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#1 Dalton.T.R

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Posted 03 May 2012 - 11:25 AM

Ok, I know thisis for the fanfiction writers, but I don't know where else to go on this site. I'm writing a book called Chris Lynheart, and I do plan to publish this whenever I finish it. The story is going well, but there's more to this story than just writing.

For this book I'm trying to come up with my own land, and my own languages. I have already made an alphabet, but not too sure how I want the words to be prenounced or said. I was thinking maybe the "A" would have a "Z" sound too it, but that's something I'll have to handle on my own.

Has anyone here ever made their own alphabet or language? If so, can you give me a few tips? Thanks biggrin.gif

And let me know if you guys want to know what my story is about. I don't have a problem sharing with a few people. Especially NS fans smile.gif

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Posted 03 May 2012 - 05:42 PM

Never made an alphabet but I do know that for the elder scrolls V: Skyrim they made up an entire alphabet and language for the game
(the language of the dragons so to speak) should be easy enough to find how they did it. Read about it somewhere way before the game was released.

Hope to have been of help, btw what's the story about?

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Posted 03 May 2012 - 08:31 PM

In the series Crest of the Stars/Banner of the Stars, the Abh language is also made up.

If you need some help for grammar, I'd base the grammar off the simplified Esperanto language. It's an artificial language that has rules with no exceptions (unlike every other language under the sun! damn irregular verbs) and it can be a good skeleton to build a different language with. Languages can't be copyrighted, so you can use it free for the taking happy.gif

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Posted 03 May 2012 - 10:02 PM

QUOTE (Torxe @ May 3 2012, 12:42 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Never made an alphabet but I do know that for the elder scrolls V: Skyrim they made up an entire alphabet and language for the game
(the language of the dragons so to speak) should be easy enough to find how they did it. Read about it somewhere way before the game was released.

Hope to have been of help, btw what's the story about?

My book is more or less inspired by Naruto. However, it's still a total universe apart.

My books name is titled Chris Lynheart. It's a story of a fourteen year old boy who is a failed U.S military experiment who was supposed to wipe Al Qaeda and Taliban off the face of the earth. He can controll all of earths ellements such as: Fire, Water, Air, Earth, and Lightning. He also has contoll of the supernatuarl ellements of Darkness and Shadow. This is all because of the demonic force sealed within his body. The spirit of the Grim Reaper.

Chris has no friends, no family and only has one dream in his life. To meet his mother and learn of his families past.

About two years later he discoveres he's part of a lost and ancient blood line with one of the most dangerouse assassin brotherhoods ever known to mankind...the Seventeen, and is also a last descendent of George washington and Abraham Lincoln because of his parents blood lines.

Although no one who knows him hates him, a new girl at his school named Jessica Holland is the first to reach out to him and pull him out of the darkness. With her "gift" she can see a person's past by looking into their eyes. She can tell what kind of past he has and knows everyone has left him for dead. She Welcomes him into her life with open arms and grants him a first friend.
Chris leaves DC for six years and returnes with full mastery of the ellements and a new look. Unlike the government, Chris and his new friends are aware of a new rising terror group known as the Agroneese who have teamed with Russia, Al Qaeda, and the Taliban and have risen an army of Twenty-five-million strong, and atre targeting every NATO nation on the globe.

The U.S government does nothing about the threat and ignores every peice of evedence given to them. Finaly on his last straw, Chris over throws the Governemnt by ingulfing half of DC into flames and destroying 2 of the 3 captol buildings. He takes the U.S military into his own hands and creates three new branches: U.S Army Vipers, U.S.M.C Scorpions, and the U.S Navy Sharks. He raises an allied military force of just under sixteen-million to over 150 million and declares all out war on Iran and afghanistan.

Eventually, Chris finds out he's fighting a losing battle. He turns to the lost legend of the forgotten "Land of the Unknown" and calls for them to help. Since he is a long lost heir to the throne, they answer his call and unleash their full military strengh on the Agroneese forces. Immagine wing spans on some species of dragon being over six-hundred yards, or scorpions the size of five houses. But this is basically an entire other serise by its self.

Edited by Dalton (I stink at names), 03 May 2012 - 10:05 PM.


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Posted 03 May 2012 - 10:03 PM

QUOTE (Catwho @ May 3 2012, 03:31 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
In the series Crest of the Stars/Banner of the Stars, the Abh language is also made up.

If you need some help for grammar, I'd base the grammar off the simplified Esperanto language. It's an artificial language that has rules with no exceptions (unlike every other language under the sun! damn irregular verbs) and it can be a good skeleton to build a different language with. Languages can't be copyrighted, so you can use it free for the taking happy.gif

Awsome! Thanks biggrin.gif

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Posted 03 May 2012 - 10:17 PM

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Karly, I don't know if you can hear this. I am not a believer, I haven't been since Sheryl died. But if you can, I want you to know that I'm truly sorry for everything bad I've ever said about you. When you were suffering, I should have been there to help you. I should have visited. I should have encouraged you to leave the house and get a job, to be active and alive the way you used to be.

I promise that I will do everything that I can to be successful and a good person, to make you proud the way you would have wanted me to. No matter what I said, I loved you. And I will always love you. Rest in Peace, you will never be forgotten.




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