Finding Naruto
Finding Naruto
Started by Tohno Shiki, Sep 06 2007 07:19 AM
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Posted 06 September 2007 - 07:19 AM
Hi there, I've just posted a new NaruSaku fic, and suggestions on how to improve would be very much appreciated. Thank you very much!
Finding Naruto
Finding Naruto
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Posted 06 September 2007 - 08:06 AM
Well I can't really think of any cits for that, it's got an interesting direction but I will need to see more chapters to really get a feel for it!
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Posted 12 October 2007 - 08:14 AM
Bit late, but chapter 2 is up. I'm working on chapter 3, it should be up soon.
Finding Naruto chapter 2
Finding Naruto chapter 2
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Posted 12 October 2007 - 09:34 AM
I dont mean to sound impatient, but how long do you think it will be before you post the third chapter? 
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Posted 12 October 2007 - 12:10 PM
It should be up by this Sunday. I've actually got 3/4 of it typed up, so it won't take too long to finish.
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Posted 25 October 2007 - 12:25 PM
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Posted 26 October 2007 - 01:36 AM
And it was an awesome chapter, ill leave a more in-depth review later when i get home
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Posted 26 October 2007 - 10:51 AM
Looks very good :thumbs:
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Posted 28 October 2007 - 06:57 PM
This story is looking good! Can't wait for more 
What's Happening with the Naruto series as of now!
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Posted 03 November 2007 - 04:54 PM
Ohhhh, I like this fic! You're in my favorite list and Author Alert! Get Chapter 4 out.....NOW!
Hmmm... BTW... I thought ANBU wore Ninjaken or Ninjato's instead of a Katana? Wasnt a Katana a samurai weapon? A Ninjaken/Ninjato is shorter in length, thus easily drawn, to match the stealthy and fast movements of Ninja. I also remember seeing ANBU in the anime wearing Ninjato/Ninjaken's strapped to their back.
Orochimaru and Sasuke, I think, use Chokuto's.
Hmmm... BTW... I thought ANBU wore Ninjaken or Ninjato's instead of a Katana? Wasnt a Katana a samurai weapon? A Ninjaken/Ninjato is shorter in length, thus easily drawn, to match the stealthy and fast movements of Ninja. I also remember seeing ANBU in the anime wearing Ninjato/Ninjaken's strapped to their back.
Orochimaru and Sasuke, I think, use Chokuto's.
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Posted 03 November 2007 - 07:32 PM
Andrew, get your butt working nowwwww, i've waited for the update for AGES.
You try to know everything , yet in the end, you truly understand nothing ....
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Posted 09 December 2007 - 10:10 PM
QUOTE (Wilson @ Nov 3 2007, 02:32 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Andrew, get your butt working nowwwww, i've waited for the update for AGES.
lol........Wilson. This proves you are a true fan
I like a story as well and looking forward to new chapters :thumbs:
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Posted 10 January 2008 - 07:31 AM
Sqleon, need I remind you that if you that if you do not update soon that I will have to go crazy on you in the LC next time...lol, though I do hope consider procrastination an artform, this is just too much...your laziness has reached epic proportions...
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Posted 10 January 2008 - 08:05 AM
I'm the Leonardo Da Vinci of procrastination and laziness. 
But yeah. I'll get working on the update soon. Really!
But yeah. I'll get working on the update soon. Really!
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Posted 10 January 2008 - 08:23 AM
QUOTE (Sqleon @ Jan 10 2008, 02:05 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
I'm the Leonardo Da Vinci of procrastination and laziness.
But yeah. I'll get working on the update soon. Really!
But yeah. I'll get working on the update soon. Really!
Okay, I'm holding you to it!
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Posted 10 January 2008 - 08:30 PM
QUOTE (Sqleon @ Jan 10 2008, 08:05 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
I'm the Leonardo Da Vinci of procrastination and laziness.
But yeah. I'll get working on the update soon. Really!
But yeah. I'll get working on the update soon. Really!
I'm the Holy Messenger and Prophet of divinity and righteous.
For the sake of humanity, update already!
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Posted 22 January 2008 - 05:30 PM
So...you're halfway through, eh? I'll buy that for now Sqleon...but you're really trying my patience... 
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Posted 22 January 2008 - 10:42 PM
And you're not letting me do what I do best...being lazy! 
I've got a feeling that I won't be allowed to make slow updates anymore...
I've got a feeling that I won't be allowed to make slow updates anymore...
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Posted 22 January 2008 - 11:37 PM
QUOTE (Sqleon @ Jan 22 2008, 04:42 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
And you're not letting me do what I do best...being lazy!
I've got a feeling that I won't be allowed to make slow updates anymore...
I've got a feeling that I won't be allowed to make slow updates anymore...
Good, good...you're catching on.
(evil music) Mwahahaha!!! :devil:
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