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[starlitestarbrite]

hello, readers! does anyone have any ideas'/requests' for new omakes?.also monday's youth day in china so, i'm sooo planning a team gai omake LOL but,

[starlitestarbrite]

*youth day*
[summery: it's youth day in china so, here's a holiday omake!]
*tenten was tidying up her apartment*
tenten: -notices the calendar- oh no...it's youth day gai-sensei, and lee's favorite holiday!
*meawhile gai, and lee meet up at the training ground*
gai: guess what day it is!
lee: YOUTH DAYYY! what shall we do to celebrate gai-sensei!?
gai: how about OBSTICALE COURSE GAMES! we can have races, and more! to the hokage's office!
lee: GREAT IDEA GAI-SENSEI!
*hokage office lee and gai poof in*
gai/lee: HI LADY TSUNADE!
tsunade: -sighs- i told you two to use the door!
gai: lady tsunade? for youth day lee, and i would like to spread youth, and well what is more youthful than an obsticale course!?
tsunade: oh god -pours herself a drink-
lee: IT WILL BE THE GREATEST EVENT OF ALL TIME! EVERYONE CAN COME, AND WE CAN ALL GET INTO THE YOUTH DAY SPIRIT!
tsunade: but, tomorrows children's day...today's also greenery day
gai: PERFECT! WE CAN COMBINE THE HOLIDAYS INTO ONE! WE'LL ALL WEAR GREEN JUMP SUITS AT THE EVENT!
lee: GREAT IDEA GAI-SENSEI!
tsunade: -thinks- why did i say that!? -sweatdrop-
lee: AND KIDS WILL BE THERE TO! THE WHOLE VILLAGE CAN COME
gai: WAIT! LEE? WHAT IF SOMEONE'S VISITING FROM ANOTHER VILLAGE?
lee: i didn't think of that! I HAVE GOT IT! we can make our event world wide! EVERYONE'S INVITED TO THE KONOHA YOUTH DAY CELEBRATION!
gai: YES! VERY YOUTHFUL LEE!
gai: THANK YOU GAI-SENSEI!
gai: lee
lee: gai-sensei
gai: lee
lee: gai-sensei
gai: lee!
lee: gai-sensei!
*they hug*
tsunade: well, gai, and i'll get the training grounds' set up,but, i need to know what games'll be played
gai: races'
lee: WATER BALLON FIGHTS!
gai: baseball!
lee: soccer!
gai: volley ball
lee: war ball
gai: i believe it is called dodge ball
lee: YOUR RIGHT GAI-SENSEI!
*both do the nice guy pose*
tsunade: i will send invites to everyone
lee: we could just get naruto to use his shadow clones to tell everyone!
tsunade: well, that uses alot of energy, and if you want him to partake in the events' then it might not be a good idea
lee: OH YES! THIS WAY MORE YOUTHFULNESS WILL SHINE!
*later at ten ten's*
*outside: voice: -bangs on the door- HEY TEN TEN! IT IS YOUTH DAY!
tenten: what in the -opens door- LEE! IF YOU EVER BANG ON, AND YELL THROUGH MY DOOR AGAIN I'M KNOCKING IT ON TOP OF YOU!
lee: YOUR INVITED TO THE KONOHA OBSTICALE COURSE! IT IS GOING TO BE THE MOST YOUTHFUL DAY EVER! IT IS ALSO PERFECT TRAINING EXCERSIZE!
tenten: -sweatdrop-
*later at ichiraku's naruto, and sakura are eating when gai poofs up*
gai: HELLO YOUTHFUL STUDENTS! YOU TWO ARE INVIDED TO A YOUTHFILLED YOUTH DAY! THE OBSTICAL COURSE GAMES'!
naruto: REALLY!? I WANNA JOIN! I'LL BE THE BEST THERE YA KNOW!?
sakura: -sweatdrop- actually i can't it's greenery day, and i promised ino i would help her with the garden
*ino runs in*
ino: sakura? cancel the garden plan! i'm going to the olympics!...oh wait...obsticale course
gai: YOUTH WINS EVERYTIME! see you three there -poofs out-
naruto: come on sakura-chan it'll be fun!
sakura: okay, but only because your going!
naruto: -smiles-
ino: i'll go tell shikamaru, and choji, and sai -runs out-
naruto: OH NO! I WANTED TO INCLUDE MY RAMEN EATING CONTEST IDEA! -poofs off-
sakura: grrr -pays and then runs out-
*later at the training grounds*
gai: hello youthful villagers! welcome to the most youthful youth day EVER! we have several games', and some who braught their own, or created one! that is what youth day is all about!
lee: to help everyone get into the spirit everyone is going to wear green jump suits!
gai: this way we can combine greenery day, and youth day!
*nice guy pose*
lee: GREAT IDEA GAI-SENSEI!
ino/sakura: -sweatdrop-
naruto: YEAAAH! THE PERFECT NINJA HOLIDAY!
lee: THAT IS THE SPIRIT NARUTO!
*everyone splits up, and chooses an event to partake in*
konohamaru: hi boss! hi sakura-sama
sakura: aw
naruto: hi konohamaru
sakura: hi konohamaru
*moegi and udon come up*
konohamaru: i challenge YOU to a dodge ball game! let's use the rasengan as the dodge ball!
naruto: YEAH! that'll make it even more challenging,. and fun!
sakura: um...they have balls' you two don't need to waste your energy!
konohamaru: we'll use smaller ones instead of big fire balls'! and you can teach me new ninja stuff!
sakura: are you two listening?
naruto: great idea! it'll be a blast! get it?
sakura: grrr -bonks them both on the head- WE'RE HERE TO PLAY GAMES NOT INJURE EACH OTHER!
*choji walks up*
choji: hey naruto? wanna have a ramen eating contest?
naruto: sure!
konohamaru: but, you said you would play dodge ball with us!
sakura: oh good grief choji? do you wanna play dodge ball with us then you two can have a ramen eating contest?
choji: sure!
naruto: -thinks- sakura-chan's so perfect...wait...she's playing to?-
sakura: okay, hold on! choji, naruto, udon, konohamaru, you all are on a team, moegi, me...we need two more girls' we'll do boys versus girls
naruto: but, i want us to be on the same team sakura-chan
sakura: i'll see if tenten, and ino'll join us
*later team sakura vs team naruto*
naruto: -sweatdrop-
konohamaru: those four are the strongest kunoichis' here -sweatdrop-
naruto: well, we're the strongest shinobis' right!? LET'S PLAY!
sakura: the object of the game is whoever is left standing is the winner one tip: don't throw at the face though
tenten: ready?...
naruto: LET'S DO THIS! -throws ball-
tenten: I DIDN'T SAY GO YET KNUCKLEHEAD! -throws ball back at naruto-now, ready?...set...GO!
*lee and gai finish their lap around the whole village*
gai: lee! you won this round!
lee: YOSH! because you taught me everything i know gai-sensei!
gai: -eyes water- you are going to be an outstanding sensei one day!
lee: -eyes water- i will follow in your footsteps gai-sensei!
*back to the dodge ball game so far it's down to sakura, tenten, and ino and konohamaru, and naruto*
naruto: we need more players! SHADOW CLONES!
sakura: THAT'S CHEATING!
konohamaru: -throws ball at ino-
ino: -dodges throws ball up, and it bonks konohamaru on the head-
konohamaru: drats! -walks away-
naruto: come on can i use the shadow clones'?
sakura: no...you can't use shadow clones
*ino, tenten, and sakura all three throw a ball*
naruto: -jumps to dodge, throws one-
ino: NARUTO! YOUR NOT SUPOSSED TO USE NINJA MOVES!
naruto: but, how am i going to train if i can't use them?
sakura: STOP TRYING TO CHEAT! -throws ball at naruto sending him to the ground-
ino/tenten/sakura: WE WON!
naruto: YAY! SAKURA-CHAN'S TEAM WON!
konohamaru: YOU TRIED TO CHEAT, AND NOW YOUR ROOTING FOR THE OTHER TEAM!?
naruto: no, i'm rooting for sakura-chan!
sakura: -thinks- i love him but, he acts like an idiot sometimes- -giggles-
choji: can we have our contest now?
naruto: YEAAAH! -both run off-
konohamaru: heeey YOU JUST WANNED TO RUSH THE GAME SO YOU CAN STUFF YOUR FACES' WITH RAMEN! -runs after them-
*meanwhile kiba, and hana are walking aukemaru*
hana:this obstical course was a great idea
kiba: yeah!
*naruto, choji, and konohamaru run up*
naruto: hey kiba! we need a fourth player for the ramen eating contest!
kiba: great! -pats aukemaru- you be good for my sisster!
aukemaru- awrf!
*the four run off*
hana: -sweatdrop- I'M NOT YOUR DOG SITTER!...your capable of looking after yourself are you aukemaru?
aukemaru: awrf
*shino, and hinata walk up*
hinata: hi hana-sama
hana: hi shino!
shino: hello...i see your walking aukemaru.
hana: yeah, kiba ran off to have a ramen eating contest with choji, konohamaru, and naruto
*hinata starts petting aukemaru*
hinata: hello, aukemaru-san!
hana: so, are you enjoying the event?
shino: i'm just watching from a distance
hana: well, i think they have snowcones, and icecream here as well!, and hot dogs, and burgers!
shino: that sounds nice
*the two walk off to go eat*
hinata: -sweatdrop- i guess it's just us aukemaru-san
*pakkun pops up*
pakkun: your not going to believe this aukemaru! gai, and kakashi, and lee are having a dog race so, the dogs can join in! come on you can be on my team!
*they run off*
hinata: OH COME ON!
*at the ramen eating contest*
naruto/choji: I WIN...heeey!
shikamaru: it's a tie...now for the tie breaker the drinking contest -sets tea on the table-
*they gulp it down but choji hiccups*
choji: how-hic- do you-hic- do that?
naruto: i'm a jinchuuriki!
*konohamaru, shikamaru,choji, and kiba sweatdrop*
kiba: kurama was helping you win ALL THIS TIME!?
naruto: um...well, not for the dodge ball game -scratches head and grins-
*they all start chasing naruto*
*much later narduto, and sakura are eating a hot dog, and ice cream as dessert*
naruto: did you have fun today sakura-chan? i sure did
sakura: yes, today was very fun, and energy-filled
naruto: or as bushy brow, and bushier brow-sensei would say " it's a youth filled day!"
sakura: well, it is called youth day for a reason
*sakura and naruto hug and kiss*
THE END

