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[pharix]

The lemon also contradicted natural science

for some reason I'm kind of curious now... maybe it's like that thing where people stare at accidents...

[Lid]

Can I add more to this?

Any fanfiction that includes the Kyuubei, in any form possible. No one can write him; it's as if people just generally do not understand the concept of a giant, evil daemon locked within a child. They portray it so embarrassingly bad, that it makes me just want to cry. They turn him into some trash-talking imbecile of a creature or a scandal-chasing, baby-making female-ensnaring ambigiously-sexual'd pathetic mess. He's practically a God on Earth and all people can think to do with him is to put Naruto in heat to make weird furry-babies with human women (or with "Kurama" himself/herself/itself) or destroy everything.

 

HI GUYS I'M TYPING IN BOLD IT'S ME KURAMA! NO, NOT THE ONE FROM YU YU HAKUSHO, THAT WOULD BE ORIGINAL. NO, IT'S JUST ME, YOUR TRASH-TALKING HIP-HOPPIN' DAEMON FROM GOD- I MEAN, KAMI KNOWS WHERE. CAPSLOCK MEANS I'M DAEMONIC, AMIRITE

 

You forgot Kurama calling Naruto "kit" every sentence.

[Kamina-Yoshi]

 

You forgot Kurama calling Naruto "kit" every sentence.

 

Ah, man, that kits me every time!
Rim-shot.

[sushi.]

for some reason I'm kind of curious now... maybe it's like that thing where people stare at accidents...

What do you mean?

[pharix]

this lemon that defies natural science lol

[Kamina-Yoshi]

What do you mean?

They mean that they are interested in seeing the bad/"science-defying" lemon, and are comparing it to how people always look at a car-crash or a train-wreck out of curiosity. I, for example, periodically watch bad Sci-Fi channel original movies or those of the same cailbre because I enjoy watching the train-wreck of a performance it gives. It's the sense of watching something slowly or quickly crashing or changing, or perhaps seeing the aftermath (the wreckage of a car-crash) and enjoying it/being mystified by it.

[Jenskott]

 

 

You know, when it comes to character bashing, I don't find it disturbing, I just find it immature. If your sole purpose of writing a story is simply to hate on a character, it just makes the writer look like a petty child.

 

I would agree with it being inmature rather disturbing... but often a disturbing fic has character-bashing, or the writer is being driven to writing disturbing scenes by his/her hatred towards a character. So in mind they are nearly linked.

 

 

 

Can I add more to this?

Any fanfiction that includes the Kyuubei, in any form possible. 

 

Fics where Kyuubi has a important role almost always are very, very, VERY annoying or outright disturbing, I agree.

 

I agree with Lid; you forgot mentioning Kurama calling Naruto "kit". Whence that rubbish came?

 

 

 

 

this lemon that defies natural science lol

 

 

You are speaking about that spawn of Satan called "MalePreg" fics, or merely completely irrealistic lemons?

 

 

 

for some reason I'm kind of curious now... maybe it's like that thing where people stare at accidents...

What do you mean?

 

 

I think he is talking about how people gets fascinated with the sickest things. Such like when you are watching the news, something horrible gets reported -such like a traffic accident- and spite of you are finding it sick, you can not look away.

[sushi.]

Details about that lemon I read

Naruto's manhood was 12 inches. hehehe, are you punking with me...

Also, after a man has ejaculated, he is done for for about half an hour. Not in that lemon tho.

 

That's what I remember. I read it a while ago.

[Kamina-Yoshi]

Details about that lemon I read

Naruto's manhood was 12 inches. hehehe, are you punking with me...

Also, after a man has ejaculated, he is done for for about half an hour. Not in that lemon tho.

 

That's what I remember. I read it a while ago.

That sounds like every lemon I've ever read (then again, I usually stick to the ones that have one to three chapters. I see 27 chapters, and I go "LOLNO".

[desaix]

Some of the things I see mentioned here sound more like pet peeves rather than things that should rank among "most disturbing."  I mean, I was expecting discussions of that one fic I once found on AdultFanfiction.net where Naruto was a demonic slavemaster indulged by the village, with Sakura helping him build a harem of masochistic girls who enjoyed being brutally tortured and whatnot (I forget the title -- something like "Chained by the Whirlpool" or something like that).

[xxRomanceGirlxx]

I agree so much with Kurama calling Naruto "kit" in every sentence. I can't honestly name one fanfiction I've read where Kurama isn't using the term kit when he was a role in it and I truly have no idea how that senselessness became so popular.  I'm still curious to know who on earth started that annoying trend.

