Striker`s and NaruSaku4Life`s dialog corner
Started by StrikerTheNoble, Mar 09 2013 09:16 PM
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Posted 13 March 2013 - 05:28 AM
This is a great thread. I always do these kind of stuff when playing on Xbox Live with my friends. I do go random, but they don't mind at all. Anyway, great job.
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Posted 13 March 2013 - 05:48 AM
QUOTE (NaruSaku4Life3g @ Mar 13 2013, 06:28 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
This is a great thread. I always do these kind of stuff when playing on Xbox Live with my friends. I do go random, but they don't mind at all. Anyway, great job.
Thank you. But the updates wont be as regular as they used to be. I made 16 dialoges in 4 days.
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Runner-ups:AstridxHiccup (How to train your dragon),SusanxReed, WallyxKuki (Kids next door); AshxMisty; ThorxSif
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Posted 13 March 2013 - 05:51 AM
QUOTE (StrikerTheNoble @ Mar 13 2013, 01:48 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Thank you. But the updates wont be as regular as they used to be. I made 16 dialoges in 4 days.
It's not easy to think up all the time. Keep it up.
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Posted 13 March 2013 - 02:57 PM
QUOTE (NaruSaku4Life3g @ Mar 13 2013, 06:51 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
It's not easy to think up all the time. Keep it up.
Well Im getting my tethanus shot at the doctors today. Im freaking scared of neadles. So i figured id make someones day if im gonna suffer. NEW STUFF^^. For those of you who wander what sakura was doing.
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Posted 13 March 2013 - 03:26 PM
Lol, those were sooo funny!
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Posted 13 March 2013 - 04:28 PM
QUOTE (Chatte @ Mar 13 2013, 04:26 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Lol, those were sooo funny!
Why were? Im still making them
EDIT:
WE HIT 1000 views.Thank you for the support.
Edited by StrikerTheNoble, 13 March 2013 - 06:08 PM.
OTP: NaruSaku; Favorite crack pairing: NaruIno
Runner-ups:AstridxHiccup (How to train your dragon),SusanxReed, WallyxKuki (Kids next door); AshxMisty; ThorxSif
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Posted 13 March 2013 - 08:52 PM
The last three are great and funny 
. Great job XD
. Great job XD
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Posted 14 March 2013 - 04:13 PM
QUOTE (T XD @ Mar 13 2013, 09:52 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
The last three are great and funny . Great job XD
. Great job XDTnx. I did a double release this time. Hope they are ok.
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Posted 15 March 2013 - 07:14 PM
NEW MATERIAL ^^
OTP: NaruSaku; Favorite crack pairing: NaruIno
Runner-ups:AstridxHiccup (How to train your dragon),SusanxReed, WallyxKuki (Kids next door); AshxMisty; ThorxSif
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Posted 15 March 2013 - 10:34 PM
Love these keep em up 
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Posted 15 March 2013 - 11:13 PM
Thank you guys. NEW STUFF ADDED ^^
OTP: NaruSaku; Favorite crack pairing: NaruIno
Runner-ups:AstridxHiccup (How to train your dragon),SusanxReed, WallyxKuki (Kids next door); AshxMisty; ThorxSif
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Posted 16 March 2013 - 10:36 PM
New material
OTP: NaruSaku; Favorite crack pairing: NaruIno
Runner-ups:AstridxHiccup (How to train your dragon),SusanxReed, WallyxKuki (Kids next door); AshxMisty; ThorxSif
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Posted 17 March 2013 - 04:50 PM
25th dialoge added. Tnx for the support guys.
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Posted 17 March 2013 - 09:12 PM
NEW MATERIAL
OTP: NaruSaku; Favorite crack pairing: NaruIno
Runner-ups:AstridxHiccup (How to train your dragon),SusanxReed, WallyxKuki (Kids next door); AshxMisty; ThorxSif
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Posted 18 March 2013 - 05:29 AM
le update
OTP: NaruSaku; Favorite crack pairing: NaruIno
Runner-ups:AstridxHiccup (How to train your dragon),SusanxReed, WallyxKuki (Kids next door); AshxMisty; ThorxSif
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Posted 18 March 2013 - 06:22 AM
I laughed out loud reading "The Truth"
If I had to give some constructive criticism, I would say this-
I think it's better if you end your dialogues on a punchline, for example:
I would personally leave thing like the bolded endings out, so that the last line ("But it was worth it") is something that ends the dialogue a humorous tone.
