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How do you think this would pass for a Horror fanfic?


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#1 Dalton.T.R

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Posted 12 May 2016 - 04:05 PM

I'm writing the first fanfiction I've written in a long time, and it's a crossover with Naruto and my own series "Chris Lynheart", 

 

I'd like to know if you think what you're about to read is scary, or at the very least, unnerving. If you want to know what leads to these developments, click on the link so you have an idea of what's going on.

 

https://www.fanficti...-to-the-Unknown

 

 

Here's what I wrote


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Posted 26 May 2016 - 03:59 PM

I can't say it is scary. I'll just say it's interesting and endearing. Surely, you have talent and all but the detailing is not that crisp, the required depth that gets the reader reeling in just simply is not there. Alas, I mean nothing but well. I hope you get what I'm trying to say.



#3 Dalton.T.R

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Posted 28 May 2016 - 06:50 PM

I can't say it is scary. I'll just say it's interesting and endearing. Surely, you have talent and all but the detailing is not that crisp, the required depth that gets the reader reeling in just simply is not there. Alas, I mean nothing but well. I hope you get what I'm trying to say.

Yeah, I get it. Horror isn't my strong suit, but I was just hoping to get the point across. Everything improves with practice. :)



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Posted 28 May 2016 - 11:39 PM

If that's the case. Go on with it. Explore your creativity. Who knows; it may turn into one of your strong suits?






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