Edited by starlitestarbrite, 04 May 2015 - 07:57 AM.

[Nar123]

Aha, Lee and Guy are always amusing, nice NS moments too

 

Also do you ship Hinata with someone? 

[starlitestarbrite]

no, hinata don't deserve anyone LOL. nor does sasuke since they ruined the naruto series

[starlitestarbrite]

*tainted blossom*
[summary:starts from chapter 699 i've had this idea for a while. just as sasuke has a plan to destroy the village from the inside...naruto begeins to wonder if he has pushed sakura away forever]
*

episode1

sakura: take me with you
sasuke: you need to stay here -taps her forehead, and walks away with an evil smirk- i should have thought of this YEARS ago -mischievous laughter-
*naruto is in the hospital so tsunade can fix his arm*
tsunade: why so gloomy? you saved the village
naruto: yeah...-sadly- i pushed away the one person i loved since the academy days',if i hadn't yelled at her at the summit she never would have gone back to sasuke -eyes water-
tsunade: just give her time, i'm sure she just needs time to figure out what she feels
naruto: -smiles sadly- as long as she's happy that's all i want. is her to be happy even if it's not with me.
tsunade: -smiles- sounds like you truley love her.
*meanwhile sakura's at the flower shop talking to ino*
ino: sasuke left again!? oh well, i have sai now i don't care about that traitor anymore
sakura: -laughs- is everything like a competition to you?
ino: sometimes
sakura: -feels a small pain in her head- -rubs forehead- i have a headache
ino: maybe you just need to rest
sakura: -feels lightheaded- y-yeah i just-faints-
ino: sakura?
*later sakura awakens in the hospital*
tsunade: good your awake
sakura: what happened?
shizune: you fainted, my guess from exhaustion
*naruto runs in*
naruto: SAKURA-CHAN ARE YOU OKAY!?
tsunade: how many times do i have to tell you not to run, and yell in the hospital? she has a headache but, she's fine
sakura: i'm fine -in her head she hears a female voice-" he only loved you because of rivalry with sasuke...he used you just like you used him" -closes eyes, when she opens them she sees naruto rubbing his head-
naruto: atleast your still the same sakura -laughs- only stronger,
sakura: what happened?
ino: you threw naruto against the wall then said "your the biggest scumbag i have ever met"
sakura: i WHAT! i would never do that
naruto: it's okay sakura-chan, i guess your just tired
tsunade: we'll all go, and let you rest
sakura: okay
*they all exit*
sakura: what was that? it's like i blacked out
voice: yeah, your a sucker -snickers-
sakura: -holds head-who are you! why are you putting thoughts in my head?
voice: your worst nightmare!
sakura: why are you doing this?
voice: well, if i told you that it wouldn't be a surprise anymore -laughs evilly-

