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#1 Phantom_999

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Posted 02 May 2015 - 02:14 PM

Well I found this......... Not interested so tell me all about it if you feel like reading. Why am I not interested? The cover should be self explanatory.

 

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Edited by Phantom_999, 02 May 2015 - 02:15 PM.

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#2 Aizen-Sama

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Posted 02 May 2015 - 02:23 PM

Well I found this......... Not interested so tell me all about it if you feel like reading. Why am I not interested? The cover should be self explanatory.
 
[post='http://www.mangainn....o-chapter-700.1'][/post]


Oh hell no. Let the torture begin.

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Posted 02 May 2015 - 02:26 PM

Really guys?? I mean, really?!! Why don't you guys actually read the damn chapter!!? I, for one thought this was pretty amusing. For goodness sakes, read past the cover and you'll know what I'm talking about.

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Posted 02 May 2015 - 02:27 PM

So Kishi literally decided to throw the dog a bone? Ignored him for the movie so this is the poor try to show that Kiba is relevant.


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Posted 02 May 2015 - 02:31 PM

Really guys?? I mean, really?!! Why don't you guys actually read the damn chapter!!? I, for one thought this was pretty amusing. For goodness sakes, read past the cover and you'll know what I'm talking about.


I read it. It sucks ass. Basically Akamaru calls a veterinarian a b*tch & a couple of fangirls literally say "they're really suited for eachother!" when Naruto & Hinata walk down the street. It's hilarious!! XD The SS cover is complete troll, there is none lol.

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Posted 02 May 2015 - 02:39 PM

I read it.

It was average-fine. I thought the concept of Akamaru doing the talking was interesting, but fail to deliver the impact or ending. I don't know what is the point really, because it went full circle to the same status. Plus, it was strange to have the shot to make him go 180 only to go back. It felt like the concept could have gone differently and could have actually be a good chapter, but in the end, it was average. It's not the worst, but it was harmless.

I think Kishi lost the way to write an impactful and meaningful chapter. That or he never have it in the first place. I look at other omakes and they felt more moving than this one. This one seems to miss the point.

Edited by NaruSaku4Life3g, 02 May 2015 - 02:40 PM.


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Posted 02 May 2015 - 02:43 PM

I read it. It sucks ass. Basically Akamaru calls a veterinarian a b*tch & a couple of fangirls literally say "they're really suited for eachother!" when Naruto & Hinata walk down the street. It's hilarious!! XD The SS cover is complete troll, there is none lol.

 

Yup can't argue with that, it's weak, and shows once again how Kishi can't convincing write NH (Well not even many NH fans can write NH convincingly without changing Hinata's charactor to be more similar to Sakura's) so he has random people tell us how good they look together. Maybe if he writes it enough he'll beleive it himself.


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Posted 02 May 2015 - 02:49 PM

 
Yup can't argue with that, it's weak, and shows once again how Kishi can't convincing write NH (Well not even many NH fans can write NH convincingly without changing Hinata's charactor to be more similar to Sakura's) so he has random people tell us how good they look together. Maybe if he writes it enough he'll beleive it himself.

He made the #1 mistake in writing, you're supposed to SHOW not tell. It was lazy & cheap how he just had some random character point out how kawaii desu dezu suited NH is instead of actually SHOWING Naruto and Hinata complementing eachother and being great friends. NH looks so fake in that chapter not even joking.

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Posted 02 May 2015 - 02:54 PM

Akamaru must have a fixation on the word b*tch, because that is literally what came out of his mouth the most in the freaking chapter :wot:
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Posted 02 May 2015 - 03:07 PM

Akamaru must have a fixation on the word b*tch, because that is literally what came out of his mouth the most in the freaking chapter :wot:


Either the translation is really crappy or Akamaru's a sexist assh*le dog. "Female humans know nothing" he says, what the kitten? I thought this was fanmade half the time! XD

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Posted 02 May 2015 - 03:10 PM

Either the translation is really crappy or Akamaru's a sexist assh*le dog. "Female humans know nothing" he says, what the kitten? I thought this was fanmade half the time! XD

I guess Kishi's writing is in this.

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Posted 02 May 2015 - 09:13 PM

Akamaru must have a fixation on the word b*tch, because that is literally what came out of his mouth the most in the freaking chapter :wot:

 

Well think of it, for a Human to call a female kitten is an insult for a Dog a kitten is just a female dog, so for him all the women are kittenes.


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Posted 02 May 2015 - 09:23 PM

 
Well think of it, for a Human to call a female b*tch is an insult for a Dog a b*tch is just a female dog, so for him all the women are kittenes.

Is that supposed to make us feel better?

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Posted 02 May 2015 - 09:43 PM

Is that supposed to make us feel better?

 

I'm saying from a Dogs point of view a kitten is a female, the word kitten itself is not an insult, it's us humans who made it into a derogatory term. The literal meaning of kitten is Female Dog. Like for me all female species, Human or otherwise is a female, so if I am reading in the point of view of a Dog I'd not be surprised reading the word kitten, because that would be what a female would be, that dog would not see it as an insult, it would just be it's word for a female. Like in Fanfic (maybe also in the manga), we often see Kurama call Naruto a Kit, because that's the term for a young fox.

 

Akamaru calling females kitten is not the issue, it's his view on women that could be the issue, because it doesn't seem to be too positive, something odd when you consider the leader of the pack is female.


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Posted 02 May 2015 - 09:45 PM

 
I'm saying from a Dogs point of view a b*tch is a female, the word b*tch itself is not an insult, it's us humans who made it into a derogatory term. The literal meaning of b*tch is Female Dog. Like for me all female species, Human or otherwise is a female, so if I am reading in the point of view of a Dog I'd not be surprised reading the word b*tch, because that would be what a female would be, that dog would not see it as an insult, it would just be it's word for a female. Like in Fanfic (maybe also in the manga), we often see Kurama call Naruto a Kit, because that's the term for a young fox.
 
Akamaru calling females b*tch is not the issue, it's his view on women that could be the issue, because it doesn't seem to be too positive, something odd when you consider the leader of the pack is female.

I was actually thinking only that. So yes, I agreed.

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Posted 02 May 2015 - 09:51 PM

Wait what? Akamaru speaks? Is this Kiba's one shot?


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Posted 02 May 2015 - 09:58 PM

I always thought Akamaru was nice  :hm: turns out he's an kitten. 
Go figure...another character ruined. :zaru: 


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Posted 02 May 2015 - 10:00 PM

I just find it amazing with "women don't know anything" comment, let alone no resolution on that.

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Posted 02 May 2015 - 10:03 PM

Akamaru must have a fixation on the word b*tch, because that is literally what came out of his mouth the most in the freaking chapter :wot:

That's what stood out to me the most. Like wow Akamaru is a very unlikable character if this is the real him. Also this extra chapter was extremely boring. Wasn't pleased.


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Posted 02 May 2015 - 10:04 PM

That's what stood out to me the most. Like wow Akamaru is a very unlikable character if this is the real him. Also this extra chapter was extremely boring. Wasn't pleased.

Well, it is Kiba in The Last universe...




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