Well, hello I'm here to get your thoughts on this to be my future fic. Tell me if I should continue or not.
It was said that the world would end but not this way. These things are not human, after all no one dies and gets back up but this happened and right now I’m the only one still alive. It was supposed to be a routine experiment just like the other ones but this time the corpse given to us by Orochimaru himself was very much alive. This thing was disgusting, it had spikes starting to grow from his back, it didn’t even have the pale color of a corpse instead it had a crimson red color all over the body like blood. This thing was bigger than any of us, almost reaching the roof of the lab and the only thing that was keeping this monster from eating us were the chains wrapped around its neck, wrists, and legs. We started to gather some blood samples, gathered some information on its weight and bone density. What happened next was just out of a horror… Oh my god they found me, please whoever finds this, make sure the world knows of this before it’s too…(static)
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Whirlpool country. October 10, 2012 (two hours after the outbreak).
Pain, that was the only thing going through Naruto Uzumaki’s mind. For you see today, even thought is his birthday, his life has changed from good to bad to worse. It all started after his dinner with his parents and girlfriend turned fiancée. The four were just going through the parking lot to their cars. During their walk they found themselves staring at a man, who had his back against them, with blood coming from his arm. Naruto’s father, Minato got close to the man
“Sir, are you okay?” asked Minato
The man didn’t respond, just stood staring at nothing. Minato looked at the others and saw their shocked faces. He turned around a little too late to see the man bite down Minato’s wrist.
“Dad!” said naruto as he pushed the man of off him...
I know its still incomplete and short but should I continue it this way or should I start it in some other way. Just give some advice.
Edited by crazyefra, 11 March 2010 - 12:10 AM.
そして、あなたの声は私が聞いたすべてだった
しかし、私に値するものを手に入れる
Pairings:
Naruto: NaruSaku, (Fem)NaruSaku, NaruSasu (as brothers, rivals, best friends), ShikaTema, NaruInoSaku, NaruHarem (excluding Hinata), MinaKushi, ChouIno, YahiKona
Fairy Tail: NatsuLucy, NatsuErza
Bleach: IchiRukia
Characters:
Naruto: Naruto, Sakura, Shikamaru, Konan, Gaara, Kushina, Kakashi, Ino
Fairy Tail: Erza, Happy, Natsu, Grey, Lucy, Gajeel
Bleach: Ichigo, Nell, Kenpachi, Rukia, Karin, Kon
Misc.: Linkin Park, Green Day
Pairings:
Naruto: NaruSakuHina, SakuHina, NaruTayu, KibaHina, SakuKarin
Bleach: IchiHime
Characters:
Naruto: Hinata, Tayuya, Karin, Itachi
Bleach: Orihime, Chad
Misc.: Yuri
Pairings:
Naruto: SasuSaku, NaruHina, NaruSasu (as gay lovers), KakaSaku, SasuAnyone, ShikaIno
Characters:
Naruto: Sasuke, Madara, "fanon" Hinata (not to be confused with canon Hinata), Kabuto
Bleach: Aizen, Yamamoto
Misc.:Twilight, Yaoi, Fillers, Sakura bashing