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#101 Nes Mikel

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Posted 17 February 2008 - 02:31 PM

I suppose this is a good time as any to let people know I'm still not dead and I'm still working on the story.

Here's a small snippet of the upcoming next chapter, which will hopefully be finished sometime around next week.


The Kyuubi was laughing.

Humans were such simple creatures!

The only thing the nine-tailed demon had done was to throw but a small wrench into the never ending gears of time. Just a small wrench, just a tiny deviation, and already the world outside was spinning out of control, diverting away from its original course just the way the demon liked it. How could the demon not laugh? Humans… they are so simple… so foolish. They do not realize the consequences of their actions. And they would pay dearly for it.

The demon, however, did find it rather amusing that the small memory he had planted in the corner of that little girl’s mind had carried out its mission to the point of perfection. Stifling his laughter as he adjusted five of his nine tails to sit himself into a more comfortable position, he focused his otherworldly powers and carried his vision over and beyond these eternal prison walls and into the free world outside.

Love and hate…

Was it because it was forbidden love? The ancient taboo of an Uchiha marrying a Hyuuga. Did that add to the temptation?

Tragedy and hope…

It is decided then. I will adopt the girl.


And of course… anger and despair.

No! I will not abide by the orders of a traitor!

The Kyuubi grinned. Human were indeed such simple, amusing creatures. Especially that blue-haired girl. The would-be Akatsuki. The young ones were always so easy to manipulate.

Withdrawing his observing invisible presence from the world outside, he retreated back into the darkness of his chambers, allowing his little charade to carry out its course. The wrench he threw was simply for amusement, nothing more. There were other, more important things he should be focusing on now.

Because this time, he would succeed.

He was sick and tired of watching this world born die.

Twenty-two worlds. Twenty-two failures.

But this world… this twenty-third world… he would succeed. Because after so many failed attempts, he had finally taken that first and most important step forward.

His first step towards freedom.

The Kyuubi laughed again.


#102 Gnosismaster

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Posted 18 February 2008 - 07:26 PM

Hey Nes...

There's a site that you might be interested in. Here's the link

http://z14.invisionf...dex.php?act=idx

You'll have to register first before you can see the board but it's a fanfiction board that you might like. I'm Gaara of the Desert there.

#103 Nes Mikel

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Posted 24 March 2008 - 01:03 AM

It's finally finished.

Perforce - Empyreal Paradox, Chapter Six

#104 Gnosismaster

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Posted 21 October 2008 - 04:11 AM

So how's the next part coming along?




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