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#61 desaix

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Posted 22 June 2006 - 09:21 AM

Double-posted because this requires a seperate post, regardless of what else I had in the last one.

Lest anyone think my decision to work on two fiction writing projects at once will be too much of a hindrance, here is the first half of the next chapter, just to prove progress is still going on. (Check under the spoiler tag)



Volume 4

Chapter 5

Tsunade's announcement had not been well recieved, but she had been prepared for that. As the crowd muttered against her angrilly, Gaara and the other village leaders stepped forward to present their testimony as to Naruto's fitness for leadership. Gaara on how he became a leader because of Naruto, Kakashi on how well Naruto ran Blossom in his absence, the Raikage on how much loyalty he witnessed displayed to him, and the leaders of Rainbow and Grass... on how he fought for his allies, and how he treated his enemies. The case for making Naruto the Sixth was put before the people, and it was only a matter of time until their considerations started getting taken into account.

And then, Tsunade retreated to her office. It would take the public some time to get over her announcement, but she intended to ram the issue through the council with every resource she had available. She already had Shikamaru and Jiraiya out, working together in order to get as accurate a poll as possible to determine just where it was she would need to push, and she had been pulling out the files of everyone who owed her a favor since she heard Naruto was coming back. Truth be told, she had been planning on doing this for some time, after all, and a lot of the preparation had already been done... but because of Naruto's injury, he had arrived back a little sooner then expected -- not much sooner, though. The orders recalling them had already been written out in draft form, and she probably would have sent them out shortly anyway. Kakashi's mission had been winding down, after all, and the reports she'd been given lead her to believe it was only a matter of months before it was complete... but, it seemed, things ended sooner then expected. And so, she had most of the work done, already... and she had a pretty good idea as to how things were going to turn out.

It was no surprise to her, then, that Naruto burst into her office -- Sakura trailing behind him -- as soon as he possibly could have gotten past her guards without killing them. It was a bit of a surprise, however, that he looked... slightly angry, and not the confused happiness she expected.

"What the f*** are you thinking, you old hag?" he snapped without preamble, startling her.

Her eye twitched slightly at the way he addressed him, but she supposed it didn't matter that he was several years older then the last time they had talked together -- he would always be the same Naruto. And Naruto always, always, always called her an 'old hag,' regardless of whether the conversation was serious or silly. It was, in a sense, a pet name for her... much as he still called Jiraiya 'Ero-sennin' and likely would still call Lee 'Fuzzy Eyebrows.' Still, as angry as he was, it sounded a lot more vicious then usual. And she had no idea why he could possibly be angry for this.

"I'm thinking," she replied cautiously, trying both to soothe him and rein in her own temper. "That we needed a second hokage for just the reasons I said during the assembly. And I'm thinking I promised you the job of hokage a few years ago, and should probably make good on that promise."

"I want to be better then the hokage," Naruto replied evenly. "Which means I don't want to hurt Konoha in the process of getting the job! You're right, you do need a new hokage... but it shouldn't be me. It should be Kakashi-sensei, and I would move into his slot in Blossom. What we need is a hokage who people would get behind and respect, and not someone who will just provoke a fight... and I'm still not exactly the most favorite person of most people here. My becoming hokage could very well start that civil war you've been trying to avoid, regardless of what I do or how I act."

Tsunade smirked half-heartedly. "Yeah, I know. It's a bit of a gamble, isn't it? And, well, my track record for gambling isn't very good. Hasn't been since, well...." She glanced at the necklace he still wore that she had given him all those years before. "Since a certain family member of mine died. But I think it'll pan out."
(This was where I left off last time)

"A gamble?" Naruto snapped heatedly. "The odds are so long that this won't result in a civil war that it isn't a gamble at all!"

"I thought the same thing when I bet you that you couldn't learn the rasengan in a week," Tsunade replied calmly, not allowing his emotional outbursts to visibly phase her. "But I learned then that you can beat impossible odds."

