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[FoolishYoungling]

I'm loving it so far Phantom! I'm starting to wonder if there is another kid in that alternate world. I'm sure that they should have more than 1 since both Naruto and Sakura are perverts.

[HauntedCake]

Great work phantom keep it up

[Phantom_999]

Thanks! I'll try to come up with part three soon.

I'm loving it so far Phantom! I'm starting to wonder if there is another kid in that alternate world. I'm sure that they should have more than 1 since both Naruto and Sakura are perverts.

True. But I'll stick with just Yuuki for this one cause it is easier just to focus on her. BUT if you want I could make SH with four or five.......

Edited by Phantom_999, 08 May 2013 - 11:53 PM.

[FoolishYoungling]

Thanks! I'll try to come up with part three soon.



True. But I'll stick with just Yuuki for this one cause it is easier just to focus on her. BUT if you want I could make SH with four or five.......

Yes! SasuHina baby! I wonder how it will come into the real world. Maybe the door starts to.. leak?

[Phantom_999]

we'll see I was thinking of SH in the current time line but teen pregnancy may be a sensitive subject so I'd like to hear opinions on it first.

[FoolishYoungling]

we'll see I was thinking of SH in the current time line but teen pregnancy may be a sensitive subject so I'd like to hear opinions on it first.

I wouldn't mind it.

[Phantom_999]

Okay Here's Part three!!!!

the Mysterious Child Part Three

Yuuki: Papa, Can I have a piggy Back ride like you used to do?  
Naruto: Sure.... Wait a minute!! I don't have kids here, much less given them a piggy back ride!!  
Yuuki: PLLLEEEEEEAAAAAASSSSSEEEEEE!!!!!!  
Naruto: Okay okay......  
Kakashi: So what are you two doing here anyway?
Misato: In our world, there is a great war happening, fought over to control the five nations. An ominous organization "Meido's Dawn" emerged and suddenly attacked the land of Lightning. they were driven off but left the Raikage within an inch of his life. Before they left though They gave the Cloud village a an ominous message; "The time of The shinobi villages is nearly ending." The world ninja order will find a new revolution!! Oppose us if you wish but it is futile." They also requested that this message be sent to all ninja villages. Then All of our villages allie against this organization. That was 2 years ago.
Kakashi: I see. and how are things going now?
Misato: We're managing as far as I knew before coming here but that is all. Those enemies are unlike any foes we've ever faced. they can use all five elemental chakras and they have a a strange ability we've never seen before. They can amplify the effects of their jutsu to frightening degrees. All they do is join together and mix their chakras,then their techniques become even deadlier.
Kakashi: That is unheard of, but Chakra IS a fascinating thing. Just when you think you've seen it all it just continues to surprise you. But still that does not explain why you are here.
Misato: Last year, one of the casualties we suffered was the loss of Naruto-sama and Sakura-sama.
Kakashi: WHAT? Even Naruto and Sakura were no match for them?
Misato Actually it was the opposite. Naruto-sama and Sakura-sama were spearheading the attack on the organization. They were our best advantage in the war.
Kakashi: So What happened?
Misato: The Organization was after oujou-sama for as of yet unexplained reasons. They continuously attacked us to have her in their grasp. In one of their assaults One of their most terrible jutsu nearly struck her but Naruto-sama and Sakura-sama shielded her from the blast. They survived and fought off all the assailants but the wounds they received from that explosion was something that even they could not identify. They never recovered from their injuries and succumbed to them last year. Ojou-sama suffered so terribly from the loss. There was a time where she would not eat for days. After that she nearly fell into the hands of the enemy so many times, so the New Hokage, Konohamaru-sama ordered me to take Ojou-sama and hide her from our enemies. hearing a legend about a gate that can take someone into an alternate world of ours We fled in to the the land of sound and in to the ruins identical to the one over there. We were safe for a few months for they never bothered with the land of sound. Then they found our hideout and hoping to make a new base of it they found us. Just then the gate somehow mysteriously opened I told Ojou-sama to flee into it and held of the attackers for a short while then followed her here. But I placed a great barrier around the door so they should not be here for a while If they decided to follow us.
Kakashi: Should we tell Naruto about his death in your world?
Misato: No. I told Ojou-sama not to reveal anything to her parents here about that if she should meet them. She is a very bright girl so she may understand the consequences of telling them anything but more than that I believe she was too happy to see Naruto-sama to say anything.
Kakashi: Well we'll see our next course of action once we head back to the village. By the way, just out of curiosity, How old were Naruto and Sakura?
Misato: in our world they were in heir early thirties.
Kakashi: Oh. *thinking* Well at least they were not too young. Having a child of all things........
Naruto: Kakashi-sensei, Misato!!! We're nearly at the village!!!
Kakashi: Right. Well lets get going.
Yuuki: Papa! We will see Mama there too right?
Naruto: ACK!!!! Well we'll see Yuuki............   *thinking* I don't think I can explain this to Sakura-chan without freaking her out.........  

