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[narusaku256]

Wow! I mean...just WOW! Now, this one is one of my favourite omakes! :)

[ns.Believe.It]

NaruSaku Day.. Yesssss!!! A very sweet story. I'm fast becoming a big fan of your writing 

[starlitestarbrite]

*a very special omake*
[author note summary: an anti-bullying campaighn-like commercial!...]
*naruto[naruto], ichigo[bleach], luffy[one piece], natsu[fairy tale] are all sitting in a stadium-auditorium-thing*
ichigo: i'm ichigo from bleach
luffy: luffy from one piece
naruto: naruto from naruto
natsu: natsu from fairytale
*a live action non anime girl with blonde hair comes up*
girl: i'm lauren collins...i played the character paige on degrassi: the next generation.
naruto: HEEEY! -whines- THIS OMAKE'S FOR ANIME, AND ANIME FANS ONLY!
lauren: um...hon. that's what we're here to talk about.
naruto: eh?
lauren: i'm here to indicate, and explain along with these nice guys' about something very important...bullying. it comes in all communities, cultures, no matter where your from, what, or how you believe, or anything.it comes in all forms'
natsu: bashing, and name calling.
luffy: attacking someone for their beliefe, and, or opinion
ichigo: teasing, or making fun of someone, or saying offensive things towards, to, or about them.
naruto: or gossiping behinde someones back, hatefulness of any kind
lauren: this doesn't just happen in person. but, online as well. this is called cyberbullying, and is just as bad. even though many say "it's just the internet it's not a big deal"...
naruto: it could be to someone else. because you never know what they're not telling you. noone can see, hear, or know the whole story, or why someone may feel like they do.
luffy: this also happens in the gamer, and anime community. fanwars...often shippers. there are times when criticisim turns to arguements'
natsu: arguements turn to hate
ichigo: hate turns to war
naruto: war turns to death.
lauren: so, just because the characters' may be fictional. don't forget the people your arguing with, or attacking are NOT. they are real. and also if these characters were real would you still be fighting over who should be with who?.
naruto: also noone should ever take their lives, due to suffering others have caused..or for the suffering they even may be causing themselves.
ichigo: so, if you know someone who is being bullied. speak up. but, if it's worse. like a full on hate crime, or suicidal, self-destructive triggers, or death threats: tell someone.
naruto: report them to a site admin, mod, or tell someone offline who can look into things., and if your thinking of harming yourself, or others. don't hold it in. talk to someone you trust.
lauren: or find something/someone inspirational that makes you feel better.some believe they don't have anyone...they tell themselves that over, over, and over...but, if someone can't be there for you. be there for yourself. noone deserves to feel that alone.
naruto: you can also look up suicide crisis lines in your area. there is ALWAYS a way to get help. wheather it's for someone else
lauren: or yourself.
ichigo: because when everything's all over...all you have is life. why let someone else controle it. wheather mind controlle.
naruto: verbal, mental, and emotional harrassment.
lauren: or physical controlle. like violence.
naruto: plus just remember: fictional, or not:
naruto/natsu/ichigo/luffy/lauren: WE ARE ALL HUMAN...JUST LIKE YOU!.
lauren: and no human should ever suffer!. also to the bullies: put yourselves in their shoes. what if someone pointed out your flaws, and insecurities?
naruto: rejected you, and treated you like you were nothing special?
natsu: called you rude, or offensive names?
luffy: made you feel like you don't deserve to live?
ichigo: all because they didn't agree with you, or believe like you do?
naruto: or ship the same paring as you,
lauren: crushed your spirit...all to make themselves sound better than you?
naruto: there are already wars all over the world. why do they have to be online to?
lauren: so, remember:
naruto: respect yourself enough: to know when to walk away, or take a break from even a strong debate.
natsu: respect yourself enough: to NOT let others walk all over you.
luffy: respect yourself enough: to know when things are going or have gone too far, and speak up...not quiet down.
ichigo: respect yourself enough: to not harm yourself, to make a difference, and say "no" to bullying, and cyberbyllying
lauren: but, also most important of all: respect yourself enough: NOT to do it to someone else.
*a picture of naruto and sakura kissing appear on screen with the words: this has been a very special message from an omake creater who is a fan of naruto, narusaku, and a member of narusaku.com, and i...am anti-bullying/cyberbullying*

Edited by starlitestarbrite, 04 September 2014 - 03:22 AM.

[narusaku256]

A very very informative and socially awakening omake :). I don't know whether I've used the right words...but get the jist of what I wanna say...

[ns.Believe.It]

Wow, you are an all-rounder in writing! Normal, Serious, Comedy, Romance and now this. To be able to write something like this with a powerful message... very impressive   This should be posted in the debate thread here and on every other blog/ fansite on the internet.

 

I love the way you managed to bring up a NaruSaku kiss even in such an omake  

[starlitestarbrite]

*filler omake ideas'*
[author note summary: after reading doujinshi on D.A, and talking to a black butler fan on quotev [who was once a naruto fan], and a naruto fan on the same site lol. they all gave me an idea for a filler arc. it will take place after the pain arc, and the war never happens...so, it's a "what could have been" arc!. does this sound like a great idea?. it might take a while because it's either going to be one looong one, or sliced up into episodes/chapters. How does this idea sound? any suggestions. things you would like to see in the arc? i'll try not to troll unless it's really funny LOL.

Edited by starlitestarbrite, 19 September 2014 - 09:54 AM.

[narusaku256]

First of all, a great idea! Since it happens after Sakura hugs Naruto, you got a nice time in the manga timeline!

Now, about the 'What could've been arc'......well since the village is recuperating, you can add Naruto and Sakura wandering in the village late at night with a white glowing moon in the sky and the stars lighting up the sky and there's a pleasant chill in the air and suddenly, Sakura asks Naruto to accompany her to the Hokage monument because she finds that place very serene and....silent! And then both of them approach the monument and sit on top of it and watch the beautiful night view of Konoha and then you can either play out the confession or.....some nice couple moments if you show them already being in relationship whatsoever!

