Being honest, i saw that my point is why no one makes a doujin on based RTN, menma was supposed to be a nice guy after the three years or whatever, the akatsuki is not evil, i dont know what this guy did but he killed off his own doujin on the last chapter, by making Sakura with susano powers and using wood style + sage mode.
Aurgh! Killed it?
Big hit, but I'll take it. XD
I have to agree, I may have overdid with Sakura's abilities.
The intention was to show the heroine she was, a truly powerful ninja. And actualy, being "Ninja" have other meaning in my story. It's a world of peace, so battles doesn't happen all the time. Although there's a reason for techniques being so overpowered and flashy. I'll reveal it in the next chapter. And well, I wanted to draw more intense action scenes, so, sorry.
Menma is indeed a nice guy, what Sakura see (dark hair, bad behaviour) is a premonition, some kind of warning of what is coming.
And she is the only one that see it. Sasuke, Kakashi and the others see Menma as he is. And this ends in this chapter. Menma will appear normaly on future chapters.
Akatsuki is not evil either. They are a group of mercenaries, bounty hunters. Furthermore, Itachi has a good relationship with team 7.
They are not necessarily friends, but they know each other very well.
I'm also aware that even in this world, their personalities (akatsuki members) are the same as the original ones of the original world.
Rin is featured in the begnning of the second chapter and I tried to maintain her personality intact.
And again, there's a reason for this. It's very hard to try to make sense posting one page per week, there's just few informations and makes a lot of confusion. Some confusion were intentional (like Menma with bad behaviour), but I didin't expected it to kill off the doujin... >_<
Edited by Ausakura, 21 November 2013 - 02:50 PM.