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[Selun_chen]

If what you're saying is already planned then I suppose this story will last for many chapters, which is good. There are too many lose ends to tie up quickly. Aw, and don't worry, once a story gets my interest I'll follow it till the end.

( I don't know about your future scenes but I keep envisioning a final battle when naruto, who has established his title, and his loyal anbu hunt down sakura for a final confession of her sins only to encounter that Itachi has also caught up to her as well...pretty weird huh?)

Sakura confessing her sins? Well - I would say we haven't heard the final story about what she has been doing in the Rock yet. Naruto doesn't now - and he doesn't know that he almost killed Sakura when going Kyuubi.
Yes, defiantly too many loose ends.......but I am glad that someone will follow it to the end! makes me happy!

[Pepilia]

Naruto doesn't now - and he doesn't know that he almost killed Sakura when going Kyuubi.
Yes, defiantly too many loose ends.......but I am glad that someone will follow it to the end! makes me happy!

True, I forgot about that scene...
Ah well I'll stop bothering you for now so that you can finish up the chapter.

[Selun_chen]

True, I forgot about that scene...
Ah well I'll stop bothering you for now so that you can finish up the chapter.

Hahaha . you can't borther me ...I finished the chapter last night. All I need to do is wait for my beta-reader to move his ass away from the couch and check it X3 hehe

chapter 20

Chapter 21
Gaara has an interesting proposal for Sakura, and not just that - it seems that Naruto isn't all to happy about Tohru figuring out that she is back in the camp.
And what is the whole deal with Itachi?

[Hopestar]

Very interesting please to say the story is brought up fabulously. When will Naruto forgive Sakura so they'll be able to move on this, I mean its been a year and its not healthy to carry such grudges because they burn bridges with other people involve. Why would he be upset when Tohru reunites with Sakura since she has nothing to do with their situation?

[Selun_chen]

Very interesting please to say the story is brought up fabulously. When will Naruto forgive Sakura so they'll be able to move on this, I mean its been a year and its not healthy to carry such grudges because they burn bridges with other people involve. Why would he be upset when Tohru reunites with Sakura since she has nothing to do with their situation?

Ooooh - for many good reasons that it I can say. And yes, defiantly not healthy holding unto grudges like that - but Naruto defiantly has not got the time to actually forgive her. It is not easy forgiving when you're in the middle of a war.
And Naruto's reasons for not letting Tohru see Sakura has something to do with Akatsuki.......

[Pepilia]

Excellent chapter. I already gave a full review of your story back in FF.net but I forgot to add something.

How many shinobi are in the camp respectively and how is the situation back in the leaf village ( you know concerning the coup )?

Also do you have a deviant art account? Cause I think I saw a fan art of your story.

[Selun_chen]

Excellent chapter. I already gave a full review of your story back in FF.net but I forgot to add something.

How many shinobi are in the camp respectively and how is the situation back in the leaf village ( you know concerning the coup )?

Also do you have a deviant art account? Cause I think I saw a fan art of your story.

Right (just got home from Oxford - so my reply is most likely late)

Hmmm - a fair amount of good shinobis from Konoha has managed to escape - so about 75-100 konoha shinobi/refugees in the camp - along with about the same amount of shinobis from suna, however, those from Suna gets replaced once in a while.

Konoha situation is supposed to be hidden for now, since I'll reveal to much if I say something now.

Uuuh - I indeed have - I actually believe I made the fanart myself XD haha - www.selun-chen.deviantart.com

[Selun_chen]

chapter 21

chapter 22
I haven't thought that far yet..............




and I bet you know who is reincarnated by now....

[Pepilia]

Got back from spring break and have been lazy visiting here, but I am glad to see you have updated!
Very happy you explained about the camp system, extra descriptions always help. But now you left me wondering more.
Oh and there were a few grammar mistakes but it didn't hurt the content at all.

I hope you still have the inspiration to complete it.

[Selun_chen]

Got back from spring break and have been lazy visiting here, but I am glad to see you have updated!
Very happy you explained about the camp system, extra descriptions always help. But now you left me wondering more.
Oh and there were a few grammar mistakes but it didn't hurt the content at all.

I hope you still have the inspiration to complete it.

yup - I reread it this morning and found the mistakes myself (tend to skip them when I just write...kind of a problem)

I do have the inspiration, but....I just have to figure out how to illustrate it.

[Deidara Lover]

I just read chapter 21 of Rokudaime, and throught out the story, I've been thinking this:

What happened to NaruSaku????!!!!????!!!!!

[Selun_chen]

I just read chapter 21 of Rokudaime, and throught out the story, I've been thinking this:

What happened to NaruSaku????!!!!????!!!!!

Narusaku can't be the main-focus all the time, it is the main-pairing, and it *will* happen - but right now there are certain events that needs to be cleared before I can do Narusaku well. I cannot sat anything else or else I would sort of spoil how they would get together.

(and I don't rush the pairing)

[SakuNaruLover]

glad to hear it

I really like your story, please update soon.

[Pepilia]

Read the latest chapter and what a relief! The angst is over between naruto and sakura (for now).

You know, Sakura sure has gotten quite a few unwanted admirers...of the deadly kind XD Seriously, she is like a cat with nine lives! She should be down to 2 I think. Is the story concluding soon? Because there still some unanswered questions.

Ah well continue with this wonderful tale!

[Selun_chen]

Read the latest chapter and what a relief! The angst is over between naruto and sakura (for now).

You know, Sakura sure has gotten quite a few unwanted admirers...of the deadly kind XD Seriously, she is like a cat with nine lives! She should be down to 2 I think. Is the story concluding soon? Because there still some unanswered questions.

Ah well continue with this wonderful tale!

Hehe - I simply just decided that I needed some happyness in the story - and it ended up as Narusaku. (which will go on for at least ONE chapter)

I tried to count how many chapters I approximatly have left. I have planned out 7 + a long epilogue, and then it will be over. I have thought about doing a sequel, but I don't think I will do it - Roku is not that great (in my head XD)

[Pepilia]

I suppose you have been busy lately though I hope you are continuing the story.

[Selun_chen]

I suppose you have been busy lately though I hope you are continuing the story.

Oh, Yeah - I am rather busy. Upcomming examns and tests, and it's my 18th birthday soon, so yeah, busy busy. I do have many ideas for chapters and so, but haven't got the time to somehow write them down.