*

episode2

*sakura's nightmare. she's in a dark void, and sees naruto, and others in front of a coffin*
sakura: naruto? -walks up-
naruto: -wipes tears- she was the most prettiest girl ever...i never got to tell her i loved her -cries-
sakura: -looks to see HERSELF in the coffin-
*the image dissappears and a shadow of a female appears*
shadow: well, looks like we meet again
sakura: what do you want? why are you doing this?
shadow: there's only room for one of us suckera -the shadow reveals to be another sakura-
sakura: -wakes up with a jolt
*shizune walks in*
shizune: good morning, you feeling better?
sakura: yeah, i had the strangest dream i think it's somekind of warning
shizune: what was it about?
sakura: -tries to remember- i forgot but, it was really weird
shizune: well, i'm sure it's nothing to worry about
sakura: i need to talk to naruto
shizune: okay, i'll send him to see you
*later naruto brings two ramen cups so, they can eat together*
sakura: i just feel like there's something else going on
voice in sakura's head: "he's always loved hinata...not you"
sakura: -blacksout-
naruto: sakura-chan!? are you okay?
sakura: -punches naruto- how about you stay out of my way moron!?
naruto: -eyes water- i'm sorry sakura-chan -walks out-
sakura: -wakes up- oh no! not again! where did naruto go! what did you do!
voice: you did it...he wont bother us anymore. i granted your wish
sakura: i never wished that!
voice: you did in the academy days'
sakura: wait...how did you know that?
voice: i'm your dark side...everyone has one
sakura: is this a genjutsu? how did this happen
voice: you'll never know
*at ichiraku*
naruto: -tears fall-
ayame: what's wrong naruto?
naruto: nothing, i think something's wrong with sakura-chan she it's like she shifts personalities sometimes!
ayame: she still in the hospital?
naruto: yeah, it's so strange she just blacks out when i'm around her, and...what if...-pays for the ramen and poofs into tsunade's office*granny tsunade! i don't know how but, i think sakura's a jinchuuriki
tsunade: -sweatdrop- no she's not
naruto: she blacksout whenever i'm around, and her whole personality changes
tsunade: i told you she might just need to rest, don't worry yourself so much
naruto: no, i mean--sighs- i guess your right
*later at the flower shop*
naruto:...and when she blacksout her whole personality changes! it's like it's not her i seem to be the only one she does it around me
ino: naruto, i'm sure it's nothing personal. try to relax, and not worry so much
*back at the hospital*
shizune:sakura you have a visitor
sakura: okay, send them in
*hinata, and kiba walk in*
kiba: hey, there
hinata:we came to bring you a get well flower
sakura: thank you
hinata: -puts the flower in the vase-so, has naruto-kun been by to see you?
voice: "that's the only reason they came...not to see you"
sakura: yes oh no -holds head-
hinata: are you okay sakura-san?
sakura: -weakly- not again -blacks out-
hinata: -thinks- what is this energy?
sakura: you two deserve each other byakubrat!
hinata: s-sakura-san?
*sakura wakes up kiba's laughing, and hinata's looking surprised*
sakura: what's going on? did i harm anyone?
kiba: no, you just called hinata byakubrat HAAHHAHAAHAHHAHAAHHAAHHAAH
sakura: i'm so sorry. this has been the fourth time it's happened
kiba:your having blackouts?
sakura: it's okay though -smiles-
*hinata and kiba meet naruto in the hallway*
kiba: hey naruto
hinata: -smiles-
naruto: guys! i think theres something wrong with sakura-chan she blacksout when i'm around
kiba: hinata does to...well, did
naruto: but, it's like her personality-
*CRASH*
*the three run into sakura's room only to see sakura gone, and the window broken*
naruto: NOOO SAKURA-CHAN'S GOOONE!
*meanwhile sakura's at the village gates, and we see she'sgot darker pink hair, and dark green eyes...dark sakura has taken over*
sakura: -emotionless-and now...to send the village into a genjutsu! that perfect girl they all ignored all those years is gone -evil grin-

*

episode3

*karin poofs by naruto's apartment*
-knock knock knock-
naruto: -opens, wipes eyes- hi karin...did sasuke come with you?
karin: no, he's become like orochimaru, and may be trying to destroy the village from the inside
naruto: no...it can't be! he said he changed! wait from the inside? you mean he has a spy!?
*suddenly everything looks all modern with technology*
naruto: what the...
karin: a genjutsu? it's starting we have to hurry
naruto: i need to find sakura-chan...then find sasuke, and kick his sorry butt!
*naruto, and karin walk around "konoha city"*
naruto: this place is unreconizable!
karin: the source is near the gate...i can sense it
*they poof by the gates and in front of them is the last person they expected to find*
naruto: no...you did this?