Naruto flushed for a moment, embarrassed at the praise and thrown by example. "But--"

"The thing you don't understand," Tsunade continued, "Is that I don't think there's really anything that can be done right now. The situation with the Hyuuga is impossible -- I can sit and do nothing while the Hyuuga tear themselves and Konoha apart, or I can confront them and start a clan war the likes of which haven't been seen since Konoha's founding. Either way, it seems, civil war seems inevitable. So, I figured I'd bring in someone who I knew had already done one impossible thing in his lifetime, and see if he can't repeat the experience."

He grimmaced. "Is it really that bad?"

"I'm afraid so," Tsunade sighed. "The reports I've been sending to Blossom -- which I know you've read -- were intentionally vague on a lot of this stuff, and left out much more, but the result is that the situation has become entirely untenable. It has also been stagnating for the past couple of years, but everyone knew it was only a matter of time before something sparked it off... and your return has been that spark."1

"So... what really is the situation, then?" Naruto asked.

"Pretty bad," Tsunade explained. "The three factions have no route of communication with each other. The matriarch's faction is taking a position with no room for compromise, and Hanabi's faction is branding the patriarch's positions as if they were hers. Just about every major clan except for the Aburame have allied themselves to some extent with one side or another... although even the Aburame are sympathetic to the matriarch's position, and were it not for Shino taking a decidedly pro-Hinata stance would probably declare for it. And, as you have already seen, at least one faction is willing to start open fighting on the street over this conflict.

"Furthermore, there are other things going on outside of these internal struggles. There is the Sound, which appears to be on the move again... although we have no idea what it is, precisely, they are doing. Then there is the Rock, which has been concentrating power for years, now, with no known goal in mind. They have grown faster in the past five years then all the other major ninja powers combined, and their leader is rumored to be one of the most powerful ninja ever born... if not the most powerful.

"Finally... there are other things going -- more personal than that, I suppose, but important nonetheless. You might have noticed a significant decline in Jiraiya's performance over the past few years. There's a pretty big reason for that, and that has to do with me. I won't go into details -- like I said, it is somewhat personal -- but he has been helping me deal with a certain problem for years, now, and unless things change he'll be rendered utterly useless as a ninja. By delegating some of the stresses of being Hokage into your lap, I will be able to release him of this burden, which should -- in time -- restore him to a functional level, at least."

Naruto nodded. "And picking me over Kakashi-sensei?"

"You, Naruto-kun, depending on how you decide to play your new role, will be able to help by becoming one of two things," Tsunade explained. "The first is, you could become a lightning rod. People hate you because of the kyuubi -- not the youth, for the most part, but the clan leadership. By nominating you to become hokage, I am giving each clan leader a common enemy to target. The other is, while the adult leadership is against you, pretty much the entire youth of this country has learned to -- at the very least -- respect you. If the youth splits from the adults, then the adults lose their power... and without powerful 'adult' leadership, most of the troubles caused by 'traditionalists' in various clans will... disappear. I leave it in your hands how to proceed."

Naruto nodded slowly. "I guess I can see that," he said. "I guess I understand why you would name me hokage, if that is your plan. But... but I don't want to become hokage by being a fraud!"

Tsunade looked flabbergasted at that comment. "A fraud? What are you talking about, a fraud?"

"What's all that crap about me being the son of the Fourth?" Naruto sputtered. "Who do you expect to believe that!?"

Tsunade glanced over his shoulder at Sakura, who looked just as nonplussed as she felt. "Um, Naruto-kun... that's the truth."

His eyes widened before he sputtered in denial, "But... but that's not possible! It's not! I... I would know! Someone would have said something! There'd be clues!"

"There are clues," Tsunade snorted. "Just look in the mirror, and then look at a picture of the Fourth. Trust me, it's pretty obvious to anyone who is willing to see it."

"He wasn't married," Naruto continued desperately. "So... so he couldn't have been my father."

"Naruto-kun," Sakura began, laughing slightly. "We aren't married, yet... and if I wanted to I'd have been able to make you a father several times over, already. And while the Fourth wasn't married, I happen to know that's only because the Council disliked his choice of bride."

He spun on her. "So... so you know who my mother is, too? Who is it!? I... I have to know...."