If you wanna write a full fledged arc....well maybe you can show Naruto and Sakura train together because they are given a week's off by Tsunade since they did a splendid job during Pein's invasion on Konoha. So they earn a week's off and since they get bored at home, Sakura and Naruto decide to hang out together and Sakura decides to help Naruto out with the books and Naruto decides to helps her out with sparring tactics and skills and in the meanwhile during the breaks, they have lunch together and when they leave the training, they wander around Konoha noticing at the reconstruction progress and share some moments and then Naruto is praised by the villagers and on hearing this, Sakura remembers the kid noisy Naruto and the current Naruto and she takes a notice of how much he has matured since then and gives him the 'only for Naruto' smile XD. And then....either the confession or something romantic if they are already a couple :)

Its just a suggestion though :)...you can write them based on your own ideas as well :)

[starlitestarbrite]

*the hokage Arc*
[author note summary: takes place after the pain arc. tsunade's still in the coma, a what could have been a seven episode arc.]

episode 1

*after the hug from sakura*
sakura: everyone's proud of you naruto...your a hero now
naruto: this is like a dream.
*shizune comes up*
shizune: naruto. congrats on saving the village.
sakura: so, lady shizune? hows tsunade?
naruto: what do you mean sakura-chan?
shizune: she hasn't woke up from her coma yet. -eyes water- but, like the village i'm sure she'll be okay.
naruto: "granny" tsunade's in a coma?
*iruka, and konohamaru comes up*
iruka: nice job naruto. you've really grown.
konohamaru: yeah. you'll be hokage before ya know it!
naruto: -eyes water-
*naruto runs off*
sakura: i think he's concerned about lady tsunade.
shizune: we should all try to fix up the village.it will take some time so, we'll need as much help as we can get.
*that night was a pretty moonlit night. a chill in the air. naruto's on top of the hokage monuement. on his dad's head, and sakura shows up*
sakura: hi naruto.*sits by him*
naruto: hi sakura-chan...i love lying out here. i go out here to think sometimes.
sakura: i know.
*they both stargaze. laying under the moon.*
naruto: i keep losing friends -wipes a tear-i couldn't save sasuke,jiraiya died, hinata almost got herself killed, the village was destroyed, and now i find out. "granny" tsunade's in a coma.
sakura: she'll be okay naruto., and i'm sure jiraiya's watching you from the stars right now. smiling, and is proud of you to, and you still have me.
naruto: the moment i get close to someone something happens to them. -eyes water- sakura-chan. captain yamato told me what i did!...during going fourtails -cries-
*flashback*
sakura: NARUTO!!!
*sakura runs over to an unconscious four-tailed naruto*
sakura: naruto stop! please i'll save sasuke! -gets hit with one of the tails-
*end*
naruto: then it happened again...i whent six-tailed when pain almost killed hinata...i just think what if it had been you...i could have lost all controlle whent nine-tails, and made things even worse than they are.
sakura: but you-
naruto: WHY DID SHE HAVE TO SAY ALL THAT STUFF? why did she have to "confess" like that?...why does hinata idolize me so much when she don't know what i am!?
sakura: you mean who you are?
naruto: i almost gave in...untill my father the fourth hokage showed up. -cries-
sakura: -eyes water- naruto...
*in hiashi,neji, and hinata, and hanabi's tent*
hinata: -wakes up- neji?
neji: yes?
hanabi: -eyes water- ONEE-SAN! -she hugs hinata- i'm so glad your okay.
hinata: how is naruto-kun?.
neji: he's fine. he saved the village.
*ten ten comes in*
ten ten: hey hyuuga family!. everyone okay in here?
neji: yes.
hiashi: hello ten-ten. hinata's doing really well.
hanabi: i hope someday i love someone as much as you love naruto!
neji: you mean selfishly?
tenten: neji! that was mean.
neji: she charged in, and almost got herself killed.
hanabi: why would you care? you almost killed her in the chuunin exams!
hiashi: OKAY! i think we all just need to rest. we're not helping anyone, or anything by arguing, and attacking eachother.
*in kiba's tent*
kiba: how's aukemaru?...did he survive?...
tsume: kiba you need to relax
hana: he's fine!. your both in safe conditions'
kiba: thanks onee-sama.
*iruka comes in the tent*
iruka: everyone doing good in here?. we're told to go into pateints tents, and make sure they're alright... and if anyone asked why we're told to say "lady shizune said so"
tsume: oh yes. how is lady tsunade?
iruka: shizune said she's hoping lady tsunade wakes up tomorrow. hi hana-chan
hana: hey iruka-chan
kiba: mom? am i on something?
tsume: no why?
kiba: OH NO! MY SISTER, AND IRUKA-SENSEI ARE GOING OUT!?
hana/iruka: *both laugh*
hana: when does flirting mean going out?
tsume: kibaaa relax
iruka: see you all later! *walks out*
*chouji, shikaku,yoshino,  shikamaru, choza, and ino, and inoichi's tent*
ino: looks like everyone's okay.
chouji?: lets go eat, and celebrate!
shikamaru: the village was destroyed. so, all the restaraunts have been destroyed
chouji: HOW ARE WE GOING TO EAT NOW! NOOO!
ino: you idiot -whacks him on the head- how can you think of food at a time like this?
*the next day kiri, and suna ninja drop by to help rebuild konoha*
*sakura, naruto, and shizune are in shizune's tent where tsunade is*
sakura: so, she hasn't woke up yet? -uses mystic palm- her chakra system's slowly getting stronger. it's not as weak as it was yesterday.
shizune: i know. i use mystic palm to check it every hour. she's slowly recovering.
naruto: glad to hear it. whoes taking her place as hokage?
shizune: that's not decided untill the village is fixed again.
sakura: great. naruto? lets go visit everyone else, and see how they are!
naruto: okay...lady shizune let us know when she wakes up.
shizune: i will!

