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#1 Jameshawking

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Posted 15 February 2006 - 05:39 PM

Okay, very simple. Very simple indeed. All I want is a Naruto remake? You know, a really good one. Obviously it should be NaruSaku, but here's the catch, ready for it?







NARUTO CAN'T BE A GOD! I'm sick and tired of those stupid fanfictions where some mysterious force changes Naruto forever and he suddenly has a harem and can kill anyone he wants to. Make him strong, make him smarter if you want, but keep it in character. Naruto will never be a genius and won't just wake up with the ability to kill Orochimaru. If you want a good one to set an example, read Black Destiny. It's NaruIno but still very good. Anyway, I'll cut off my yelling now.

#2 LokiNishizaki

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Posted 15 February 2006 - 06:32 PM

Well, I'm working on a fic like that right now. I'm in the middle of editing the first few chapters to post it on fanfiction.net.

The problem with those fanfics isn't that they make Naruto into a god, it's more like they make everyone else into idiots.

In my fanfiction, Naruto is essentially a demon. That means that he has demon like strengh(when he uses the appropriate chakra anyway). But that doesn't mean he can kill jounin. Far from it. He may be as strong or stronger than some, but you don't become a jounin on strengh alone. It takes far more than that. So even though Naruto's strong, as it is he won't be able to kill Orochimaru, or beat Kakashi, or Kurenai, not alone anyway. He'll probably injure them, but that's all.

Did you see the personal statistics in the Data book? In there, they have Naruto's stats as(5 is the maximum and ? being off the chart):

Ninjutsu:3
Taijutsu:2
Genjutsu:1
Intelligence: 1.5
Force:3
Speed:3
Stamina:4
Seal Knowledge:1

In my fanfic, his stats become:


Ninjutsu:3
Taijutsu:3
Genjutsu:1
Intelligence: 2.5
Force:5
Speed:4
Stamina:?
Seal Knowledge:1

In any case, Orochimaru and Akatsuki are just the beginning. He'll have tougher things to fight.
In these demon days, It's so cold inside
So hard for a good soul to survive
You can't even trust the air you breathe
Because mother earth wants us all to leave

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#3 Jameshawking

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Posted 15 February 2006 - 07:47 PM

Holy...Tougher than Oro and Akatsuki? Damn. Anyway, I'm glad someone is making a good Naruto remake. Though isn't it a bit odd that they'd have his Ninjutsu higher than his Taijutsu when he basically specializes in that?

Any other takers on the challenge?

#4 Vespar

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Posted 16 February 2006 - 02:17 AM

Hmm... I'm already writing a fic like that.
Not a good fic, mind you, but I think I'm doing well enough.

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Posted 21 February 2006 - 06:57 AM

I have one in the works, but I don't really want to start it until I finish the rest of my fanfictions. Like "The Chronicles" and "His Journey." Besides I'm still brainstorming.




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