Sakura's eyes widened as she realized her admission. "Oh... Naruto-kun. I... I'm sorry, but I can't tell you."

"You can't tell me?" he snapped, almost enraged. "But... but why not?"

Sakura looked down, pained. She didn't want to keep this secret from him, but she had no choice. She hated what Anko was making her do to him. "Remember how you couldn't tell me about Kakashi for all those years?"

Naruto almost yelled at her for bringing up something irrelevant, but then reconsidered. Maybe there was a point she had to make. "What about it?"

"I told you then, I had secrets I hated keeping from you," Sakura reminded him. "It was a secret that wasn't mine to tell, and in the wrong hands it could be very dangerous to you. The person whose secret it is believes that you would be in danger of losing the ability to fulfill your dreams if anyone knew, and so I had to promise to keep it a secret even from you without their permission. I... I think you should know, but I'm not allowed to say."

Naruto nodded slowly, then turned towards the hokage. "Do... do you know who this is?"

Tsunade nodded. "I do, although I found out about it myself less then a month ago. I agree with Sakura -- you should know, but we shouldn't be the ones to tell you."

Naruto sighed, his face down so that niether person could see his expression. "I... see. Can I at least know... is she still alive?"

Sakura winced, but felt obliged to give him some sort of answer. "Who do you think is making us keep this secret from you, love? Who do you think is the only person whose word could restrain me from telling you?"

"So, yes, she is alive. Well, I suppose I can't really blame you for keeping this secret from me, considering she is the one making you keep it," Naruto sighed. He glanced over at Sakura, then grinned slightly. "She isn't your mother, is she? Because that would put a whole new twist on our relationship, you know...."

Sakura laughed slightly, glad to see that he wasn't going to hold a grudge over this secret... at least, not one he'd allow to slip passed his mask. "Trust me, Naruto-kun, there are certain things we do together I'd never allow if that were the case."

He grinned back, winking to let her know she was forgiven, before turning to the hokage once more. "Well, I'll still need to be voted in by the council. I suppose this means I'll need to do a little campaigning, huh?"

Tsunade was almost as pleased as Sakura to see that he was taking their secret so well. She was also glad he seemed to be coming around to the idea of being hokage... something she never thought she'd have to convince him to become. "At this point, there is no way the council will refuse your induction. The announcement was too public, and they know there is no way they could get away with voting you down. Especially after the Raikage, the Kazekage, and the heads of several other ninja villages stood up and endorsed you. To defy me is one thing, but to defy three kage and a number of jounin-oyabun would ruin them, and they know it."

Naruto grinned darkly. "Hm. Maybe. But I think I'll go and talk to the voting members of the council, anyway. Starting with, say, Hyuuga Hiashi."

Both women looked rather alarmed at that. "Naruto-kun, I'm not sure that you should do that," Sakura exclaimed. "It's not safe!"

"I don't know what he thinks of you, Naruto," Tsunade said at the same time, talking over Sakura. "But I'm pretty sure there would be a lot of people who would take that as you picking a side -- which isn't a good idea!"

"Oh, I'll probably visit Hinata-chan, too," Naruto replied, shrugging. "But I've already had a chat with Hyuuga-sama, so it's only fair I look in on the other faction heads. Don't worry -- I won't go alone."

Sakura relaxed slightly. "Good. We could take Moegi and Ko--"

"I think I'll take Hanabi-chan, Inari, Adaha, and Umiko with me," Naruto continued. "That'd be enough protection."

The volume of the complaints Tsunade and Sakura sent flying his way after that damaged his hearing enough to require kyuubi to spend some time healing his ears.

* * * * *


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Posted 23 June 2006 - 07:42 PM

That little bit only made the waiting worse laugh.gif
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Posted 23 June 2006 - 08:30 PM

: crys :
It was ceutiful, now, i have a sufficient suppy of reading and yeling to get me through... 15 minutes of reading at a slow pace

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Posted 24 June 2006 - 12:20 AM

Ah yes, and an entire summer to wait for that chapter, and I think you mentioned Hanabi where it wasn't suppose to be:
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"Pretty bad," Tsunade explained. "The three factions have no route of communication with each other. The matriarch's faction is taking a position with no room for compromise, and Hanabi's faction is branding the patriarch's positions as if they were hers.
Wow, Naruto used the "F" word. Never thought I'd see or read the day.

