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[starlitestarbrite]

HAPPY NEW YEARS EVERYONE!

[ns.Believe.It]

Same to you ! I gotta say I really love your new status update 

[starlitestarbrite]

i need more omake ideas

Edited by starlitestarbrite, 02 January 2015 - 02:02 PM.

[ns.Believe.It]

How about Shinachiku omakes..? Naruto and Sakura as parents.. 

[starlitestarbrite]

*why the ending?*
[author note summary: a twelve year old shinachiku after a day of goofing off asks his dad about a certain manga ending]
*a messanger ninja runs into the hokage office*
message nin: hokage!-
naruto: what did i say to call me?
message nin: -sweatdrop- lord naruto
naruto: -laughs- yeees?
message nin: your son is spraying graffiti all over the hokage faces!
naruto: -bursts out laughing- i remember when i did that! that was funny...he's probabbly board theres not much to do in our village.
voice: SHINACHIKU UZUMAKI GET YOUR BUTT DOWN HERE BEFORE I DRAG YOU DOWN BY YOUR EARS!
naruto: i guess i better do something before sakura-chan does -runs out the door-
message nin: why must the hokage torture me?
message nin2: -walks in- well...you DID call him demon brat for twelve years
*outside naruto jumps on the monuement*
naruto: wanna see something REALLY funny?
shinachiku: sure dad! -gives him the spray paint-
naruto: -spray paints a clown face on shinachiku- THIS hokage sprays back
*both laugh*
sakura: GRRR! WILL YOU TWO KNOCK IT OFF!? -she jumps up punches naruto to the ground, and drags shinachiku down by his ear- NARUTO! YOU ARE TEACHING YOUR SON BAD INFLUENCE
naruto: -jokingly- and punching the hokage is good influence?...take notes son your moms being influentual!
shinaku: GOT IT! -pretends to write it down-
sakura: -steam blows out ears- I SHOULD HAVE BEEN HOKAGE SO I COULD KICK YOUR BUTT! -bonks naruto on the head- shinachiku what are you doing skipping class?
shinachiku: well, iruka-sensei said we didn't have class today since chuunin exams are comming up
sakura: then why aren't you studying, and training with your team?
shinachiku: our sensei fell asleep watching us train!
naruto: -laughs-
sakura: THATS NOT FUNNY! come on -drags shinachiku by the ear-
*at the training ground there are shikamari, daichi training while their sensei shikamaru dozed off*
sakura: -sighs- shikamaru?
shikamaru: -snores-
sakura: -pokes him-
shikamaru: -whines- just alittle longer?
sakura: WAKE UP ALREADY!
shikamaru: -starts awake- AAAH! oh...hi sakura
sakura: did you forget your NOT a kid anymore?
shikamaru: no...thats lee's department
sakura: -sweatdrop- your supossed to be training these three for the chuunin exams coming up! not sleeping on the job -continues-
shikamaru: -thinks- man she's like temari...what a drag!
*sakura walks off*
shinachiku: maybe you, and i can be like our parents someday! mari-chan!
shikamari: you look like a clown
daichi: -laughs- yeah with the spray paint make up he does!
shinachiku: do you like clowns?
shikamaru: okay, -sighs- guess i have to teach you stuff -smokes a cigarette- who knows how to use shadow clones?
shinachiku: oooh i do! my dad taught me alot of cool stuff! shadow clone, the rasengan...only i'm still learning, and summoning! i only got a tadpole though
shikamaru: -sweatdrop- -thinks- great...another naruto- okay, shikamari? use the shadow posession jutsu to try and keep shinachiku's clones in place.
shinachiku: SHADOW CLONE JUTSU! -all his clones run around-
shikamari: SHINACHIKU!
shinachiku: what? its tag! you can't catch it if its not running
shikamaru: -thinks- i'm gonna need more than one cigarette today-
*later that night naruto, and shinachiku baught a comic book, and whent to ichiraku for some father-son time*
shinachiku: -reads his comic- hey? why does this comic have such a lousy ending?
naruto: well,...the artist died!, and when he died someone stole his art,and made a parody, and rewrote the story!
shinachiku: waw...how did he die?
naruto: -slurrrp- heart attack from being shocked of his own stupidity!
shinachiku: waw...thats weird
naruto: yeah...and then after his series was ruined some believe he came back from the grave!...but then they realised he just has a twin brother
shinachiku: -bursts out laughing-
*later at home*
sakura: did you two knuckleheads have a nice boys night?
naruto/shinachiku: YES!
shinachiku: hey, mom? did you know the menma comic book artist died?
sakura: no he didn't! he's just a sellout...thats all!
shiknachiku: but, dad said he died of stupidity
sakura: NARUTO! THAT WASN'T A NICE THING TO SAY! YOU NEVER LIE ABOUT DEATH!
naruto: well, his soul died! he's just a hallow shell of who he used to be
sakura: well, then say he sold his soul to the akatsuki!
naruto: yeah...that actually sounds better...and his brain died though.
sakura: oh, yes shinachiku time for bed! you have exams tomorrow!
shinachiku: thats a drag!
sakura: -thinks- he's around his dad, and sensei to much!
*the next day...skipping to the written exams*
ibiki: okay, there are ten questions...if you cheat you, and your teammates' will be disqualified!...and i'm told to ask this due to a certain event -sighs- does anyone have tgo go to the bathroom BEFORE we begain?
*some giggle*
*flashback to konohamaru's class back when THEY were 12*
ibiki: you may begain!
udon: -shifts in his seat-
ibiki: no shifting around in your seat
*everyone finishes*
ibiki: -yells startiling the class- TIMES UP
udon: aaah -something is in the floor
ibiki: did someone sneak a drink in here?
moegi: EWWW! THATS NOT JUST WATER
konohamaru: udon soiled his pants!
*all laughs*
udon: i should spray all of you =!
ibiki: oh god...udon...go to the restroom, and then...just go home and change
udon: wont we be disqualified?
ibiki: no!
*end*
ibiki: now for the tenth question...is everyone ready?
*they all look around*
ibiki: i'll let you all decide amongst yourselves! this will determine if your going to pass...or be banned from taking the chuunin exams this year!
daichi: okay, are you ready shinachiku?
shinachiku: yes, my dad warned me about this guy! are you ready mari-chan?
shikamari: yes, are you ready shinachiku?
shinachiku: yes, are you ready daichi?
daichi: yes
shinachiku: we're ready!
ninja: i'm ready!
ninja2: me to!
ninja3: me to!
*everyone tells him their ready*
ibiki: that WAS the tenth question...whoever said "i'm ready"...FAILED!
some: WHAAAT! -leave complaining-
ibiki: those who said "we're ready" PASSED! because when your a team what you do has an impact on your teammates, and sensei, or anyone in your group!...because there'll be a time where if your all not agreeing on a mission it could mean life, or death! -goes on with the lecture-
*anko crashes in-
anko: hey!? why did they all doze off!? i didn't get to startle them, or scare them with my "smashing" intrance!
ibiki: -sweatdrop- they fell asleep while i was talking
anko: never let a guy do a girls job -scrapes a kunai arcross the board-
*everyone wakes up groaning at the screech*
anko: hope you ALL got your nap out! because your going to use what you just learned about teamwork to succeed the next task lets gooo!
*outside*
shinachiku: YEEES! THE FOREST OF DEATH!
anko: AW MAN WHO SAID THAT!
*some point to shinachiku*
anko: -you ever been in the forest of death kid?...has the hokage told you what happened to one of his teammates when they entered?
shinachiku: n-no.
anko: well...he whent in, and when he came back out...he was never the same again...know why?
shinachiku: why?
anko: for doing...what you JUST did
shinachiku: AAAH!
anko: buuut don't worry! each team has to come back with a heaven, and earth scroll...but, don't open one untill you have both!, and are finished
ninja: why can't we open one?
anko: like i always say...you don't want to know...they call it the forest of death for a reason! TRY NOT TO DIE! have fun kiddies
*after team shikamaru find the scrolls', and meet back at the place, opened both scrolls and naruto appeared*
shinachiku: HI DAD!
naruto: hey, everyone! i requested to be the guide for you three! now...lets see if i remember this...-thinks- the earth is physical strength, and heaven is the mind...they have to be in harmony with eachother. one without the other causes imbalance...earth: without wisdom you wont always know what you need to do...you can be the most powerful ninja in the world but, still once you loose controlle everything is ruined...heaven: without strenghth your not going to get very far...what you start you might leave unfinished because strenghth is also confident in yourself, and courage!
daichi: HEY WAIT! my dad was on your team!...whatd anko-sensei mean he came out not the same?
naruto: oh...oh yeah your sasuke, and karin's kid...-sad face- well...
shikamari: shinachiku said something and inturrupted what she was going to tell us so, she told HIM that to scare him.
naruto: -laughs- HAAHHAHAHAHAAHHAHAHAHAHAHAAH yeah, that sounds like her...i love how many senseis', and instructers never change!
*later at the uzumaki house*
sakura: did you have a good day?, and pass the exams?
shinachiku: yeah, next week is the fighting part of the exam
sakura: oh...i bet your excited
shinachiku: yeah,...dad says if i get daichi i should use the one-thousand years of death on him...whats that?
sakura: -sweatdrop-
shinachiku: or to fart in kiba, and hinata's son's face...that'd be funny i hope i get one of them!
sakura: SHINACHIKU! WE DO NOT FART IN PEOPLES FACES, OR..POKE OTHERS IN THE BUTT!
*naruto comes in*
*naruto and sakura hug*
*phone rings*
sakura: hello?...well, if you did THAT you would have to start all over, and reinstall everything from the CD...YOU DID WHAT! I TOLD YOU NEVER DISCONNECT! -hangs up- i have to go to work...some idiot screwed up the computer network -runs out-
shinachiku: can you show me the thousand years of death?
naruto: okay, A THOUSAND YEARS OF DEATH! -pokes-
shinachiku: AAAH -farts-
naruto: AAAH! -holds nose
*they both laugh*
*at the ANBU tech center*
sakura: i told you a thousand times! you NEVER EVER EVER disconnect from the network when you do, it closes down ALL networks
ninja: why do the computers all link to one group network?
sakura: -facepalm- thats it...your not allowed to use the ANBU computers' anymore! -installs the files back on the harddrive-
ninja: can you show me how to do that?
sakura: NO!
*side note: sakura works as a nurse but, also has a side job as a computer tech assistant*
*after sakura gets home she finds naruto, and shinachiku playing "naruko, and shinachika"*
shinachika: hi onee-sama!
naruko: hi imouto-chan!
sakura: -walks out, closes the door, laughs, then comes back in- WHAT ARE YOU IDIOTS DOING!?
*they both reverse the sexy jutsu*
naruto: um...he started it!
shinachiku: nuh-uh HE started it!
sakura: seriously...i married naruto, and he, and shinachiku turned into a futuristic gai, and lee
naruto: shinachiku...-giggles- -jokingly- WHAT IS OUR MOTTO!?
shinachiku: PRESERVERANCE, AND YOUTH CONQUORES ALL!
naruto: YOSH!
sakura: shinachiku? no more training with your dad, and lee
*they both laugh*
*later after shinachiku goes to bed*
sakura: -smiles- he's just like you you know?
naruto: -smiles- yeah...i taught him well...i imagine thats how my dad, and i would have been
sakura: yeah...we're like your parents after all.
naruto: well, my mom did say find a girl like her...one that takes care of me, and i take care of her...and we both take care of our son
sakura: she really said all THAT?
naruto: no...she actually said "find a girl like your mother, and stear clear of the weird one"
sakura: do we know any weird ones?
naruto: hmmm...there WAS one i thought was weird
sakura: hinata?
naruto: yeah...good thing she don't stalk us anymore. what made her stop?
sakura: more like WHO made her stop
*sakura, and naruto kiss*
THE END

