in it. Even in Dutch I have still problems using words from other languages in texts (with the exception of those in a technical context ofcourse).

Edited by Torxe, 15 February 2011 - 08:57 AM.

[Greed-Sama]

Tuesday, February 15, 2011

Yeah World Literature was awesome. Amanda and me had a great time. She broke up with her boyfriend over the weekend. So I call that super awesome news on my part, but that is also bad news, she's on the market on the again and I have to think about making a move or you know what happens.

Anyway next subject. Tomorrow I have an economics test that I have to ace. Or suffer the wrath of everyone I know. It should be easy though, and as long as I don't rush things I should be fine.

That means I'll have to worry about the psychology test Friday now instead.

Talked alot with Digifruit about my writing and what he likes as a reader and such. Took some very carefully considered advice, and decided to refute some things as I'm not completely incompetent.

Well that's all for tonight. Until tomorrow. Peace.

[Greed-Sama]

December 30, 2011

I haven't posted forever here. 9 months. Man...I could have a baby by now. Hard to think that time flies like this. Well I should post on occasion again.

To those who read this. Drop by. Say hello, have a cup of coffee. Lol. It's on the house.

You guys like contests? Sure you do. Every week I will say a name of a character. Bring me the best fanart of them and I'll award out points for the winner each week.

This weeks character: Greed (Lol)

Also pictures of Lust are always welcome.

Edited by TheOmegaMan, 30 December 2011 - 07:33 AM.

[CloudMountainJuror]

You have a blog? Rhetorical question (redundant explanation).

I don't drink coffee... do you happen to have soda?

[Greed-Sama]

You have a blog? Rhetorical question (redundant explanation).

I don't drink coffee... do you happen to have soda?

Nope. Only coffee.....Nah I'm just joking with you. Have a soda on me. So what do you think about my contest?

[CloudMountainJuror]

Nope. Only coffee.....Nah I'm just joking with you. Have a soda on me. So what do you think about my contest?

*drinking a can*...............
......... oh, hi. You're here. Right. Thanks for the pop.

Interesting contest Not too easy for us lazy bums that inhabit the forums, though.

[Greed-Sama]

*drinking a can*...............
......... oh, hi. You're here. Right. Thanks for the pop.

Interesting contest Not too easy for us lazy bums that inhabit the forums, though.

You'd be surprised what lazy people do.

BTW: Amy-chan if you're reading this. Go to bed.

[CloudMountainJuror]

You'd be surprised what lazy people do.

BTW: Amy-chan if you're reading this. Go to bed.

Isn't it a bit hypocritical of you to say that? I mean, if you never give it a rest, how do you expect her to?

Edited by zacrathedemon5, 30 December 2011 - 07:43 AM.

[Greed-Sama]

Isn't it a bit hypocritical of you to say that? I mean, if you never give it a rest, how do you expect her to?

Enope. She has to learn about the laws of the world. And for that she needs her slumber.

[CloudMountainJuror]

Enope. She has to learn about the laws of the world. And for that she needs her slumber.

There's no equivalent exchange in that...

[Greed-Sama]

There's no equivalent exchange in that...

I don't have to follow the law of Equivalent Exchange. I am a Philosopher's Stone. XD

[Anguyen92]

I don't have to follow the law of Equivalent Exchange. I am a Philosopher's Stone. XD

Oh yeah, if you're a Philosopher's Stone, then I am the voice of the voiceless.

[Greed-Sama]

Oh yeah, if you're a Philosopher's Stone, then I am the voice of the voiceless.

Then so you are, I guess.

[CloudMountainJuror]

I don't have to follow the law of Equivalent Exchange. I am a Philosopher's Stone. XD

Prick.

[Greed-Sama]

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Amy-chan. Thanks to Digifruit. I am now able to visually represent what I have been telling you all along.