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#1 kirabook

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Posted 10 November 2017 - 02:07 AM

Hello hello.

 

So.... well... I have this fanfiction you see. It's not amazing or anything, but I think it's pretty ok.

 

But, I'm stuck on the final chapter and kind of need advice. But I can't just ask for any old normal advice. Someone would have needed to have read the fanfiction up to the last chapter and are ok with being spoiled with what I plan to do in the final chapter. 

 

Does anyone wanna help me out with this? The story can be found here:

https://www.fanficti...11545850/1/Home



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#2 DrK

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Posted 13 November 2017 - 12:21 AM

I guess I can try. I've started writing NS stories lately.

 

I have to say that I can't really see how the story would get wrapped up that quickly, unless the last chapter would be longer than any of the others.



#3 sushi.

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Posted 13 November 2017 - 12:27 AM

Glad you're picking this up again :D been missing it since summer <3

Unfortunately I cant write sorry : (
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#4 kirabook

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Posted 14 November 2017 - 03:45 AM

I guess I can try. I've started writing NS stories lately.

 

I have to say that I can't really see how the story would get wrapped up that quickly, unless the last chapter would be longer than any of the others.

 

Well, I've had this ending planned out since the beginning. I don't think the mysterious person who kidnapped Shina will be as surprising as people think. And, I had to twist a little bit of canon to make it happen, but it is an AU story afterall.

 

I can send you the details in a PM if you like?

 

And I never dropped it sushi. I literally open it once a day, stare at the document, and then close it because I'm not sure how to continue. XD



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#5 sushi.

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Posted 14 November 2017 - 04:11 AM

Tbh I don't think you should change your plans even if the mysterious person is a no-shock. Consistency is more important than suspense and I read the story for narusakushina not action.

Just my two cents as a reader. But then since I don't know who it is I'm not sure if it holds weight. And as an artist, I feel your pain on the empty paper.
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#6 DrK

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Posted 14 November 2017 - 05:55 PM

Sure, and I agree with what sushi said.



#7 kirabook

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Posted 16 November 2017 - 04:37 AM

No worries. I have no plans to change who it is. Just... well, I've never quite written their character before and I feel like I'm doing it all wrong so yeah. 



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