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#201 Yyubie

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Posted 19 July 2017 - 06:37 AM

Yeah hinata confession and her hair it's like hairworks settings on the witcher 3 and rise of tomb raider games (for those who don't know this settings makes the hair looks more realistic in the game , only expensive rig/hardware can do this without lag) , and then after that this what we got :

 

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How bias can they be ?? when it should be the other way around , people watch this because the epic battle and then it turn into that ?? hinata vs pein and naruto vs pein .... clearly not balance in terms of graphic quality they sacrifice naruto vs pein for hinata vs pein or more specificly all the resource goes into hinata confession (and her filler flashback getting bullied).

 

Anyway be careful of art theft i suddenly remember how some kitten pro ending fans stole lady gt art and edit the sakura into hinata , that was disgusting i hope it will not happen to this beautiful fanfic art. If you can warn the author or make it so that the image can't be right click so that no one can download it , or put some kind of password so that only trusted member can download it that will be nice.


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Posted 19 July 2017 - 10:13 AM

Yeah hinata confession and her hair it's like hairworks settings on the witcher 3 and rise of tomb raider games (for those who don't know this settings makes the hair looks more realistic in the game , only expensive rig/hardware can do this without lag) , and then after that this what we got :
 
worst_pein_faces_by_sakura97_sama.jpg
 
How bias can they be ?? when it should be the other way around , people watch this because the epic battle and then it turn into that ?? hinata vs pein and naruto vs pein .... clearly not balance in terms of graphic quality they sacrifice naruto vs pein for hinata vs pein or more specificly all the resource goes into hinata confession (and her filler flashback getting bullied).
 
Anyway be careful of art theft i suddenly remember how some kitten pro ending fans stole lady gt art and edit the sakura into hinata , that was disgusting i hope it will not happen to this beautiful fanfic art. If you can warn the author or make it so that the image can't be right click so that no one can download it , or put some kind of password so that only trusted member can download it that will be nice.

Sorry that animation on pain is so awful and laughable.

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Posted 19 July 2017 - 11:26 AM

Yeah hinata confession and her hair it's like hairworks settings on the witcher 3 and rise of tomb raider games (for those who don't know this settings makes the hair looks more realistic in the game , only expensive rig/hardware can do this without lag) , and then after that this what we got :

 

worst_pein_faces_by_sakura97_sama.jpg

 

How bias can they be ?? when it should be the other way around , people watch this because the epic battle and then it turn into that ?? hinata vs pein and naruto vs pein .... clearly not balance in terms of graphic quality they sacrifice naruto vs pein for hinata vs pein or more specificly all the resource goes into hinata confession (and her filler flashback getting bullied).

 

Anyway be careful of art theft i suddenly remember how some kitten pro ending fans stole lady gt art and edit the sakura into hinata , that was disgusting i hope it will not happen to this beautiful fanfic art. If you can warn the author or make it so that the image can't be right click so that no one can download it , or put some kind of password so that only trusted member can download it that will be nice.

what image?


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Posted 19 July 2017 - 11:45 AM

what image?

Did it not show up? The collection of Pain's badly animated faces during his fight.

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Posted 19 July 2017 - 12:17 PM

Did it not show up? The collection of Pain's badly animated faces during his fight.

I'm 100 percent sure that's not the image he is talking about. If you actually read what was written, he said "this beautiful fan art will not be stolen." There is nothing beautiful about the collection of Pain's badly animated faces. He was obviously talking about a different image.


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Posted 19 July 2017 - 12:46 PM

I'm 100 percent sure that's not the image he is talking about. If you actually read what was written, he said "this beautiful fan art will not be stolen." There is nothing beautiful about the collection of Pain's badly animated faces. He was obviously talking about a different image.

I mean the new NS fanfiction story in this thread "Alteral the last". Don't let the same thing that happen with Lady GT fanfiction happen to this one , getting stole by rabid fans and edited they change sakura into hinata. That's what i'm trying to say , sorry for my bad english.

 

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That belongs to Lady GT remember ?? I remember seeing that somewhere and sakura turn into hinata .... some kitten just can't satisfied even after got the ending and want to steal NS fan fic too. Hope didn't happen again this time.


