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[Smiter]

I just wanted to let everyone know that Chapter 7 has been released.

Here is the link! I've linked to the first chapter in case there are any new readers here.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1981981/1/

But if you know the story and just want to hop straight in.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1981981/7/

I hope you like it! I'll be making a couple of corrections to the earlier chapters soon AND uploading Chapter 8 quite soon when the final few scenes are done (and they pass the Ash and Aethos test as well )!

[HinataFanBoy]

just read the update, very nice, heh cept i kinda forgot what was happening

[Blayze]

Finished reading the chapter a bit ago.

One-word summary - GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOD.

More-than-one-word summary - VERY GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOD.

[Smiter]

Thanks a lot, guys!

I'm not surprised you forgot what happened, HH - it has been a LONG time since the last update.

I edited the summary and corrected a formatting mistake I saw in the latest chapter (it crept in while I was converting it into HTML). I was going to say "Eventual NaruSaku" in the summary, but I decided to leave it at "Eventual pairings". It is about more than just Naruto and Sakura getting together, and I thought it would be better for people to read and find out themselves rather than just brush over the summary.

[Smiter]

That too.

There will be future parts which I suspect will make me deeply unpopular... But if that happens then those parts have done their job.

While SoF will mainly be quite light, there WILL be parts that will upset people and hopefully mess up their emotions.

[Blayze]

If it messes up my emotions, you'll know you've done your job. Only the manga Uzumaki has so far managed to mess with my head...

[Smiter]

All sorts of parts. Of course, nothing kinky. I would love to reveal more and discuss ideas, but that would just spoil the story! But there will be tragedy, injustice, loss, that sort of thing.

Let's just say it won't be a smooth ride for everyone in the story.

What is the manga "Uzumaki"..? Is it one of those doujins?

[Blayze]

All sorts of parts.   Of course, nothing kinky.   I would love to reveal more and discuss ideas, but that would just spoil the story!  But there will be tragedy, injustice, loss, that sort of thing.

Let's just say it won't be a smooth ride for everyone in the story.

What is the manga "Uzumaki"..?  Is it one of those doujins?

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It's a VERY disturbing horror manga based around spirals.

Pregnant women drinking blood from hospital patients using hand drills, school students turning into human-sized snails, hair coming alive and choking people, lovers twisting together like snakes, pottery made from clay formed from the ashes of dead people, souls screaming out in sheer agony...

[Blayze]

Especially the chapter with the car-crash corpse bouncing along after the main characters, falling to pieces along the way, because nobody removed the spring from his corpse.

[Blayze]

I should never have read it after midnight. Try falling asleep when your mind's conjuring up THOSE images...

[sharingank]

OH, t3h Smiteness.. you already know what I think about this loverly story I LOFF IT!!!!

::gives smiter cookies::

And that manga sounds scary...VERRA SCARA!!! *grabs flashlight and lights it under face::

BOOGIE MONSTER!!

[Smiter]

That is... funny, Blayze! I must be twisted if I thought that was funny...

Wow, the mangaka must have been pretty twisted, eh? I can imagine all those Naruto fans picking it up, thinking it was about the blond - and they see all that stuff.

Thanks, Ash. *munches on cookies* Mmm, hazelnut and choc chip... *sighs with contentment*

Hopefully you guys will get Chapter 8 to be beta-read tonight/tomorrow! Depends on how much energy I have left after being bored to death at work today.

[Naru/Saku926]

Very nice update soon!!!

/ forever!!!

:yinyang:

~Andrew