Hey looking for a beta reader for the next chapter of my story In Due Time and maybe one or two other Naruto fandom stories.
Warning: 9 times out of 10 my chapters are relatively long
I make a lot of errors. For some reason I can't catch the bugs in my own writing
Well if anyone has the time and patience let me know.
Beta reader needed
Started by Candleguy, Jan 23 2013 08:24 AM
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Posted 23 January 2013 - 08:43 AM
I guess? lol, first time beta reading LEGGO
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Posted 23 January 2013 - 05:47 PM
Well thanks for volunteering.
I should ask are you familiar with my story? I'm not sure if it would help for you to see the other chapters before this new one
I should ask are you familiar with my story? I'm not sure if it would help for you to see the other chapters before this new one
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Posted 23 January 2013 - 09:37 PM
I'll do some catching up right now
Edit: Reading through your story, I'll pop some errors here
Chapter 1:
"What is that supposed to mean?"
"Heh, well Tsunade estimates that Naruto hasn't slept a wink in the last three days."
It finally made sense! Naruto must love having people worrying about him.
"He hasn't been partying" Shizune said.
Shizune, like our respected mentor had gained the strange habit of being able to read my mind.
"It's worthy of even Ichiraku ramen bar!" "It's even on par with Ichiraku's!" "It's worthy of being from Ichiraku's!"
High praise indeed, knowing Naruto. I'd like to say I kept myself from blushing but then I'd be lying.
"Just relax, OK? You need to rest."
Typical Naruto, he wouldn't go down easy.
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Edit: Reading through your story, I'll pop some errors here
Chapter 1:
"What is that supposed to mean?"
"Heh, well Tsunade estimates that Naruto hasn't slept a wink in the last three days."
It finally made sense! Naruto must love having people worrying about him.
"He hasn't been partying" Shizune said.
Shizune, like our respected mentor had gained the strange habit of being able to read my mind.
"It's worthy of even Ichiraku ramen bar!" "It's even on par with Ichiraku's!" "It's worthy of being from Ichiraku's!"
High praise indeed, knowing Naruto. I'd like to say I kept myself from blushing but then I'd be lying.
"Just relax, OK? You need to rest."
Typical Naruto, he wouldn't go down easy.
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Edited by Chucky-kun, 23 January 2013 - 09:53 PM.
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Posted 24 January 2013 - 03:48 AM
LOL I didn't mean for you to go proofread all the previous chapters, that would be too much work. I was just thinking perhaps it be easier to work on it you were familiar with the story.
I'll pm you a draft of the latest chapter
I'll pm you a draft of the latest chapter
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Posted 24 January 2013 - 04:01 AM
QUOTE (Candleguy @ Jan 24 2013, 02:48 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
LOL I didn't mean for you to go proofread all the previous chapters, that would be too much work. I was just thinking perhaps it be easier to work on it you were familiar with the story.
I'll pm you a draft of the latest chapter
I'll pm you a draft of the latest chapter
I was just getting the general gist of your story, and saw a few errors.
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Posted 24 January 2013 - 04:06 AM
That's perfectly fine. I'm ok with that.
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