Edited by starlitestarbrite, 16 August 2017 - 04:09 AM.

[ns.Believe.It]

Damn, why does it have to be sooo good..?  Your omake reminded me of how good the ending might've been. 

[starlitestarbrite]

lol the narusaku family's so much fun to write. i need more character ideas on who the other kids can be so far:

 

shinachiku: narusaku

shikamari: shikatema

daichi: sasukarin [they thought it rythmed with itachi]

[starlitestarbrite]

*from rain clouds, and thunderstorms' to sunshine, and rainbows*
[author note summary:my version of chapter 699/700 the REAL reason for the weird ending/rewrite...naruto has amnesia, and only one girl can bring him back but, someone's keeping them apart]
*naruto was semi-conscious he knew is arm was numb...wait...HE DIDN'T HAVE AN ARM!...but, why was his head hurting? pounding? ringing*
*sakura, and kakashi made it, andsakura ran over to them*
naruto: sakura-chan?
sakura: -her words fell on deaf ears- -sighs- -heals both of their arms-
kurama: i'm sorry naruto...i must sleep...you got this right? -sleeps-
sasuke: sakura?
sakura: shut up...your only pissing me off more sasuke-kun
naruto: -his eyes grew heavy, and vision blurred- whispers- thank you sakura-chan -closes eyes-
sakura: naruto?......NARUTO! -feels his pulse- oh no...not again NARUTO WAKE UP! -eyes water-
sasuke: we have to disable I.T
sakura: -punches sasuke- THAT'S ALL YOU CAN THINK ABOUT RIGHT NOW!? -tears leak out- AFTER ALL NARUTO HAS DONE, WHENT THROUGH HECK TO BRING YOU BACK!
sasuke: well, we kinda need naruto to do it
sakura: OH FOR HEAVEN'S SAKE! COME ON I WANT TO SHOW YOU SOMETHING -drags sasuke by the ear- sensei? can you bring naruto? i have to show my "ex-teammate" who i BECAME in the last HOW MANY YEARS!
*kakashi put naruto on his back, and followed them*
sasuke: don't you usually call naruto names?
sakura: now...watch -closes eyes- genjutsu: infinate tsukoyomi jutsu...RELEASE!
*the I.T is released*
sasuke: wait...why were you so useless earlier?
sakura: because... i was being a baby...when i was little people used to bully me...call me useless, forehead, billboardbrow...i guess i was living in the past...because someone i thought was my friend braught all those memories i had kept hidden deep inside back out, and broke me down
sasuke: ino?
sakura: no...YOU sasuke...now, lets go, we have a TRUE friend of ours that needs us
sasuke: -thinks- how long have i been gone?...so, her fangirling was just a mask?-
*at konoha hospital*
tsunade: sasuke? due to the danger you have put the village, and everyone else in...your not allowed back in the village for a year
sasuke: but, can i see naruto?
tsunade: no...but, he will be fine...you must leave
*karin walked up*
sasuke: lady tsunade said we had to leave...but, i want to say goodbye to naruto...when he wakes up
karin: didn't you want him to never wake up? i figure you'd be glad he's not woken up yet?
sasuke: -eyes water- he really was the only friend i ever had
*sakura walks up*
sakura: hey karin
karin: hi sakura...i can see if i can heal naruto
sakura: no, they said he's okay...he has a concusion but, he's asleep, and resting now...your lucky he's still alive sasuke.
karin: we better get going come on sasuke-kun! time to become wonderers!
sasuke: tell, naruto i'm sorry...for everything
*karin, and sasuke poof out*
sakura: -walks into naruto's room-
naruto: -wakes up-
sakura: -smiles- glad your awake!
naruto: where am i?...what happened?
sakura: just rest for now...-jokingly-nurse haruno is here to protect you -giggles-
naruto: thank you nurse haruno...your kinda cute -smiles-
sakura: -smiles- i'll go let you rest...call if you need anything -walks out-
*outside the room hinata stands there along with everyone else*
sakura: oh...hey everyone!
hinata: -tears fall- is n-naruto-kun okay?
sakura: yes, he's resting right now, -opens door- naruto? you have visiters-
naruto: -raises up slowly- hey...guys
hinata: NARUTO-KUN! YOUR ALIVE! -she glomps him-
sakura: BE CAREFUL HINATA! visiting hours are 30 min...he needs to rest up so he can eat ramen at ichiraku! -closes the door-
kiba: geez hinata! don't just jump on someone when their in a hospital bed!
hinata: oh...sorry naruto-kun -hangs head-
naruto: um...how do i know you all again?
kiba: great hinata, you knocked his brain out
hinata: -blushes- i'm s-s-sorry?
ino: stop goofing around naruto! your a village hero! you saved the village!
naruto: i am?...how!?
*front desk shizune, and sakura talk*
shizune: naruto's condition may not get better OR worse
sakura: what do you mean?
shizune: he has amnesia
sakura: AMNESIA! you mean he don't remember anyone!?
shizune: there are different types so, it's unknown how severe it is
sakura: -eyes water- naruto.
*in his room*
kiba: if he's messing with US lets play with his mind!
shino: we don't know his condition...we might not want to do that
kiba: hinata's your girlfriend! -snickers-
hinata: I AM!?
naruto: hinata's the shy girl who ran in, and hugged me right?...that makes sense
hinata: oh...kiba i don't like this
kiba: come on it's fun!
shikamaru: i don't know...if i had amnesia, and i found out someone took advantage of my amnesia i would be pissed...plus its naruto...if he finds out you did that it'll be a drag for you!
kiba: it'll wear off! he wont even remember it when his memory comes back!...ino? your turn make it really funny!
naruto: wait...what was funny?
kiba: your life was funny! thats why we're reminding you.
naruto: eh...okay.
hinata: -eyes water- i can't watch this -walks out-
ino: okay...the pink haired girl?
naruto: nurse haruno? yeah she was really nice
ino: -evil grin- you only liked her to be better than your academy rival sasuke uchiha
*kiba, and ino laugh*
naruto: i did?...-hangs head- i don't sound very nice...or like a hero
kiba: but, you are!...your like "mr perfect"!
naruto: erm?...huh?
ino: oh, and your in a shoujo created by a heartbroken 3 year old man baby with a bananna nose, and man-boobs
*the whole room laughs*
naruto: -blinks- so,...i'm written by a man-baby?
kiba: and your in love with ramen noodles but you have the i.q of the stereotypical dumb blond
ino: um...i'm BLONDE
kiba: nooo i mean he's an airhead like in the blonde jokes!
naruto: waw...i sound like a loser
*hinata comes back in with naruto sandwiches, and tea*
hinata: naruto-kun i made you naruto faced sandwiches
kiba: oooh can i have one
hinata: NO!
*later shizune walks in*
shizune: visiting hours are up
ino: -whispers in naruto's ear- steer clear of the pink one! -runs out-
*outside they all meet up with sakura*
sakura: hey guys! how was your visit with naruto?
ino: funny!
kiba: yeah...really funny
sakura: -smiles- glad you all cheered him up...even though right now he don't remember, or know who any of us are
*they all gave a shocked look*
ino: -whispers- he wasn't faking?
shino: -whispers- i told yall so...but nooo...noone listens to the forgotten
kiba: hey? when did shino get here?
shino: -sweatdrop-
hinata: w-will naruto-kun be okay? how severe is it?
sakura: we don't know exactly...so, we ALL need to just be ourselves around him, and remind him who we are, and that he's loved by all of us for the hero he is!
*hinata runs out in tears*
sakura: well, i was going to add...he gets to leave tomorrow!
*everyone else runs out*
shizune: that was strange
sakura: yeah...maybe they are planning him a party!
*hokage's office*
lee: but, lady tsunade! if gai can get his leg fixed, and be youthful again why will you not do it! -eyes water-
tsunade: he said he did not want it healed
lee: gai-sensei would never say that!
tsunade: ask him yourself! if it means that much to you...YOU talk to him
*kakashi, and gai are sitting, and talking*
kakashi: ...but, you encouraged lee to get the surgery back when he hurt his spine in the chuunin exams
*lee evesdrops*
gai: that is different...as a sensei i must encourage my students to be youthful! value life!...but, i must also teach them to be proud of what they acomplished...when i did the eight gates...it was almost to that point!...of death...it IS possible to go your youthful limit...and survive
*lee has tears down his face*
*back to naruto leaving the hospital*