*

episode4

*at the gates*
dark-sakura: well, if it isn't the dumb blond, and raggedy ann -smirks-
karin: i think sasuke's using her to destroy the village!
dark-sakura: -laughs- noone controls' me! if i'm going to destroy something i'm doing it my own freewill
naruto: GRRR I'M GOING TO KILL SASUKE FOR THIS! sakura-chan snap out of it! please!
dark-sakura: people have been lying to themselves all our lives naruto...demon brat -glares-
naruto: -eyes water- -dodges when sakura tries to attack him-sakura-chan, i'm sorry about saying you were lying to yourself
*sasuke poofs up*
sasuke: i see my plan worked, soon everyone'll be replaced with clones!
karin: sasuke-kun stop!
naruto: sasuke you jerk! -tries to punch him but, sasuke catches his fist-
sasuke:i see you've met my spy
dark-sakura: -smiles-
naruto: how could you!? what did sakura-chan ever do to you? she cares about you!
dark-sakura: -laughs- i care for no one! why should i? there's only hate in this world, there are no happy endings' just sad begeinnings
naruto: sakura-chan?
*sasuke, and sakura poof out*
naruto: -cries-
*tsunade's office*
naruto: -crying- sakura-chan left the village!
tsunade: WHAT!?
*karin explains everything, and ino, sai, naruto, and karin go look for sakura and sasuke*
ino: i can't believe sasuke sank this low
naruto: well...believe it
ino: theres a phrase i hadn't heard in years!
karin: we should split up sai, and ino, me, and naruto, guys? we may have to...*says something*
*naruto, and ino gasp*

*

episode5

*at sasuke's hideout karin, and naruto make it there, and wait for the other two, they all four run into the hideout*
naruto: SAKURA-CHAN!?, SASUKE!?
sasuke: well, look who showed up
naruto: where is sakura-chan you jerk!?
sasuke: don't worry...she wont be bothering us anymore, finnally she was annoying
ino: i can't believe i ever liked you!
naruto: -eyes water- grrr! -red aura surrounds him, and a tail comes out- why did you do it sasuke! YOU SAID YOU CHANGED! I HATE PEOPLE WHO LIE TO THEMSELVES -second tail-
karin: naruto! don't over do it
sasuke: chidori!
naruto: rasengan!
*they clash and naruto falls to the ground*
sasuke: one down! three to go
ino: oh no! naruto! -rushes to try, and heal him- come on! wake up!
karin: sasuke stop!
sasuke: -holds up sward-
karin: chakra chans! -sasuke's caught in the chains-
sasuke: breaks free- those wont work
*in naruto's mind*
minato: hey naruto
kushina: naruto
naruto: mom? dad? i found a girl like you...but, then i pushed her away -hangs head-
minato: you mean the pink haired girl?
naruto: yeah
kushina: -walks up, hugs naruto, and kisses his head- just speak from the heart, let her know you still love her -smiles- sometimes that's all a girl needs to hear
naruto: -smiles-
*back to the hideout naruto opens his eyes, and the chest wound is gone due the quick healing of the ninetails, and ino*
ino: finnally! your awake
karin: guys i found sakura!
naruto: wait where are sasuke, and sai?
ino: somewhere in the hideout fighting
*ino, karin, and naruto whent to the room sakura's in, she's laying on a table*
naruto: sakura-chan?
ino: naruto you go help sai with sasuke, and we'll stay with sakura
naruto: okay -runs out-
ino: mind transfer jutsu!
*in sakura's mind*
dark-sakura: well, this is familiar...so, we meet again.
ino: a...tulpa?
dark-sakura: consciousness, thoughtform, i'm her dark side...all the pain she had built up, and all it took was sasuke sealing sakura's chakkra to set me free. the forehead tap was to awaken the third eye so, he can control the sub-conscious -laughs- what he DIDN'T know was...i was always here
ino: your inner sakura?
*flashback*
*in sakura's head during the chuunin exams*
ino: i'm going to make you lose!
inner-sakura: GET OUT OF MY HEAD
ino: what the-
*they fight*
*end*
dark-sakura: i'm ALOT stronger now
*meanwhile back to naruto, sai, and sasuke*
sasuke: oh...your still alive
naruto: oh, you are to! sai? i want to fight him alone
sai: okay, i'll finish him off when your done
sasuke:our famous fights...gonna talk no jutsu?
naruto: no sasuke, this time around i'm not going to hold back! you can mess with me but, you've really messed up when you mess with sakura-chan!
sasuke: all she was was a tool, and that's all she'll ever be
naruto: SASUKE
sasuke: NARUTO
naruto: SASUKE
sasuke: NARUTO
naruto: SASUKE
sasuke: NARUTO
sai: -jokingly- and sai
*naruto punches sasuke into the ground while sasuke starts getting up naruto fires up the rasengan*
naruto: RASENGAN!
sasuke: WHAAA -gets knocked back down then two more come his way- fire style! fireball!
naruto: -dodges jumps up, kicks sasuke in the face- waw...your weaker than you used to be...scared? scardy cat.
sasuke: grrr
naruto: -clones surround naruto-
clones: RASENGAN!
sai: did you get him?
sasuke: no.
*naruto looks behinde him only to be punched*
*meanwhile back at the hide out ino got sakura to awaken*
sakura: -opens eyes- where am i?
karin: sasuke's hideout, he was using you to destroy the village
sakura: oh no! wheres naruto?
ino: he's with sai fighting sasuke.
sakura: we have to go help them
*when the trio get there naruto is holding sasuke down while a clone uses rasengan*
sai: hey, your awake
sakura: yeah
*EXPLOSION*
sakura: NARUTO!
naruto: -turns around. turns out the clone was the one holding sasuke down while the real naruto rasenganed sasuke- SAKURA-CHAN!
*they hug*
naruto: i'm glad your okay,
sakura: i'm glad your okay to naruto
naruto: -kisses sakura's forehead- i love you sakura-chan. i always have, and always will
sakura: i love you to naruto
*naruto and sakura kiss*

the end

[starlitestarbrite]

