QUOTE (Lloyd_Aurion @ Mar 29 2006, 12:59 AM)
Well, it's an interesting premise, if more than just a bit vague. Certainly well written, and dare I say it, NaruSaku.? But it should definately be finished and uploaded. As for help and suggestions though, what are you looking for? Do you want our opinions on how things should advance? The things that should take place? Be just a bit more specific on what you're looking for and I'll be glad to help however I can.
Yeah I told ya it was still vage. I love lose ends but I keep them in check to make them come clear later. even in 1 or 20 chaps later. For the pairing... who knows? :devil: (tough it's hinted by just being here) But any pairing will have it's work, it won't be a "I saw you so I love ya" It might look like other things but at the end...
and there won't be any god characters or anything like that (maybe only the last boss will be the closest thing, but with good reasons and still a flawed human being). Now about what I want? Not really... like I said I have the essay already planned, with events and everything so it's mostly a beta reader or two.
What would be the deal? first to check punctuation. I'm not a native english speaker (tough I speak it almost perfectly) so that would be a great help.
Second, to help me not get into the mistakes 99.9% of the fics of the community make. I'm not fond of using the kyuubi as Naruto best pal, any character bashing or anything like it. Tough I love psicology so that will be an important element. The angust in Sakura in this small teaser might show a bit of that.
So it's basically to help me keep the characters on check, help with the punctuation and if I make a mistake with any of the characters (Normal and Original ones) to have the guts to tell me "yeah you f***ed up, so fix it already"
Most importantly to have an open mind. If someone wanna try to brainwash me to make it NaruHina, NaruKyuubi or any other crap it won't work and most probably, I won't hear it. Tough that doesn't mean I'm not open for suggestions on events that could take place, how to fill a part, what would you like to read, (as long as it have a base not just because u want to) or even if i'm leaving behind a character.
Too much? probably. And i'm sorry if it is. But u'll earn heaven for it. Or at least help the small number of people who think the Naruto fandom comunity isn't completely lost in the whole yaoi, crapy fics with no deepness and so many other things that invaded it. And that makes it worty. I'm sad to see authors like Geno Calamari, Kraken Ghost, darkwindkaze, Flashfry and so many other excelent writers to leave the community for the cancer that has invaded it. To be honest part of why I didn't began this fic ever since last Octuber was that. To see a complete page with "NaruSasu" in ff.net, mediaminer.org, livejournal communities, and all those places at the end didn't exactly helped my inspiration and much less my spirits.
So you wanna help? I'm a very good guy, even though It might not seem like it. If I act like an ass say it too. If the fic got too stupid or too biased say it. I don't get mad if someone tells me that.
Basically that's it. but even small coments would be good.
If you do.... thanks
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) I said i was gonna start a fic of Naruto and a journey to become stronger. well i just started it, however I would appreciate a bit of help. I have already all the essay of it, and this is about the 15% of chapter 1. Most of the thigs written now (it's just a beta tough) right now make no sense but as the chapter continues to grow it'll all come clear.