sakura: hey naruto? hold on okay? we'll go to ichiraku...your favorite ramen shop! i'll be right back i just need to tell my replacement i'm on break -runs off-
naruto: hmmm...
hinata: -walks up- h-hi naruto-kun...your leaving today, so i was...um...hoping you, and i can go to ichiraku
*sakura comes out*
sakura: oh, hi hinata
naruto: um...hinata said we can go together...is that what couples do?
sakura: -jaw drops- couple? your a couple now!?
hinata: -hangs head-
naruto: i think we always were -smiles-
sakura: -eyes water- oh...sure naruto -sad smile- have fun...i need to go somewhere else anyway -sadly walks off-
naruto: -confused- well,...lets go i'm eager to try the ramen i'm supossed to love! -runs off-
*hinata follows*
*at ichirakus*
naruto: do you know what kind i used to order?
hinata: no...-hangs head-
teichi: well, theres the hero! how about one pork ramen on the house!
hinara: he has amneshia...so, he don't remember his heroic deeds -eyes water-
teichi: oh...how bad is the amnesia? is it permanent or temparary?
hinata: i don't know...sakura said they didn't know...we have to wait it out
*later after the ramen*
naruto: mmm...that ramen WAS delicious!...i've got good taste in food...and a sweet girl friend
hinata: -blushes- naruto-kun...i've waited for years to be your girlfriend
*they look at eachother*
hinata: but...it feels so wrong -hangs head-
naruto: i must really care for you alot...your so kind
*they get nose to nose*
hinata: -blushes- he's going to...
*flashback*
*naruto swings in face of hinata. cause he's hanging upside down academy days*
naruto: hi hinata...
hinata: -blushes-
naruto: you got a fever? -touches her head-
hinata: n-n-naruto-kun...s-s-so c-c-close -punches him into a wall- oh! i-i'm sorry naruto-kun!
*flashback to all the naruhina moments...ew*
*end*
hinata: s-s-so c-c-close -blushes- -punches naruto into a pole- -gasp- i'm sorry naruto-kun! -eyes water and hangs head- i- h-have to fix this! -runs off-
naruto: ow!...my head -rubs head- have i been in this type of situation?
*flashback to every punch naruto has gotten fro sakura! every kick, every beatdown!*
naruto: wait...so, sakura, and i did have somekind of bond...wellm if i used her then she had every right to kick my butt -sad face-
*meanwhile hinata finds sakura outside a store*
hinata: sakura-san! naruto-kun, and i aren't going out
sakura: oh no! you broke up?
hinata: -tears fall- we were never going out -sniffs- kiba, and ino played a dumb joke thinking naruto was messing around -explains everything-
sakura: -eyes water- how could they mess with naruto like that? when he don't even remember who any of us are!?
hinata: i don't know...but, he's just not the naruto i used to admire! -cries-
sakura: wait...where is naruto now?
hinata: -hangs head- i kinda ran off
sakura: -sweatdrop- we're going to go find them, then i'm having a talk with you about the importance of staying with someone who is not well...then i'm going to pay two idiots a visit!
*naruto's walking around konoha when sai walks up*
sai: so...did you get your memory back?
naruto: i don't know...i'm just confused as small bits, and pieces slowly come together!...i mean hinata...for a girlfriend she sure acts kinda weird
sai: what gave you the idea she was?
naruto: someone told me hinata was my girlfriend...she's really nice but...i'm not sure.
sai: well, what does your heart tell you? i read in a book the heart, and mind can be on different paths...sometimes the mind gives us blind faith, or false hope...but, if we look in our heart we might find the answers hidden deep within us.
*sai walks off*
naruto: hmmm... -closes eyes goes into his subconscuous-
*subconscious*
naruto: -looks in a cage seal where a sleeping kurama is-
naruto: what is THAT!?...hey?...HEY! YOU BETTER NOT BE THE BLIND FAITH!
kurama: -wakes up- blind faith
naruto: AAAH A DEMON!
kurama: -sarcastic- yeah, kid i'm your inner demon...and now i'm going to eat you -laughs-
*naruto snaps out of his subconscious*
naruto: that was weird...ah, well...wait if i've awakened my "inner demon" does that make ME a demon? -sadly- waw...must be why i sound like a jerk
*sakura, and hinata catch up with naruto*
sakura: NARUTO! there you are!
naruto: i was just going home...after i find where that is
*they walk naruto home, hinata goes home*
hinata: see you two later! -walks off-
naruto: should i walk her home first?
sakura: no...we need to talk
*sakura explains some things, and what kiba, and ino did, and how wrong they were*
naruto: so i never only liked you just to rival with sasuke?
sakura: no...ino, and i had a rivaly because at one time WE both liked sasuke...but, you? OH MY GOD! you were like a really annoying bright lifght in my eyes!
naruto: oh...that don't sound like someone worth your time either
sakura: unless that bright annoying light was the sunshine...and i was always standing in the rain...untill the bright light shone from above -smiles- i don't know if your memory will be the same again...but, just remember we'll always be friends
*naruto, and sakura hug*
naruto: your so, nice...-eyes water- if i'm your sunshine...your my rainbow
sakura: -smiles- i'm the cherry blossom...guess we're heaven, and earth after all -walks off smiling-
*later in the hokage office after sakura told tsunade what ino, and kiba did*
tsunade: well...then i guess naruto'll have to prank them back
*weeks go by but, naruto slowly gets his memory back with sakura's help when his memory came back they go to ichiraku*
naruto: mmm -SLUUURRRPPP- mmm this is delicious sakura-chan!
sakura: -eyes water- i thought i would never hear that again...i'm glad your back naruto
naruto: so, kiba tricked me into thinking HINATA was my girlfriend?
sakura: yes, and ino tried to make you think you only liked me due to rivalry with sasuke
naruto: how does that make sense? don't you need something to compete against? you, and ino rivals in love with sasuke?
sakura: i know!
naruto: well, kiba, and ino'll get an old uzumaki naruto payback!
*naruto uses shadow clones and visits kiba atthe training field they surround him*
naruto: -standing on a limb- here's a special gift for you...for not only taking advantage of my mind...but, you put hinata, and sakura-chan in a tight situation!
kiba: um...it was a joke...all ino's idea i swear!
*SUPER FART*
kiba: -runs holding it nose going AAAHHH IT WAS A SPICY TACOOOOOOOOO! IT BURNS
naruto: now that "stink bomb" is done...time for ino to get a surprise visit...from the sasuke fangirl, and a fanboy!
*knocks on the door*
ino: -opens and sees sakura, and naruto-
sakura: you need to settle a debate between us!
-both come in-
ino: um...okay?
sakura: this IDIOT here claims he only loved me to rival with sasuke!
naruto: no,. i said i wanted to rival with YOU for sasuke!
ino: -thinks- oh no...what have i done?- um...guys calm down!
sakura: what have YOUUU ever done to show you loved sasuke!?
naruto: well, i whent to save him! sooo many times so, there! he tried to kill you yet kissed me TWICE!
sakura: BY ACCIDENT! HE'S MINE!
naruto: NO! I GOT TO HIM FIRST!
ino: oh no...guys it was supossed to be a joke! not go this far!...i made it up!
naruto: lets settle this...the sasuke way! -pulls out kunai-
sakura: fine! -pulls out kunai-
ino: NO! GUYS STOP!
*they both stab eachother*
ino: -jaw drops-...-eyes water, tears fall- it wasn't supossed to end like THIS! -cries- i'm sorry sakura-chan...naruto -clones poof- wait...-sniffs-
sakura: now you know what I had to endure with sasuke, and naruto
ino: -turns to the door where sakura, and naruto stand-
naruto: OUR rivalry was NOTHING like yours, and sakura-chan's ino!
ino: -sweatdrop-
sakura: you know? its a bad idea to joke about things you know nothing about
*both poof off*
ino: GRRR...YOU TWO WILL PAY FOR THIS!
*later that night on the monuement naruto gave sakura a rose with a cherry in it*
naruto: i wanted to confess to you for so, long...i have ALWAYS loved you...with all my heart...your happiness is my happiness
sakura: -takes the rose- i know...the more i was around you the more i felt your love...and it always healed, and ignighted my broken heart...i love you to naruto....why is there a cherry in the rose?
naruto: because the cherry on top is the best part...my cherry blossom
sakura: -blush-
*naruto, and sakura kiss*