episode 2

*naruto and sakura walk around talking to villagers*
naruto: when do you think the village'll be fixed?
sakura: i don't know. it could take a month.
*kakashi, and ebisu walk up*
naruto: hi ebisu-sensei, and kakashi-sensei!
kakashi: naruto. i must say you have really become quiet the ninja.
ebisu: konohamaru has to!. he used the rasengan on one of the pain clones!
naruto: really!.
sakura: naruto has grown alot...-pats his shoulder- he's my hero for sure!
naruto: -blush-
kakashi: you ARE my sensei's son. i bet he would be proud of you as well
naruto: the fourth hokage was your sensei!?
kakashi: he sure was.
*they later run into teuchi, and ayame. and learn teuchi's retiring*
naruto: WHAAAT!? no more ramen!?
ayame: -giggles- naruto. i'm taking over as manager.
teuchi: it's about time i hand down the buisness to ayame-chan...though i'm wondering if she would hire nishi, and natsu as waitors
ayame: -sweatdrop- doubt it
*filler flash back*
natsu: okay! comming up
*natsu runs into nishi, and both drop the bowls of miso, and ramen
nishi/natsu: LOOK WHAT YOU DID! ME!? STOP THAT!
teuchi: -sweatdrops- -to the customers- everything's free...and comming out of their paycheck!
nishi/natsu: -whines- it was his fault!...was not!...was so
teuchi: geez do you two share a brain?...of course one of you would have to have one first -sighs- -thinks- i must have naruto on my mind. why else would i hire knuckle heads?-
*end*
naruto: -bursts out laughing-
*they then run into moegi, konohamaru, and udon*
konohamaru: hi naruto!
naruto: i heard what you did...you helped save the village with your rasengan!
konohamaru: well, i had a brillient sensei!...you taught me all i know!
moegi: wanna come train with us?
udon: yeah!
naruto: actually sakura-chan, and i are just walking around, and talking. maybe later.
*they run into inari, and tazuna*
naruto: tazuna! inari! what are you two doing here?
inari: we're helping the village! your a hero to our village, and yours...you taught me what a true hero was...and now i get to meet one!
tazuna: it's the least we can do. you saved our village from zabuza, and helped rebuild the tenchi bridge
sakura: i thought it was called the naruto bridge?
inari: the mizukage changed the name.
sakura: oh. how is tsunami?
tazuna: she's doing well. didn't you have another teammate?
naruto: -eyes water, and hangs head-
sakura: sasuke's not in the village right now...he'll be back later.
*later in team ino-shika-cho's tent*
*temari enters*
temari: you in here alone?
shikamaru: yes. ino's checking on lady tsunade, and shizune, chouji, and choza, inoichi, and my dad, are all helping the village.my mom's out collecting berries for us to eat.
temari: oh. why aren't you out there to?
shikamaru: just thinking...so, your here to help to?
temari: yes. kankuro's filling in for gaarain suna while he's he's here as kazekage. he figured the village needed a kage untill lady tsunade...the hokage wakes up. come on -pulls him up-
shikamaru: where are we going?
temari: to help with the village
shikamaru: why do i have to?
temari: cause your grirlfriend told you to -pulls him out ouf the tent as he blushes-
*that night some buildings were finished, and again it was a pretty starry night. with a cresent moon instead of a full moon*
*naruto ontop of the fourth hokage's head on the monuement laying under the stars*
naruto: -thinks- dad...jiraya, mom...please let "granny" tsunade be okay.
voice: so, you almost lost controle of your bijuu too?
naruto: -notices gaara on the thirds head- how did-
gaara: sakura told me everything. -sighs- -lays under the stars- being a jinchuuriki's stressful...it's like we have all this emotion build up, and unless we build a wall, or shell. we end up losing controlle.
naruto: yeah.
gaara: unless you have someone who can break through that shell, and show you what a real friend is. that's what you did for me...and that's what i think sakura's doing for you.
naruto: -eyes water- but...i'm so afraid of hurting her again...even though i wasn't in the right state of mind i still feel responsible.
gaara: it's not our mind...or state...when shukaku tried to take over my life...it was all him. it was like i didn't have controlle at all. your bijuu wants your power. the emotions are what it's feeding off of. but, your feelings for sakura are what i believe keeps you from loosing controlle...that must be the love my uncle was talking about.
naruto: did sakura-chan tell you to come out here?
gaara: no...
*filler flash back*
sakura: naruto's been like this after comming back from trying to get sasuke back. he's just so, down all the time...he tries to force a happy smile but, i can tell he stresses himself out
gaara: i'm sure he'll be okay.
sakura: after our mission to rescue you...we met orochimaru, and kabuta...-eyes water- naruto lost it, and whent four-tails...ever since he found out kyuubi struck me with a tail he's seemed more distant...i think he holds himself responsible for it all
gaara: he's always wanting to save everyone...he's the reason i wanted to become kazekage.
sakura: it got worse during the invasion *tells the story *...i kinda blame hinata alittle...her, and sasuke seem to have caused the most stress in his life...i wish i could help him -hangs head-
*end*
gaara: i think you finnally found someone who understands you...but, most of all you found someone who cares about you enough to want to not want to see you suffer.

