Rain or Shine
#1
Posted 08 February 2007 - 01:34 AM
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3382150/1/
Feedback welcome.
When you go to war, both sides lose totally- Yoko Ono
Remember, our hearts are one. Even when we are at war with each other, our hearts are always beating in unison- Yoko Ono 2009
#2
Posted 08 February 2007 - 06:30 AM
#3
Posted 08 February 2007 - 07:02 AM
When you go to war, both sides lose totally- Yoko Ono
Remember, our hearts are one. Even when we are at war with each other, our hearts are always beating in unison- Yoko Ono 2009
#4
Posted 08 February 2007 - 09:18 PM
What's Happening with the Naruto series as of now!
#5
Posted 08 February 2007 - 11:00 PM
#6
Posted 09 February 2007 - 02:10 AM
#8
Posted 09 February 2007 - 07:32 PM
Thanks! It's been a lot of fun writing it.
Thank you.
When you go to war, both sides lose totally- Yoko Ono
Remember, our hearts are one. Even when we are at war with each other, our hearts are always beating in unison- Yoko Ono 2009
#9
Posted 09 February 2007 - 07:58 PM
Heh. Well due to Fanfiction net rules the "sexy stuff" can't be posted there, but no such rules apply on livejournal so I might do a short piece on my blog. It won't be a lemon, but if you are familiar with shoujo manga for teen girls like Yuu Watase's Fushigi Yuugi, Ayashi no Ceres, etc... that's about the level of "sexy" I write in my fanfic. Don't know how "hot" guys find that kind of writing, doesn't seem to be their sort of thing as very few guys in fanfic or professional writing do it, but it's really hot to a quite large percentage women and the majority of professional women writers and fanfic writers do write sexy scenes that way. (focusing on the intense emotional/spiritual bond that making love with a person you care deeply sends through you, along with the lust and phsyical pleasure.)
Heh. I like writing funny/sexy/romantic wedding stories, so expect that in this arc.
When you go to war, both sides lose totally- Yoko Ono
Remember, our hearts are one. Even when we are at war with each other, our hearts are always beating in unison- Yoko Ono 2009
#10
Posted 12 February 2007 - 05:29 PM
http://ciardhapagan....com/197969.html
When you go to war, both sides lose totally- Yoko Ono
Remember, our hearts are one. Even when we are at war with each other, our hearts are always beating in unison- Yoko Ono 2009
#11
Posted 12 February 2007 - 06:16 PM
I loved that Sakura showed her feelings to Naruto before Sasuke came back, but I'm still thinking what actually happened when he came back. Did Naruto think that Sakura might still have romantic feelings for Sasuke? Was Sakura confused about her feelings for the Uchiha, or was she completely over him?
Try to put a little more NaruSaku fluff. It feels like there is more SasuSaku friendship in the fic than NaruSaku fluff.
#12
Posted 12 February 2007 - 10:00 PM
I have future chapters dealing with the night before they leave for the sucessful rescue of Sasuke and the days right after that will both deal with Sakura telling Naruto that she loves him, that she cares for Sasuke but what she had thought was love was a childish crush. I also have a vague idea about a fluffy narusaku chapter that takes place some time in between the events in chapter 2 and the rescue/final battle with Orochimaru chapter, in that chapter she actually tells him she loves him. He thinks she's going to beat the heck out of him because (manga/anime cliche scene warning he saw he bathing naked, accidently. It doesn't end like the standard scene, the way Naruto is afraid it will, it's not going a lemon either though- sorry
When you go to war, both sides lose totally- Yoko Ono
Remember, our hearts are one. Even when we are at war with each other, our hearts are always beating in unison- Yoko Ono 2009
#13
Posted 12 February 2007 - 10:14 PM
It's okay if you don't wanna make NaruSaku lemons in this fic, but at least try to imply (in the right time) that at least they did it. Especially in their wedding night where it'll be the first time for both.
#14
Posted 12 February 2007 - 10:29 PM
#15
Posted 13 February 2007 - 03:03 AM
I have one planned that does take place late in her first pregnancy.
