Artwork is pretty good. Not on the same level as tokai's, but as fanart it's more than enough.
Storywise, I actually do appreciate the author taking their time to go through the aftermath of the battle, with Team 7 debating that Sasuke could be executed (as many have pointed out, this would have been the most logical outcome plot notwithstanding), and Sakura sorting her feelings.
It seems now the entire Ootsuki clan is coming together now. It's interesting, though given how independently they're acting, they're making Kaguya look like an even bigger idiot than before (at least back then she was this monster-god, so her behavior was at least explainable). Hopefully they do a better job here, and maybe be more realistic on how they're aliens.
The NaruSaku scene on the bench was great, though I'm surprised that Shion is regarded as canon (well, canon in THIS timeline I guess).
I'm willing to come back and see if they add more, though I'm a wee bit confused with some of the images jak posted. One of them looked NaruIno (or even NaruDeidra...). I'm hoping that's just miscellaneous fanart, otherwise it's going to get....complicated.