episode 3

*the next day naruto decides to train with konohamaru, moegi, and udon*
naruto: okay, -holds up a water balloon- this is a water balloon. the idea is to make the water spin in different directions-
*sakura runs out there*
sakura: LADY TSUNADE'S AWAKE!
*all four of them go to shizune's tent*
tsunade: -opens her eyes...shizune?
shizune: -hugs tsunade- your alive!
naruto: "GRANNY" TSUNADE! -runs and hugs her...his head's between her bosoms*
sakura: grrr -pulls him off- NARUTO! WATCH YOUR HEAD! -bonks him on the head- -thinks- i did that once...it was an accident though-
naruto: -blush- sorry -laughs-
konohamaru: -laughs to- they are kinda pillowy
*both laughs*
sakura: grrr! THAT'S INAPPROPRIATE!
shizune: will you three quiet down!?
tsunade: -giggles- just like jiraiya
naruto: -blinks-
tsunade: naruto. good job saving the village-
naruto: thank you -smiles-
*a month later the hokage building, and apartments, the restaraunts, and most of the villages are back up.*
tsunade: i want to call a meeting with the other kage.
shizune: now?
tsunade: yes...i plan on retiring as hokage.
shizune: -eyes water- then who'll be hokage!?.
*t the kage summit*
kazekage: so, how is konoha?
hokage: well, we've got most of it cleaned up.but, i called this summit because i am retiring as hokage.
mizukage: how come?
hokage: because...i never wanted to be hokage...and now someone deserves it more than i do. i declare naruto uzumaki is the new hokage.
kazekage: sounds like a great choice. have you told him yet?
hokage: no. i needed other kage to know there'll be a new hokage.
*later back in konoha everyone's in tsunade's office*
tsunade: -holds hokage robe- fellow villagers. i'm retiring as hokage. i appriciate you all for allowing me to be your hokage. naruto uzumaki. come up here.
*naruto walks up to her desk*
tsunade: you are the hero of the village. we all have watched you grow up, and go from a prankster...to a bright young ninja you are today. since i'm retiring...i declare you as hokage!
sakura: -eyes water and smiles- -thinks- i knew he'd become hokage someday-
naruto: -eyes water- thank you....but, i haven't braught sasuke back yet, and i'm not a chuunin, or jonin yet.
tsunade: so?...why would you let that stop you from achieving your dream.
naruto: i made a promise...to sakura-chan i would bring him back...i was also promising myself that to.
sakura: -thinks-he's still holding on to that? we were thirteen!-
tsunade: i'm sure my brother had promises to...but, it doesn't mean you give up when something out of your hands alters your promises.
iruka: naruto. this was your dream, and your going to turn it down?
konohamaru: come on naruto! you gotta be hokage so, i can be the next one someday!
naruto: plus everyone gets hurt when i'm around.
sakura: -thinks- i can't believe he's throwing it all away!-
*everyones encouraging naruto to just accept the position*
sakura: -walks up there- NARUTO UZUMAKI! you have been talking about being hokage all since we were twelve, working your butt off to be the best ninja in the world. now, you have the respect of everyone in the village, and you get the chance to be hokage, and your throwing it away!?...just because of a dumb promise of a lifetime!
naruto: but sakura-chan. maybe YOU should be hokage instead!
tsunade: -thinks- i can't believe he's giving up on his being hokage!- naruto. if everyone gave up over a broken promise we'd all not be here, noone would be ninja, and there may not have been a konoha!. you deserve the title of hokage.
hinata: remember your nindo naruto-kun? never give up. thats your ninja way.
sakura: i never go back on my word
all: I WILL BE HOKAGE!
naruto: -thinks- so, they all listened all that time? i thought i was ignored- thanks "granny" tsunade!. -takes the robe, and put it on- citizans of konoha i naruto uzumaki am your new hokage!
*all cheer*
*sakura hugs naruto hug*
sakura: congratulations naruto.
naruto: -blush-...-thinks- she's hugging me again...if i hug her back wont it ruin the moment?-
naruto: sakura-chan will you be my assistant?
sakura: of course i will!

episode 4

*naruto's first day as hokage*
hokage-naruto: well, we need a replacement for kakashi-sensei who retired as sensei, and kurenai whoes a stay at home mom now.
sakura: kakashi-sensei's retiring!
naruto: yes. -sadly- everything's changing so fast...-cheers back up- to make things easier on the village i'm having telephones installed in all the houses, and apartments' that don't have one!
sakura: great idea naruto!
naruto: sakura-chan-
sakura: or lord naruto -giggles-
naruto: -blushes- you don't have to do that sakura-chan. anyway. can you ask shino, and lee to come in here?.
*naruto tells messengars to send everyone telephones! and sakura comes back with shino, and lee*
naruto: shino? kurenai has requested you become a sensei now.
shino: so, i'm finnally get recognised?
naruto: yes. lee would you like to fill in the spot of a taijutsu sensei?
lee: YOSH! a youthful sensei just like gai-sensei!
sakura: -thinks- he's really matured, and grown alot.-
lee: why is kakashi retiring?
naruto: he wants to go back to ANBU so, he retired as a sensei full time. but, will fill in if anyone needs a sub.
*aukemaru runs in, hops on naruto's desk, licks naruto*
naruto: ewww, KIBAAA! I'M TRYING TO WORK HERE!
kiba: -comes in, and gewts aukemaru, and laughs- THAT was for farting in my face, and calling me dog breath back in our academy days at the chuunin exams
sakura: -sweatdrops-
naruto: -wipes his face off- i'm your hokage now!
kiba: and i'll prank you every chance i get -laughs and walks out-
*shino, and lee leave*
naruto: -calls the anbu on the phone- i need you to find sasuke uchiha!, and do what you need to do to bring him back...hokage's orders please, and thank you-hangs up-
sakura: naruto what are you doing?
naruto: keeping my promise!
sakura: -eyes roll- naryto why does that promise mean so much to you?
naruto: because you mean so much to me sakura-chan. always have, and always will...this time it's to thank you for being there, and beleiving in me.
sakura: well, you've always been there for me.
naruto: and i always will. i love you sakura-chan
sakura: i love you too naruto
*both hug*
sakura: looks like your dreams came true. your hokage...and my boyfriend
naruto: -blushes-
*phone rings*
naruto: -answers- hokage's office?...well, i guess interrogate him. find out what he plans to do...he can't betray the village like this anymore. i wont allow it.