Edited by starlitestarbrite, 16 April 2016 - 04:16 PM.

[starlitestarbrite]

*shinachiku's weekend "first date"*
[author note summary: heres another shinachiku omake[
*the uzumaki house*
sakura: NARUTO, SHINACHIKU BREAKFAAAST
*the hallway*
naruto: good morning shinachiku...last one to the table have to eat leftovers! -starts to run-
shinachiku: heeey!
*they both run into the dinning room*
naruto/shinachiku: I WIN!
naruto: no, i did!
shinachiku: nope i did!
sakura: -sets out waffles, pancake, and tea for naruto, shinachiku, and herself, and sits down-
shinachiku: lets see who can eat the fastest!
sakura: will you two stop that!...plus shinachiku it wont be good to throw up while training
shinachiku: oh yeah, speaking of that...how do i ask mari-chan out?
sakura: -smiles- aw you have your first crush...i remember my first vrush
naruto: hey sakura-chan?
sakura: -in thinking mode- yes?
naruto: remember your first LOVE?
sakura: -sweatdrop- yes -bonks naruto on the head- you know i'll ALWAYS love you!
naruto: i'll always love you to
shinachiku: HELLOOO? how do i ask her out?
naruto: just ask her if you can go eat at ichiraku's with her...and make sure you have enough for both of you
shinachiku: okay, -dumps food in mouth, swallows- later!
*training grounds*
shinachiku: hey, mari-chan? wanna go out and eat at ichiraku later?
shikamari: i can't my parents, and i are going to visit suna for the weekend...we're visiting my uncle for his birthday!
shinachiku: gaara, or kakuro?
shikamari: gaara
shinachiku: hm...CAN I COME TO!?
sikamari: -thinks- oh crap- um...
shinachiku: HEY SENSEI!
shikamari: -sweatdrop-
shinachiku: can i go with your family to suna? it'll be fun, and i have to ask my parents first but, shikamari, and i can have the weekend to get to know eachother!
shikamaru: well,...you'll have to ask your parents, and we'll have to check with temari...i'm not allowed to make decisions by myself anymore -sweatdrop- its a long troublesome story -sighs-
shinaku: -poofs to the hokage office- hey dad! shikamari's parents and her are going to suna for gaara's birthday! its all weekend but can i go!?
naruto: waw! your going all out...she invited you?
shinachiku: no, i invited myself can i go? pleaaaaaaaaase?
naruto: -sweatdrop- waw...howd you get THAT trait?
sure...you'll have to ask your mom though
*shinachiku poofs home, and asks sakura  then poofs back to the hokage's office*
shinachiku: she said as long as HER parents say it's okay
naruto: -gives shinachiku a small scroll- how about a b-rank mission? send this birthday wish to the kazekage -smiles-
shinachiku: okay!
*back to the training ground*
*shinachiku poofs up*
shinachiku: they say okay
shikamaru: whats that? -points to the scroll-
shinachiku: a birthday wish from my dad to the kazekage!
shikamaru: -thinks- and theres the catch...the kages are friends with eachother- but, we still have to ask temari!
shinachiku: okay!
shikamari: yeah! SHE wont be quick to say yes!
daichi: she might...if the hokage, and kazekage are friends then i'm pretty sure they'll let him go
shinachiku: its even my mission to get this scroll to him!
shikamaru: well,...she don't have say now if the HOKAGE gave him a mission
shikamari: -groans- what a drag!
*later in suna at the kazekage's office*
shinachiku: my dad said to give this to you -hands gaara the scroll-
gaara: -reads it- " happy birthday "jinchuuriki brother!" to the kazekage from the hokage!" -smiles- well, this is a great surprise
shikamari: happy birthday! mom, and i made cupcakes!
temari: we sure did! -puts them on the desk-
kankuro: mmm CUPCAKES!
shinachiku: do yall have a ramen shop here!?
temari:  mari? how about you show shinachiku around the village?
shikamari: -whines- do i have to?
temari: yes!...its your mission
shikamaru: -chuckles-
temari: I SHOULD GIVE YOU ONE! -bonks shikamaru on the head-
shikamari: -sighs- okay, come on shinachiku
*they leave the building*
shikamari: they have a ramen shop called oshi's ramen...they make some tasty ramen
*oshi's ramen*
shinachiku: -SLUUURRRPPP- WAW THIS IS TASTY! SO, GOOD! WE GOTTA VISIT HERE MORE OFTEN!
owner: i take it your a new visiter?
shinachiku: yeah! i'm shinachiku uzumaki! the hokage's kid from konoha...just here with my -pinky up- girlfriend
shikamari: WHAT! -bonks shinachiku on the head- I'M NOT YOUR GIRLFRIEND YOU IDIOT!!. we're here for my uncle the kazekage's birthday. and knucklehead wanted to come with us...so his dad made it a mission for him to bring gaara a gift, and a mission to my parents to look after him. -sighs-
owner: sounds like someones got a secret crush!
shikamari: GRRR I DO NOT, AND NEVER WILL HAVE A CRUSH ON HIM!
owner: i was talking about the boy -points to shinachiku- it sounds like he has a crush on you
shikamari: oh...how bothersome!
shinachiku: so, what do you like to do here when you come mari-chan?
shikamari: well...usually i just sit at home...sometimes i train with kankuro, and-
shinachiku: WE CAN DO THAT!
*back in konoha at the uzumaki's that night*
naruto: so... now we get some alone time together
sakura: i hope they're having a good time...do you think this was a good idea?
naruto: of course! the naaras'll take care of him, and suna, and konoha are allies...both villages have kage who are friends
sakura: true...but, shinachiku's like you...i just hope he's not gonna do something reckless, and get himself in trouble, or hurt!
naruto: you worry too much sakura-chan
sakura: well,...someone has to -smiles-
*naruto, and sakura hug*
*after the weekend when shinachiku gets back*
shinachiku: now that we're back in konoha can we go to ichiraku together?
shikamari: -sighs- fine
*at ichiraku*
shinachiku: SLUUURRRPPPS- mmm RAMEN SHOP NUMBER ONE...ALWAYS ONMY TOP FAVORITE...oshi's is a close second!...second best...the next big thing...the-
shikamari: i think i get it -slurp- i like the ramen here to!
*later outside the naara house*
shikamari: thanks for walking me home...maybe we can do it again...but as a friends
shinachiku: i'm your friend? YYYEEESSS! I MADE IT TO THE FRIENDZONE! -glomps her- I'LL BE THE BEST FRIEND YOU'VE EVER HAD MARI-CHAN...YA KNOW?
shikamari: -pushes away- HEEEY!
*shinachiku at the uzumaki's*
naruto: so, did you have fun with the naaras'
shinachiku: yes! it was like a "weekend date" while there i gave gaara the birthday scroll you sent. so, mission complete was a success, and i ate ramen at oshi's it was delicious...but not as good as ichiraku's but, it's the next best thing! and then when we got back mari-chan, and i whent to ichiraku, and she called me her friend! YES! YES! ONE STEP ON THE ROAD OF HOKAGE!
naruto: -smiles- your dream is to be hokage?
shnachiku: yeah, i'm gonna get a girl like mom, and be hokage like you!
naruto: -eyes water-
sakura: aw! well, just remember your only twelve so, you still have plenty of time to have a girlfriend...try not to rush into anything,it sounds like she's comming around...just like your mother did -looks at naruto-
*naruto and sakura kiss*
THE END

Edited by starlitestarbrite, 04 January 2015 - 10:08 AM.

