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#1 Ausakura

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Posted 12 November 2013 - 12:26 AM

So... I was thinking "why I don't show my work here on H&E"?

I'm a silent member so I fear to be acting like a intruder. But as anyone here, I am fan of Narusaku.

I always thinked of what would be the best time to disclose my doujin around forums... I'm not sure that this is the best time, but here we go.

 

I want to present you guys this.

 

The ROAD TO NINJA - NARUTO THE DOUJIN

 

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The illustration was made by me and coloured by a friend of mine, Cris.
 
As the title says, it's based in the movie ROAD TO NINJA NARUTO THE MOVIE.
 
The story goes around Sakura of the Alternative World, the daugther of the fallen fourth Hokage and hero, Kizashi Haruno. The other main character is Menma (the alternative Naruto), a nice guy who likes supernatural stuff and comes from his training of 3 years with a new personality. The team seven reunites and goes on a placement test. Of course, there's more to tell. You can see all the details of the chapters and read them here:
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It's kinda clumsy on the begnining and I have to say that it didn't amused me very well. I didn't even know what I was doing.
I mean, it was supposed to be a humorous story but now I'm writing down the plot to be more serious, involving philosophy, drama and even mature content. Things have gone out of my hands, haha. Now I'm so busy that I have to stop drawing for the rest of this year. The good thing is that I have done a bunch of good material until now. The purpose of this Doujin was, in first place, to improve my english and drawing skills and I showed some progress. I don't plan to stop it, I really want to finish this Doujin, to give it a closure and to fill all holes I found on the movie. And even being a fanzine, you can say it's a original story, after all I wanted to enrich everything. To keep it with quality I take good care to be the most loyal to the original story and characters as I can, giving more priority to the plot than to fanservice. But of course, I don't want to write for my own. I want people to know my work and apreciate it. So please, give it a look! And don't hesitate to say something. Your comment can save lives! Haha. Hope you guys like it! I'll show here more separated drawings, enjoy!
 
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#2 narusakuforlife1667

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Posted 12 November 2013 - 05:45 AM

Awsome im looking forward for more of your works here :goodjob:


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Posted 12 November 2013 - 06:43 AM

wow, those are some awesome drawings!


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#4 Ausakura

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Posted 21 November 2013 - 12:55 PM

Thank you all! :D

 

Someone have commented that wished Menma was blonde because in the doujin he have dark hair and in the original he was blonde, but the comment have just disappeared.

Well, actually... XD

 

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#5 Sakamaki Izayoi

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Posted 21 November 2013 - 02:16 PM

Thank you all! :D

 

Someone have commented that wished Menma was blonde because in the doujin he have dark hair and in the original he was blonde, but the comment have just disappeared.

Well, actually... XD

 

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Thank you all! :D

 

Someone have commented that wished Menma was blonde because in the doujin he have dark hair and in the original he was blonde, but the comment have just disappeared.

Well, actually... XD

 

 

Being honest, i saw that my point is why no one makes a doujin on based RTN, menma was supposed to be a nice guy after the three years or whatever, the akatsuki is not evil, i dont know what this guy did but he killed off his own doujin on the last chapter, by making Sakura with susano powers and using wood style + sage mode.


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#6 Ausakura

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Posted 21 November 2013 - 02:44 PM

 

Being honest, i saw that my point is why no one makes a doujin on based RTN, menma was supposed to be a nice guy after the three years or whatever, the akatsuki is not evil, i dont know what this guy did but he killed off his own doujin on the last chapter, by making Sakura with susano powers and using wood style + sage mode.

 

Aurgh! Killed it?

Big hit, but I'll take it. XD

 

I have to agree, I may have overdid with Sakura's abilities.

The intention was to show the heroine she was, a truly powerful ninja. And actualy, being "Ninja" have other meaning in my story. It's a world of peace, so battles doesn't happen all the time. Although there's a reason for techniques being so overpowered and flashy. I'll reveal it in the next chapter. And well, I wanted to draw more intense action scenes, so, sorry.

 

Menma is indeed a nice guy, what Sakura see (dark hair, bad behaviour) is a premonition, some kind of warning of what is coming.

And she is the only one that see it. Sasuke, Kakashi and the others see Menma as he is. And this ends in this chapter. Menma will appear normaly on future chapters.

 

Akatsuki is not evil either. They are a group of mercenaries, bounty hunters. Furthermore, Itachi has a good relationship with team 7.

They are not necessarily friends, but they know each other very well.

I'm also aware that even in this world, their personalities (akatsuki members) are the same as the original ones of the original world.

Rin is featured in the begnning of the second chapter and I tried to maintain her personality intact.

And again, there's a reason for this. It's very hard to try to make sense posting one page per week, there's just few informations and makes a lot of confusion. Some confusion were intentional (like Menma with bad behaviour), but I didin't expected it to kill off the doujin... >_<


Edited by Ausakura, 21 November 2013 - 02:50 PM.


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Posted 21 November 2013 - 03:46 PM

 

Aurgh! Killed it?

Big hit, but I'll take it. XD

 

I have to agree, I may have overdid with Sakura's abilities.

The intention was to show the heroine she was, a truly powerful ninja. And actualy, being "Ninja" have other meaning in my story. It's a world of peace, so battles doesn't happen all the time. Although there's a reason for techniques being so overpowered and flashy. I'll reveal it in the next chapter. And well, I wanted to draw more intense action scenes, so, sorry.

 

Menma is indeed a nice guy, what Sakura see (dark hair, bad behaviour) is a premonition, some kind of warning of what is coming.

And she is the only one that see it. Sasuke, Kakashi and the others see Menma as he is. And this ends in this chapter. Menma will appear normaly on future chapters.

 

Akatsuki is not evil either. They are a group of mercenaries, bounty hunters. Furthermore, Itachi has a good relationship with team 7.

They are not necessarily friends, but they know each other very well.

I'm also aware that even in this world, their personalities (akatsuki members) are the same as the original ones of the original world.

Rin is featured in the begnning of the second chapter and I tried to maintain her personality intact.

And again, there's a reason for this. It's very hard to try to make sense posting one page per week, there's just few informations and makes a lot of confusion. Some confusion were intentional (like Menma with bad behaviour), but I didin't expected it to kill off the doujin... >_<

You dont need to say sorry, you're the owner of the doujin now that i saw it.

 

He's kind of weird i had the impression that he was an a**hole or being very much Sasuke-like and the part where Sakura says that she likes "dark haired guys" never heard of it neither on the canon or on the manga.

But anyway i'll look forward to the next chapters.


Edited by Dαrkrєrsŧ, 21 November 2013 - 03:46 PM.

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Posted 03 January 2014 - 12:42 AM

Just passing by to wish a happy new year to all of you and to annouciate the return of the doujin!

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Posted 07 January 2014 - 09:30 AM

I really like this doujin  :excited:  Good job on the suspense of Menma's hair! In fact your doujin made me go on a road to ninja spree  :wub: like the one below my signature


Edited by Hanabi, 07 January 2014 - 09:31 AM.

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I can't even say good bye to you for the last time

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#10 Ausakura

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Posted 15 January 2014 - 01:23 PM

Oh, Hanabi! Thank you so much for your apreciation! :D

The one on your signature is very cute, haha! 

 

I would like to inform that the new page is out. Hope you like it! And please, continue giving feedback! ^_^

http://darwiz.devian...ge-29-427084052







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