When you go to war, both sides lose totally- Yoko Ono
Remember, our hearts are one. Even when we are at war with each other, our hearts are always beating in unison- Yoko Ono 2009
#16
Posted 13 February 2007 - 03:47 AM
It's okay if you don't wanna make NaruSaku lemons in this fic, but at least try to imply (in the right time) that at least they did it. Especially in their wedding night where it'll be the first time for both.
Have no fear, even in point of time that chapter 2 takes place she knows she has deeper feelings for Naruto than she does for Sasuke. (Frankly I think Kishimoto pretty much made that clear when they encountered Sasuke. Sakura came at Sasuke full bore when she thought he was going to kill Naruto. She was bound and determined to "use her powers to stop Sasuke". Yamato blocked her and took the stab Sasuke aimed for Sakura) This right on the heels of Yamato making the statement Sakura did not refute in any way, in fact her face showed a sort of stunned realization. She's still sort of confused about what the feelings are in the chapter 2 flashback- something along the line- "Is this what real love feels like?" It's not like what the myth of love they were told as young children.
Oh there's definitely going to be "sexy stuff" in my story, just more along what is in shoujo manga for teen girls (a lot more than what you see in boys manga for the same age, by the way) it's just not the lemon style you see in men's manga, but intensely romantic lovemaking (take a look at Yuu Watase's Fushigi Yuugi or Ayashi no Ceres for well written examples. In many shoujo manga for girls aged 10-18 there are scenes where 16 year old girls make love with their similarly aged boyfriends, and lots of kissing and "near miss" decidely sexual scenes before that.)
Well, maybe first time as a married couple, but decidely not their first time. I'm wavering back and forth on whether they make love for the first time the night before they leave for the sucessful rescue of Sasuke. I'm leaning toward a near thing scene, but they decide to wait as a sort of "charm" to say they know they'll survive and suceed. Once they are sucessful they can take this big step.
When you go to war, both sides lose totally- Yoko Ono
Remember, our hearts are one. Even when we are at war with each other, our hearts are always beating in unison- Yoko Ono 2009
#17
Posted 13 February 2007 - 07:22 AM
I´m planning to put in my fanfic some slighty sex stuff...but this will be very light. (I don´t really like the lemon sotries XP ).
I hope you will update your story very soon...because it´s turning very inresting.
#18
Posted 13 February 2007 - 08:16 AM
Oh there's definitely going to be "sexy stuff" in my story, just more along what is in shoujo manga for teen girls (a lot more than what you see in boys manga for the same age, by the way) it's just not the lemon style you see in men's manga, but intensely romantic lovemaking (take a look at Yuu Watase's Fushigi Yuugi or Ayashi no Ceres for well written examples. In many shoujo manga for girls aged 10-18 there are scenes where 16 year old girls make love with their similarly aged boyfriends, and lots of kissing and "near miss" decidely sexual scenes before that.)
Well, maybe first time as a married couple, but decidely not their first time. I'm wavering back and forth on whether they make love for the first time the night before they leave for the sucessful rescue of Sasuke. I'm leaning toward a near thing scene, but they decide to wait as a sort of "charm" to say they know they'll survive and suceed. Once they are sucessful they can take this big step.
Cool, I'm really looking forward to all of this
#19
Posted 13 February 2007 - 09:20 PM
I´m planning to put in my fanfic some slighty sex stuff...but this will be very light. (I don´t really like the lemon sotries XP ).
I hope you will update your story very soon...because it´s turning very inresting.
Thanks. I don't really care that much for lemons either, it's emphasis is mechanics rather than intimacy. (Like the difference between a porn movie and a steamy romance novel
When you go to war, both sides lose totally- Yoko Ono
Remember, our hearts are one. Even when we are at war with each other, our hearts are always beating in unison- Yoko Ono 2009
#20
Posted 25 February 2007 - 03:18 PM
http://ciardhapagan....com/209903.html
I'm still working on chapter 6's first draft, it looks like this arc will probably go for one more chapter after that. I had planned to jump back to the "home" period after that, but am feeling a stronger draw toward writing a flashback to the preparations for the rescue Sasuke mission (This weeks Naruto chapter inspired that switch in plans. Kishimoto is writing Naruto and Sakura the way I expected as the time for that mission drew near)
When you go to war, both sides lose totally- Yoko Ono
Remember, our hearts are one. Even when we are at war with each other, our hearts are always beating in unison- Yoko Ono 2009
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