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#1 LuckyChi7

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Posted 03 February 2021 - 02:43 AM

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Last summer, I had shared some designs of my own NaruSaku daughter Sachiko Uzumaki with a character backstory I've had in my head for quite a long time; which some of you guys wanted to see more more of Sachi's journey after what was established from last summer.  Well I should admit that I've been flirting with the idea of writing a story  after I shared had shared it with you guys. At the same timem I really have to commend Chatte on her own au story Kaika Saisei  because that's what really motived me to push forward with this project after I read  the chapters she's shared thus far. 

 

There is definitely a lot that Sachi has  to endure as a shinobi on her journey and holding up the honor of her parents, The Heroes of The 4th Great Ninja War,  with Naruto Uzumaki - now renounced as the Seventh Hokage, and her mother Sakura Haruno Uzumaki - now renounced throughout the world as The Blazing Cherry Blossom. Of course, the story will also dive into the relationship she shares with her prodigy twin sibling Shinachiku, and her little sister Hanami. For anybody who wants to glance at Sachi's backstory -> 

 

 

Now,  I should say that for a majority of this month my schedule is gonna be pretty tight because I've got a very big exam coming up on Saturday February 27th which means you guys will have to wait for at least another month before you get a chance to delve into The Tale of Sachiko Uzumaki. So I will leave you guys with a release date on when you can finally begin Sachi's journey, and that date will be March 28th. 


Edited by LuckyChi7, 03 February 2021 - 02:47 AM.

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Posted 04 February 2021 - 01:03 AM

I am so happy you decided to go forward with this!!

Can't wait to see more on Sachiko and her story!

Also, I feel deeply honored I was able to inspire you to move this forward.

So yeah, let's keep it going with more NaruSaku content! 💪💪💪

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#3 LuckyChi7

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Posted 06 February 2021 - 01:27 AM

Thanks Chatte that means a lot, and it's definitely my honor to give you my thanks for the inspiration! ps- I can't wait to see the next chapter lol!  

 

Of course,I also can't wait to share Sachi with rest of you guys especially with all the storylines that I've planned out for her and the characters that are involved in her day to day life and her shinobi life.  

 

 

Definitely, we'll continue keep NaruSaku alive through the amount of dedication from our works be it from the Shinachiku Kosen project, your story Kaika Saisei, The upcoming Tale of Sachiko Uzumaki from yours truly, and other things made within the fandom!  


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Posted 06 February 2021 - 02:47 PM

Thanks Chatte that means a lot, and it's definitely my honor to give you my thanks for the inspiration! ps- I can't wait to see the next chapter lol!  
 
Of course,I also can't wait to share Sachi with rest of you guys especially with all the storylines that I've planned out for her and the characters that are involved in her day to day life and her shinobi life.  
 
 
Definitely, we'll continue keep NaruSaku alive through the amount of dedication from our works be it from the Shinachiku Kosen project, your story Kaika Saisei, The upcoming Tale of Sachiko Uzumaki from yours truly, and other things made within the fandom!  


I was actually talking with some other NaruSaku fans, it's like this year we're having a rebirth of some sort, since a lot of content is on its way. 😁

That only makes me happy, heheh.

Can't wait to see how you see the continuation, heh. It's really interesting to notice how each of us has a their own vision of things.

By the way, all I can say is that Kaika will have a certain piece of symbolism i believe you will throughly enjoy hehehe. 😁

Anyway, waiting forward for this. 😁

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#5 LuckyChi7

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Posted 08 March 2021 - 10:12 PM

You know I was gonna wait until March 28th, but I'm feeling rather generous about this one....    So I'm going to share with you guys a little preview of the very 1st chapter nearly 20 days early:

 

 

 

Chapter 1: Provenance: 

 

 

Hey there I’ve got one simple question to ask. What is it you might ask?  Well.... Have you heard the tale about a young boy who was ostracized by the entire village because Kurama - The Nine Tailed Fox was sealed within him? and that his dream was to gain the respect of everyone in the village by becoming Hokage? Based on that, I could only imagine the thought that’s crossing your mind; Oh no it’s somebody that wants to follow down the same path! Yeah Like anybody is gonna sit through all that a second time! 

 

    Don’t worry I have no intentions of gaining the respect from the villagers, or dream of becoming Hokage. After all that story was all about my father.  

 

My name is Sachiko Uzumaki, but everyone in the village calls me Sachi.  I am a child of two of the four strongest heroes who brought an end to The Fourth Great Ninja War. I’ve already told you about my father Naruto Uzumaki - The Seventh Hokage. The second hero from the war was my mother Sakura Haruno Uzumaki. She was revered throughout the world as The Blazing Cherry Blossom because she stood her ground alongside my father against Kaguya Ootsutsuki and The ferocious creature known as The Ten Tails. Legends say that mother’s wrath left people shaking between their legs if anyone messed with her and those she cared about. In fact,  She was the first to act when my father was on the verge of death during the war. It was these actions that gave rise to an entire generation of kunoichi who were dedicated to her teachings. The truth is everything they’ve accomplished in life is what inspires me the most about being a ninja. 

