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#1 LuckyChi7

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Posted 15 March 2018 - 02:40 PM

As promised everyone I'm creating an entirely new thread dedicated to the pages of the doujin  I found from the other day. Wasn't exactly sure where this particular thread fits so I decided to just place it here. That being said here is the first chapter of the AU High School Series, You, Like a Sun Flower.

 

 

 

 

You, Like an Sunflower Chapter 1

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

That is the end of Chapter 1   everyone, I will say this, it's not a story that I created just thought I'd share with all of you guys a different atmosphere with the characters. That and I'm also liking the small tweaks with some of the characters compared to what they have in the main series. So go and ahead and share your thoughts on this first chapter. 


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#2 jak123

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Posted 15 March 2018 - 03:03 PM

That's cute. How many chapters are there?



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Posted 15 March 2018 - 06:38 PM

I believe there is about four or five out right now. 


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Posted 15 March 2018 - 11:56 PM

I'm not entirely on board with sakura calling hinata a goddess

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Posted 16 March 2018 - 12:05 AM

I believe there is about four or five out right now. 

Well post'em all when you get the chance. XD



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Posted 16 March 2018 - 01:15 AM

I'll probably post them in like individual waves like right now. 

 

 

 

 

You, Like A Sunflower Chapter 2:

 

 

 

 

That's pretty much chapter 2, I'll say this it's not perfect in terms of the things I've read, but overall so far I'm liking what's happening. ALso a little fyi, the author is gonna end this series NaruSaku just incase anyone's worried. Then again I wouldn't be sharing this here if that was the case cause NH and SS are  :sick: .  That being said lets enjoy this story!

 

 

I'll post Chapter 3  soon. 


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#7 Liu bie

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Posted 16 March 2018 - 03:36 AM

For a  shoujo this would be a good oneshot.


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#8 LuckyChi7

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Posted 16 March 2018 - 03:18 PM

Here is the next part ;

 

 

You, Like a Sunflower Chapter 3:

 

 

 

 

 

I'll post Chapter 4 on here in like a couple hours. 


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Posted 16 March 2018 - 03:25 PM

Seems like there's a good deal to attention in this, and it also is really cute stuff :D



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Posted 16 March 2018 - 06:11 PM

So whose ready for the next part. 

 

 

You, Like a Sunflower Chapter 4:

 

 

 

Cliffhanger ending with Itachi hiding with Sasuke looking back whatever could it be? Find out in Chapter 5. 

 

I'll share it here soon after I finish working on the chapter for my book. 


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#11 LuckyChi7

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Posted 16 March 2018 - 09:30 PM

Alright I'm not exactly finished writing the current chapter of my book because it's very crucial. So in order to make sure it's  perfect with little things to fix whenever I get to the point of editing.  

 

 

That being said I'll be sharing the next part to the doujin which i do wanna say it is still ongoing at this point not exactly finished, but there are a couple more chapters until I fully catch everyone up to speed. 

 

 

For now  enjoy,

 

 

You, Like a Sunflower Chapter 5:

 

 

 

 

Wow I got to say I got a lot more emotion out of this between Naruto and Sasuke in just this one little doujin chapter then i did in the second half of the original series. I'd like to hear what you're guys thoughts are? and I'm also really enjoying the bits between Naruto and Sakura they're just beautiful. 

 

 

I'll post Chapter 6 and 7 at the same time in next post sense those are the only two remaining to catch up, and I'll have them posted here when i finish dealing with some stuff both with writing and just errands I've holding off. Till then everyone. 


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#12 Liu bie

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Posted 16 March 2018 - 11:04 PM

Fics, doujins first time I saw  a emo Naruto XD.


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Posted 17 March 2018 - 12:14 AM

Time for the epic catch up split into two posts of course. 

 

 

btw if anyone remembers the little preview I shared from the debate thread, this is the chapter it happens in. 

 

 

You, Like a Sunflower Chapter 6:

 

 

 

 

Now it's onto Chapter 7. 


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Posted 17 March 2018 - 12:26 AM

HURRAY WE"RE OFFICIALLY FULLY CAUGHT UP!!!

 

 

 

You, Like a Sunflower Chapter 7:

 

 

 

 

Now that we'e officially caught up what are your thoughts so far? I believe the author has said the chapters come out every Wednesday. So we will have Chapter 8 coming out this upcoming Wednesday the 21st, but 28th we won't have one due to a busy schedule on the author's end. 


Edited by LuckyChi7, 11 April 2018 - 05:21 PM.

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Posted 17 March 2018 - 01:23 AM

I really NS shoujo anime  official something like Clannad or Ore Monogatari.


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Posted 17 March 2018 - 04:09 AM

I kinda wish this had more of Sakura gushing over Sasuke before realizing her feelings. Just because it would be all the sweeter when she realizes her feelings for Naruto.



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Posted 20 March 2018 - 10:10 PM

New chapter is out everyone!

 

 

You, Like a Sunflower Chapter 8:

 

 

 

 

 

I wasn't exactly so sure about the whole thing with Hinata's side of the things in the beginning, but when we got to the end it did make alot of sense. My favorite stuff and the real highlight was between Naruto and Sakura especially when he was comforting her it was touching.  Neji at the very end was nice showcasing to be a good brother/cousin for Hinata. I also really curious to seeing how things are going to transpire when the next chapter comes out. 


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Posted 24 March 2018 - 12:30 PM

I'm embarrassed to admit, but in shoujo mangas I usually root for the shy/nice girls and really dislike the loud main character girls. This doujin is really cute but what I would wish to happen is Sakura having a crush on Sasuke and not realizing that she loves Naruto. I get the feeling that she already forgot about Sasuke lol. It's a bit too rushed, even though I enjoy it very much! And in that Sasuke scene I got the feeling that this is a SasuNaru manga :lmao:

But: ShikaIno!!!!!!!

(also I missed seeing Neji's handsome face)


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Posted 27 March 2018 - 08:13 PM

I'm embarrassed to admit, but in shoujo mangas I usually root for the shy/nice girls and really dislike the loud main character girls. This doujin is really cute but what I would wish to happen is Sakura having a crush on Sasuke and not realizing that she loves Naruto. I get the feeling that she already forgot about Sasuke lol. It's a bit too rushed, even though I enjoy it very much! And in that Sasuke scene I got the feeling that this is a SasuNaru manga :lmao:

But: ShikaIno!!!!!!!

(also I missed seeing Neji's handsome face)

 

you know the funny thing is in Nisekoi the life of life shounen jump series I was actually rooting for Onodera for a certain point till I finally admitted at how great Chitoge was as a character and her relationship with Raku had more chemistry and felt more organic. I totally get it though, having Sakura start off with a crush on Sasuke could've worked, but it is what it is I'm just actually happy there's something that I'm feeling invested with when it comes to Naruto even if it is just a high school doujin series.

 

 

How do you feel about the way all the characters are being handled? 

 

 

Right now the big standouts for me is Naruto's character, and Sakura's. Though it is kinda interesting seeing her and Hinata having a friendship thing going on too.


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Posted 28 March 2018 - 05:07 PM

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