episode 5

*days later the hokage find sasuke, karin, and suigetsu are found by anbu*
anbu1: the hokage has requested we forcfully take you back to konoha for interrogation
*they grab each one and poof off*
*in naruto's office*
*phone rings*
naruto: hokage office?...-eyes widen- he is!...his own team?...put them all behinde bars untill their trial tomorrow. please, and thank you -hangs up-
sakura: sasuke's back!
naruto: yes...he's with two other ninja. they found them around iron counrty. sakura-chan. if you want to go see him they're in the jail. -hands her directions-.
sakura: no...i'm staying here with you -smiles-
-phone rings-
naruto: hokage office?...hello?...HELLOOO?...-hangs up- someone keeps calling, and hanging up!
-phone rings-
sakura: i'll get it this time -answers-hokage office?...hi kurenai!...okay, i'll get someone. -hangs up. kurenai needs a babysitter for her son while she goes grocery shopping.
naruto: -grins- i know just the three!
*moegi, konohamaru, and udon walk into naruto's office*
naruto: i have a mission for you guys.
konohamaru: YES! see? he never lets us down.
naruto: kurenai needs a sitter, and your mission is to babysit her son
konohamaru: NOOO! GIVE US A REAL MISSION!
sakura:-giggles-
naruto: that is a real mission!. that or doing her shopping for her.
*the three walk out. konohamaru's complaning*
-phone rings-
sakura: -answers- hokage office...of course hold on...-hands it to naruto-
naruto: hello?...grrr they hang up again -hangs up-
sakura: apparently kiba don't know how to play dial, and ditch.
naruto: so he wants to play games? -grins-
sakura: -thinks- oh no-
*later kiba walks in the office*
kiba: you have a mission for me?
naruto: yes...i asked the messengers to go around, and find a certain mission for you!...-hands himn some paper-. this day care needs assisting. i told them you would love to help out.
kiba: -thinks- a doggy daycare?...wait...do those exsist?!-
*kiba runs to the day care*
owner: we've just started this day care for parents who have kids, and go on long missions, and have to leave their kids with someone if they don't find a sitter...it was the hokage's idea! thank you for helping out!. no pets allowed please!.
kiba: -thinking- NAAARRRUUUTTTOOO!-

episode 6

*sasuke's trial is starting*
anbu 1: you understand when you betrayed the village you put everyone in danger correct?
sasuke: hn.
anbu 2: inoichi's searching suigetsu's brain while ino searches karins.now. sasuke...did you plan to invade, and threaten, or kill the hokage?
sasuke: NO! i don't want to be in the village but, naruto...the dobe keeps trying to get me to come back.
anbu 3: do you know who our new hokage is?
*hokage naruto comes out*
sasuke: YOUR HOKAGE NOW!?
naruto: yes sasuke. so, do you really not want to be apart of this village anymore?
sasuke: no. because of this village my brother killed our clan.
naruto: well, then. you have almost killed your teammates, and made it seem like you want to attack the village. if you-
ino: -walks out- I'M NEVER SPEAKING TO THAT AGAIN! -points to karin- -sits down-
sasuke: hi i-
ino: OR THAT THING EITHER!-points to sasuke-
*suigetsu, karin, and sasuke are now sitting all together on the stadium*
inoichi: suigetsu is sauke's new teammate.
ino: karin is also his new teammate...AND GIRLFRIEND!
karin:THAT WAS PRIVATE THOUGHT!
ino: oh yamanakas' hold no secrets!
inoichi: this is our job to search the mind of a missing ninja. sasuke lost the privacy when he betrayed the village.
*later after they explain more about who suigetsu, and karin are*
anbu kakashi: i'm sure your clan would be very dissappointed in you sasuke. we ALL are. -sighs- whats the hokage's decision?
sasuke: hn. as long as i can leave i don't care
naruto: -eyes water. but takes a deep breath- sasuke uchiha? you are no longer a citizin of konoha, and due to betraying the village...-voice cracks- you are not allowed to...-cries- i'm sorry.
sasuke: hn. even as a hokage your still weak.
kakashi: -continues reading where naruto left off- you are not allowed to visit the village unless you have been invited by the hokage himself.
*after the trial*
karin: finnally we can leaaave -glomps sasuke-
sakura: -walks up- -eyes water-
sasuke: let me guess you want a good bye hug?
sakura: -punches sasuke in the face- WHOES WEAK NOW!? -walks off-
karin: are you okay sasuke?
*the three poof off back to iron country*
*in naruto's office*
naruto: -tears streaming down face- i'm sorry sakura-chan...i'm so sorry. i had to do it
sakura: it's for the best. naruto stop apologizing...i know it was hard to do that.
*they hug*

episode 7

*timeskip: naruto's 18 now*
sakura: so, today you assighn senseis' to their new students?
naruto: yup!. for the first time ever there's a request for an all male squad. three brothers...triplettes who want to stay together
sakura: waw!
*the new team shino*
shino: so...i'm your new sensei. you three must be the senso brothers' i'm shino aburame.
nokon: i'm nokon senso!
aoi:i'm aoi senso!
mizuiro: i'm mizuiro senso shino-sensei!
shino: tell me alittle about yourselves
mizuiro: well, we're from the senso clan! and-
aoi:-bonks him on the head- HE KNOWS THAT!
nokon:-bonks mizuiro in the head to- YOUR SUCH A DORK!
aoi: STOP COPYING ME!
nokon: I'M NOT YOU IDIOT!. we're triplettes
aoi: so? if i do something it don't mean YOU have to do it to!
shino: -sweatdrop-
*team lee*
lee: -cheerful- HELLO YOUTHFUL STUDENTS! i am your sensei rock lee!
atara: i'm atara
akira: i'm akira
atara: -points and laugh- you gotta girl name!
aimi: i'm aimi lee-sensei!. i heard you, and your sensei were enthusiasts...spreading youth all over konoha!.
lee: YES! GAI-SENSEI WAS GREAT! we may have missions with his new team as well!
atara: sensei's pet.
*back in the hokage office*
naruto: -gives sakura a ring- want to make our bond official? i want to spend my life with you!
sakura: -blush- same here -puts on the ring-
*they hug and kiss-

THE END

Edited by starlitestarbrite, 01 August 2016 - 05:33 PM.

