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#421 griff142

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Posted 09 April 2018 - 07:25 PM

Well I asked about that and that's what he told me.


Well that is good. Can't wait to read it.

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Posted 16 April 2018 - 06:24 PM

CH 4: Pg 10

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Posted 16 April 2018 - 08:02 PM

CH 4: Pg 10

It's been awhile since I've seen The Last and I tried to forget it because I hated it so much. How closely is this following it? I honestly can't remember.



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Posted 17 April 2018 - 12:06 PM

I will never see the Last I'm only following this version only. 


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Posted 18 April 2018 - 01:38 AM

It's been awhile since I've seen The Last and I tried to forget it because I hated it so much. How closely is this following it? I honestly can't remember.


so far it's close to the movie but with massive changes.

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Posted 12 May 2018 - 09:30 AM

someone knows when the other page will came?



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Posted 12 May 2018 - 09:31 AM

someone knows when the other page will came?


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Ch: 4/ Pg 11 Lol


Edited by Konoha'sCrimsonFox, 12 May 2018 - 09:32 AM.

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Posted 07 June 2018 - 12:04 AM

did he put it on pause?

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Posted 09 June 2018 - 01:16 AM

New page is up. Brace your eyes and take proper precautions. Thou hast been warned.

 

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Posted 09 June 2018 - 01:29 AM

It ain't that bad.

 

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Posted 12 June 2018 - 06:34 AM

Can’t wait for the Byakugan Princess arc to pass through: unfortunately, each publish is by page lol.

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Posted 12 June 2018 - 12:46 PM

It's so hard to appreciate anything with Hinata in it now. SP and Kishimoto just ruined Hinata and everything that she is that even fan writers can;t make her better. Yet, I think Tokai is really doing something here.

Admittedly, it is REALLY hard for any writer, no matter how good, to get the bad taste of Hinata out of my mouth after so much SP sucking up to her. Hinata is a spoiled rotten fruit of a character and that fault lies with SP alone. Not even Kishimoto can take blame for this one.


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#433 Konoha'sCrimsonFox

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Posted 17 June 2018 - 09:24 PM

It's so hard to appreciate anything with Hinata in it now. SP and Kishimoto just ruined Hinata and everything that she is that even fan writers can;t make her better. Yet, I think Tokai is really doing something here.

Admittedly, it is REALLY hard for any writer, no matter how good, to get the bad taste of Hinata out of my mouth after so much SP sucking up to her. Hinata is a spoiled rotten fruit of a character and that fault lies with SP alone. Not even Kishimoto can take blame for this one.

 

It's not really her character that annoys me the most. It's her rabid die hard fans and her wanking fanboy creators. Every time I looked at her on paper/screen, I see them in the background instead of her. There are far worse female characters worse than Sakura and Hinata combined together like the famous Korean webtoon Tower of God's female character Rachael.


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Posted 17 June 2018 - 09:48 PM

It wouldve been hilarious if naruto, after seeing all those hinata moments in the genjutsu, just told her that he doesnt love her and she should stop doing things to get his attention like fighting pein or knitting a scarf. Naruhina wouldve never happened if naruto had been just a little honest with himself. :\

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Posted 18 June 2018 - 06:19 AM

It wouldve been hilarious if naruto, after seeing all those hinata moments in the genjutsu, just told her that he doesnt love her and she should stop doing things to get his attention like fighting pein or knitting a scarf. Naruhina wouldve never happened if naruto had been just a little honest with himself. :\

But Kishimoto said that would be "too pitiful" if that happened. As if it wasn't pitiful that after an entire manga of loving Sakura, he has to watch her humiliate herself in front of Sasuke. and never return his feelings. That wasn't pitiful. But it would have been pitiful if Hinata did not get her feelings returned. I guess it becomes more pitiful depending on how minor the character is that it happens to. So if it that scientist girl with the glasses had confessed to Shikamaru, Shikamaru would have had to be with her and make up excuses as to why he pretended to like Temari.


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Posted 18 June 2018 - 01:19 PM

It's so hard to appreciate anything with Hinata in it now. SP and Kishimoto just ruined Hinata and everything that she is that even fan writers can;t make her better. Yet, I think Tokai is really doing something here.

Admittedly, it is REALLY hard for any writer, no matter how good, to get the bad taste of Hinata out of my mouth after so much SP sucking up to her. Hinata is a spoiled rotten fruit of a character and that fault lies with SP alone. Not even Kishimoto can take blame for this one.

For me it's not just that, it's also the fact that whenever I see a character that even has a slight resemblance to Hinata, I instantly see Hinata, and think back to all the negativity that comes along with her.

And I can't see the character that the writer wanted to portray, I just see Hinata with all her baggage.


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Posted 18 June 2018 - 02:45 PM

For me it's not just that, it's also the fact that whenever I see a character that even has a slight resemblance to Hinata, I instantly see Hinata, and think back to all the negativity that comes along with her.
And I can't see the character that the writer wanted to portray, I just see Hinata with all her baggage.


I agree, not only has Hinata's character has been tainted but also she has tainted the whole story. Nothing is enjoyable anymore from this series and I can't even enjoy the old, good Naruto parts without having Hinata come up and ruin it all. I never hated her but because of these reasons she is one of the worst anime characters of all time in my opinion.

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Posted 19 June 2018 - 02:20 AM

For me it's not just that, it's also the fact that whenever I see a character that even has a slight resemblance to Hinata, I instantly see Hinata, and think back to all the negativity that comes along with her.

And I can't see the character that the writer wanted to portray, I just see Hinata with all her baggage.

I feel you. However, after Naruto's ending....all the characters in other series that resemble her are spoiled. All the characters before, like Shinobu from Love Hina, stayed pure because I saw them first before Hinata. If anything, Hinata was a horrible and bad copy of them.

As for the character, it is her expriencing the real problems with the Hyuga clan and hopefully take more care to notice such things.


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Posted 19 June 2018 - 03:01 AM

It's so hard to appreciate anything with Hinata in it now. SP and Kishimoto just ruined Hinata and everything that she is that even fan writers can;t make her better. Yet, I think Tokai is really doing something here.

Admittedly, it is REALLY hard for any writer, no matter how good, to get the bad taste of Hinata out of my mouth after so much SP sucking up to her. Hinata is a spoiled rotten fruit of a character and that fault lies with SP alone. Not even Kishimoto can take blame for this one.

 

If He WERE to take any blame, it was to make her in the first place :ermm: But considering all things he can't be faulted for that. Hinata was merely a character he created. It was all of her wankers worshipers and social shut-ins jerking off to her porn that we got to where we are today with Naruto 


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Posted 19 June 2018 - 03:34 AM

For me it's not just that, it's also the fact that whenever I see a character that even has a slight resemblance to Hinata, I instantly see Hinata, and think back to all the negativity that comes along with her.

And I can't see the character that the writer wanted to portray, I just see Hinata with all her baggage.

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