To be continued

Edited by Phantom_999, 21 July 2013 - 07:21 PM.

[FoolishYoungling]

@Phantom: Great plot right there. Hurry up with part 4! Just kidding, take your time.

[HauntedCake]

Hahaha, Sakura-chan would probably faint

[Phantom_999]

Well actually I thought that maybe punching Naruto in embarrassment would be more like her

Edited by Phantom_999, 11 May 2013 - 01:16 AM.

[Phantom_999]

Okay Part 4!!!!!!! More comedy but I promise the plot will pop up soon. (besides I'm sure everyone wants to enjoy these NS moments anyway)

The Mysterious Child Part 4

Naruto: *HAH* made it to Tsunade-baachan without being seen by anyone.
Yuuki: What's wrong Papa? Are we going to see Mama yet?
Naruto: Uh..... Tomorrow!! Yeah, Tomorrow...... *think* BUT STILL!! What do I tell her!!?? Yuuki will definitely call her "mom".......

Kakashi and Misato come out of Tsunade's office

Kakashi: Okay we're done here. We've informed Hokage-sama about everything.
Misato: Ojou-sama Fifth-sama requested that you do not tell Sakura-sama about your father. telling her about being your mother is fine because you look like her anyway.
Yuuki: Eh? Why?
Misato: Ojou-sama, your parents are not married here yet. If you just tell Sakura-sama that Naruto-sama is her husband from out of the blue things will be awkward between them and may affect their relationship.
Yuuki: But I want everyone to know that my Mama and Papa are my Mama and Papa.....   
Misato: I know, but if you want them to be truly together here naturally and with out pressure or stress, you can not let them know they are married before they sort out their own feelings, alright?
Yuuki: Okay............   BUT WAIT!!!! So you're saying that IF I do not reveal too much, Mama and Papa will get together in this world on their own!!!!!???? 
Misato: Something like that.
Yuuki: OKAY!!!! Then I promise absolutely!!!!!!
Naruto: SO WAIT!!!! Tsunade-baachan knows!?
Kakashi: Of course. She's our Hokage. I have tell her everything.
Naruto: So what did she say?
Kakashi: Shocked but not surprised she said.  
Naruto: Right..... WAIT!! I'm talking about What to DO about Yuuki and Misato!
Kakashi: Right right, I was teasing. Well she says there is nothing to do since the gate has been closed and we will need to find out how the gate opened in the first place. So just keep her with you for now. OKAY, DAD???  
Naruto: RIGHT. *sigh*
Yuuki: What's wrong Papa?
Naruto: Nothing Yuuki. A-anyway let's go home!! *thinking* Hopefully we don't run into Sakura-chan........

The Next day

Naruto: Alright, Yuuki, do you want to get something to eat?
Yuuki: Ichiraku!!!
Naruto: OOOOHHHH..... You ARE my daughter. 

At the Ramen Shop.

Teuchi: Oh Naruto!!! You're Here!!! Wait isn't that Sakura? I thought she was taller and had green eyes.
Yuuki: No, I'm Yuuki.
Ayame: Oh what a cutie!!! What would you like?
Yuuki: Miso BBQ. Pork Please.
Teuchi: OH? Just like Naruto? *smirks*

After eating
Naruto: thanks old man!!!!
Kiba: Naruto!!!! There you are!! Where were you, and did Sakura shrink??? Wait no, that's not her scent.......
*The Rest of the Konoha 11 come over*
Hinata: What's wrong Kiba-kun? Oh, Naruto-kun!!! I was- I mean- WE were looking for you. *blush*
Sai: Hey isn't that Sakura there? She looks smaller.
Yuuki: I'm Yuuki. Nice to meet you.
Shino: Yuuki? But Sakura doesn't have a sister.
Lee: OH!! a younger Sakura-san!!! How cute!!!!!
Sakura: Hey, What's everyone doing here??? 
Naruto: Sakura-chan!!!!????