[narusaku256]

*shinachiku's weekend "first date"*
[author note summary: heres another shinachiku omake[
*the uzumaki house*
sakura: NARUTO, SHINACHIKU BREAKFAAAST
*the hallway*
naruto: good morning shinachiku...last one to the table have to eat leftovers! -starts to run-
shinachiku: heeey!
*they both run into the dinning room*
naruto/shinachiku: I WIN!
naruto: no, i did!
shinachiku: nope i did!
sakura: -sets out waffles, pancake, and tea for naruto, shinachiku, and herself, and sits down-
shinachiku: lets see who can eat the fastest!
sakura: will you two stop that!...plus shinachiku it wont be good to throw up while training
shinachiku: oh yeah, speaking of that...how do i ask mari-chan out?
sakura: -smiles- aw you have your first crush...i remember my first vrush
naruto: hey sakura-chan?
sakura: -in thinking mode- yes?
naruto: remember your first LOVE?
sakura: -sweatdrop- yes -bonks naruto on the head- you know i'll ALWAYS love you!
naruto: i'll always love you to
shinachiku: HELLOOO? how do i ask her out?
naruto: just ask her if you can go eat at ichiraku's with her...and make sure you have enough for both of you
shinachiku: okay, -dumps food in mouth, swallows- later!
*training grounds*
shinachiku: hey, mari-chan? wanna go out and eat at ichiraku later?
shikamari: i can't my parents, and i are going to visit suna for the weekend...we're visiting my uncle for his birthday!
shinachiku: gaara, or kakuro?
shikamari: gaara
shinachiku: hm...CAN I COME TO!?
sikamari: -thinks- oh crap- um...
shinachiku: HEY SENSEI!
shikamari: -sweatdrop-
shinachiku: can i go with your family to suna? it'll be fun, and i have to ask my parents first but, shikamari, and i can have the weekend to get to know eachother!
shikamaru: well,...you'll have to ask your parents, and we'll have to check with temari...i'm not allowed to make decisions by myself anymore -sweatdrop- its a long troublesome story -sighs-
shinaku: -poofs to the hokage office- hey dad! shikamari's parents and her are going to suna for gaara's birthday! its all weekend but can i go!?
naruto: waw! your going all out...she invited you?
shinachiku: no, i invited myself can i go? pleaaaaaaaaase?
naruto: -sweatdrop- waw...howd you get THAT trait?
sure...you'll have to ask your mom though
*shinachiku poofs home, and asks sakura  then poofs back to the hokage's office*
shinachiku: she said as long as HER parents say it's okay
naruto: -gives shinachiku a small scroll- how about a b-rank mission? send this birthday wish to the kazekage -smiles-
shinachiku: okay!
*back to the training ground*
*shinachiku poofs up*
shinachiku: they say okay
shikamaru: whats that? -points to the scroll-
shinachiku: a birthday wish from my dad to the kazekage!
shikamaru: -thinks- and theres the catch...the kages are friends with eachother- but, we still have to ask temari!
shinachiku: okay!
shikamari: yeah! SHE wont be quick to say yes!
daichi: she might...if the hokage, and kazekage are friends then i'm pretty sure they'll let him go
shinachiku: its even my mission to get this scroll to him!
shikamaru: well,...she don't have say now if the HOKAGE gave him a mission
shikamari: -groans- what a drag!
*later in suna at the kazekage's office*
shinachiku: my dad said to give this to you -hands gaara the scroll-
gaara: -reads it- " happy birthday "jinchuuriki brother!" to the kazekage from the hokage!" -smiles- well, this is a great surprise
shikamari: happy birthday! mom, and i made cupcakes!
temari: we sure did! -puts them on the desk-
kankuro: mmm CUPCAKES!
shinachiku: do yall have a ramen shop here!?
temari:  mari? how about you show shinachiku around the village?
shikamari: -whines- do i have to?
temari: yes!...its your mission
shikamaru: -chuckles-
temari: I SHOULD GIVE YOU ONE! -bonks shikamaru on the head-
shikamari: -sighs- okay, come on shinachiku
*they leave the building*
shikamari: they have a ramen shop called oshi's ramen...they make some tasty ramen
*oshi's ramen*
shinachiku: -SLUUURRRPPP- WAW THIS IS TASTY! SO, GOOD! WE GOTTA VISIT HERE MORE OFTEN!
owner: i take it your a new visiter?
shinachiku: yeah! i'm shinachiku uzumaki! the hokage's kid from konoha...just here with my -pinky up- girlfriend
shikamari: WHAT! -bonks shinachiku on the head- I'M NOT YOUR GIRLFRIEND YOU IDIOT!!. we're here for my uncle the kazekage's birthday. and knucklehead wanted to come with us...so his dad made it a mission for him to bring gaara a gift, and a mission to my parents to look after him. -sighs-
owner: sounds like someones got a secret crush!
shikamari: GRRR I DO NOT, AND NEVER WILL HAVE A CRUSH ON HIM!
owner: i was talking about the boy -points to shinachiku- it sounds like he has a crush on you
shikamari: oh...how bothersome!
shinachiku: so, what do you like to do here when you come mari-chan?
shikamari: well...usually i just sit at home...sometimes i train with kankuro, and-
shinachiku: WE CAN DO THAT!
*back in konoha at the uzumaki's that night*
naruto: so... now we get some alone time together
sakura: i hope they're having a good time...do you think this was a good idea?
naruto: of course! the naaras'll take care of him, and suna, and konoha are allies...both villages have kage who are friends
sakura: true...but, shinachiku's like you...i just hope he's not gonna do something reckless, and get himself in trouble, or hurt!
naruto: you worry too much sakura-chan
sakura: well,...someone has to -smiles-
*naruto, and sakura hug*
*after the weekend when shinachiku gets back*
shinachiku: now that we're back in konoha can we go to ichiraku together?
shikamari: -sighs- fine
*at ichiraku*
shinachiku: SLUUURRRPPPS- mmm RAMEN SHOP NUMBER ONE...ALWAYS ONMY TOP FAVORITE...oshi's is a close second!...second best...the next big thing...the-
shikamari: i think i get it -slurp- i like the ramen here to!
*later outside the naara house*
shikamari: thanks for walking me home...maybe we can do it again...but as a friends
shinachiku: i'm your friend? YYYEEESSS! I MADE IT TO THE FRIENDZONE! -glomps her- I'LL BE THE BEST FRIEND YOU'VE EVER HAD MARI-CHAN...YA KNOW?
shikamari: -pushes away- HEEEY!
*shinachiku at the uzumaki's*
naruto: so, did you have fun with the naaras'
shinachiku: yes! it was like a "weekend date" while there i gave gaara the birthday scroll you sent. so, mission complete was a success, and i ate ramen at oshi's it was delicious...but not as good as ichiraku's but, it's the next best thing! and then when we got back mari-chan, and i whent to ichiraku, and she called me her friend! YES! YES! ONE STEP ON THE ROAD OF HOKAGE!
naruto: -smiles- your dream is to be hokage?
shnachiku: yeah, i'm gonna get a girl like mom, and be hokage like you!
naruto: -eyes water-
sakura: aw! well, just remember your only twelve so, you still have plenty of time to have a girlfriend...try not to rush into anything,it sounds like she's comming around...just like your mother did -looks at naruto-
*naruto and sakura kiss*
THE END

My kokoru I still have NS wounds

Edited by narusaku256, 07 January 2015 - 12:34 PM.