*memories*
[summary: takes place in naruto gaiden instead of naruto, and sarada going to search for sasuke they both go visit sakura at the hospital]
*sarada walks into the hokage office*
sarada: hi hokage! do you know who this is? -shows naruto the picture of sasuke, and karin- i need to find my father, and ask him who my real mother is!,all my mom told me was he left when i was a baby...then she smashed her house and fainted...she's in the hospital but, shizune-sama said she'll be okay
naruto: wait...he left again!?...and sakura-chan's in the hospital!?
sarada: yeees i just said that!...do you know...wait...AGAIN!? this wasn't the first time!?
naruto: no...there was one other time
*flashback*
sakura: -crying- please naruto...bring him back
naruto: -sad smile- i'll bring him back to you sakura-chan -thumbs up- promise of a lifetime
*end*
naruto: he betrayed the village when he was around your age
sarada: but,why did he betray the village?, and why did you let a traitor back in the village? why did my mom...er sakura love him if she knew he would betray her, and leave...-whispers- is it cause noone out there could ever love her?...i can see why -laughs-
naruto: -eyes water- someone did...and they pushed her a way, and acted like an idiot when she finnally came around
*flashback*
sakura: i said...i love you naruto -blushes-
*few words later*
naruto: i hate people who lie to themselves
*end*
sarada: -laughs- she has the worst luck...i hope i'm NOT her daughter -laughs-
naruto: well...how about we pay her a visit at the hospital?
sarada: why?
naruto: because i think that would cheer her up if she had visitors
sarada: i doubt it she's never happy...i hardly ever saw her smile, and when she does it's fake, or sad
naruto: -sad face- -thinks- oh sakura-chan...if only i had known-
*at the hospital in sakura's room she's laying on the bed*
shizune: i think maybe she's exhausted from stress, and that's causing her to faint
sarada: what could be over stressing her out?
naruto: -sadly- sakura-chan? why didn't you ever tell me you were so unhappy? -eyes water-
sakura: -weakly- naruto?...what are you doing here? -opens eyes-
naruto: sarada, and i came to see you
sakura: -sad smile- shouldn't you be with boruto? he's probably goofing off...like you did when we were that age
naruto: -fights tears-
sarada: hey hokage? after we get through visiting can we go search for my father? i still want to know who that red-haired girl is
sakura: -closes eyes to hide her tears-
naruto: karin...that was her name
sarada: hey mom? why didn't you tell me dad betrayed the village?
naruto: -sweatdrop-
sakura: -tears leak out, opens eyes- naruto?...did you tell her about sasuke's betrayal?
naruto: just that he left once before...how come you never said he left you?
sakura: i've caused you enough pain for years naruto...the only way to stop hurting you is to cut my ties with you
naruto:-tears fall- i only wanted you to be happy sakura-chan never like THIS
sarada: waw...you both tried too hard, or not enough one! hn
sakura: sarada? i didn't tell you about your father because i want you to have a normal, happy childhood...not have to be wondering why your father left -cries- it wasn't supossed to be this way
sarada: we can search for the guy who loved you since the academy days instead
sakura: -looks at naruto- he never left...he was here all along
*naruto, sakura, and sarada group hug*
*hinata and bolt enter*
hinata: shizune said you'ed be in here...hi sakura-san
sakura: hi hinata
*ino walks in*
ino: hi sakura! i brought you a flower to cheer you up...oh hi hokage, sarada, boruto, and hinata!
sakura: thank you ino -smiles-
sarada: -sweatdrop- i have alot to learn
hinata: you can stay at our house untill yours is fixed sakura-san -smiles-
naruto/sarada/ino: -burst out laughing-
naruto: my shadow clones'll have your house fixed in no time at all sakura-chan!
sakura: thanks naruto,
hinata: am i missing something?
sakura: i like your new haircut
hinata: thank you!
sakura: naruto? grow your hair back out...you looked cuter -blush-
hinata: oookay, lets go naruto
naruto: hey wait...-points to hinata's hair- you got the "sakura cut"
ino/sarada:-both laugh-
hinata: is that why your never home!? i thought making myself look more like sakura would keep you home!
sakura: -sweatdrop-
naruto: not at all! -scratches head and laughs nervously- you'll never be sakura-chan!
ino/sarada: -cover mouth and laugh-
sakura: -thinks- he's still an idiot sometimes-
boruto: you know what i noticed dad?
naruto: what?
boruto: for the first time ever...you actually seem happier
ino: well, yeah! naruto, and sakura were ALWAYS their best, and happiest when they were with each other! now for the first time in forever they're together again!
hinata: -sweatdrop- i thought you were over her!
ino: okay kids...lets let the adults talk!
sarada/boruto: AWWW we wanned to staaaay
boruto: yeah mom's gonna get her butt kicked!
sarada: think my mom can kick your moms butt?
boruto: she smashed down a house
ino: not only THAT she trained with the ledgendary sanin tsunade at one time
sarada: WAW! mom? how come you never told me you were cool!?
sakura: you never asked
*shizune walks in*
shizune: noone is kicking anyones butt!
boruto/sarada: AWWW
naruto: can i have a minuet with sakura-chan alone?
*shizune, ino, boruto,exit*
sarada: i love you mom...by the way...happy mothers day
sakura: thank you sarada-chan...i love you to
-sarada exits-
*sakura, and naruto look at hinata*
hinata: -sighs- fine...but, you, and i are talking about this later naruto! -stomps out-
naruto: sakura-chan? i wish i could have been there for you, i'm sorry i wasn't
sakura: it's okay, your here now...-hugs him tightly- i've missed you so much naruto -cries-
naruto: -hugs her back- i've missed you to sakura-chan! lets make a new promise of a lifetime! to always be there for eachother
sakura: alright...promise of a lifetime and this time around...it's one worth keeping
naruto: promise of a lifetime!
*they hug*
THE END
*screen shows a poster of naruto, and sakura kissing*

Edited by starlitestarbrite, 14 May 2015 - 07:41 PM.

[Nar123]

You're a better writer than Kishi

 

Wow... another good omake btw !

[starlitestarbrite]

thanks to all who have read my omakes', and liked, and commented. this was the first shippairing i got into. narusaku was full of houmor, fun, love, friendship, angst,and more. something every bond has. the good times are the best times, and the bad times just bring them closer together. even at their worst they ALWAYS had eachother.it WAS an unbreakable bond. that is how life should be. but, all that is over now but, narusaku still lives on through fanart, fanfictions', and more!.

 

but, like every fandom. some have left due to kishimoto being stupid, and studio pierrot being asshats', and putting the naruto, and sakura we grew to love on retcon, and/or reject row.it was fun while it lasted. so long ex-narusaku fans', and ex-naruto fans'.

 

it's been an interesrting long journey...too bad naruto's childhood dream ended in a nightmare. what a great lesson to learn![that was sarcasim lol] the true morale of the story used to be: follow your hearts', never give up, and with time all dreams can come true...never let ANYONE/THING crush your dreams, spirit, or soul. THAT is what i have learned from the old naruto series.

