Ok... so the title is self explanitory. Post your poetry here, critique, yadda yadda yadda. I know there was a poetry thread, but some one ran over it so I'm trying to revive it!
I'll start:
Pensive Dream
The ashes scattered in the wind,
Dusting across the land,
As day faded dark,
And the water became still.
I gaze upon the glassy surface,
All words lost:
The water reflecting you.
Even if I were to smile,
At this wistful image,
Would you still greet me?
Believing that it were to be,
An artificial dream,
Of you…
… And I
Together.
Flying on the white wings of hope,
Gathering the forgotten tears,
That were left behind.
Blind, perplexed,
And reaching helplessly,
For that absent sanctuary,
Where pain could fade away.
But all is lost when daybreak comes,
When the sun rips the sky,
With blood red fingers,
Shattering the illusion,
Of what once was.
Poetry Thread V.3 (because the first two died...)
Started by PhantomNinja, Feb 25 2007 10:10 PM
4 replies to this topic
#1
Posted 25 February 2007 - 10:10 PM
#2
Posted 25 February 2007 - 10:17 PM
togther throw bad or good
she loves him throw and throw
she loves the way he talks
she loves the way he smiles
it go on for miles and miles
and he loves her throw bad or good
he loves he throw and throw
she loves him throw and throw
she loves the way he talks
she loves the way he smiles
it go on for miles and miles
and he loves her throw bad or good
he loves he throw and throw
#3
Posted 25 February 2007 - 10:19 PM
Ok. firstest. You must have correct spelling. I can feel the emotion of the poem, but it does nothing if the words aren't spelled correct.
#4
Posted 26 February 2007 - 08:48 AM
Roses Are Red
Violets Are Blue
Some poems rhyme, but this one doesnt.
Violets Are Blue
Some poems rhyme, but this one doesnt.
Conversation between me and my awesome drama teacher whilst watching Alfred Hitchcocks The Birds.
Are the birds some kind of Communist secret weapon?
No Jordan.
Are the birds under some kind of mind control by Big Bird from sesame street? Will Big Bird turn out to be the murderer? Will that girl turn around and big bird is behind her and she gets stabbed in the face?
No Jordan.
Is this the chickens revenge on Colonel Sanders?
Yes Jordan, this is a movie about an all bird terrorist group, led by big bird, funded by Communists on a mission to kill Colonel Sanders.
Really?
No Jordan.
Are the birds some kind of Communist secret weapon?
No Jordan.
Are the birds under some kind of mind control by Big Bird from sesame street? Will Big Bird turn out to be the murderer? Will that girl turn around and big bird is behind her and she gets stabbed in the face?
No Jordan.
Is this the chickens revenge on Colonel Sanders?
Yes Jordan, this is a movie about an all bird terrorist group, led by big bird, funded by Communists on a mission to kill Colonel Sanders.
Really?
No Jordan.
#5
Posted 27 February 2007 - 03:14 AM
Where'd It Go?
An innocent smile
A trusting look
Eyes Full of hope
A bounce in her step
Where'd it go?
Now a guilty frown
A distrustful spark
Eyes full of sharted dreams
A slow walk
A lost youth
A lost cause
A lost need
A lost innocence
Where'd it Go?
Where's her youth
Where's her cause
Where's her need
Where's her innocence?
It's gone
Most likely not
Coming back
Gone Forever
Never coming back....
To her heart
An innocent smile
A trusting look
Eyes Full of hope
A bounce in her step
Where'd it go?
Now a guilty frown
A distrustful spark
Eyes full of sharted dreams
A slow walk
A lost youth
A lost cause
A lost need
A lost innocence
Where'd it Go?
Where's her youth
Where's her cause
Where's her need
Where's her innocence?
It's gone
Most likely not
Coming back
Gone Forever
Never coming back....
To her heart
QUOTE
Stan: -says sometihng utterly stupid-
Me: . . . . Wow, I never thought I'd see something so stupid.....I kind awant to poke it.....but I don't know how sanitary that'd be....
Stan: yea...probably....
Me: . . . . Wow, I never thought I'd see something so stupid.....I kind awant to poke it.....but I don't know how sanitary that'd be....
Stan: yea...probably....
QUOTE
Me: -comes from lunch line and is about to put down lunch-
Leon (his nickname from me): Hi my darling! (or somthing to that likeness)
Me: o.o. . . . Uh.....Leon....?
Leon: Hahah~!!!
Me: -slowly sits down-
Leon (his nickname from me): Hi my darling! (or somthing to that likeness)
Me: o.o. . . . Uh.....Leon....?
Leon: Hahah~!!!
Me: -slowly sits down-
Note: Me and Leon are NOT dating, he's just overly flirty with every girl he sees
QUOTE
Me: -sitting in lunch doing homework-
Leon: -suddenly is sitting right next to me (as in, thigh next to thigh)-
Me: O.o? Leon...Why are you basically sitting on me?
Leon: Oh sill M-bear, I'm just sitting way to close to you, not ON you ^^
Me: ...O.o?
Leon: -suddenly is sitting right next to me (as in, thigh next to thigh)-
Me: O.o? Leon...Why are you basically sitting on me?
Leon: Oh sill M-bear, I'm just sitting way to close to you, not ON you ^^
Me: ...O.o?
QUOTE
Me: -listening to iPod-
Michale: Hey, John, don't you agree that girls are way cuter when they're angry?
John: Yea, I guess
Me: -looks up- O.o.....
Michale: Oh, not you Maria, you're just scary as hell
Me: -shrugs and goes back to iPod
Michale: Hey, John, don't you agree that girls are way cuter when they're angry?
John: Yea, I guess
Me: -looks up- O.o.....
Michale: Oh, not you Maria, you're just scary as hell
Me: -shrugs and goes back to iPod
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