[Iwantbuns]

You write some cute stuff xD I like it.

[ns.Believe.It]

I have only one thing to say after reading these omake episodes- I wish I could give it more likes!

[starlitestarbrite]

sorry about all the typos lol. I'm sure the more I write/type the better they'll become. any arc requests',omake ideas, anything?.I was going to give a tragedy a try

[narusaku256]

A thousand likes of this omake!!!!!!

And nooooooooo...no tragedy please I like NS the way it is

[ns.Believe.It]

sorry about all the typos lol. I'm sure the more I write/type the better they'll become. any arc requests',omake ideas, anything?.I was going to give a tragedy a try

Nobody cares about typing errors. What matters is the story and you do a pretty darn awesome job at that 

Tragedy? Yes please! How about 663 , Naruto dying in Sakura's arms , with your own twist? 

[starlitestarbrite]

*wake up!*
[author note summary-my twist on chapter 663-664 a tragedy with a plot twist!]
*sakura's trying to use mystic palm on naruto*
sakura: -lays an ear on his chest- his hearts not beating! -eyes water- WAKE UP NARUTO! YOU STILL HAVE TO BE HOKAGE!
*flashback*
naruto: i will become hokage, and surpass all my predecessors
naruto: I'M A SUPER ELITE NINJA! ONE DAY I'LL BECOME HOKAGE MY NAME IS NARUTO UZUMAKI...REMEMBER IT!
*end*
sakura: no sound, no pulse why isn't my medic ninjutsu working?
gaara: he got the bijuu extracted from him!. we need to get to the fourth hokage
sakura: -tears stream down cheeks-
*flashback*
chiyo: if the bijuu is extracted the jinchuuriki dies
*end*
sakura: how long do we get there?
gaara: still a few KM.
*flashback-genin days*
naruto: hey sakura-chan! -grins and scratches head- you...wanna go to ichiraku?
naruto: it's a promise of a lifetime! -holds up thumb-
*next flash back-timeskip*
naruto: hey sakura-chan!
*him, and jiraiya had just returned from a three year journey of training*
*end*
sakura: NARUTO!...i will save you! thats my promise of a lifetime!
*flashback*
naruto: i never go back on my words that's my nindo my ninja way!
*end*
*sakura gives naruto CPR*
sakura: for gods sake naruto! i just freaking gave you the kiss of life! -cries- wake up! YOU CAN'T DIE NARUTO!.it's ALWAYS like this! WHY IS IT ALWAYS NARUTO!?...-tries to stop crying- NARUTO! THAT DREAM OF YOURS IS RIGHT IN FRONT OF YOU! OPEN YOUR EYES! LOOK INTO MINE! WAKE UP NARUTO UZUMAKI!
*naruto's life flashes before sakura's eyes*
*in naruto's sub-conscious*
naruto:-wakes up- the kyuubi's gone...*hears distant voice* NARUTO!
*flashback*
kushina: find a girl like your mother
kushina/sakura:-hugging naruto- thank you
sakura: -tries to feed him ramen but, sai interrupts-