[questdrivencollie]

I've run across several pairing Naruto with one of his parents. All I wanted was some cute parent/child fluff...not incest.

 

Hmm....there was this super creepy one where Naruto married Sakura and Sasuke married Hinata, but Sasuke and Hinata both loved Naruto. So Sasuke takes three of Hinata's eggs, and transfers his three of his sperm to eggs, and fertilizes them with Naruto's sperm. Then he kinda does an artificial insemination thing so that Hinata has his and Naruto's babies.

That was one effed-up fanfic.

[redrose3443]

Eh. Incest doesn't bother me since I don't read it, I'm not a yaoi fan and don't read those stories, but if it's a side pairing and doesn't go into description then I'm fine with it. I check out yuri once in a while, when I'm bored as hell with nothing to read, cause I like crack ships. I hate high school AUs cause they're all the same, just with a different pairing, but I do like AUs that are still in the ninja world and I like Sakura time travel stories.

 

Anyway, there's this one fanfic called " Gomen Naruto-kun", where apparently Sakura loves Naruto so much, she rapes him and does a lot of messed up things to him. They also seem to have Hinata slowly finding out about it or something and is trying to get Naruto and exposed/punish Sakura or whatever. I didn't read the story, but I always check out reviews before I do to see if the story is any good and that's what I've gathered.

[Luna]

I've run across several pairing Naruto with one of his parents. All I wanted was some cute parent/child fluff...not incest.
 
Hmm....there was this super creepy one where Naruto married Sakura and Sasuke married Hinata, but Sasuke and Hinata both loved Naruto. So Sasuke takes three of Hinata's eggs, and transfers his three of his sperm to eggs, and fertilizes them with Naruto's sperm. Then he kinda does an artificial insemination thing so that Hinata has his and Naruto's babies.
That was one effed-up fanfic.

What kind of hot mess Is this?!!!!!!!! EWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!

[Lid]

I'm also surprised when I see fanfic writers make it seem like Sakura has a multiple personality trait going on. All that inner Sakura was in the manga was what she was thinking of which usually contrasted from what she was actually saying. The reason we don't see inner Sakura anymore is because Sakura speaks her mind for the most part.

 

Yet authors make it seem like Sakura has this whole other persona that she has conversations with.

[questdrivencollie]

What kind of hot mess Is this?!!!!!!!! EWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!

IKR, and not to mention it involved non-consensual in order for Sasuke to get Naruto's sperm. And in the end it still ended up NaruSasu, as if it's okay to use someone else's body without permission because you "love" them.

I didn't read the whole thing, but the parts I did read...well, as above posts put it, it's like not being able to look away from a car wreck.

 

Another super disturbing one was a teenage Sakura being babysitter to an 8 year old Naruto and raping him. It's like...how can people think this stuff is okay??? I was involved in a case of sexual assault as a young kid, it's NOT okay!

[questdrivencollie]

I'm also surprised when I see fanfic writers make it seem like Sakura has a multiple personality trait going on. All that inner Sakura was in the manga was what she was thinking of which usually contrasted from what she was actually saying. The reason we don't see inner Sakura anymore is because Sakura speaks her mind for the most part.

 

Yet authors make it seem like Sakura has this whole other persona that she has conversations with.

I've seen that, yeah. 

I've also seen people give Hinata an "inner Hinata". And if you ask me when they do so they ruin her character by making her into...hm, what's the word for opposite of tsundre?

Edited by questdrivencollie, 05 June 2014 - 05:12 PM.

[Iwantbuns]

I've seen plenty of Minato x Naruko. Those have probably scarred me for life..

 

And I try to look up Itachi and Sasuke fanfiction, but I usually come up with a lot of ItaSasu. It's preetty disturbing in my opinion o_o

[questdrivencollie]

People will pair anything it seems. I was joking with my friend that next thing you know there'll be a fanfic where Naruto falls in love with a tree and they have little tree babies. That would be the most annoying tree in the world, saying "Believe it!" everytime you walk by.

Edited by questdrivencollie, 05 June 2014 - 05:54 PM.

[Iwantbuns]

People will pair anything it seems. I was joking with my friend that next thing you know there'll be a fanfic where Naruto falls in love with a tree and they have little tree babies. That would be the most annoying tree in the world, saying "Believe it!" everytime you walk by.

 

Ohh my god XD I'm dying of laughter