Edited by starlitestarbrite, 04 June 2015 - 12:03 AM.

[starlitestarbrite]

i'm planning on doing an omake of MY version of naruto:the last.the narusaku bond'll be the center of the story, and sasuke as the villan lol. but, what other subplots can happen?

[Nar123]

I would suggest  for you to don't put Sasuke as the villain, at least as some kind of proper anti hero

 

As for subplots well, there could be some relating to Naruto's Uzumaki ( or Namekaze) heritage

some subplot regarding Lee, who is a an amazing character with a lot of potential 

 

there could be also one focusing on Ino + Sakura friendship which Kishi ignored 

 And of course one focusing on Sai, you could set him up for some kind of heroic sacrifice in the end. I always felt Sai's character development was leading up to this but Kishi once again proved he can't handle his own characters 

Edited by Nar123, 06 June 2015 - 02:17 AM.

[starlitestarbrite]

okay :) its gonna take a while cause i have ALOT of ideas', and i'm making sure to go slow, and not rush like a certain "nobody"[kishi] LOL.

Edited by starlitestarbrite, 06 June 2015 - 10:30 PM.

[narusaku256]

You can give Fairy Tail a try though

[starlitestarbrite]

i don't watch fairy tale

[starlitestarbrite]

Even though I defend Kishi a LOT, sadly I cannot deny what you have written is accurate *sighs*

 

But I am not sure if this was necessary 

kakashi: masahashi. the creater, and destroyer of our series

sadly it turned out to be true...kishi's  the creater, and destroyer of naruto

 

that was in this omake:http://www.narusaku....=13585&p=565594

Edited by starlitestarbrite, 08 June 2015 - 05:57 AM.

[starlitestarbrite]

*in another life*
[summary: i can do all kinds of things with naruto gaiden. anyway naruto's reason for staying late at the hokage office.ends NaruSaku]
*naruto's browing the computer, drinking sake late at night*
*knock knock knock*
naruto: -ignores it-
*door opens*
shikamaru: did you fall asleep again?...oh, so, this is what you do late at night? play games on the computer?
naruto: i'm browing pictures.
shikamaru: -sweatdrop- oh
naruto: NOT THOSE KIND!
shikamaru: don't worry i wont tell hinata...of course she never talks to anyone anymore ah, well have fun-
*boruto rushes in*
boruto: mom told me to send you this -gives him a box of food-
naruto: what are you doing out this late? why didn't she bring it? -looks in the box- bento AGAIN? why does she never cook ramen?
boruto: i actually asked her that...she said you used to love it more than her so, you'll never get ramen from her.
naruto: -sweatdrop- she's really weird...ah well, i've got cups of ramen here so, here you go -hands the box back--thinks- and i love sakura-chan more than ramen!-
boruto: what are you doing anyway?
*shikamaru walks out*
naruto: working go home.
boruto: -peaks over- heeey, isn't that sarada's mom?
*sure enough it was narusaku fan art*
naruto: -clicks the minimize key- bolt GO HOME!
boruto: who am i? steve urkle? -poofs behinde the desk on naruto's lap- OOOH NARUSAKU FANFICTION...OOOH YOU LIKE SAKURA, YOU-
naruto: BOOORUUUTOOO! -stops- -sad face-
*flashback*
sakura: grrr NAAARUUUTOOO!
*ends*
boruto: -farts- oops
naruto: HEEEY! GET OFF! -pushes him off-
boruto: mom says people online sometimes lie about themselves to appear more interesting do you? then aren't they lying to THEMSELVES to?, konohamaru-sensei says sometimes people can trick themselves into believing things! he said someone he looked up to years ago became the "biggest dumbass ever!"
naruto: boruto! that's not a nice thing to call someone -thinks- no matter how true, or false it may be-
boruto: oh well,could have meant you hahahaahahhaah! heeey a drink!
naruto: -hides bottle under desk- bolt, it's late you have class tomorrow
boruto: i know...but, if being like YOU is all i get when i graduate then why bother? -walks out-
naruto: -eyes water, takes a big gulp of sake- shadow clone jutsu!
*poof*
naruto: -kicks the clones butt- -cries- why didn't i ever just confess!?...it's too late now!
*in a drunken state naruto accidently e-mails sakura a poem eats ramen, then falls asleep!*
*next day sakura's at her computer*
sakura: oh, an e-mail from the hokage! -reads-
it reads:
"i regret alot of things in life
letting true love pass me by
sometimes we want something we can't see
and become blind to what we need
i love the sweetest girl i ever knew
i owe her more than a millian thank yous'
another promise of a lifetime broken
but, in my heart i'm hoping
i find my cherry blossom again sometime
maybe in another life
i never got the chance to tell her i love her so
from my broken heart, and shattered soul"
sakura: -tears stream down her face- naruto...
*naruto's awaken by the slam of the hokage door*
naruto: -jolts- BORUTO I TOLD YOU...oh hi sakura-chan -grins-
sakura: YOU IDIOT! -punches naruto! I DON'T CARE IF YOU ARE HOKAGE I'LL KICK YOU BUTT!
naruto: what did i do!? OOOW besides get a hangover!?
sakura: -grabs his collar- WHY DIDN'T YOU JUST CONFESS! I LOVED YOU NARUTO, I STILL DO, AND YOU LET ME RUIN MY LIFE WITH THAT ONCE-TRAITOR SASUKE!? -eyes water- i got you "drunk-email"
naruto: -blushes- um...i can explain
*sakura gives him a hug*
sakura: thank you for keeping your promise...maybe NOW you understand why you should listen when a girl confesses her feelings to you!
naruto: -tears fall- i'm sorry i ignored the confession so long a go -hugs her back and cries- you deserve someone so much better!, someone who'll make you smile, and laugh...someone you can trust, and believe in
sakura: i have...he's just an oblivious bakadere -smiles-
naruto: -smiles- whoes that?
sakura: -smiles- you!, we're so similar...you deserve someone who makes YOU happy
naruto: but,the only thing that truley hurts...is not having you in my life
sakura: really?
naruto: wheather we're platonic, or romantoic it's fine as long as your there!
sakura: when you love someone this much you don't give up on them...i believe we BOTH learned that lesson
*naruto and sakura kiss*
THE END

Edited by starlitestarbrite, 09 June 2015 - 10:11 PM.