kushina: find a girl like your mother
sakura: what i said naruto was...
hinata/sakura: i love you
kushina: find a girl like your mother
minato[talking about sakura]: she's strikengly similar to kushina! is she your girl friend?
kushina: find a girl like your mother
sakura/kushina: -both bonth naruto on the head but of course at different times-
*end*
naruto: sakura-chan. -closes eyes- if i could just tell you how my heart feels...without my mind getting in the way
*back to sakura*
sakura: NARUTO!...-uses a chakra scaple, and gives his heart a massage!...then feels a strange flow of chakra...warm peaceful chakra flowing through her*
*flashback sakura sees naruto's past thoughts'*
sai: but, are you going to tell her you love her?
naruto: how can i tell her i love her when i can't even keep a promise to her?...
naruto: -thinking during promise of a lifetime- i wont stand in your way anymore sakura-chan...i'll prove to you that i DO understand you.-
naruto: -thinking during the hug after his fight with nagato's pain clones', and talking to nagato- waw...everyone acknowledges me now?...sakura-chan's hugging me?...she's really hugging me...if i hug her back will it ruin the moment?-
naruto: -thinking during sakura's confession- no...no this cam't happen now...no what is going on!? i can't show them i'm breaking down...everyone close to me either gets injured, leaves, or dies! i can't loose sakura-chan! please be lying! oh god! i hate myself for having to lie to her, and everyone else!-
*end*
sakura: oh naruto -eyes water- i'm so sorry...i wish i had been there for you more.
gaara: we're almost there. i'll speed up!
*gaara speeds up*
*meanwhile kakashi, and minato are TRYING to talk to obito if he would stop trying to fight them*
kakashi: obito?...what happened to the obito who said that those who betray their comrades are worse than scum?...you were saying how you'll be hokage someday!
obito: he died...now stand still!-
*gaara's sand clouds show up*
gaara: naruto's kyuubi's been extracted, and gave me a message. he needs the other half.
*as minato tries to seal it obito takes it*
obito: i just got the other half!
minato: what the...
sakura: GIVE NARUTO BACK HIS KYUUBI!...HAVEN'T YOU EVER LOVED ANYONE WITHIN THAT EMPTY HEART OF YOURS!?
obito: love? why love anyone? they'll just end up hurt, or leave you, or die in the end. all we are good for is power!...feeding off eachother!.
*madaara makes it over there*
maadara: do you have it?...oh there it is *steals it*
obito: -whines- but i wanted that half!
sakura: now the villans are arguing...we have some really weird vilians
*to kiba shino, and hinata*
kiba: -helps hinata up off the ground- WHAT DO YOU MEAN JUST LEAVING YOUR TEAMMATES, JUST TO FALL FLAT ON YOUR FACE?
hinata: i'. s-sorry -eyes water- i just wanted to try, and save naruto-kun.
shino: everytime you do you end up almost getting killed in the process.
hinata: -cries-
kiba: plus i think i saw sakura with him.
*naruto's sub-conscious*
naruto: *feels a warm flow of chakra flowing into his heart*
*flash back:sees sakura's thoughts*
sakura: -thinks during the promise of a lifetime- he's always there for me. naruto does understand me after all. i should do something for him when he returns.
sakura: -thinks AFTER naruto gets back from VOTE- he almost died because of sasuke!...or because of me...geez we're the worst teammates ever. not worth a promise of a lifetime-
sakura: -thinks the whole pain invasion arc- naruto...it's scarier without you here! come back safe!...YOUR HERE!...that doofus scaring the crap out of me, worrying me like that!...but he's a hero now. i should thank him-
sakura: -thinks after being yelled at by naruto after confessing to him- let it out naruto! i'll carry the burden of your pain now!...that's what love is. is being there for someone, accepting them for who they are...you have that now!-
naruto: -opens eyes- sakura-chan.
*back to sakura*
sakura: WILL SOMEONE HELP NARUTO!
obito: -looks at sakura- -thinks- she kind of looks like rin.-
obito: okay, get in my kamui dimension, i'll come back with a bijuu
*sakura with naruto are in kamui*
sakura: -eyes water-
naruto: -weakly- sakura-chan? your always being made to cry.
sakura: -looks down, and sees naruto's smiling face- -wipes tears and smiles- naruto...why didn't you stay somewhere safe?
naruto: i wanted to protect the village...and most of all...you sakura-chan.
*obito returns*
obito: okay, i got the nine tails back from maadara
voice in the distant: OBITO YOU IDIOT!
obito: but, we have to hurry *seals the kyuubi in naruto* you two need to go somewhere safe untill its over!
*maadara enters kamui*
obito: too late.
*naruto gets up* thanks you obito...SHADOW CLONE JUTSU!
*a bunch of shadow clones surround maadara, and obito*
sakura: i have to stay...NARUTO PUT ME DOWN!!!
*sakura's on naruto's back and they poof off to mount. myoboku*
naruto: -puts sakura down-
*naruto and sakura hug*
naruto: sakura-chan...i love you so much.
sakura: i love you to.
*they kiss*
THE END

Edited by starlitestarbrite, 18 November 2017 - 03:13 AM.

[ns.Believe.It]

You don't let your fans down  Plus you've also managed to make fun of Hinata which is always nice to read 

[starlitestarbrite]