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Posted 24 June 2006 - 12:43 AM

You and me both, I'd thought he use Datte Bayo!

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Posted 24 June 2006 - 02:23 AM

Heh, won't it be funny if they censored it on TV with the word Dattebayo.

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Posted 24 June 2006 - 03:30 AM

:devil: :shamefulcry0js: dont tease us like that!


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Posted 24 June 2006 - 09:18 AM

Very good part of a chapter, i am, like all the others, in no position to wait :-)

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Posted 27 June 2006 - 08:16 PM

A random thought here, what does naruto look like now? Since he's an adult, does he look like the 4th? And what does he wear now?

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Posted 27 June 2006 - 08:24 PM

He very much resembles the Fourth. As to what he wears... *shrug* Not important to the story, so I haven't really decided. Um, probably he doesn't dress just like the Fourth, however, since when the 4th becomes undead people will be able to tell them apart by what they wear.

Outside of that, Sakura's the only person who has clothing that matters.... (I sometimes wonder if I gave her part of the kyuubi just so that she'd show off her midriff...)

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Posted 27 June 2006 - 11:08 PM

Oh, hmm, oh well. Is he still wearing his Naruto II outfit? Oh and why do I have a Warn thing on me?

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Posted 27 June 2006 - 11:12 PM

As I said, I haven't really decided. If you wish to picture him with Part II clothes, he can be wearing Part II clothes.

As far as the 'Warn' thing, that is not my doing. I think this is one of the new 'features' of the recent forum upgrade -- there's some mention of it in the FAQs. You can only see your own 'Warn,' btw -- outsiders cannot.

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Posted 27 June 2006 - 11:22 PM

oy, showing off sakura's midriff, are you? Good :-)
So your Naruto is similar enought to the fourth that people will have trouble telling them apart?

Oh, and while i know how you placed the fourth's strentgh (a bit weak though, i always thought he was the ultimate badass), is he getting better after his he comes back :-)

ps: how is going your novel?

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Posted 28 June 2006 - 03:21 AM

Volume 4, Chapter 5 has been posted here. I'll post it to ff.net and mediaminer tonight at 3:30am Eastern.

P.S.: The fantasy novel is just as it has been -- in progress. I'm still taking people who might want to help me out with it (don't need grammar\spelling advice, just commentary and questions). That's all the news for now.

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Posted 28 June 2006 - 03:41 AM

As i reviewed, i am just going to say welcome back, and that i am intrigued about the incoming meeting with hiashi. I still don't know exactly your stance on him, so...


PS: Good, many people is better than a few. I can't wait for the next installement of your novel, personaly :-), and the comments of a few more people will only make it better :-)

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Posted 28 June 2006 - 04:06 AM

It's great to see another chapter of this!

Things seem to be moving right along, and I'm thinking that ending the current situation without bloodshed seems a little too impossible even for Naruto. These factions have had years to harden their positions, and pushing too strongly against them might just cause a civil war of a different sort by making at least some of the factions unite against the current government.

It'll be very interesting to see what happens.

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Posted 29 June 2006 - 01:50 AM

So, I was wondering, and probably so do other people, what's going to happen to Blossom? Is it relevant now? Kakashi will still govern it right?

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Posted 29 June 2006 - 02:14 AM

Of course Blossom's still relevant. Lee and Tenten and Neji's story is being told, ain't it? And they're in Blossom, aren't they? That should tell you something right there.

As far as Kakashi still being in charge of Blossom goes... yeah, but he'll be a few chapters getting back.

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Posted 29 June 2006 - 02:23 AM

So, how's your updating time, now, since you have a novel in the works?

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Posted 29 June 2006 - 02:27 AM

Slower. How much slower? We'll see. Probably less then months between chapters. happy.gif

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