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#521 KClaws_2

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Posted 14 July 2018 - 08:17 AM

I kind of have a crazy theory if you guys want to hear it:

 

Hinata will be brainwashed at some point in this story (kind of like she was in the movie), made worse when Naruto and Sakura come to terms with their mutual feelings. Hinata's chakra syncs with Toneri's, and the two have to stop them together.

 

I imagine that Toneri will actually die, and Hinata, free from the curse, takes his place as guardian of the moon, not only to watch over earth but to stand aside and protect Naruto's own happiness.

 

Yeah, I know lots of you may still have problems with this, with Hinata basically becoming a god, but eh. To me this at least somewhat balances out Sakura being the love interest and also being a Hinata story. Otherwise there's really no point to the Byakuugan Princess plot still being here. 


Edited by KClaws_2, 14 July 2018 - 08:19 AM.


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Posted 14 July 2018 - 09:05 AM

I kind of have a crazy theory if you guys want to hear it:
 
Hinata will be brainwashed at some point in this story (kind of like she was in the movie), made worse when Naruto and Sakura come to terms with their mutual feelings. Hinata's chakra syncs with Toneri's, and the two have to stop them together.
 
I imagine that Toneri will actually die, and Hinata, free from the curse, takes his place as guardian of the moon, not only to watch over earth but to stand aside and protect Naruto's own happiness.
 
Yeah, I know lots of you may still have problems with this, with Hinata basically becoming a god, but eh. To me this at least somewhat balances out Sakura being the love interest and also being a Hinata story. Otherwise there's really no point to the Byakuugan Princess plot still being here.


My thoughts exactly. It possible that Hinata will head down the final villain path all because she couldn’t get with Naruto. I do not suspect that she would be a permanent because Tokai said she will end up with someone, so character death is out of the question too. My big concern is as of now I don’t see how Sakura would impact and contribute the plot other than being a love interest.

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Posted 14 July 2018 - 09:39 AM

Maybe she fights Hinata and breaks her out of whatever genjutsu she was in?

 

I'd like to think Tokai is interested in giving her a legitimate fight scene, and Sasuke is going to have a bigger role as well, so I'm hoping to get some Team 7 action



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Posted 14 July 2018 - 11:45 AM

Was Hinata ever called a princess in the movie? It was always a NH-fan thing, people apparently couldn't see the difference between an aristocrat and a royal. :/


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Posted 14 July 2018 - 01:01 PM

They also will need to tackle the unresolved feelings that Sakura has for Sasuke if NS is end-game for this.



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Posted 14 July 2018 - 04:21 PM

The byakkugan princess stuff was inevitable given all the other elements of this movie this alternate displayed, so I don't mind it to the extent that it is this doujin's premise. What's really going to make or break things for me will be how it handles NS.


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Posted 14 July 2018 - 05:28 PM

The byakkugan princess stuff was inevitable given all the other elements of this movie this alternate displayed, so I don't mind it to the extent that it is this doujin's premise. What's really going to make or break things for me will be how it handles NS.

 

Me too, and it seems to be handling it much better than the movie itself did.



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Posted 14 July 2018 - 05:50 PM

I hope they handle NaruSaku better than NH... They can't magically fall in love with each other. Sakura can't just "unlove" Sasuke. But maybe...their relationship is going to change naturally. From friends to companions... And we get to see much awkward dating stuff, like being embarrassed to be together or people assuming that they are dating. But very naturally and slowly, they will get used to each other and commit to this relationship. 


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Posted 14 July 2018 - 06:22 PM

I'll be skipping the anything that focuses too much on Hinata. I had it up to here with her. Just give me NS that's all I want. -_-


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Posted 14 July 2018 - 06:34 PM

Ummm...did you guys just forget about these pages already?

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To be honest i don't like this fan fiction , i like at first but then last few pages is nothing more than hinata hinata and hinata .... the fear of getting stab in the back , back when chapter 699/700 is coming back to me. So Konoha'CrimsonFox mention that this story is currently on byakugan princess arc ... this is suppose to be NS fan fiction story right ? even hinata gets her own arc inside NS fan fiction .... this is it , this is a clear red warning sign for me , i hope it's just my imagination.

It is just your imagination. The artist alreayd expressed that this will end in NS and that Hinata is just a bi-product.

Remmeber, this is called "Alternative The Last." It is taking the Naruto The Last movie and making an alternative. It should have clear from the start that some elements from the movie would make a reappearence in the story. He is rewriting the movie and even expressed that he is using some plot elements similar to the movie, but not all of them. He is trying to make it better, but like I told it is really hard doing this because of how much overstaturation of Hinata exposure.

Don't blame this artist for what the rest of the world did.


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Posted 14 July 2018 - 06:54 PM

The byakkugan princess stuff was inevitable given all the other elements of this movie this alternate displayed, so I don't mind it to the extent that it is this doujin's premise. What's really going to make or break things for me will be how it handles NS.

That isn't the point I only wonder how much SP catered to NH fans.


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Posted 14 July 2018 - 06:58 PM

The NS romance probably won't go the way the NH romance did (least I hope so) because:

 

1) The timeskip doesn't seem as massive. Two years clearly passed in the movie, but here, maybe 6 months at most since Naruto has his more likable hair style

2) Naruto and Sakura HAVE a history. The writers for the Last had to pull the NH out of thin air because Kishimoto was determined not to touch on NH, even if it was going to become canon (and despite the timeskip in the original, it seems Naruto and Hinata never even talked as friends). 

3) The issues between Naruto and Sakura ARE being addressed. Both of Sakura's confessions were shown, and Sasuke is going to have more than a mere cameo here (according to the author).

 

I think the way this will play out is Sakura is feeling down for some reason, and Naruto takes the opportunity (for once) to talk with her. Their respective visions are shared, they may have something of an argument, and Naruto actually confesses. Again, given the canon history between the two, this will actually be believable. 



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Posted 14 July 2018 - 07:20 PM

Was Hinata ever called a princess in the movie? It was always a NH-fan thing, people apparently couldn't see the difference between an aristocrat and a royal. :/

Toneri addresses her as that.







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