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[Liu bie]

Last week we had to more pages of TLA.

[Illnevergiveup3]

He's doing from chapter 700 and the TL. Not just TL. The beginning of chapter 1 is from 700 then he continues then he goes to TL.

I read chapter 700, it was pretty good. But now that I think of it, the way he's going about it isn't a bad idea.

[VanitasDS76491]

It's also better than Teen Titans go.

That smile hinata has at the end of her idea for a movie idea makes her look psychotic. Naruto is more in character in this then he was in the last 30 chapter of the manga. Also he never once mentioned saving sasuke once as far as I know cause I didn't watch all the episodes.I Did like Lee trying to get tsunade to get with ay.

[LuckyChi7]

This is gonna be a dumb question, but I'm guessing this alternate last takes place after 699 too? or is that kinda scrapped to? Just out of curiosity..

 

 

Since you've got the scene where Sakura's reflecting back her confession to Naruto..

Edited by LuckyChi7, 26 October 2016 - 08:05 PM.

[T XD]

This is gonna be a dumb question, but I'm guessing this alternate last takes place after 699 too? or is that kinda scrapped to? Just out of curiosity..

 

 

Since you've got the scene where Sakura's reflecting back her confession to Naruto..

It takes place from 700 then moving to TL. It's good and the art is very nice too. He has talent and there's fairness on every character side.

Edited by T XD, 26 October 2016 - 08:29 PM.

[Phantom_999]

lol, I have a silly question, but if someone can answer it please do. Can any of the characters in Naruto move above Mach 1?

 

WELL above Mach 1, all things considered. No calculations were made but some attacks or movement speeds were described to be less than a second in timing

[LuckyChi7]

This might be me, but I actually like Hinata in the SD chibi show: 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Sorry if any possible puking takes place. 

[Konoha'sCrimsonFox]

No offense but i don't like it, the art is good of course but still bellow Lady's GT art. The one that bug me the most is ... : Why the hell using The Last and then remake it??

 

Can they just make an alternate ending from chapter 690 for example ??? No need to touch that piece of crap The Last Naruto the movie, that's an NH kitten. I mean i really appreciate that they do this but, ... no not from TL.

 

The understandable. We can no longer look at TL with out disdain and disgust. However, we must remind ourselves that TL was inevitable even if NS became canon. Obviously, the original is the kitten version and kitten writing. What we also learned from the history of NS is every time SS/NH moments knocks them down, they always rebound. NS could not recover after chapter 693. ATL shows NS recovering once again when Sakura is shown to be conflicted with her feelings for both her teammates. Naruto must have warmed her heart, preventing her from fully regressing back into a full fledged Sasuke fangirl. I can only predict that Tokai input Kishi misleading advertisement somewhere before the story started about Naruto saying Sakura's beauty has increased to her when she asked him the question again about her looking more womanly. 

 

Waow that scarf... All those NS moments, facts and parallels... Then a scarf took the place

 

Okay. Thanks. So, a page weekly on DeviantArt. Is there a specific day each week ?

 

And now the scarf is gone. I'm surprise NH fans never rage about this.

 

He updates anytime of the day and week when each page is complete.

 

I want him to continue. If we're lucky we might see Hinata get wtfstomped by Toneri. But yeah, he should have redid from Chapters 690-700, the NS way.

 

Unlikely. And I prefer him not to and be more professional about it.

 

This is gonna be a dumb question, but I'm guessing this alternate last takes place after 699 too? or is that kinda scrapped to? Just out of curiosity..

 

 

Since you've got the scene where Sakura's reflecting back her confession to Naruto..

 

It takes place during TL and it so post follow up to chapter 700. 

Edited by Konoha'sCrimsonFox, 27 October 2016 - 02:48 AM.

[NaruSaku fan in Kentucky]

I hope he handles Naruto rejecting Hinata well. 

[LuckyChi7]

 

The understandable. We can no longer look at TL with out disdain and disgust. However, we must remind ourselves that TL was inevitable even if NS became canon. Obviously, the original is the kitten version and kitten writing. What we also learned from the history of NS is every time SS/NH moments knocks them down, they always rebound. NS could not recover after chapter 693. ATL shows NS recovering once again when Sakura is shown to be conflicted with her feelings for both her teammates. Naruto must have warmed her heart, preventing her from fully regressing back into a full fledged Sasuke fangirl. I can only predict that Tokai input Kishi misleading advertisement somewhere before the story started about Naruto saying Sakura's beauty has increased to her when she asked him the question again about her looking more womanly. 

 

 

And now the scarf is gone. I'm surprise NH fans never rage about this.

 

He updates anytime of the day and week when each page is complete.

 

 

Unlikely. And I prefer him not to and be more professional about it.

 

 

It takes place during TL and it so post follow up to chapter 700. 

 

Oh alright that  makes sense

[Illnevergiveup3]

@Konoha'sCrimsonFox yeah, you right. It actually inspires me to start on mine. I was trying to figure out what Chapter should I start from.

[Konoha'sCrimsonFox]

@Konoha'sCrimsonFox yeah, you right. It actually inspires me to start on mine. I was trying to figure out what Chapter should I start from.

 Good luck with your story. And I just notice how flat Hinata's oppai are in ATL. Sooner or later, someone must mail in these chapters to the Hinata wanking fanboys at SP      

Edited by Konoha'sCrimsonFox, 27 October 2016 - 10:46 AM.

[Yyubie]

 

The understandable. We can no longer look at TL with out disdain and disgust. However, we must remind ourselves that TL was inevitable even if NS became canon. Obviously, the original is the kitten version and kitten writing. What we also learned from the history of NS is every time SS/NH moments knocks them down, they always rebound. NS could not recover after chapter 693. ATL shows NS recovering once again when Sakura is shown to be conflicted with her feelings for both her teammates. Naruto must have warmed her heart, preventing her from fully regressing back into a full fledged Sasuke fangirl. I can only predict that Tokai input Kishi misleading advertisement somewhere before the story started about Naruto saying Sakura's beauty has increased to her when she asked him the question again about her looking more womanly.

It's like trying to remake dog kitten into a happy birthday cake ...

[Illnevergiveup3]

 Good luck with your story. And I just notice how flat Hinata's oppai are in ATL. Sooner or later, someone must mail in these chapters to the Hinata wanking fanboys at SP      

What chapter should I start from?

[LuckyChi7]

What chapter should I start from?

I think it would be interesting if you did it from 693.

[Illnevergiveup3]

I think it would be interesting if you did it from 693.

Alright, thanks.

[Konoha'sCrimsonFox]

It's like trying to remake dog kitten into a happy birthday cake ...

 

Well that's the only way. it look more legit than a NS self insert. Just imagine how this dounjin will impact the original and the New Era project. Some one has to do the dirty work    

Al I can say it's more better than the Naruto Gaiden so far and this dounjin feels like going back in time two years ago. This time in our favor.

Edited by Konoha'sCrimsonFox, 28 October 2016 - 06:47 AM.

[NaruSaku fan in Kentucky]

I just hope when Naruto and Sakura kiss, they won't kiss while on the moon. 

[Konoha'sCrimsonFox]

I just hope when Naruto and Sakura kiss, they won't kiss while on the moon. 

 

I did message Tokai about that. Although we should worry about that later because they are about to enter genjutsu  cave art and NH will be robbed of their romantic scenes, turning into something like this.

 

[Phantom_999]

I just hope when Naruto and Sakura kiss, they won't kiss while on the moon. 

 

Correction, They should NEVER kiss on, under, or in front of the moon, nor anywhere near it's vicinity.

Edited by Phantom_999, 29 October 2016 - 02:59 PM.