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#1 kirabook

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Posted 20 February 2016 - 02:00 PM

Hello guys. I've been working on something that MIGHT be coming out this year? It's a Naruto rewrite, but technically not. In fact, it can be considered a work of it's own despite using some characters and concepts from the series of Naruto.

 

This real story starts when the main character is about 19 years old and he moves back to his home town to attend the well-known university there while also passively searching for his parent's identities. (though he was raised by his god-father who he considered his grandpa and lovingly calls gramps)

 

That's all I want to say as I don't want to spoil anything, but below I'll start posting bits and pieces of information. This is going to be a webcomic and it'll have its own reading site and everything. So, I'll update peoples when that happens too. I'm not sold on what I'll name this yet, hence I'll just call it "Project: Rewrite" here. If you have any questions, let me know~

 

Locations:

Coming soon~

 

Characters:

Hinoyama Natsuo

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Hanazono Sakine

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More coming soon~

 

 

5 Great Demons:

Akane

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Lesser Demons:

Coming soon~



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#2 Advaith

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Posted 20 February 2016 - 02:22 PM

Great. :excited:

 

I'm so thankful that we have people like u kirabook with us.

 

Characters looks great 

 

Ur story will be a success and well known.

 

I wish u all the best kirabook.



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Posted 20 February 2016 - 03:54 PM

Hmm that sounds really interesting can't wait to read it. 


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Posted 21 February 2016 - 12:20 AM

I'm really interested! Keep it up! I can't wait to see it!


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Posted 21 February 2016 - 04:14 AM

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Posted 21 February 2016 - 04:43 AM

Seems interesting! Keep us informed about it, please


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Posted 21 February 2016 - 09:27 AM

Awesome. I knew someone out there would do a comic Naruto rewrite. Glad I'm not the only NS author out their there that is doing something like a Naruto rewrite. I wish you good luck, Kira.


Edited by Konoha'sCrimsonFox, 24 February 2016 - 12:04 PM.


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Posted 23 February 2016 - 08:39 PM

Oooo definitely going to read this


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#9 kirabook

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Posted 24 February 2016 - 03:48 AM

More preliminary character designs that might change over time. (Sorry, I'm too lazy to resize these to a reasonable post size) Some characters have names, but I won't say what they are till it's their time in the story. Any character names I give away is purely because they're introduced in the first few chapters.

 

Again, although there's a lot of Naruto themes and obvious character influences.. some characters are gonna look a lot different. But I'm sure you can guess who is who without me telling you.

 

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Akamatsu Kei

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Fujiwara Isami (renamed)

 

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???

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Edited by kirabook, 20 March 2016 - 02:42 AM.


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Posted 24 February 2016 - 06:56 AM

Looks great kira.

 

Go forward u have my full support.



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Posted 26 February 2016 - 10:47 AM

Yeah. Kira does have a chance to become successful as One did with his One-punch webcomic that became so popular that it got an anime and manga adaption. 



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Posted 01 March 2016 - 09:56 PM

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When you read comics (manga), professional or not, what quality are you looking for? Take the image above for example, would you read an entire series that looks like that? (a little more cleaned up of course with proper text and boxes) Or the image below:

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Are these images of reasonable quality (again, with properly drawn boxes and text)? Or do you prefer reading more cleaned up crisp series? I do want to reach a lot of people, but I also want to be able to finish this series in a reasonable amount of time (less than 10 years). Overexerting myself and trying to accomplish a style that I am incapable of or unnatural to me will slow down this project.

Discuss please!



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Posted 02 March 2016 - 02:45 AM

You know, I really love the sketchy look. Cleaned up, of course, is nice. But I like the feeling that it is really a creation of a single author, rather than a comic that is written and edited, cleaned up, inked and colored, and passed through many hands before a reader ever sees it. 

 

The sketchy, more informal look doesn't take away from the manga, to me. Instead it adds movement to the story and characters, and lets me see a little into what the artist was thinking when they were sketching. 

