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#1 Ace of Circle

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Posted 03 June 2014 - 12:54 PM

Check out this fanfic.
https://www.fanficti...1/RedLeg-Naruto
Check out this fanfic,it's pretty long but I reckon it's pretty good and has a good topic.Spelling and writing style isn't that good to begin with but improves.Read at least to Chapter 11 before deciding whether it's good or bad.Post feedback.Post any good fanfics for discussion.

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#2 KonaKonaFan

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Posted 03 June 2014 - 01:10 PM

Check out the writer's section of the forum. This discussion is more suited there.


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#3 Ace of Circle

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Posted 03 June 2014 - 01:11 PM

Check out the writer's section of the forum. This discussion is more suited there.


Ok thx and sorry.Do you think I'll get in trouble for starting this topic there?

Edited by Ace., 03 June 2014 - 01:11 PM.

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Posted 03 June 2014 - 01:17 PM

No worries! I'll move this thread to the "Fiction Press" section if you'd like to continue in this thread! Or you can start a new one!  :D



#5 Ace of Circle

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Posted 03 June 2014 - 01:23 PM

No worries! I'll move this thread to the "Fiction Press" section if you'd like to continue in this thread! Or you can start a new one!  :D


Whoops!I started a new one there before reading this.Sorry ;) If you can though you can delete this one.

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Posted 03 June 2014 - 02:02 PM

/\ Done!



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Posted 04 June 2014 - 07:10 AM

I like them if its not OOC character I don't mind the ones that are OOC I don't bother with the ones that get....disturbing.

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#8 Ace of Circle

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Posted 04 June 2014 - 01:58 PM

I like them if its not OOC character I don't mind the ones that are OOC I don't bother with the ones that get....disturbing.


What's OOC?

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Posted 04 June 2014 - 02:35 PM

Out Of Character - Naruto giving up, Sasuke being nice, Hinata being confident. All these are OOC behaviors.



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Posted 04 June 2014 - 08:24 PM

Couldn't make it past the first sentence. I don't care for crossovers and it's starts as "The 7 yr old"

The number should be written out and you don't use abbreviations in descriptions like that.

#11 Ace of Circle

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Posted 05 June 2014 - 08:36 AM

Couldn't make it past the first sentence. I don't care for crossovers and it's starts as "The 7 yr old"The number should be written out and you don't use abbreviations in descriptions like that.


I agree that it's written with little knowledge or style and mediocre spelling,however I think that once you push past the first "sentence" then you start to enjoy it.

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Posted 15 June 2014 - 03:10 PM

Out Of Character - Naruto giving up, Sasuke being nice, Hinata being confident. All these are OOC behaviors.

 

Well.. I think Hinata can be confident in her own way. Just not so outwardly confident (like in RTN).

 

Naruto probably thinks about giving up sometimes, but would never do it.

 

Sasuke probably does have a soft side, but would never show it.


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Why do people NOT ship these two? I just don't get it.

Probably cause they hate Sakura. When she's probably the most developed female character in the whole show.

I respect Hinata, but Sakura deserves some too.






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