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Me Enemies Are Many. My Equals Are None


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#1 Dalton.T.R

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Posted 11 August 2016 - 10:01 PM

My enemies are many. My equals are none.

 

From their arrogance, they claimed the west would never be reunited.

 

In their ignorance, they claimed I wasn't fit to be a leader.

 

Within the ashes, they claimed there was no empire to be built.

 

Because of their defiance, they claimed the Middle East would never be conquered.

 

Giving to their fear, they claimed the Agroneese would never be defeated.

 

Now they say nothing.

 

I have risen from the mere insect I was to the most powerful General on the planet. I fight not for what is right, but for what must be done.

Civilizations and cultures have vanished under my command. Where an enemy makes himself known, I rain down upon him like a raging storm bringing thunder and death.

 

I take what I wish, I spare nothing.

 

They beg for mercy, but I have none to give.

 

Some claim not to fear me, they die braver than most.

 

I am Chris Lynheart.



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Posted 12 August 2016 - 11:24 PM

I'm gonna be the first to respond here cus no one else did so I have to ask, what do you mean to say with this poem/book extract/introduction? What kind of thread is this, are you asking for a review or are you marketing your book?

I'm genuinly curious I won't grill you for whatever, it was just a little confusing and I wanna help out cus I'm sure you want responses.

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#3 Dalton.T.R

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Posted 14 August 2016 - 04:23 PM

I'm gonna be the first to respond here cus no one else did so I have to ask, what do you mean to say with this poem/book extract/introduction? What kind of thread is this, are you asking for a review or are you marketing your book?

I'm genuinly curious I won't grill you for whatever, it was just a little confusing and I wanna help out cus I'm sure you want responses.

I just got bored and wanted to write something that came to mind. 

 

Chris Lynheart is one of my book characters, so....yeah. 






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