 

And yeah...it lets the artist move through the story quicker when they don't have to stop and meticulously clean every single panel! So that's a great plus! And it will definitely make your work stand on its own. No comparisons that you are trying to duplicate Naruto's style, or any other manga/comic. It will look like your own work. Go sketchy - I love it!



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Posted 02 March 2016 - 01:14 PM

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When you read comics (manga), professional or not, what quality are you looking for? Take the image above for example, would you read an entire series that looks like that? (a little more cleaned up of course with proper text and boxes) Or the image below:

tumblr_inline_o3c8z3htHC1tmk8op_540.png

Are these images of reasonable quality (again, with properly drawn boxes and text)? Or do you prefer reading more cleaned up crisp series? I do want to reach a lot of people, but I also want to be able to finish this series in a reasonable amount of time (less than 10 years). Overexerting myself and trying to accomplish a style that I am incapable of or unnatural to me will slow down this project.

Discuss please!

 

For quality, the plot and story is top priority over art (comics) and writing styles (books/novels) for no matter if its professional or not.

 

I think most important is write/draw in your comfort zone and don't get too stress out about your work not being top notch professional and focus more on the plot, characters and your universe. You have higher chances of reaching a vast audience  and even have professional comic artist stumble upon your work, begging for your work. Here's a prime example according to my previous post.

 

One-Punch Man Webcomic by One (Original)

 

Redrawn by Murata (Manga)

 

I think you will do just great. But I do highly recommend just for a precaution to be prepare for a possible flames a backlash from Naruto pro-enders no matter if it happens or not. I hope you don't cave in because of that. 



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Posted 03 March 2016 - 01:23 PM

I love the sketches.Great work

 

I say what tricksie and konoha said. :yes:

 

You know, I really love the sketchy look. Cleaned up, of course, is nice. But I like the feeling that it is really a creation of a single author, rather than a comic that is written and edited, cleaned up, inked and colored, and passed through many hands before a reader ever sees it. 

 

The sketchy, more informal look doesn't take away from the manga, to me. Instead it adds movement to the story and characters, and lets me see a little into what the artist was thinking when they were sketching. 

 

And yeah...it lets the artist move through the story quicker when they don't have to stop and meticulously clean every single panel! So that's a great plus! And it will definitely make your work stand on its own. No comparisons that you are trying to duplicate Naruto's style, or any other manga/comic. It will look like your own work. Go sketchy - I love it!

this

 

 

For quality, the plot and story is top priority over art (comics) and writing styles (books/novels) for no matter if its professional or not.

 

I think most important is write/draw in your comfort zone and don't get too stress out about your work not being top notch professional and focus more on the plot, characters and your universe. You have higher chances of reaching a vast audience  and even have professional comic artist stumble upon your work, begging for your work. Here's a prime example according to my previous post.

 

One-Punch Man Webcomic by One (Original)

 

Redrawn by Murata (Manga)

 

I think you will do just great. But I do highly recommend just for a precaution to be prepare for a possible flames a backlash from Naruto pro-enders no matter if it happens or not. I hope you don't cave in because of that. 

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#16 kirabook

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Posted 20 March 2016 - 02:46 AM

Some new concept art, and a few I got commissioned to help me with visualization

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On another note, this is the style I'm aiming for when the comic releases. (not just rough drafts like I showed before, but what I actually do want them to look like) So I ask one more time, just to make sureeeee, would you read an entire web series in this style?

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Posted 20 March 2016 - 12:47 PM

If its in your comfort zone and won't delay you from publishing your chapters.



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Posted 26 April 2016 - 02:03 AM

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Posted 28 April 2016 - 08:20 AM

Are teaming up with kaleia?



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#20 kirabook

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Posted 04 February 2017 - 10:53 PM

I have small updates for this, mostly cause everything is under wraps.

 

- The plot is coming along very nicely. More and more this is moving away from its origins in Naruto. I can now say it's more of a compilation of all my favorite things.

 

- I've decided on the programs I'll be using to develop and show off this project. It's nowhere near ready to show off yet.

 

Here is a peek at what I'm aiming for in terms of... uh... style? design? Format? XD Whichever word is appropriate



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