[starlitestarbrite]

making a movie omake's hard lol. so, i'll just continue doing small omakes like i've always done lol.plus the trick to writting after all is start small,and allow the spark to grow!

Edited by starlitestarbrite, 10 June 2015 - 01:07 PM.

[starlitestarbrite]

*the sibling-like bond, sidestory: a watching the sunrise*
[ino, and sakura catch up on old times while naruto, and sasuke realize the true meaning of brotherhood, THEN in the side subplot: narusaku date!]
*yamanako flower shop*
*their both in the garden*
ino: so, are into naruto now? or still into sasuke?
sakura: I've been over sasuke for a long time, since naruto came back from the three year training trip
ino: -smiles- yeah, naruto's really grown since then, i got over sasuke to one: i realized what a jerk he is, two: after my dad died i want to focus on my clan ya know? -smiles- keep the yamanaka dream alive
sakura: -smiles-truth is i only said i liked sasuke to compete with you, and fit in with the other girls'...i was such an outcast i guess i tricked myself into believing i always would be one...so, i WAS lying to myself after all
ino: really? i was just following the crowd! the "cool girls" liked the "cool guy"...turned out not to be cool after all!
sakura: well, we were twelve...isn't tween-hood full of rivalry?
ino: yeah,...and sisterhood. i always wanted a sister...your the closest thing i have to one
sakura: -smiles- you to no matter how bad our friendship was ruined deep down i knew the sisterly bond would never be broken...i guess i wanted to be like you to the point i wanted to be better than you.
ino: -smiles- -tease i saw THAT
sakura: HEEEY!
*both laugh*
ino: so, you and naruto going out?
sakura: of course -smiles- what bond is stronger? platonic, or romantic?
ino: they both are...but together they're what soul mates are made of, just like you and naruto
sakura: -blushes-
*at itachi's gravestone where sasuke is*
sasuke: -looks around making sure no one sees- i know it's a day late...-places a small empty box on the ground- happy birthday nii-san. -sighs- i get it now
voice: get what?
sasuke: -looks beside him and sees naruto- what are you doing here?
naruto: i was walking around...plus at midnight sakura, and i are having midnight ramen, then talking all night, and watch the sunrise
sasuke: i REALLY didn't want to hear about your love life dobe
naruto: today's itachi's birthday?
sasuke: it was yesterday
naruto: -puts a kunai near the stone beside the box- happy late birthday itachi...i visit my parents, and jiraiya sensei's grave on their birthday to -smiles- just knowing their presence is around is so comforting
sasuke: hn
naruto: so, what did you realize?
sasuke: nothing...it's not that important
naruto: it's important to the spirit you give the gift to!
sasuke: -sighs- fine...but if you tell ANYONE this i'll kick your butt
naruto: -teasing-I'll kick yours back
sasuke: -sweatdrop-
naruto: come ooon i wont say a word!
sasuke: well, when i was little, i wanted nothing more than to be like itachi, popular,always encouraged, could have been something good,an ANBU, part of ROOT, a ninja, a sensei
naruto: no...way! you were like me!?
sasuke: NO LISTEN TO THE STORY!, until he killed everyone...oh, god i hated him,
naruto: i know.
sasuke: i wanted to avenge my clan, kill him out of anger, betrayal, revenge!
naruto: you did.
sasuke: but, then i started becoming him
naruto: yeah,...i kinda noticed that. i stopped you before you whent further and became like orochimaru
sasuke: do you know why i killed orochimaru?
naruto: why?
sasuke: again revenge, for using itachi to kill our clan, but i realized revenge was the one thing destroying us in the first place, i get now that he only spared my life because, think he wanted me to save him...just like you saved me
naruto: -eyes water and smiles-
sasuke: that's what family does,
naruto: -tears fall- I'm family to you?
sasuke: well, you certainty irritate me like a brother
naruto: -wipes eyes, glomps sasuke- thank you sasuke
sasuke: let. go
naruto: -crying- no...I'll never let you go
sasuke: no i mean LET GOOO! -tries to pull away, then gives up and hugs back- -teasing-you hang around sakura too much
*back to sakura and ino*
sakura: naruto and i are having a romantic night out. since last week we spent the day together, and watched the sunset, now we're going to spend the night together and watch the sunrise!
ino: that sounds amazing!
*ino and sakura hug, then go home*
*ichiraku*
naruto: slurrrp! oh delicious ramen i love you...but, i love sakura-chan more!
sakura: -laughs- -slurrrps- so, what can we do all night?
naruto: we can go down memory lane!
sakura: okay! plus "flashback" episodes of sitcoms are fun sometimes
sakura: -giggles- remember that time in the chuunin exams with you and kiba?
*flashback chuunin exam arc [my style cause i can make reactions funnier]*
naruto: a thouand years of death...wedggie! -pokes kiba in the butt-
kiba: AAAH -runs into the butt of a naruto clone wich FARTS!- AAAH IT BUUURNS -holds nose-
*ends*
*sakura/naruto: -both laugh-
sakura: you always seemed to impress me -smiles- and even though i put you down you were always there
naruto: -smiles- i kinda knew that
*flashback the bench scene*
"sasuke": your foreheads so charming it makes me wanna kiss it*
sakura: -eyes light up-
"sasuke: sounds like something naruto would say
sakura: -hangs head-
"sasuke": -sits by her-
sakura: naruto's always trying to get in my way...i just wanted you to notice me sasuke-kun -smiles-
*they almost kiss until*
"sasuke: -stomach upset- OH NO! -runs off-
*end*
sakura: THAT WAS YOU!?
naruto: i wanted to find out how to impress you, i didn't know what you saw in sasuke...really i just wanted to know WHY he was so popular.
sakura: well...i never REALLY liked sasuke
*flashback girls outside talking*
girl: did you hear!? sasuke likes girls with long hair!
*they squeal*
sakura: so, who do you like?
ino: sasuke
sakura: me to
ino: really?
sakura: so from now on we're rivals
ino: -eyes water- -mockingly- you'll have to shrink your forehead billboard brow!
sakura: -eyes water- GRRR! OH YEAH INO-PIG!?
ino: YEAH! FOREHEAD!
