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#41 Illnevergiveup3

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Posted 01 May 2015 - 01:52 AM

wow!! A lot of great ideas. What do y'all think of me letting Zabuza and Haku live so they could fight in the Fourth Ninja War? Good idea or bad?

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Posted 01 May 2015 - 01:58 AM

wow!! A lot of great ideas. What do y'all think of me letting Zabuza and Haku live so they could fight in the Fourth Ninja War? Good idea or bad?

Bad idea, their dead is necessary for naruto development.

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Posted 01 May 2015 - 02:07 AM

wow!! A lot of great ideas. What do y'all think of me letting Zabuza and Haku live so they could fight in the Fourth Ninja War? Good idea or bad?


Bad because as much as I liked them Zabuza was a mass murderer who needed to be punished lol. Dunno about Haku..

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Posted 01 May 2015 - 02:38 AM

Bad because as much as I liked them Zabuza was a mass murderer who needed to be punished lol. Dunno about Haku..

I was so caught up in letting them live for a little happy Ending for them that I didn't think about that. Okay, thanks for getting my head together about that. And Rocci.

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Posted 01 May 2015 - 02:43 AM

I was so caught up in letting them live for a little happy Ending for them that I didn't think about that. Okay, thanks for getting my head together about that. And Rocci.


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Posted 01 May 2015 - 10:33 AM

I would also have for your ending have Sasuke and Sakura beside him when he becomes Hokage to prove to the people he'll never be alone protecting the village.
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Posted 01 May 2015 - 04:44 PM

I would also have for your ending have Sasuke and Sakura beside him when he becomes Hokage to prove to the people he'll never be alone protecting the village.

lol, yeah maybe. Them On the top looking over everyone. Naruto kissing Sakura-Chan on the cheek while Sasuke has his elbow on Naruto's shoulder. Yeah.

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Posted 01 May 2015 - 06:53 PM

That would have been awsome to see in the manga.
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Posted 01 May 2015 - 09:19 PM

That would have been awsome to see in the manga.

well Kishi isn't a thinker. I'll add it in mine.

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Posted 05 May 2015 - 01:09 AM

I'm starting now.

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Posted 14 May 2015 - 06:34 AM

I'm starting now.

 

Are you ever gonna draw me that ugly Sasuke? xD



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Posted 14 May 2015 - 06:42 AM

Are you ever gonna draw me that ugly Sasuke? xD


yeah. I'm working on a compilation of sketches of each character.

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Posted 02 June 2015 - 11:57 PM

is the reboot cancelled?



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Posted 03 June 2015 - 02:19 AM

I'd say not start at the beginning, but rather start after the Pein arc. To me, everything was okay up to the Pein arc and afterwords is when things really hit the crapper.


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Posted 03 June 2015 - 03:33 AM

I would say maybe flesh out Konoha 11 a little bit more such as Shino and Tenten because he did fail on that aspect in the beginning and never did worked on them. They never had a big role which is a shame.

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Posted 04 June 2015 - 06:01 AM

I would say maybe flesh out Konoha 11 a little bit more such as Shino and Tenten because he did fail on that aspect in the beginning and never did worked on them. They never had a big role which is a shame.

They are side character, it's their destiny to get shaft.

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Posted 04 June 2015 - 06:58 AM

I'd say not start at the beginning, but rather start after the Pein arc. To me, everything was okay up to the Pein arc and afterwords is when things really hit the crapper.

 

I hear that, James.

 

 

I would say maybe flesh out Konoha 11 a little bit more such as Shino and Tenten because he did fail on that aspect in the beginning and never did worked on them. They never had a big role which is a shame.

 

I think that is a good idea too, Griff, since they could use a little more exploration. Not a lot, even for their being side characters, but make it feel as if they matter



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Posted 04 June 2015 - 07:07 AM

Please don't make Sakura lie to Naruto. If she confesses I want her to be honest.

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Posted 04 June 2015 - 09:22 AM

she was honest as has been stated here and umpteen dozen hundred places.

 

The only lie she told was one of omission by keeping the truth about the rookies decision about Sasuke from him.

 

Everything else she told him was true


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Posted 04 June 2015 - 12:58 PM

It isn't cancelled, but the first chapter is the longest out of all, it's gone be about 50 to 60 pages.

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