 

In fact, this story began in the comfortness of my own room. It was just like any typical morning when the sun rose into the sky, and there I was snuggled in the sheets and my head resting against the soft pillow. The birds were chirping in the background where I could stretch my arms up, and look at the window to say “Good morning Konoha!” Honestly, that scenario would’ve been perfect for yours truly. Alas, it was unfortunately destroyed since a certain someone with blonde hair and green eyes shoved me awake multiple times like usual.  

 

“UGGGH! You dofus! Why can’t you just let me wake up in peace?” My eyes twitched towards my twin brother Shinachiku. 

 

He raised an eyebrow, “Because odds are you would’ve overslept for the big day we have at the Academy..”  

 

“Oh the big day...” I yawned loudly before realizing, “The big day... You mean that’s happening today? Like today, today?” 

 

He nodded as sweat fell off my forehead. 

 

“I... I better get ready then...” My heart suddenly accelerated. 

 

Shina laughs silently, “Better hurry cause we’ve only got 40 minutes to go.”

 

 

 

End of   Chapter 1 Preview! 

 

 

 

 Look forward to the full chapter on Sunday March 28th! 


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Posted 08 March 2021 - 10:58 PM

I like the intro narration. Another thing I think you could add to Sakura's track record is her fight with Sasori for well known things she has done if you wanted to down the line



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Posted 09 March 2021 - 05:45 PM

Oooh, so first person narration. That's interesting.

 

I already read it yesterday on Tumblr.

 

Interesting up until now. I'm looking forward to see how you're going to be taking it from here. :D


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Posted 09 March 2021 - 08:19 PM

I like the intro narration. Another thing I think you could add to Sakura's track record is her fight with Sasori for well known things she has done if you wanted to down the line

 

 

That is a pretty good point  I'll definitely be sure to address that when it's necessary lol. 

 

Oooh, so first person narration. That's interesting.

 

I already read it yesterday on Tumblr.

 

Interesting up until now. I'm looking forward to see how you're going to be taking it from here. :D

 

Fun fact I initially attempted on writing this in 3rd person, but I wasn't really feeling much of Sachi's personality in a sense that she's the one telling the story and taking the readers on a journey.  So once I changed it to first person I found exactly what I was looking for when it came to writing how Sachi thinks and feels. 

 

 

Oh don't worry Chatte I've got a lot of things planned for Sachi especially with the rest of the chapter once I unveil it here in a few weeks! 


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Posted 29 March 2021 - 12:47 AM

Hey guys, I just wanted to let you all  know that the first chapter for The Tale of Sachiko Uzumaki will be dropping tomorrow on Monday March 29th instead of today  because I’ve been a little swamped with helping out family for most of the day, & truth be told I wanna take it a little easy and just relax for the rest of the day.   

It is quite unfortunate that I won’t be able to deliver on the promised date as I originally planned since it is Sakura’s Birthday, but sometimes life throws you some curveballs, but I promise you it will definitely be up tomorrow for sure. 

I hope you are all having a fantastic a day, and happy birthday Sakura-Chan!

 

 

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Posted 31 March 2021 - 07:34 AM

I do extremely apologize for the delay of the debut chapter  for The Tale of Sachiko Uzumaki.  

 

You see I originally intended for this chapter to drop on Sakura's birthday, but when I reread the initial chapter I wrote there was a few sections that didn't sit right with me. Typically when I'm writing a story I like to envision myself as both someone whose also reading the story to as a way to give myself some notes on whether or not things worked in the chapter or didn't.  Now were these changes massive to the overall introduction to Sachi's character? No it really isn't because I still kept in tact with the initial core of her basic character.  It was very minimal changes that were made at best such as the time of place, or the setting of the place.  Everything for the most part played out as close to the backstory I envisioned for Sachi,  except for maybe 1 minor element cause I  don't think it mattered that much in the grand scheme of things.  

 

 

 

Nonetheless here is the first chapter to delve into Sachi's journey: 

 

https://www.fanficti...t/s/13851756/1/

 

 

 

ps-   The story will be a bi-weekly release that will typically be up on Sunday... Which means Chapter 2 will drop on April 11th. Please do share your thoughts as I always appreciate feedback and get really curious how others are feeling about the story, characters, etc.  


Edited by LuckyChi7, 31 March 2021 - 06:56 PM.

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