*cherry blossom festival!*
[author note summary: sakura, and naruto go with kushina, and minato to the sakura festival.]
*sakura, naruto, minato, and kushina are picniking under a sakura tree*
naruto: okay,...what all will we do?
sakura: well, later tonight we can watch the fireworks. hey minato wasn't our sensei one of your students?. any funny stories to share?
minato: well, actually kakashi was the quiet one in the group...kept to himself all the time. or as obito would say..."the jerk-in-the-box"
naruto: sounds like sasuke...only a version that didn't betray the village.
minato: rin was the girl in our group. a medical ninja like you sakura. and obito was the hyperactive knucklehead. like i was!
naruto: and me?
minato: yeah. you also.-thinks- but, i'm not sure of any funny stories
naruto: did obito have a crush on rin?
minato: oh goodness...crush doesn't even discribe it...sakura? you thought naruto's crush was annoying! you haven't heard of obito, and HIS "love chaos"
*flashback*
obito: sensei? how do you get a girl?
minato: well...um...you have to let her come to you.
obito: well, rin likes the "jerk in the box", and i want to show her i love her!
minato: your only twelve! isn't love a strong word?
obito:i thought hate was a strong word?
minato: well...that to.
obito: i'll make it my mission to win rin over, and show the jerk-in-the-box thati'm better than him! then i'll become hokage, and rule the world! -runs off-
minato: -sweatdrop-
*rin, and kakashi are on the bench*
rin: so, what do we do after training?
kakashi: we?...you mean you?. i'm training all day. nothing else to do. may as well train the night away
rin: but, you can't live your life on training
kakashi: i've been doing it since i was three. i wanted to be like my father...the white fang...-sighs- life is full of betrayal
*obito jumps out of the bushes*
obito: HI RIN! -pushes kakashi off the bench, and sits by rin- WANNA GO ON A DATE? WE CAN HAVE AN EATING CONTEST!
rin: obito! you can't go pushing people off benches!...and i can't today anyway.
obito: why not?
rin: well, i was going to train with -notices kakashi has done left- never mind -gets up, and walks off-
obito: -follows her- i'll train with you rin! who needs that shrimp anyway. i'll be hokage someday, and when i'm hokage you, and i can rule fire nation together! we'll be like avatar ninja! or like those super sayians from the anchient days!!!
rin: those are just myths
obito: SO IS KAKASHI BEING 5 FT. TALL!!! we all know he uses a henge jutsu. he's the shortest one on the team!
*he follows rin all day talking her ears off*
rin: GRRR WILL YOU SHUT UP!?
obito: great idea! i can stare at you with stars in my eyes...do you like the stars? i think starlit nights are very magical!
rin: OBIIITTTOOO!!!
*end*
naruto: -laughs-
sakura: actually...naruto did do that. but, not to that extend -laughs- but he did talk ALOT...but when i'd walk off he would stop. -hangs head- i guess it hurt.
naruto: sakura-chan we were twelve. it's okay.he sounded like a fanboy.
sakura: oh god was i that annoying around sasuke?
minato: -whispers- don't answer that...its a trap!
naruto: well, you were kind of a fangirl.
sakura: so i was annoying?
minato: its a trap!
naruto: no! sasuke-teme was...but it was a little frusterating, and -quietly- obsessive
sakura: YOU THOUGHT I WAS ANNOYING TO! GRRR -bonks him on the head-
minato: told you it was a trap!
naruto: so, why does kakashi wear a mask?
sakura: yeah! we've been trying to get him to take his mask off
minato: i never knew that either. you could try asking.
sakura/naruto: -sweatdrop-
*later: festival games' the guys won the girls' prizes*
minato: -wins kushina a stuffed bear-
kushina: aw
*they hug*
naruto: -wins sakura a heart shaped pillow on it says "i'm home when i'm with you...because thats where my heart is"- here you go sakura-chan. because home is where the heart is
sakura: -eyes water- i love it naruto!
*they hug*
minato: hey you two are a future us!
kushina: that's so cute, and sweet!
*sakura and kushina give the ball toss a try*
kushina: -throws it and shatters some glasses- i'm so sorry
owner: it's fine! happens alot
sakura: -throws it and it shatters all the glasses, and puts a whole in the wall! everyone around them looks in amazement- i guess i don't know my own strength!
owner: y-you c-can have all the prizes you want!!!
naruto: hahahahaha you turned him into hinata...she stutters like that.
*kushina wins naruto a stuffed bear cub, and minato a big stuffed bear. sakura won naruto a yin yang ring*
sakura: because we are heaven, and earth
minato: guess that makes us water, and fire kushi-chan! but...what do they make together?
*someone over hears them thinking they're discussing spirituality*: the fifth element!...life!. -walks past them-
all four: oooh...so, that's where it started!.
*side note: heaven[air], earth, fire, water =spirit/soul/life*
*they go on another picnik. this time under the moon, and stars*
naruto: tell us another funny story about your team dad!
minato: my team, or your sensei's team?...but, i do have some hilarious stories from when i was on a team!...with jiraiya as a sensei...i was thirteen when i learned sage mode.our whole team did!
naruto: tell that story!
minato: well, he would leave us to train alone while he went to "find information" for his "research"...well. oneday i decided enough was enough
*flashback*
jiraiya: now. you three train here. i'm going to go do...research! i need to find information for the hokage...about our mission!
minato: you left us alone for three weeks now "grandpa" how are we going to get stronger if you don't teach us anything!
jiraiya: well...teach eachother! teamwork is important -poofs off-
minato: grrr! i'm going after him!
male teammate: but, he said to stay here
*minato poofs out*
female teammate: why does he always get into trouble?.-thinks- your awsome minato-kun!-
*meanwhile minato poofs up behinde jiraiya whoes peaking in the bushes at the girls in the bathhouse*
minato: YOU CALL PEEKING INTO THE GIRLS BATHHOUSE RESEARCH YOU SLIMY TOAD SAGE!
*the girls hear that, and scream, and run off*
minato: YOU WERE ABANDONING US JUST TO PEEK AT GIRLS!!! PERVY SENSEI!
jiraiya: -turns redfaced, and scratches head- well...i...um...don't have to explain anything to you because i'm your sensei
minato: I'M SURE THE HOKAGE WOULD LOVE TO HEAR ALL ABOUT THIS! OUR SENSEI LEFT US TO TRAIN JUST SO HE CAN LOOK AT GIRLS IN THE BATH HOUSE!
jiraiya: oh no shhh. he don't have to know! i'll do anything
minato: aaannnyyythiiinnnggg?
jiraiya: oh no. -sweatdrop-
*they poof back to the other training teammates*
minato: guess what guys!? jiraiya-sensei's gonna teach us all sage mode!
teammates: COOL!
jiraiya: wait! i didn't say-
minato: -whispers- oooh "grandpa" hokaaage i cought our sensei-
jiraiya: TO DAY WE'RE ALL LEARNING ABOUT THE SAGE MODE!
*end*
naruto/sakura: *laugh*
naruto: now i know why i reminded pervy sage of you!
minato: -laughs- pervy sage...that fits him so well!.
*later they watch the fireworks*
*kushina, and minato kiss, and naruto and sakura kiss*
THE END

Edited by starlitestarbrite, 13 December 2016 - 09:03 AM.

[starlitestarbrite]

I had a weird naruto dream last night lol: I think my subconscious is sending me ideas'. in it I was looking at a naruto manga it was something about sacrifice, and i guess it was when they were sealing kaguya, or an alternate Arc, or something. naruto, and sasuke were in front of this light. behind them were kakashi,

sakura, and others who must have awakened from I.T in a yellow seal-like thing. like a kamui. it was protecting them all from whatever the 2 guys were going to do, and I think the story was related to what the sage of 6 paths said. one either sasuke, or naruto were to make some kind of sacrifice

so, sounds like a good omake. it's like my mind was trying to put a puzzle together.

Edited by starlitestarbrite, 07 September 2014 - 03:14 AM.

[ns.Believe.It]

Fantastic Omake ! Never thought I would say this but I actually liked Obito here  The flashbacks were awesome.

[narusaku256]

Bwhahahahah That part with Minato and Ero Senin was so funny XDDD

[starlitestarbrite]

I wish I can come up with ideas for time travel/dimension travel omakes'.