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Posted 22 July 2017 - 05:42 AM

Ch: 3/Pg: 13 scene of genjutsu conclusion

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Posted 22 July 2017 - 10:11 AM

what image?


Dear god that looks awful.

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Posted 22 July 2017 - 03:44 PM

I'm not really trying to knock this story and am delighted to see that it's getting made, but I don't really like the whole "genjutsu reveal." I didn't like it in the film and I most certainly don't like it here. It just cheapens the romantic aspect of development if Naruto (and presumably Sakura) already know how they feel about one another. I'd much rather Naruto remain in the dark, yet take one final and serious effort at confessing to Sakura anyhow. That just seems more noble. Here, it feels like he had to use cheat codes before working up the courage to tell Sakura how he feels.

 

But again, I like this story, so don't treat this comment as a flame. :yes:


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Posted 22 July 2017 - 04:08 PM

I'm 100 percent sure that's not the image he is talking about. If you actually read what was written, he said "this beautiful fan art will not be stolen." There is nothing beautiful about the collection of Pain's badly animated faces. He was obviously talking about a different image.

I read it I thought he was being sarcastic lmao

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Posted 22 July 2017 - 05:29 PM

I'm not really trying to knock this story and am delighted to see that it's getting made, but I don't really like the whole "genjutsu reveal." I didn't like it in the film and I most certainly don't like it here. It just cheapens the romantic aspect of development if Naruto (and presumably Sakura) already know how they feel about one another. I'd much rather Naruto remain in the dark, yet take one final and serious effort at confessing to Sakura anyhow. That just seems more noble. Here, it feels like he had to use cheat codes before working up the courage to tell Sakura how he feels.
 
But again, I like this story, so don't treat this comment as a flame. :yes:

I'm not expecting the whole thing to be fixed but this seems to flow better than in the movie. And brings things up from their past and that the genjustu shouldn't be effected by it.

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Posted 22 July 2017 - 06:01 PM

Ch: 3/Pg: 13 scene of genjutsu conclusion

 

This is getting better and better that's all I have to say.


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Posted 22 July 2017 - 06:13 PM

I'm not expecting the whole thing to be fixed but this seems to flow better than in the movie. And brings things up from their past and that the genjustu shouldn't be effected by it.

 

Very true. And aside from my issues with the genjutsu plot device, I am curious to see how Sakura will react to Naruto's memories (specifically finding out that it was Naruto during the chapter 3 bench scene).


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Posted 22 July 2017 - 06:42 PM

I am hoping he resolves the bench scene in this Doujin. And I agree with Gravenimage, it's getting better and better.


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Posted 22 July 2017 - 07:53 PM

Very true. And aside from my issues with the genjutsu plot device, I am curious to see how Sakura will react to Naruto's memories (specifically finding out that it was Naruto during the chapter 3 bench scene).


I hope that too cause that needs closure here, since dumbass forgot about it. And by dumbass I mean kishi.

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Posted 22 July 2017 - 07:54 PM

I am hoping he resolves the bench scene in this Doujin. And I agree with Gravenimage, it's getting better and better.


Yes it is but their still is the hinata going with toneri scene and the rivalry line that pissed all of us off.

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Posted 23 July 2017 - 07:21 PM

Yes it is but their still is the hinata going with toneri scene and the rivalry line that pissed all of us off.

 

I doubt we're going to be hearing that stupid rivalry line in this version.


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Posted 05 August 2017 - 12:07 AM

New update.

Ch: 3/ Pg 14 Attack on Gate Keeper Part 1

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Posted 05 August 2017 - 12:12 AM

New update.

Ch: 3/ Pg 14 Attack on Gate Keeper Part 1

Sai is better than sasuke, he actually tried to be friends with Naruto and Sakura unlike sasuke who never tried. Sure said was Danzo tool but he still character.

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Posted 05 August 2017 - 12:13 AM

I doubt we're going to be hearing that stupid rivalry line in this version.


Don't know still too early, still wondering how the hinata going with toneri scene will go?





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