[Nar123]

*shinachiku's weekend "first date"*
[author note summary: heres another shinachiku omake[
*the uzumaki house*
sakura: NARUTO, SHINACHIKU BREAKFAAAST
*the hallway*
naruto: good morning shinachiku...last one to the table have to eat leftovers! -starts to run-
shinachiku: heeey!
*they both run into the dinning room*
naruto/shinachiku: I WIN!
naruto: no, i did!
shinachiku: nope i did!
sakura: -sets out waffles, pancake, and tea for naruto, shinachiku, and herself, and sits down-
shinachiku: lets see who can eat the fastest!
sakura: will you two stop that!...plus shinachiku it wont be good to throw up while training
shinachiku: oh yeah, speaking of that...how do i ask mari-chan out?
sakura: -smiles- aw you have your first crush...i remember my first vrush
naruto: hey sakura-chan?
sakura: -in thinking mode- yes?
naruto: remember your first LOVE?
sakura: -sweatdrop- yes -bonks naruto on the head- you know i'll ALWAYS love you!
naruto: i'll always love you to
shinachiku: HELLOOO? how do i ask her out?
naruto: just ask her if you can go eat at ichiraku's with her...and make sure you have enough for both of you
shinachiku: okay, -dumps food in mouth, swallows- later!
*training grounds*
shinachiku: hey, mari-chan? wanna go out and eat at ichiraku later?
shikamari: i can't my parents, and i are going to visit suna for the weekend...we're visiting my uncle for his birthday!
shinachiku: gaara, or kakuro?
shikamari: gaara
shinachiku: hm...CAN I COME TO!?
sikamari: -thinks- oh crap- um...
shinachiku: HEY SENSEI!
shikamari: -sweatdrop-
shinachiku: can i go with your family to suna? it'll be fun, and i have to ask my parents first but, shikamari, and i can have the weekend to get to know eachother!
shikamaru: well,...you'll have to ask your parents, and we'll have to check with temari...i'm not allowed to make decisions by myself anymore -sweatdrop- its a long troublesome story -sighs-
shinaku: -poofs to the hokage office- hey dad! shikamari's parents and her are going to suna for gaara's birthday! its all weekend but can i go!?
naruto: waw! your going all out...she invited you?
shinachiku: no, i invited myself can i go? pleaaaaaaaaase?
naruto: -sweatdrop- waw...howd you get THAT trait?
sure...you'll have to ask your mom though
*shinachiku poofs home, and asks sakura  then poofs back to the hokage's office*
shinachiku: she said as long as HER parents say it's okay
naruto: -gives shinachiku a small scroll- how about a b-rank mission? send this birthday wish to the kazekage -smiles-
shinachiku: okay!
*back to the training ground*
*shinachiku poofs up*
shinachiku: they say okay
shikamaru: whats that? -points to the scroll-
shinachiku: a birthday wish from my dad to the kazekage!
shikamaru: -thinks- and theres the catch...the kages are friends with eachother- but, we still have to ask temari!
shinachiku: okay!
shikamari: yeah! SHE wont be quick to say yes!
daichi: she might...if the hokage, and kazekage are friends then i'm pretty sure they'll let him go
shinachiku: its even my mission to get this scroll to him!
shikamaru: well,...she don't have say now if the HOKAGE gave him a mission
shikamari: -groans- what a drag!
*later in suna at the kazekage's office*
shinachiku: my dad said to give this to you -hands gaara the scroll-
gaara: -reads it- " happy birthday "jinchuuriki brother!" to the kazekage from the hokage!" -smiles- well, this is a great surprise
shikamari: happy birthday! mom, and i made cupcakes!
temari: we sure did! -puts them on the desk-
kankuro: mmm CUPCAKES!
shinachiku: do yall have a ramen shop here!?
temari:  mari? how about you show shinachiku around the village?
shikamari: -whines- do i have to?
temari: yes!...its your mission
shikamaru: -chuckles-
temari: I SHOULD GIVE YOU ONE! -bonks shikamaru on the head-
shikamari: -sighs- okay, come on shinachiku
*they leave the building*
shikamari: they have a ramen shop called oshi's ramen...they make some tasty ramen
*oshi's ramen*
shinachiku: -SLUUURRRPPP- WAW THIS IS TASTY! SO, GOOD! WE GOTTA VISIT HERE MORE OFTEN!
owner: i take it your a new visiter?
shinachiku: yeah! i'm shinachiku uzumaki! the hokage's kid from konoha...just here with my -pinky up- girlfriend
shikamari: WHAT! -bonks shinachiku on the head- I'M NOT YOUR GIRLFRIEND YOU IDIOT!!. we're here for my uncle the kazekage's birthday. and knucklehead wanted to come with us...so his dad made it a mission for him to bring gaara a gift, and a mission to my parents to look after him. -sighs-
owner: sounds like someones got a secret crush!
shikamari: GRRR I DO NOT, AND NEVER WILL HAVE A CRUSH ON HIM!
owner: i was talking about the boy -points to shinachiku- it sounds like he has a crush on you
shikamari: oh...how bothersome!
shinachiku: so, what do you like to do here when you come mari-chan?
shikamari: well...usually i just sit at home...sometimes i train with kankuro, and-
shinachiku: WE CAN DO THAT!
*back in konoha at the uzumaki's that night*
naruto: so... now we get some alone time together
sakura: i hope they're having a good time...do you think this was a good idea?
naruto: of course! the naaras'll take care of him, and suna, and konoha are allies...both villages have kage who are friends
sakura: true...but, shinachiku's like you...i just hope he's not gonna do something reckless, and get himself in trouble, or hurt!
naruto: you worry too much sakura-chan
sakura: well,...someone has to -smiles-
*naruto, and sakura hug*
*after the weekend when shinachiku gets back*
shinachiku: now that we're back in konoha can we go to ichiraku together?
shikamari: -sighs- fine
*at ichiraku*
shinachiku: SLUUURRRPPPS- mmm RAMEN SHOP NUMBER ONE...ALWAYS ONMY TOP FAVORITE...oshi's is a close second!...second best...the next big thing...the-
shikamari: i think i get it -slurp- i like the ramen here to!
*later outside the naara house*
shikamari: thanks for walking me home...maybe we can do it again...but as a friends
shinachiku: i'm your friend? YYYEEESSS! I MADE IT TO THE FRIENDZONE! -glomps her- I'LL BE THE BEST FRIEND YOU'VE EVER HAD MARI-CHAN...YA KNOW?
shikamari: -pushes away- HEEEY!
*shinachiku at the uzumaki's*
naruto: so, did you have fun with the naaras'
shinachiku: yes! it was like a "weekend date" while there i gave gaara the birthday scroll you sent. so, mission complete was a success, and i ate ramen at oshi's it was delicious...but not as good as ichiraku's but, it's the next best thing! and then when we got back mari-chan, and i whent to ichiraku, and she called me her friend! YES! YES! ONE STEP ON THE ROAD OF HOKAGE!
naruto: -smiles- your dream is to be hokage?
shnachiku: yeah, i'm gonna get a girl like mom, and be hokage like you!
naruto: -eyes water-
sakura: aw! well, just remember your only twelve so, you still have plenty of time to have a girlfriend...try not to rush into anything,it sounds like she's comming around...just like your mother did -looks at naruto-
*naruto and sakura kiss*
THE END

 

 

Shinachiku first appereance in your omakes        Amazing  

 

Hope he appears more from now on !

[starlitestarbrite]