If I had to give some constructive criticism, I would say this-
I think it's better if you end your dialogues on a punchline, for example:
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*Guy and Kakashi are having another contest*
Kakashi: Ok. I chalenge you to a race.
Guy: Where to?
Kakashi: The baseball courth
Guy: You are on.
Kakashi: Get ready, get set, Go
*Guy runs as fast as he can in a random direction.*
Kakashi: Idiot, there is not baseball courth in Konoha.
*Later that day guys returns*
Guy: I win Kakashi.
Kakashi: But there is no baseball courth.
Guy: Wrong! I figured you would try something like that eventually. So i built a secret baseball courth in the forrests.
Kakashi: You did what?
Guy: I win (does his signiature pose)
Kakashi: OK you win. But for the record thats retarded.
Guy: And expencive. But it was worth it.
Kakashi: Whatever im out of here. Naruto and Sakura have been waiting for me for 2 hours. Who knows what they are doing by now.
Guy: See ya next time, Kakashi.
Kakashi: Yea yea whatever.
Kakashi: Ok. I chalenge you to a race.
Guy: Where to?
Kakashi: The baseball courth
Guy: You are on.
Kakashi: Get ready, get set, Go
*Guy runs as fast as he can in a random direction.*
Kakashi: Idiot, there is not baseball courth in Konoha.
*Later that day guys returns*
Guy: I win Kakashi.
Kakashi: But there is no baseball courth.
Guy: Wrong! I figured you would try something like that eventually. So i built a secret baseball courth in the forrests.
Kakashi: You did what?
Guy: I win (does his signiature pose)
Kakashi: OK you win. But for the record thats retarded.
Guy: And expencive. But it was worth it.
Kakashi: Whatever im out of here. Naruto and Sakura have been waiting for me for 2 hours. Who knows what they are doing by now.
Guy: See ya next time, Kakashi.
Kakashi: Yea yea whatever.
I would personally leave thing like the bolded endings out, so that the last line ("But it was worth it") is something that ends the dialogue a humorous tone.
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Posted 18 March 2013 - 06:31 AM
QUOTE (Baguette @ Mar 18 2013, 07:22 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
I laughed out loud reading "The Truth"
If I had to give some constructive criticism, I would say this-
I think it's better if you end your dialogues on a punchline, for example:
I would personally leave thing like the bolded endings out, so that the last line ("But it was worth it") is something that ends the dialogue a humorous tone.
If I had to give some constructive criticism, I would say this-
I think it's better if you end your dialogues on a punchline, for example:
I would personally leave thing like the bolded endings out, so that the last line ("But it was worth it") is something that ends the dialogue a humorous tone.
Yea you are probably right. I actually find the ending the most difficult part to do. The TV dialoge was originaly about 6 lines longer but i changed it because it was dragged and boring. I was gonna end it there but i figured i could squezee some NS in there.(the challenge dialoge). I dont know I will see what the next one will be about and how i can work the endings in.
EDIT: Tnx for replying. It was getting kinda pathetic to have to bump the topic myself.
Edited by StrikerTheNoble, 18 March 2013 - 06:32 AM.
OTP: NaruSaku; Favorite crack pairing: NaruIno
Runner-ups:AstridxHiccup (How to train your dragon),SusanxReed, WallyxKuki (Kids next door); AshxMisty; ThorxSif
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Posted 18 March 2013 - 06:55 AM
Lol, judging by the number of views, there are plenty of people coming in here for updates. 
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Posted 18 March 2013 - 11:32 AM
QUOTE (Baguette @ Mar 18 2013, 07:55 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Lol, judging by the number of views, there are plenty of people coming in here for updates.
True. But if the topic falls to low on the list people might miss it. I also like to hear the opinions. At the end of the day im doing this to make you guys laugh so it nice to hear what you think
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