Sakura: Naruto!! Why is there a little me next to you????

Naruto: Well- that is- Uh- Um 
Yuuki: *tearing up* MAMA!!!!!!! *runs and hugs her*
Sakura: WHAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!???????????   
Konoha 11: WHAT!!!!!!!!???????????   
Sakura: NARUTO!!!!! What is the meaning of this!!!!????
Naruto: WELL, that is-  
Yuuki: I'm your daughter from an alternate world.... *sob*
Everyone: EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!??????????
Naruto: Y-Yeah I was going to say that, but I-I-I- didn't know how'd you would take it...... and she said alternate world.........
Sakura: Daughter??? I'm not even married yet!!! But she does look like me................... HEY, WAIT A MINUTE!!!!!!!! Who's the Father then!!!!?????  
Naruto: ACK!!!!! WELL, how do I put this .....................
Sakura: YES!????  
Hinata: Yuuki-chan? Can I take a look at you for a minute??
Yuuki: Yes.......
Hinata: Those eyes are.......... Ah!! I knew it, They're Naruto-kun's eyes, no?
Everyone: WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAT!!!!????  
Sakura: *Taking a good look* AAH!! It's true!!!!!!!!!!! Th-th-th-that Means that Naruto and I-
Lee: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!! *runs away crying*
Tenten: LEE, WAIT!!!!
Sakura: NARUTO AND I-
Sai: Ah Yes!!!! I read this in a relationship book!!! You and Naruto had-
Sakura: DON'T SAY IT IDIOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!   *punches him through several buildings* THIS IS- this is- *Blushes heavily and starts running away*
Ino: SAKURA!!!!!!!! HOW COULD YOU!!!??? HAVING A BABY BEFORE ME!!!!????   
Naruto: *Thinking* OH CRAP!!!!!!!!!!!!! *shouts out* AFTER HER YUUKI!!!!
Yuuki: Right!

Far way

Misato: OH NO.......

To be continued......

Edited by Phantom_999, 21 July 2013 - 07:36 PM.

[Phantom_999]

Okay, anyone tell me what you think of the story so far.

[sushi.]

Funny. It's only dialogue, so that's it. Liked Lee's reaction.

Edited by sushi., 11 May 2013 - 07:26 PM.

[TouKen4Life3g]

I'm surprised StrikerTheNoble didn't show up here. Perhaps I should alert him.

[FoolishYoungling]

Thanks for telling me you made a new on on pm.

I liked it. Can't trust a 10 year old to keep a secret that big. I noticed you put in some LeeTen in there. Don't even try to hide it.

[Phantom_999]

no no! Hinata figured it out by looking at her eyes. Since she was always staring at Naruto since youth I figured she be meticulous on his facial features and figured out Yuuki had exactly Naruto's eye shape and color to make it seem more realistic and have someone else reveal that Naruto is her father. And YES I DID. Oh wait , no If you were talking about Misato's warning, he said telling Sakura she is Yuuki's mother is fine because they can't make a believable excuse really and this fan fic is a bit after RTN so Naruto and Sakura would not really question the idea of alternate worlds really.

Edited by Phantom_999, 11 May 2013 - 08:42 PM.

[StrikerTheNoble]

I'm surprised StrikerTheNoble didn't show up here. Perhaps I should alert him.

Im keeping an eye on things. Dont worry

[TouKen4Life3g]

Im keeping an eye on things. Dont worry

You got it. Nice discussion going on here.

[kidNinja]

I think the best depiction of NaruSaku babies is this:

This is honestly how I always pictured NS kids. The oldest boy would take after Sakura as far as looks go but have a mix of both their personalities and his ninjutsu would be medical but an offensive medical ninjutsu. (Think of Yoroi and Misumi)


The girl like in the picture would take after Sakura in looks sans hair but Naruto in personality.

The younger boy would have Naruto's looks but Sakura's personality.



As far as time travel is concerned, just have the kid (preferably the oldest boy depicted above) to use a time travel jutsu and whatnot. Lets say he's masked and eventually encounters Naruto and friends. As a fight breaks out, he uses a Cherry Blossom impact which of course makes Sakura suspicious.


As time goes on, lets say she gets injured and he heals her using a technique similar to her own. She asks him who taught him that, he can look at her and tell her she did and remove the mask.

Edited by kidNinja, 11 May 2013 - 09:02 PM.

[HauntedCake]

Loved it Phantom!!!

Looks like Naruto's going to have to hide and lay low for a while