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#21 Luna

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Posted 16 November 2016 - 08:57 PM

Just finshed Chapter 2. Will be reading it over for mistakes and such. I definitely need a beta tho. >.<


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Posted 16 November 2016 - 11:33 PM

Chapter 2: https://www.fanficti...1/2/Emperor-Uzu


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Posted 17 November 2016 - 02:25 AM

Great start! Its actually pretty interesting. And I changed the title for you. Keep it up, Luna! :thumb:


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Posted 17 November 2016 - 02:45 PM

Great start! Its actually pretty interesting. And I changed the title for you. Keep it up, Luna! :thumb:

 

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Posted 17 November 2016 - 11:49 PM

How often you plan to update the fanfic? I just read it and I wish to know the end of it :wink:


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Posted 18 November 2016 - 12:28 AM

How often you plan to update the fanfic? I just read it and I wish to know the end of it :wink:

I'm actually working on the third chapter right now. This story has ways to go unfortunately and I have other multi chapter stories to finish but I think I'll focus on this one the most seeing as it's fun to write. 


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Posted 18 November 2016 - 01:43 AM

Are you going to write the sasuke and naruto bond or are you gonna not overdo that like what kishi did? I prefer not overdoing it. 



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Posted 18 November 2016 - 01:45 AM

Are you going to write the sasuke and naruto bond or are you gonna not overdo that like what kishi did? I prefer not overdoing it. 

 

Yikes. Not at all. I have plans for them but it's definitely not going to be like canon. You'll have to wait and see though. :)


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Posted 18 November 2016 - 05:44 AM

Chapter 3: https://www.fanficti...1/3/Emperor-Uzu


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Posted 18 November 2016 - 09:45 AM

I'm actually working on the third chapter right now. This story has ways to go unfortunately and I have other multi chapter stories to finish but I think I'll focus on this one the most seeing as it's fun to write. 

Ahhh, that's good to hear if you focus on this one. I have a little favorite of NS fanfic and I think this is one of those.

 


Edited by Popuri, 18 November 2016 - 10:06 AM.

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Posted 18 November 2016 - 12:52 PM

Ahhh, that's good to hear if you focus on this one. I have a little favorite of NS fanfic and I think this is one of those.

 

Don't worry. She'll have to use it when they get married...eventually LOL


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Posted 18 November 2016 - 12:57 PM

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I guess it was only a matter of time until the trash came out. LMAO 


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Posted 18 November 2016 - 10:14 PM

Whats the rating of this fic? Is it m for mature for sex and violence?  



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Posted 18 November 2016 - 10:42 PM

Whats the rating of this fic? Is it m for mature for sex and violence?  

Mature. I don't know if there is a thread for those types of fics but you won't see alot of sex  until later chapters hopefully. If there is a thread the mods could possibly move it for me. >.<


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Posted 18 November 2016 - 11:25 PM

Mature. I don't know if there is a thread for those types of fics but you won't see alot of sex  until later chapters hopefully. If there is a thread the mods could possibly move it for me. >.<

I don't see that kind of thread.
Lindenbay's Convergence has been moved it seems. But I don't know how we can access the m-rated fics.
I used to put my date of birth but it didn't work, I couldn't access the thread (if there any).

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Posted 19 November 2016 - 11:12 AM

https://www.fanficti...1/4/Emperor-Uzu


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Posted 19 November 2016 - 12:00 PM

https://www.fanficti...1/4/Emperor-Uzu

Wowowowow That's fast :argh: :rainbowsheep:

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Posted 19 November 2016 - 12:54 PM

Wowowowow That's fast :argh: :rainbowsheep:

Ikr lol. Starting chapter 5 today


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Posted 19 November 2016 - 01:00 PM

Ikr lol. Starting chapter 5 today

What?! :argh: :lol: Hard work, yes? :lol:

Looking forward to it in the middle of the stressful thesis :lol:


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Posted 19 November 2016 - 10:46 PM

So I plan to introduce Sai. I've found myself coming to love his character and I always liked his dynamic with team 7 so expect to see him soon. His character would be a nice balance with Naruto and Sakura's character. So there we have it. The three main heroes. (using the trio inspiration from Samurai Champloo) :)


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