*that new old new age new religion**
[author note summary: team shikamaru's first mission...running into a certain sub-culture, and a new age religious group...when these two groups get together chaos follows]
*hokage office*
*team shikamaru is in naruto's office*
shinachika: HI DAD!
naruto: hello son...okay, i have a mission for you all...-tries not to laugh- i can't...its to funny! -bursts out laughing-
shikamari: sounds bothersome -sweatdrop-
daichi: something to do with laughing gas? did my parents do something again?...or maybe it's-
shinachiku: this sounds like it'll be a fun mission! -bursts out laughing as well-
shikamaru: -sighs- -takes the mission scroll, and looks at it-
naruto: -stops laughing- no...it's very serious!...it could put the whole village in danger! -whines- heeey -takes scroll back from shikamaru- okay,...now what i'm about to tell you is -looks at the scroll- -laughs again- oh those hyuugas' what'll they come up with next! HAAHAHAHHAHAHAAHHAAHHAHSAHAHHAAHHAAHAH
shikamaru: lets go i'll explain the mission to you all outside...apparently the hokage's busy having a feild day with this
*they are outside the hokage building*
shikamaru: apparently it's a b-rank mission...there's something going on down at the hyuuga compound
daichi: then what was the hokage laughing at?
shikamaru: lets just say...when we get there...don't ask ANY questions untill we see whats going on!
*the hyuuga compound*
*shikamaru's team knocks on hiashi's door*
hiashi: -opens door- oh god...the hokage knows about this?
shikamaru: well, he kind of has to in order to send help over here.
hiashi: times like these i wish my brother, or nephew were still alive -sighs in embarrassement- come on
*they follow hiashi to a crowd at a temple*
hiashi: they also built a shrine!...they're EVERYWHERE trying to uproot the anchient shinto religion saying amaterasu has returned!
shinachiku: thats not funny at all!
shikamari: oh dear goddess -facepalm-
daichi: yeah, it sounds like they honestly are restoring their old culture thats not a bad thing...unless they're destroying the new culture to make theirs more...oooh i think i get it now
shikamaru:so, what is the problem exactly?
daichi: -whispers to shinachiku- WW3 going virtual instead of physical pass it on
shikamari: shhh will you two stop it!
*hanabi comes out*
hanabi: father? hinata still wont come out untill all these people stop calling her "goddess hinata", and asking her for blessibgs, and how to get to the afterlife
shikamaru: aaand there it is
shinachiku: -bursts out laughing- AAAAHAAHHAHAAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAAHHAAHAHAHHAHAAHHAHAHA
worshippers: HAIL GODDESS HINATA!
hanabi: whaaat its not funny!...they also think-
hiashi: shhh PLEASE don't mention THEM! we get enough hinataists...the last thing we need are the nejians back in town!...oh sh-covers mouth-
daichi: NO WAY! I KNEW NEJIANITY WASN'T A MYTH!
shikamari: you mean they think he's-
shikamaru: -annoyed- oh jesus christ!
hiashi: exactly.
shinachiku:AHAHHAAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAAHAHAH -points and has fits of laughter-
daichi: so, what about narutoisim?
shinachiku: -stops laughing- narutoism whats that?
shikamaru: could we stop talking about that! lets just try, and talk to the hinataists
*shinachiku bursts out laughing again*
shikamaru: -facepalms-
daichi: -blinks- wasn't it the hokage who saved the village though if anyone should be worshipped it should be him right?
shinachiku: -stops laughing- hey, yeah! oh now i get it narutoism! yeah my dad is a hero of the village...why do they think hinata's a reincarnation of another ancient godess when they have their own version of of a heaven goddess, and earth god right here in the village!
worshippers: WE DOOO?
shinachiku: yeah!
warshippers: WHO?
shinachiku: well, my mom sakura, and my dad naruto of course! you know the hokage? the jinchuuriki who saved the village? or...was that grandpa minato?...oh wait! THEY BOTH SAVED THE VILLAGE...so, really we have two generations of heaven, and earth...wanna make three mari-chan
shikamari: -sweatdrop- -bonks him on the head- WE'RE TWELVE YOU DINGBAT!
shinachiku: i'll take that as a maybe someday?
daichi: -snickers-
shikamaru: -pulls out a cigarette- well, this was a weird mission
*back at the hokage office*
shikamaru: we managed to calm down the fanatics', and got them to leave the hyuugas' alone
naruto: great!
shinachiku: that was the funniest, and funnest mission ever!
*later that night at the uzumaki household*
sakura: so, how was your first mission today shinachiku?
shinachiku: well, it was hilarious! you see there were "hinata worshippers", and they were building temples, and shrines kinda like in the shinto days
sakura: oh my goodess!
shinachiku: i guess they had a church there once to because -goes on all about that-
*outside there are sounds of wood, and stuff , and singing, and more*
sakura: -looks out the window- naruto?
naruto: yes sakura-chan?
sakura: why are there carolers, and shrines, and temples appearing in our back yard?
naruto: -comes looks out the wndow-
shinachiku: well, it looks like they listened after all!
*sakura, and naruto look at shinachiku*
sakura: shinachiku? WHAT.DID.YOU.TELL THEM!?
shinachiku: that they have their own version of a heaven goddess, and earth god right here in konoha...and that my dad saved the village and was the hero...plus reminded them of narutoism...guess there was a narusakuism
naruto: -bursts out laughing- narutoism ahhaahahahahahahahahah
sakura: NA.RU.TOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
naruto: uh oh
*naruto, and shinachiku run with sakura chasing them*
*much later after the hokage[naruto] explained to the worshippers that they need to find their own path within their hearts to fallow, but always share and treassure the love, and friendship, and lessons along the way, and thats what made a true god, godesss, or spirit, or whatever they wanted to be in life they all left happily*
sakura: you think they'll take that advice?
naruto: i believe some will...some just like to follow the crowd...their all just people like us after all -smiles-
sakura: -smiles-
*naruto, and sakura hug, then shinachiku joins them for a group hug*
shinachiku: i love being in this family! hey think i'll ever have a little brother, or sister?
naruto: um...sakura-chan?
sakura: -sweatdrop- he's growing up to fast
naruto: i know! -smiles-
*naruto and sakura kiss*
THE END

[starlitestarbrite]

are my omakes still good, or have they gone bad? i'm out of good ideas lol

[Nar123]

No no no , this one was good. Shinachiku is always a awesome character (much better than burrito) hahaha the thing with religions was a good catch , had me laughing 

 

If you aren't having so many ideas don't try to force it, just take a break. cool your mind down and things will come naturally 

[ns.Believe.It]

are my omakes still good, or have they gone bad? i'm out of good ideas lol

Nah, as good as always. Keep up the good writing 

[questdrivencollie]

Tumblr is full of drama llamas. People who stroll the anti tags looking for something to rage at are a perfect example. (If they don't want to see anti, what are they doing browsing the anti tags?) And I can't say I have a favorable impression of the Naruto fandom in general, either...way, way too many people who can't accept that not everyone will share their opinion.

Though, you can always block people and avoid tags on tumblr, too. Plus you should be safe on your blog thread here, if nowhere else. So I do hope that you'll at least come back here.

[RedFaction]

I never really go on Tumblr so I don't really know how bad it is on there, but I can imagine it isn't pretty. I do know though that the Naruto fandom is one of the worst out there, because many people can't seem to grasp the idea of respecting other peoples' ideas. There is nothing wrong with voicing your opinions, and I certainly disagree with all that has happened with this ending but I would never attack anyone directly for liking it. I suppose that's why I generally stay on only the H&E forums because I've never had any issues with other members and it seems like everyone has respect for one another here. I think one day the haters will move on, but for now yeah it's a mess. I do hope that you come back here from time to time though because so many of us have left already, but if not then you will be missed.

[narusaku256]

I dunno why you want to give up. Naruto might have been ruined but we have a wonderful community over here. Which bonds matter to you? The ones you made here or the tumblr? If so...why leave the community? You Can quit tumblr...but why this site? Personally I do enjoy reading your omakes! Honestly! You don't have to quit the fandom I think...rest all...your decision! I hope you return soon to read this one day. You'll be missed untik then! Good bye and take care :) Hope you return soon!

[starlitestarbrite]

i wont quit the site, or fandom. i'll still do omakes. this is the only place i feel welcomed anyway

Edited by starlitestarbrite, 20 January 2015 - 11:00 PM.

[starlitestarbrite]