sakura: INO-PIG!
ino: FOREHEAD!
sakura: INO-PIG!
*they both argue*
*ends*
naruto: you only liked sasuke because ino did?
sakura: yeah...turns out SHE only wanted to fit in with the other girls'
naruto: sounds like we all wanted to be someone other than ourselves
sakura: i think most kids do, because everyone just wants to belong somewhere, to be accepted by someone
*they are now walking to the hokage monument after eating*
naruto: so, what changed your mind about hating me?
sakura: i never hated you
naruto: i thought you did?
*flashback meeting team 7*
kakashi: -to sakura after her introduction* and what do you hate?
sakura: NARUTO!
*end*
sakura: -sad-faced- i guess i was following the crowd then to...but deep down i was always amazed by your never give up personality...I'm so sorry if i hurt you back then
naruto: -grins- it's okay sakura-chan! i was used to it -laughs-
sakura: but, to answer your question...the promise made me realize how far you would go
*flashback sasuke POAL!*
sakura: -crying- naruto? this is a lifetime request...please, bring him back...your the only one who can now -sniffs- because i couldn't
naruto: -grins thumbs up, holding back tears- I'll bring him back sakura-chan, promise of a lifetime!
*end*
sakura: -holds naruto's hand- i never thanked you for keeping that promise...because i told you it don't matter to me anymore, all that matters is your here
naruto: -blushes and smiles-
sakura: but, its when you came back from your three year trip when i started falling for you -smiles and blushes-
*on the hokage monument under the stars they watch the stars*
sakura: what was the most scariest memory for you?
naruto: I've had plenty of those...but i never show any sign of weakness as long as i know everyone else will be okay -smiles- plus I'm pretty strong in sage mode! yours?, i bet your not afraid of anything
sakura: my biggest fear is losing you naruto
naruto: what do you mean?
sakura: so many times i could have...but once i almost did
*flashback guess when? chapter 633!*
*naruto's on gaaras as he flies him and sakura to the fourth hokage to get the bijuu resealed*
sakura: why isn't the chakra healing him?
gaara: the bijuu was extracted
sakura: what!?
*flashback to the rescue kazekage arc*
chiyo: when the bijuu is extracted the host dies
sakura: -tears up-
*end*
sakura: NARUTO! I WONT LET YOU DIE...THAT DREAM OF YOURS IS RIGHT IN FRONT OF YOU! -uses chakra scalpel to open his side to give him a heart massage, and does CPR-
*end*
naruto: -tears streaming- YOU KISSED ME AND I MISSED IT!
sakura: but, we finally got your bijuu back -lays on his chest-
*they talk until all night and accidentally fall asleep*
*naruto's subconscious*
kurama: hey kid?
naruto: -sleeping-
kurama: WAKE UP OR I'LL EAT YOU!naruto: AAAH!
kurama: now wake the girl up if you still wanna watch the sunrise!
naruto: oh crap! sakura-chan! wake up!
sakura: -wakes up- what naruto!?
naruto: we slept together -grins-
sakura: WHAT! -bonks naruto on the head-
naruto: -laughs- we fell asleep...but, its almost sunrise if we're still going to watch it together
sakura: -blushes-
*as the sky gets dim, break of dawn*
sakura: our dates are always the best!
naruto: yeah...is that the moon? -points to a small star still in the sky
sakura: no, the moom's on the other side of the earth! that's venus the morning star
naruto: cool think the Venusian can see us? -waves- HELLOOO VENUSIANS!
sakura: -sweatdrop- they're light years away!
*meanwhile on venus two blondes are walking outside either to are from somewhere the girl stops*
girl: did you hear a distant voice?
guy: no...must have been the wind
girl: think it was an alien, or ghost?
guy: you've really got to stop watching the "paranormal stories" on the zoned out channel every night!...what do you do on your computer late night besides watch those weird paranormal shows?
girl: read about the supernaturals...I'm a paranormal dork after all! and when a ghost calls out to you then the polite thing to do is answer back or they'll haunt you! FOREVER UNTIL YOU GIVE THEM YOUR ATTENTION!!!
*back to naruto and sakura*
faint distant voice: hello, kind spirit! we mean no harm
naruto: -gets nervous- DID YOU HEAR THAT! SOMETHING ANSWERED BACK!
sakura: calm down naruto! geez watch a movie where they fight on the moon then you think aliens really are after you -sweatdrop-
naruto: speaking of the last what parody plots from other anime did you notice? lets see satan 666 had a space plot to, dragon ball z, sailor moon's dark moon arc
sakura: tenchi muyo? it had a few space plots because the girls? two princesses who were sisters from planet jurai, two girls from the galaxy police, a scientist, and a space pirate
naruto: well, that just explained everything -sweatdrop- desperate? turn to everyone Else's work but your own roll it all into one, and then you have retcon:naruto the parody that fails because it's not naruto anymore.
*both laugh*
*the sunlight peaks up*
naruto: what's prettier the sunset, or sunrise?
sakura: i guess sunset with the rainbow colors'
*naruto and sakura hug and kiss as the sun rises*
the end

[narusaku256]

So many omakes!!! I wonder how you manage to come up with so many ideas

[starlitestarbrite]

i wonder if there are more narusaku reviewers on youtube? i have a few naruto reviewers i'm subbed to.
 
 
1-sunpatch94
 
2-kennyisapanda
 
3-lunarspiral1127
 
4-disneyanimefrantic
 
5-missart
 
cause i wanted to see the reactions from other naruto fans LOL, i had more on my list but either they're WAY to overobsessed with hinata, or naruhina, or don't post videos', or do naruto reviews anymore. and the only narusaku fans' i'm subscribed to are:
 
1-luckychi7
 
2-jamesscassidy
 
3-chatte.georgiana

4-tsuki, and lys
 
AND NOW a funny moment from someone who did a rant on the last: retcon the movie she don't do reviews though it was before the movie, and about the spoiler pics' lol

lady jagan!!!

 

Edited by starlitestarbrite, 16 June 2015 - 01:39 PM.

[starlitestarbrite]

that moment when you realise the two main characters are now with eachothers oposites...

 

anti-naruto: sasuke

 

anti-sakura: hinata