*what if: naruto, and sakura DID go their separate ways?*

*naruto, and sakura are at the park*
naruto: so, do you really still love sasuke sakura-chan?
sakura: to be honest...i'm still trying to figure things out. i don't know how i feel right now
naruto: well, i'll always be here if you need to talk. no matter what you decide we'll always be friends
sakura: thanks naruto
*naruto and sakura hug*
*naruto and kiba at ichiraku's*
kiba: so,i was thinking of asking hinata out but, she's only got you in her mind...kinda sweet actually...in a "ow my teeth hurt i have cavities from eating too much sugar" kinda way
naruto: yeah...i thought she said she would stop chasing after me after the war?
kiba: well...she'll stop stalking you.
naruto: wait she'll stop WHAT!?
kiba: oh you never knew? she would secretly follow you around, and watch you from a far...as if you were a religious leader or something
naruto: -looks shocked-
*flashback*
kushina: find a girl like your mother, and don't choose a weird girl
*end*
naruto: -thinks- so, she's the girl my mom warned me about-well, anyway. i asked sakura if she still really loved sasuke, and she said she really wasn't sure of her feelings
kiba: was she "lying to herself" again?
naruto: no, she was telling the truth this time...when she lies she avoids eye contact, and she looked into my eyes the whole time.
kiba: well, it's the first step
naruto: what is?
kiba: admitting when you are unsure...then it's easier to find the truth maybe you should date someone
naruto: i'm not ready to move on yet...i'll wait for her
kiba: until then...if she still THINKS she has feelings for sasuke why don't you try dating HER best friend, and rival?
naruto: truth is i've never liked any other girl but her...and ino also still likes sasuke, AND sai.i've honestly fallen in love with sakura-chan. i could never try to replace her, or find a "fill in", or ask another girl to be "the rebound girl", or choose a second best.
kiba: then try the girl that's admired you since day one!
naruto: -slurrrp- off to the flower shop -zooms out-
kiba: WAIT!...-sweatdrop-
*the flowershop*
ino: that'll be $5.oo
customer: -pays and leaves-
ino: hi naruto
naruto: hi ino...would you want to go out for ramen?
ino: aren't you dating sakura?
naruto: i thought i was...she said she's trying to figure stuff out.
ino: -laughs- she's always jumping into things...i mean you transformed into sasuke back in our genin days and she still hasn't figured it out?
naruto: -laughs- i remember that...but, i could never break her heart, and tell her it was me that day.
ino: atleast she's not like that weird shy girl who's on kiba's team
naruto: you see it to?
ino: yeah, EVERYONE notices...why not date her?
naruto: NO! she's sweet but in a "i ate to much ramen i'm gonna vomit" kinda way
ino: -blinks- thats a weird way to discribe it.how about tomorrow we go to ichiraku but, as friends!
naruto: okay
*sakura's bedroom she's looking at her old team 7 picture*
sakura: naruto's always been there for me...why DO i like sasuke so much? i just can't figure that out
*flashback*
"sasuke": your forehead is so charming it makes me wanna kiss it...that sounds like something naruto would say
*end*
sakura: -laughs at the memory-
*nextt day ino, and naruto at ichiraku*
naruto: -slurrrps- when did YOU get over sasuke?
ino: hmmm...i guess when i learned he was a criminal...i guess the truth is i just like guys for their looks, or strength wich is not a good thing...you should love someone for who they are...but, for some reason i've never been able to do that
naruto: i can kind of see that -scratches head and grins- but, if you never really liked sasuke then do you really like sai?
ino: yeah...sai's interesting. i find his personality very interesting...sakura, and i are so similar everything i had she wanted, everything i did she wanted to join. you know why i think she wanted to be like me, and i wanted to be like her...i think thats how our rivalry started was from jealousy
naruto: sounds like me, and sasuke...well, kind of...ever thought maybe in a past life YOU were a villan, and sakura-chan was the hero?
ino: -sweatdrop- isn't that the plot from frozen?
naruto: oh yeah -laughs nervously- have you two ever built a snowman?
ino: no
*both laugh*
ino: how come we never hangout before?
naruto: i don't know. i'm always busy training, or on missions.
ino: why don't you send sakura a secret admirer gift?
naruto:great! but, i don't want it to look like i'm forcing her to choose, or decide
ino: you wont be. she wont know its you unless you tell her.
naruto: great idea! i'll do that now!
*naruto starts to leave*
teuchi: wait! you've got to pay
naruto: -turns around and notices ino gone- -sees a note on the stool "meet you at the flower shop! thanks for the ramen." -sweatdrop- she poofed out? thats my thing!
*at the haruno household*
*knock knock knock*
mebuki: -opend door- yes?
message ninja: special delivery for sakura haruno
*that evening sakura gets home*
mebuki: hey, sakura dear. something came for you today. i put them in your room
sakura: okay thanks mom -goes to her room, and notices one red rose in a vase, and a card that reads: "i liked you when we first met, and have not stopped yet, i love you from my heart, and that i don't regret"- aw...i have a secret admirer who could it be?
*meanwhile downstairs kizashi comes in with a newspaper*
mebuki: how was work?
kizashi: well, -shows her the newspaoer- todays council meeting was about THIS article can you believe their trying to change the name of the heaven&earth bridge in kiri? this is the third time!
mebuki: well, it's their decission i don't think trying to change their mind will work...if they want to change it then they can
kizashi: well, what if we get the mizukage to not allow it?
mebuki: now, dear lets not cause a rebellian remember what happened last time?
kizashi: but, this is different! plus the akatsuki are dead
mebuki: well, the members are...it don't mean there wont be a new group, and there will be if this all gets out of hand. noone likes being told what they can, or can't do, think, or say.what are they calling it anyway?
kizashi: kaminari...wich means thunder
mebuki: -sweatdrop- well, if it's not disturbing the peace, causing a war, or anything the kage will not get involved.
kizashi: okay...we'll call one of OUR bridges the heaven&earth bridge!
mebuki: i think that would be great dear -isn't really listening-
kizashi: -jokingly- or change the village name from konoha to the naruto village -laughs-
mebuki: okay, sounds good.
kizashi: -sweatdrop- your ignoring me right?
mebuki: mmmhmmm
*back to sakura's room*
sakura: who could have sent these?...lets see someone who has liked me ever since we met.
*flashback to lee asking sakura out during the chuunin exam*
*end*
sakura: -sweatdrop- tomorrow i'm paying konoha's green beast a visit.
*the next day at the training grounds lee is training*
sakura: hi lee
lee: ah, hello sakura-san!
sakura: i got the secret admirer gift
lee: it sounds like someone has fallen for you...who would not? you are so, inspiring, and beautiful, and full of youth, and spirit!
sakura: so, you sent the rose, and the card?
lee: no, sadly i did not.
sakura: then...who was it?
lee: maybe naruto?
sakura: no, i don't think he would be THAT creative -walks off-
*meanwhile in tsunade's office*
kizashi:...so, i was thinking "why not rename one of our bridges the heaven&earth bridge"!
tsunade: hmmm -sips sake-
shizune: -giggles alittle-
kizashi: or we can call the village the naruto village!
tsunade: -dazed- right...you do that!
kizashi: how come when i mention "naruto village" noone takes me seriously?
shizune: she's drunk i don't think she's paying any attention, and when your joking we ALL know your joking.
kizashi: yeah, thats true -walks out-
tsunade: -drunk- shizune? i have the weird thought...hinata as hokage!
shizune: thats it -takes sake cup, and bottle- no more drinking today!
tsunade: -drunk- but...it's...-falls asleep-
*meanwhile naruto's in the flowershop*
ino: so, did she ask you about the rose, and card?
naruto: no, i must be really good at this!
ino: or she thinks lee did it
naruto: ALRIGHT! -cheers- if i'm THAT good i'll win her over for sure! off to ichiraku's to celebrate...youth rules! -runs out-
*hinata walks in*
ino: -sweatdrop- spying on naruto again?
hinata: -blush- no of course not! i w-would n-never d-do t-t-that!
ino: you stutter when your nervous...and you just blushed
hinata: i always blush! -hangs head- i would like the secret admirer package
ino: -smiles and gets an idea- -thinks- i'll get her to get narusaku together without actually doing it!- what would you like on the card?
hinata: i-um-oh goodness i don't know!
ino: just say what's in your heart! what do you love about naruto the most?
hinata: well...to be honest i don't know naruto-kun that well. but, i've always seen him as a protector...a defender, he's just so caring, and strong...not a weakling like i am. he's my hero!
ino: god, your such a fangirl hinata...and your kind of the martyr type.
hinata: whats that?
ino: selfish, and reckless
hinata: oh...i'm sorry.
ino: okay, the card is all set...now, how about two pink roses? dark pink for admiration, light for appriciation!
hinata: sounds great! think he'll like them?
ino: yes he'll love it...you shouldn't be so gullible you never know when someone'll try to use, or walk all over you
hinata: gomen!...i'm used to it. but, thank you -walks out-
*naruto gets home to see two pink roses, and a card on his doorstep*
naruto: a secret admirer? -takes them inside, puts the roses in a vase, and the note reads: "light is for appriciation-thank you for being who you are, dark is for admiration-your strength helped me get this far, two roses-are a sighn of what we've been through platonic friendship into love that's true" i really hope it's not hinata!...but, it can't be her she's too shy! plus she's just not that creative...could it be sakura-chan? -smiles-
*yamanaka's flower shop*
sai: -walks in- slow day?
ino: yeah...i'm playing matchmaker...getting naruto, and sakura together through the "secret admirer" thing
sai: i don't know if that will work. it could really mess up their relationship.
ino: or it could strengthen their bond.it's time they stopped living in the past before they loose eachother forever! plus with hinata's i just used pink roses, and who is the only person naruto relates pink with?
sai: ah, crafty...your creative. your very artistic with roses.
ino: -blushes- thank you
*naruto, and sakura meet at ichiraku*
naruto: -slurrrp-
sakura: so,...did you send me the secret admirer gift?
naruto: -smiles- yeah! did you like it?
sakura: yes...it helped me realize something...i've only liked sasuke-kun because of the rivalry with ino...i used to be so, shallow...i guess i just believed i never deserved you in my life
naruto: you deserve to be happy sakura-chan.
sakura: there was only one person i'm happy around, and still am...and he's always liked me since our genin days, even now...i can still feel that love...and i love him back
*they both stare in eachothers eyes*
sakura: this time...i've finnally truley realize who my heart belongs to...and thats you!
naruto: -eyes water- i love you too sakura-chan! did you send the secret admirer gift i got to? they were two pink roses', and the sweetest card i've ever read!
sakura: no...-smiles- i think someone's been playing matchmaker -blush-
naruto: well, atleast it was narusaku matchmaking.so, you never really loved sasuke?
sakura: no...i guess i liked him in a "i like the rain but hate the thunderstorm" kinda way
*hokage office*
*konohamaru walks in*
konohamaru: -holds up newspaper- their changing the konoha bridges name to the heaven&earth bridge?
tsunade: what!? -reads it- "councilman haruno wishes to change the name of the konoha bridge to heaven&earth bridge here's his comment "hey? if kiri can change why can't we? besides...the kage can't stop us right? (laughs)"- -sweatdrop- KIII.ZAAA.SHIII! -marches out the door-
konohamaru: i like the idea
shizune: so do i...but, i think she's gonna kick his butt for what he said about the kage -sweatdrop-
konohamaru: politics are weird
*that night on the monuement looking up at the stars*
naruto: since we were comparing ways we like others...what way do you love me in? i love you in the "my heart is yours and yours is mine" kinda way
sakura: i love you in the "IF YOU EVER DIE I'M GOING TO THE SPIRIT WORLD, AND DRAGGING YOUR BUTT BACK" way-smiles-
naruto:i bet we would make great parents someday
sakura: i KNOW we would
*naruto and sakura kiss*
THE END

Edited by starlitestarbrite, 22 January 2015 - 05:23 PM.